Every man has that one unforgettable woman that will haunt him until his final day; the girl that got away. Allie detested television, vanilla ice cream, and missionary. She explored the depths of her sexuality; while I discovered the heights of my pain. My muse had a nickname. I called her Devil Girl. I write these words to ease my sorrows. My name is Andrew.
This is our story.
the 1 train pulled into the station
bringing a wind with it
lifting Devil Girl’s skirt to heaven
exposing her bare derrière
sending my poor heart to hell
so much for the shy girl next door
Allie boarded the train
followed by a horde of men
I entered through another door
she clutched a metal bar
a construction worker stood behind her
she pressed her butt into his groin
his face reacted with surprise
the gentle rocking of the train
did the rest
breathless, angry, confused
I wanted to rip them apart
yet, I wanted to see more
what was wrong with me
she looked over her shoulder
at the brute behind her
he moved closer to her
pushing against her white skirt
rubbing himself against my Allie
I had to stop it
my feet refused to move
my aroused groin betrayed me
what the…..
oh you confuse me Devil Girl
You already know the drill, to be continued.
The Lonely Author 
Oh my! I think Rick James wrote superfreak about this one.
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She’s a super freak. A super freak. Yeah this girl was. lol Thanks for reading.
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Very nicely written, and graphic also…
love this written piece..
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Thanks so much. I try to let the readers imagination do the work. Don’t like to write vulgar. Thanks so much for reading. Have a great weekend.
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When she’s wearing that white skirt and no underwear, she doesn’t leave much to the imagination lol 😹🐾🐫 (excuse the excessive emoji usage) . . .
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Hahaha. It ok. Use all the emoji. They don’t have one with a short skirt and no panties. lol Thanks for stopping by to read.
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you as well!
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Thanks
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So Welcome!
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I enjoy your ability to create erotic writing without stepping over the vulgarity line. You keep people on the end of their chair wanting more. This requires great talent. Well done.
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I try not to cross that line. For example my sci fi novel is 400 pages long and only one curse word in the entire thing. Aw, thank you for saying that. And thanks for reading. Have a great weekend.
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More!!! I LOVE Saturday mornings but Sunday through Friday are quite painful with the wait. 🙂
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Aw, thanks for saying that. And thanks for reading.
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Thank you for confirming that you are an evil man? You are quite twisted! So glad I found you. 🙂
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Yeah, I am a little twisted. I will make it up to you and stop by to visit your blog a little later. Thanks for all your support.
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Let’s be twisted together. 🙂
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There is nothing twisted on your blog. But sure.
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Yes, I am a very vanilla kind of girl. Either that, or you haven’t gone back far enough. 😉
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I am vanilla too. That is why Devil Girl and her need for 31 flavors aroused my curiosity.
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Well, I think that Devil Girl and I could be very good friends. 🙂
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Oh, she took me on rides I never could imagine.
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I want to go on that ride. Sounds like a BLAST!! 🙂
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It was.
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wow this is amazing!! I rally look forward to reading this…very graphic!!
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Thanks. Happy you enjoyed this.
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🙂 🙂
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You are such a talented writer sweetie! I loved this post!
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Thanks for saying that. Just need to convince a literary agent of the same.
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This feels like a dream
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Smile. It really happened to me with a crazy ex I had. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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Strong writing but with real polish…
Yes!
john
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Thanks for saying that John. I appreciate it. And thanks for stopping by to read.
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Such a tease. Devil girl sounds like she secretly had self esteem issues. Always needing to be wanted, to be desired and to flaunt it in front of you, knowing that you loved her. In a way, I’m beginning to feel sorry for Devil girl. And to think she lost out on someone special like you.
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Always needing to be on showcase. Oh, and there was no watching tv with her. And the complaining oh, you’re writing again. If I do write this as a novel, I will have a full 3D characxter to write about. Probably would be my easiest book to write. Thanks for stoping by Meg.
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Oh, men on a train…um, never mind 😉 Can’t wait for next week!
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Thanks so much for stopping by to read. Take care.
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Always a pleasure 😃
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Thanks
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wow 50 shades for men!
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Thanks for saying that. It wasn’t easy for me. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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Stay out of the subway
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lol Good one Sheldon. Thanks for stopping by to read. I hope you are doing well.
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Thank you for your kind words
Yes I am doing well
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Hahaha! Good one! LOL
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Thanks for stopping by to read. Have a good one.
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A amazing tale. I agree with the introduction. All of us have our Devil girl.
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Hahaha. Thanks for reading. Yeah, most of us have had a Devil Girl.
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Yes we do. Us writers need a few.
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She was my muse.
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Wonderful as always.. I look forward to seeing how this story continues. Smiles.
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Thanks. I hope you are resting. How can I look forward to your posts, if you burn yourself out. Have a wonderful evening.
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I have slept all day long. I am trying to wake and I just can’t seem too. Maybe a hot shower will help. I will try to write soon. And you.
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Oh, you said the magic words. Thanks. You need to rest tomorrow is Monday. Ugh. I hate Mondays
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I know. UGH!!! I hope got all of your shopping done today.
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I have no family so it is a small list. All done.
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I have done all I’m going too. Mine wants money anyways.
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Good for you. Your son, too? Now, we both can sit back and relax all December
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I plan to do that, when I am not working. Christmas is just another day and I do not get into it like I used too.
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Aw.I am a sucker for Christmas. This is my happiest month of the year.
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I am glad for you. Smiles.
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I am glad knowing you will be resting. Hey, I am up to 99 followers in twitter. NOt veruyimpressive you like. but it’s a start.
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It takes time. I have been on there for about 4 years now. I will not get many more because my account is locked. You will have as many as me in no time.
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Wow. you think so? Thanks for the suggestion. There is so much creativity there. I do have questions for you, but I don’t want to bother you like a pest.
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You’re no bother. Ask away..
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Is there a way to have the feed focus on the bloggers I want to follow. So, I can see you, Chrissy, palfitness, and others first?
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It is possible that it is, but I have no idea.
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How do yuo catch up on your closest friends tweets? One by one?
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I don’t always do, but when I do, I just type in there Twitter handle in the search and go from there. I rarely scroll through my feed. All my closest friend are in DM and I click on there feed from there.
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Sorry I am naive. DM?
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Yes. On Twitter. It’s where you want to talk with someone privately. Not everyone tweeter responds to DM. It just depends on the person I guess.
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So, you use the DM to find their tweets quicker. Great idea thanks.
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I do but that is just me.
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I will do the same.
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Just remember, not everyone likes to be dm’d. You will figure out who you can and cannot DM.
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Thanks for letting me know.
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You’re most welcome. Smiles.
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I am enjoying the writing but intrigued by the back story. Weren’t you concerned about her sluttiness for want of a better word?
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A young man in love and a girl who (hmmm how should I put it?) excelled in bed. Naw, I was young and stupid (and horny). lol
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I don’t know why I asked that question – I was the worst girlfriend in the world! Not sure if I excelled in bed but was enthusiastic and looked good…:)
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What more can a dude want? You were everything. And you have a brain too. The total package.
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Awww! You have made my week. Thank you kind ser.
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Haha. But it’s true.
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Oh my!!! Wow! This was so good! :). I ask that same question all the time! “What’s wrong with me!” Why is it our fantasies are so naughty it makes us question if we are normal! 🙂 this one may be my favorite of Devilish Girl! 🙂
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Haha. Thanks for saying that. It doesn make people question their fantasies. Thanks for saying that. I think fantasies are okay as long as both are interested. If one person is forcing their fantasies on the other it isn’t the same. Thanks for reading.
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Reblogged this on KCJones.
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Thanks for the reblog. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful week.
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