Every man has that one unforgettable woman that will haunt him until his final day; the girl that got away. Allie detested television, vanilla ice cream, and missionary. She explored the depths of her sexuality; while I discovered the heights of my pain. My muse had a nickname. I called her Devil Girl. I write these words to ease my sorrows. My name is Andrew.
This is our story.
Standing outside the food court
My wobbly knees barely supporting me
Two construction workers approached her
what kind of foolish game was this?
As one reached for her hand
I stormed out of the mall
burning cheeks scorching everything around me
I refuse to share my girl
I refused to play this game
We didn’t speak for days
Ignored her texts, calls, and messages
then I accidentally heard one voicemail
she wept like a baby
I called her, promising to visit her the next day
Allie opened the door and rushed me
Her red eyes full of moist regret
her nakedness embellished the hallway
“I will not share what is mine”
She smiled at my naive words
She replied, “loving is sharing”
from the bedroom came a gorgeous brunette
wearing heels, a smile, and a wicked scent
she impressed me with her outfit
before I could ask, Allie smiled “This is Pandora.
if you love me, let me watch you do her”
what the hell, we are supposed to be arguing
She whispered, “Do you love me Andrew?”
struggling with the stirring in my jeans
I shut my eyes and sighed
Yes I love you Devil Girl
More next Saturday
Yooo, not that’s how it’s done!
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LOL Is that good or bad?
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Good!
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Thanks
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“Loving is sharing” Wow.. :’) 😀
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Hahaha. That was her philosophy. Thanks for reading.
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Hahaha..:) I really liked the way you brought the attention of readers from confusion/random in the start to that silence/sigh..
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Thanks. I was worried about that. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Loving is sharing ❤️
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LOL Loving is sharing. Thanks for stopping by Carisa. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Great writing! :-). Have a great weekend too!!
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Thanks so much. Take care.
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Forgive the pun…..Very ‘Moving’. 😉
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Thanks. lol Oh, thanks so much for reading. Have a wonderful week.
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Sharing is loving vs Loving is sharing. Ah! You’ll figure it out.
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Hahaha. Sometimes, I think I post this stuff just waiting for your comment. I hope you are well. I can’t stop laughing. Have a wonderful day.
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I am well. Just got up and fuzzy brain. Not responsible for unhinged jaw lol
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lol You are too much. Be well.
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Provative, tantalizing and riveting. romantic. Beautifully written
It is like a glass of fine wine, the more one drink their is hunger
For more.
Bella declou
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That was so sweet. Thank you for stopping by.
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Thelonelyauthorblog,
Put me in a place where I never been before.Being married my spouse was very willing to try some of
The cama sutra positions . Unfortunately we were
Never able to acomplish the act lol,,,, Now I can close my eyes and visualize I am in a different land.lace
Stocking heels and the color red, , strawberries
And cream,, soft music and wine.i can feel my
Fantasy is coming alive, his hands slowly carresing
My body, his hands exploring the hidden jems.I cried
out in ecstasy, ,, I slowly open my eyes, and realized
I was alone. I thank you for allowing me to explore
my iner self.
Bella declou
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Wow. I want to be in that place, too. Smile. Thanks for stopping by.
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DAMN!! That just ruined my entire day. How the HELL am I supposed to get my housework done after reading that?!! 😉
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Sorry. Thanks for reading. lol
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NEVER apologize for AMAZING work! You have made me smile, and that is very special indeed. 🙂
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It’s hard to make you smile? Happy that I did. Have a wonderful weekend.
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You too! 😃
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Loving is sharing I suppose. Yet, I don’t share what is mine either. Your prose is sensual and I’m loving this story. Smiles.
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Thank you so much. Loving is sharing, but there are certain things we should be selfish about. Like a good woman. Thanks for reading it.
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And a good man. I simply agree. You’re most welcome.
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Yeah, you’re right. I keep hearing good men are hard to come by, so it never occurred to me. Also, I was never interested in finding one. I like girls.
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You’re so funny. Lol..
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And you a wonderful sense of humor. I was reading one of your older works last night. Probably one of your most poetic. I will go back and comment. Have a fabulous Sunday.
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Which one?
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I will go over there now
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💔👏👏👏👍
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Thanks
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Although I don’t agree with the sharing part, I am enjoying the story!
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Thanks for reading. Trust me, I don’t agree with it either.
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This will never last. So many to share with, so little time.
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Hahaha. That is so sweet and funny. Thanks so much for reading.
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confusion between ethereal and physical?
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Yeah, you could say that. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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I like it so far.
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Thank you so much, And thanks for reading.
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I enjoy it!
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Thanks
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No wonder you are getting geriatric cougar emails…:)
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lol
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Love your comment chattykerry,,, very funny
Bella declou
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Ooh. Will Andrew open the Pandora box? Can’t wait till next Saturday.
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Thanks so much for stopping by to read. We shall see….Have a wonderful evening.
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Someone pass the ice please…..is it next Saturday yet? 😅
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Thank you so much. You are too sweet. Keep writing, I love reading your posts. Have a food Sunday.
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Thank you! Happy Sunday to you 🙂
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Oh God, what a typo. I wished you a food Sunday. Have a good Sunday. well, and a food Sunday too. lol
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hahahaha I thought that was awesome! Now if someone asks why I’m eating so much, I can say the “Lonely Author” said it was a Food Sunday 😉 We’ll let them sort it out for themselves 😀
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LOL oh my God. I can’t stop laughing. Have a wonderful Food Sunday.
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om nom nom hehe
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thanks you so much.
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I’m too young to read most of this tale, so I’m still standing outside the food court with wobbly knees and my hands over my eyes. Can somebody please tell me when it’s safe to look?
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LOL LOL Sorry, I forgot I have underage followers reading my posts. Have a wonderful day my friend.
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You too! 🙂
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Your visits always make me smile. Best wishes to you and yours.
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😀
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Yes the one that got away
Great piece
Sheldon
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Thanks. We all have one of those “the one that got away.” No?
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Wow! Wonderfully written, greatly anticipating the next bit! ~Christa
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Thanks Christa. Happy that you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful evening. Thanks for stopping by.
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The girl that got away, hmm. Seems to me you should have sent her packing! I hope the title “Breakup” is significant…
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Hahaha. Spent several years with her. Men have a terrible affliction Doc, they don’t always thing with their brains. lol Thanks for stopping by.
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Ahh.. a perplexing feeling..and I see you both had a “thing” for the mall.. 😀
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Hahaha. She taught me malls aren’t only for shopping. Naive little me.
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Hmm.. naive he says 😀
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Hahaha. You are so funny.
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Ooooo 🙈 that’s naughty… The one that got away. Maybe a lucky escape? No doubt a life changing experience as a whole 😊
I am like devil girl except my curiosity has to be done with one person…
I’m not sure if I should read on 🙄 haha nice work
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Yes, it was a life changing experience. Thanks so much for the compliment. You have wonderful week. Thanks for stopping by and reading.
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Lol omg. Can’t wait to read thr next part.
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You have quite a way with ….shall we say…. turning up the heat. This is a great story. Devil Girl and I would be great friends 😜
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Thanks so much for saying that. Hahaha I always loved bad girls. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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Me too…I am drawn to bad boys and bad girls. Life would be boring without them.
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Exactly. I post Devil Girl every Saturday in case your interested. Thanks so much for reading. I appreciate it.
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Oh I look forward to reading.:)
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Thanks
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Hey thanks for all the follows on my accounts too! Appreciate it 😉
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Sure. I will be dropping in on them from time to time. Don’t be a stranger. Have a wonderful week.
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Holy Hell, Andrew. This Siren is … hooked.
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You like it? Thanks for reading it.
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Like it?? Too mildly stated, Andrew. Thank YOU for sharing.
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Smiling. So happy you enjoyed. You’re making me blush
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After Devil Girl, I doubt I can make you blush!!! Did you get my email?
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Already responded
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THE BREAKUP…IN EXCRUCIATING DETAIL??? (REHEARSING IT OVER AND OVER…AND OVER…) AT LEAST i DID. POEM WELL-WRITTEN!
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Thank you so much. Appreciate that. And thanks for the reblog.
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THAT “MANY-SPENDERED THING” HURTS IN THE HEART!!!!
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Thank you.
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