Every man has that one unforgettable woman that will haunt him until his final day; the girl that got away. Allie detested television, vanilla ice cream, and missionary. She explored the depths of her sexuality; while I discovered the heights of my pain. My muse had a nickname. I called her Devil Girl. I write these words to ease my sorrows. My name is Andrew.
This is our story.
shirtless in Allie’s bed
Pandora kissed my broad chest
her hands undid my jeans
my desires slowly got the best of me
how could I be doing this?
Pandora freed me from my denim shackles
clutching me as if she won a proud trophy
she looked back at a dark corner
you didn’t warn me she sighed
a mischievous giggle escaped the darkness
reminding me Allie was there
before I could protest
a warm accomodating mouth devoured me
I moaned, trembled, stroked Pandora’s mane
pushed back on the bed my passions rose
fours hands and two mouths explored me
teasing, caressing, pleasing
Allie is this what you want?
she smiled and whispered
yes, I am your Devil Girl
I coupled with Pandora
hours later exhaustion got the best of me
resting between two sleeping sirens
voluptuous Pandora on my right
Allie in fetal position to my left
I recalled my Christian beliefs
and sighed
what have you done to me Devil Girl
Happy Saturday. More next week.
x
DAMN! DAMN, DAMN, DAMN! This is tortuously HOT! I really like your Devil Girl. 🙂
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Thank you so much. lol I try to write hot without being offensive or vulgar. Glad you appreciate it. Thanks for reading. I appreciate it.
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It’s not offensive or vulgar. It’s just HOT as HELL and it makes me want to play too. 🙂
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Excellent. Writing should elicit a reaction. Your comments tell me I succeeded. Thanks so much for your support.
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Thank you so much for the reactions. 💋
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You make me blush.
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You made my panties wet, so are we even?
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Yes we are
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💋
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I planned on commenting, but realized a sudden need for a cold shower!!
The writing is certainly erotic and sultry, yet tasteful, allowing the reader to create their own images of choice. I do, however, recommend the disclaimer:
Always check with your physician before reading the works of The Lonely Author to make certain your heart is healthy and strong enough to experience his words without the possibility of dangerous side effects.
Well done!
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Thank you so much. My blog posts aren’t completed until you have commented. I don’t like vulgar, I try to imply as much as possible and let the readers imagination do the rest. Thanks for the disclaimer. lol Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful weekend.
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You tramp boy you. Blaming devil girl when you wanted it just as much. Shang shang on you lol
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LOL LOL So true. I just followed along and try to pass the blame onto her. My butt needed to be spanked. Thanks for reading. Do you have a regular posting schedule?
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Usually three times a week
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Cool. Have a good one
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Excellently crafted….I’m tempted to say…devilishly clever! Sensuous…as well as sensual! 😉
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Thank you my friend. Your review brings me such joy. I hope you are well. Thanks for reading. Be well.
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Oh, where to begin… 1) I get how hard this would be to resist, I totally do. But damn… This girl was hoping you had. 2) your writing as always is evocative and um, stimulating but 3) I want root for you finding the girl of your dreams and having mad passionate love with her! *sigh* Maybe next time?
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Ah, that woman you speak of in item number three is the muse who currently occupies my life. (The muse from the Halloween post). As for item number one, men are stupid selfish pigs. That is why I always refused to date one. And thanks for number 2. Thanks for reading and commenting. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Haha! Always a pleasure, my friend! I’m just a hopeless romantic so I want the love part along with the sexy stuff! Have a wonderful weekend yourself, Andrew!
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Trust me. Lonely Author found his soul mate. Ironically, my wife (her name is Aya) begged me to give Devil Girl her nickname Allie. So, Now I have it all. Thank you. Have a good one.
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This makes me smile. Love it
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Thanks for reading. Have a good weekend.
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You too! I loved this weeks segment of Devil girl!!! 🙂
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Thanks so much for reading. Appreciate that.
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There will always be
With love
This is its way
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True. Thanks for reading and commenting. Have a good one Sheldon.
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I am still lying with my jaw opened u believably You made us Rouse by this sensuous piece and by the time you finished I can bet everyone reading this post be struggling with the pillow
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Omg That is so funny. Thank you for stopping by to read. I really appreciate it. Take care.
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Now it is my turn. DAMN!!! I had to clinch my thighs. ~face palm~
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Haha. Really? I don’t do erotica as well as you do. I know you’re not into sharing. The rest of the story will be more intriguing to you. I swear. Thanks for reading.
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I love this story Andrew. I can’t wait!!! And yes really. I had an image of you in my head. Enjoying every moment. Smiles.
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I did. One of the most amazing experiences of my life. And I will never repeat it.
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Laughing!!!! I must say there a couple of experiences I will not repeat either. I don’t know what the hell I was thinking.
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Honestly, I turned more dominant. I was a bit of a weak back then. And if anything I would be more into MFM. Sorry for the honesty.
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MFM? I am dumb.
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Leslie, don’t say that please. It means male-female-male
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Well aren’t I the dumbass of the day? You would do that?
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Well, I am all about the female O. Men can reach it easily. So pleasing the woman strokes my dominating ego. (Can’t believe I said that). MFM is good for a woman. Two mouths, four hands, two … well you get the idea. Yeah, plenty of times. You already know who introduced me to it.
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You can say anything to me. Now this is what I meant, when I said I don’t know what the hell I want thinking. Now, I can’t believe I just said that. Lol..
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Hahaha Did I shock you?
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Of course not. Nothing shocks me anymore. Smiles.
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You make me laugh. I have dinner guests coming over. Yeah, a freaking late dinner, Actually its a bunch of couples drinking bottles of wine. A pleasure talking to you Leslie. Hope I get lucky to catch you online real soon. Have a wonderful night full of the sweetest dreams. Thanks for keeping me company
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My pleasure and anytime. I hope you enjoy your evening with your partner and friends. Smiles.
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Thanks. Don’t know why we always do it here, but I guess its better that way. Don’t have to go home in the cold. Sweet dreams.
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That’s is true. I am turning in now. I am a bit tired. And thank you. Hopefully dreams will be good to me. Smiles.
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What a beautiful description! Bowled over by this piece!
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Seriously? Thanks for reading. And thanks for your encouraging words.
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Reblogged this on KCJones.
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Thank you do much. I really appreciate it.
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❤️ it! I like to write on the “darker” side too…just on a completely different site 😎
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If you do, can you please let me know. I would be interested in following.
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I actually have 2… One I started so that I could write about whatever was going on in my crazy head without all my family and friends reading about it and the other I actually just started yesterday which is a little on the “sexual” side…which one did you want to follow? Or both lol?
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I would like to follow all of them. Follow me and I will follow you back. Thanks
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http://thehousewifechroniclesblog.com and http://thehornyhousewifey.tumblr.com Do you have other blogs?
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Thanks. I will. The link for the chronicles didn’t work.
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http://thehousewifechroniclesblog.wordpress.com/ forgot to put the WordPress in there 🙂
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Sorry, I didn’t even notice that. I will be reading later on today. Thanks for the links.
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Such a lovely name for this Devin Girl…I am sure those Christian beliefs have been tossed on the floor, at least for the duration of Allie and Panroda’s stay 🙂
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Allie stomped on my Christian beliefs. My wife has set me back on track. FT, between you and me, my wife insisted I name the character after her. Go figure.
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ah, that’s great to hear…smart wife, you have there, Andrew 😀
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Thanks
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Steamy, I dig it all. Thanks for all your effort.
Looking forward to more!
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Thank you so much for reading.
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And another…hmm… interesting
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I have beena bad boy….a very bad boy
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You have…
Does nothing to deter me
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That’s my girl
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For real..I am actually blushing
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Nice. I meant it.
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I know
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