Every man has that one unforgettable woman that will haunt him until his final day; the girl that got away. Allie detested television, vanilla ice cream, and missionary. She explored the depths of her sexuality; while I discovered the heights of my pain. My muse had a nickname. I called her Devil Girl. I write these words to ease my sorrows. My name is Andrew.
This is our story.
Freaky Friday
That is what she called them
I called it my excursion into hell
this Friday she wanted to see porn
a tame and lame proposition
much safer than the norm
Imagining the fun we would have
Her full breasts and sweet legs in lingerie
Her mouth performing magic on my torso
unlocking the door to my apartment
I wondered if she had already arrived
Anxious for the festivities to begin
Entering the silent darkness
Don’t move a deep voice thundered
A cold metal pressed into my neck
Chills ran up my spine
I trembled like a wet dog in a storm
A gun sank into the softness of my cheek
Blood drained from my heart
One questioned frightened me more than the weapons
Did I arrive before my Devil Girl
Next week peeps
Well, hell. You’ve got to give us more … now …. or soon … or sooner …. Sigh. Yes, I admit. I read books cover to cover with very little interruption because of my impatience.
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LOL You really have? I have been so sick for the past two days. Totally ignored my blog. You gave me my first smile. Thanks
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Here is wishing you a quick recovery and many more smiles to come!! 😉
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Thanks my friend.
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Was it the devil girl’s new game?
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LOL Here in New York with crime as it is -you never know. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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wow… what a cliffhanger… it was brilliant… I just love it… can’t wait for next. Bravo!! 👏👍😊🌹
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Thank you so much for saying that. I appreciate it. And thanks for stopping by to read. I have the flu, your comments have made me feel a little better. Thanks
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Aww poor you… I wish you lot of health and strength. It’s always pleasure to read your work. mwah 😊🌹
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Thanks so much.
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And sadly we got no sleep!
cheers chris
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Thanks for saying that. Your words bring me much joy.
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Joy in having no sleep,
great minds think alike!
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Smiling. I will visit you later today. Have a good one.
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Where?
i’m in Vancouver BC Canada!
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LOL Your blog.
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Awe!
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DAMN YOU!!! WHY do you keep torturing me?! *sobbing uncontrollably*
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Oh, I have been so sick the past few days. Wanted to make everyone else as miserableas I am. LOL Thanks for being such a great supporter. I appreciate it.
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Part of me is truly sorry that you are sick. Not a great way to ring in the new year. However, part of me, the part that is being slowly tortured to death by your evil writing, thinks you deserve to suffer like the rest of us. 😉
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LOL **cough** >.< Smile.
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OK. Get feeling better. I want MORE next Saturday. 🙂
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Smiling. Thanks.
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Living up to her reputation…..Yes! A veritable Temptress! 😉
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Smiling. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. May joy, good health, luck, and inspiration rain on you in this new year
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Sentiments warmly reciprocated for the ensuing year…. 😉
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Thanks
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Yes you did arrived first you horn dog. lol
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LOL Thanks for stopping by
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OH my! Wow Andrew. I just realized I am not following you but I think maybe I thought I was. So imagine my surprise when the post I read is this one! Goodness these freaky people in our lives don’t they shake you to the core sometimes? Well at least they did. I got rid of mine I got tired of the freak show! Play on your words not mine. I tend to be a little more gentle and ask my friends to check their freak at the door! 😀
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Seriously, I got rid of mine as well. Fantasies can be fun and when a man is young her may let a wild girl steer him. But with time he matures and learns that love between man and woman should be sacred. It doesn’t need all the wildness if truly is love. And thanks for the follow.
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OH wow I couldn’t agree more! I love the sacred part. I spent most of my life with no one in my life that welcomed the sacred and treated it as such! Don’t get me wrong, I’ve had my share of wild but well you know how that goes. I don’t need to elaborate! I see a lot of tabs on your blog! I might camp out here for a little bit! 😀
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Do you like poetry or humor. I write many poems for the female experiecne and cause.
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Eosinophil count was more. How about now?
I too had same but chkd last winter it is within normal range ( maybe changed after baby)
Take care.
Mmmmmmm…. have turmeric in warm milk.
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Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
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I think you’re lucky she’s the one who got away because otherwise I think you’d be dead by now. Then what would we have to read?
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LOL LOve the comment. I have the flu and the wonders that come with it. This made me smile. Thanks for stopping here to comment
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Oh boy, a frightening thought…just when you thought it was going to be all fun and games…
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Thats NYC for you.
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Next week?
Are you fucking kidding me?!!!
Thats a proper cliff hanger right there that is………
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Haha Thanks for stopping by to read. I appreciate it.
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Pleasure.
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Hope you’re feeling much better! Of course, I am left, sitting on the edge of my seat, wondering…. Will Andrew make it out alive? 😃 Excellent as always. Can’t wait for next week
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read. I appreciate it. Getting rest and plenty of fluids.
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Your romantic life sounds a good bit more, er, dynamic than mine. It’s like watching a James Bond movie on television. Because I have so little background knowledge of this kind of thing, I read the line “unlocking the door to my apartment” three times wondering whether or not it was a euphemism. In the end, I decided it was probably a real door. 🙂
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LOL You have me in tears
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…wow….hanging on every word you wrote, so skilfully written… Awaiting the next instalment…oh and hope you feel better soon!
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Aw thank you for saying that. I appreciate you stopping by to read. Taking plenty of fluids and resting. Thanks. Have a good day.
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thank you for reblogging. Happy 2016.
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First, I hope your feeling much better and second I agree – “next week???”
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Yes, I am. Thanks. Sorry, next week. Thanks for stopping by.
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Glad you’re feeling better.
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Thanks
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Thanks
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What a great twist in this ongoing tale. I was waiting for an attack of “passion” and was not expecting this turn of events. It’s affect was more powerful than a cup of espresso! Very interesting as the intensity of the story grows and forces the reader to wait an entire week. (I wasn’t sure if I slid you a paper Washington if that would entice an earlier divulging on this suspenseful adventure.)
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Cup of expresso. LOL Hey, who is the writer here? Thanks for reading. lol
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Oh no.. It is going to be a long week before we know what happens.
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LOL Thanks for reading.
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My pleasure.
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Oh, and this really happened to me. No lying.
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Oh my..
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A trifle prurient, but, nicely done. The tension builds quickly at the end, & drops the reader into fearful ambiguity much as a sudden drop in an elevator….
Looking forward to more….
gigoid, the dubious
😎
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.
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Ooooooohhhhhh….. I have a million ideas running through my head… Can’t wait!
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Thanks lol
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