Pretty Girl Unloved
She was like the last leaf on a dying tree
Hanging from a barren branch
Too frightened to be free
Unloving winds made her rock and sway
Disconnected from her twig
She was forever castaway
Unwanted and unnoticed she fell in dirt
She remained all alone there
With no one to cure her hurt
Dying in shadows with no the sun above
She lay in the cold forever
Pretty girl unloved
Wow! The words are just captivating.
This is very touching and the words just flow full of vivid imagery!
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Thanks so much for saying that. I appreciate it. And thanks for stopping by to read. Have a great day.
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You too!
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Thanks
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Such beautiful pathos …love , megxxx
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Thanks for stopping by to read. Appreciate it.
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So sad…
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Thanks for stopping by to read. There are so many beuatiful unloved ladies out there. Have a great day.
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Yea yea I know… u huge hearted fellow wud luv to LOVE all unloved appealing ladies… bruhahahaha
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Hahaha. I love them in all shape and sizes with my cholesterol filled heart. hahaha
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I don’t believe u have cholestrol. Yyyyyyyyyyyyy….. Cholestrol!!!
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Hahaha. You just come here to tease me?
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No… lil bothered for WP fraand
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lol
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Very sad, indeed. How many bright smiles hide a weeping soul? The image is perfect, too.
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Smiling. That is so true, Meg. Honestly, that never crossed my mind. Amazing how everyone sees something different. I was thinking of a pretty friend who can never find the right guy. Thanks for the comment.
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Men chase pretty women (sometimes) for the wrong reasons.
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You’re preaching to the preacher, Meg. lol
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š¢š¢š¢ So touching!! A masterpieceā¤ļø
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Oh my. Thanks for saying that. I appreciate your kind words. Have a lovely day filled with love.
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Very powerful in emotions and imagery. For some, it is a lifetime sentence; for others it’s a moment of despair. As sad as it may sound, it might be a cog in the wheel of life.
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Wow, I wonder if there is a way to reblog your comments. Sadly, your final words are true. Thanks for stopping by.
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So sad and beautiful!
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Thanks for reading.
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My pleasure. š
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You are truly gifted. One post you make me laugh out loud and the next you send a tear cascading down my cheek. Thank you for making me feel. XOXO
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You have warmed me with your words. Thanks so much for saying that. It lets me know I am reaching someone’s heart. (And their funny bone). I’m touched.
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I thought we discussed you not liking the whole being touched thing yesterday. Pain wasn’t your thing. š
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No, it isn’t. I don’t like pain it hurts. lol
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Hurts SO Good! ššš
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LOL You are BAD
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Isn’t that why you love me? š
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That and your posts
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Good! I’m working on something completely different right now. I’m a little scared to attempt something new, but the worst that could happen is that it sucks. So, no big loss right? Just promise me that if you hate it, you’ll still love me and my other posts. š
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Sucking is good. LOL Well maybe not in writing. Of coure I wll continue to follow you my dear
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You are quite the Perv, aren’t you? You could be a fun challenge. And, sucking, outside of writing, is ALWAYS GOOD! šš š
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LOL YES YES YES
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**All Smiles-with a wicked gleam in my big blue eyes**
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lol
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Vivid and sad. I love the fact that there is a rhyme scheme but it’s very natural as opposed to structured.
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Thank you for reading. I hat the way I always tend to rhyme. So, I really appreciate your words.
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Made me think of my own mortality. I kept telling my husband that I’d want to die first so he can be there with me. He then said, “Don’t you wanna celebrate after when I die first? You can shop all the time without me making a face.”
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LOL Thanks for stopping by.
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WOW! Just WOW! Bravošš¼ Love your stuffš
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You made me blush. Thanks for saying that. This is a little different from my usual stuff which is more direct. Thanks so much for your support. I appreciate it.
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Sorryš I like it! Of course that’s what we do right? Goodšš¼ Have a great day!
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Smiling, have a great day.
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I plan on it! Thanks!!
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No pretty girl goes unloved. She just needs to get out more.
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LOL What could I do? The title “Not So Pretty Girl Unloved” was already taken.
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Right, and then people would get on you about body image and down with perfection and all that stuff…Sheesh, you have to be so careful these days!
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Yeah, you are right. Amd saying Girl Unloved insults the feminists. So, I guess I should just stop writing all together lol
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Right, if we worry about who we’re going to offend, we should all put down our pens.
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Oh, you’re talking to Mr. Politically Incorrect. Well, that was my name until Trump decided to run for office.
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yes, he outdoes us all.
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Nicely done
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Thank you for stopping by to read. Appreciate it. Have a good one.
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This is how I currently feel…
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Oh, I am so sorry to hear that. There’s nothing sadder than an unappreciated flower. I truly hope things get better for you.
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Thank you
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I will visit your blog a little later.
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You don’t have to feel obliged to do so.
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I want to. I support all my friends who support me.
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Sad way to end up – or start the year. Perhaps too many people looking for cheap thrills, too many others searching in the wrong place.
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So true. Too many game players for my tastes. And that leads to Girls Unloved. Thanks for your thoughtful comments & for stopping by to read. I appreciate it.
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Awww. š¢
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read.
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Of course, why wouldn’t I? š
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Smiling
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Reblogged this on Anita Dawes & Jaye Marie.
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Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
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more than welcome!
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My second favourite in all your poetry so far, sad but true, once castaway from their twig, there is nothing but cold harsh ground and no sun above, brilliant poem. Oh and first one was that poem on hunger and malnourished dying kids. I forgot the title, my bad. sorry š¦
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The name of that one was Jessie. This is one of my favorite comments that I have ever received. Wow. Thank you so much. You have made my day.
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Is it? yay, thanks it made my day too, yeah, Jessie, the girl with a soft toy in hands in the featured image, that has to be one of my all time favourite poem. š Take care !!
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Thabjs Take care
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This is heartbreaking but gorgeous. It flows so well. The cascade of emotions falling from branch to branch… So very beautiful! You have a gift… ā¤ļø
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God, I even love your comments. Do you talk beautiful, as well? Thanks
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Wow! I love this poem. Truly heartbreakingly beautiful. ā¤ļø
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That is a great compliment from the person I think is the greatest hopeless romantic in wordpress. I am so flattered. Thanks
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Oh haha how sweet! š
I seriously love this piece! x
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Thanks
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Love the picture that goes with this š
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Thanks for stopping by.
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Because beauty is such an admirable quality, it can (sometimes) be hindering. The beautiful man or woman doesn’t really have to gain any other skills because they have already “mastered” something. So while the beauties are comfortable just staying at their current status, everyone is learning how to move forward – leaving the beauties behind.
Kinda random, but that’s what came to mind when I read this. š
Great post!
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Great comment. Wow. I have a friend who fits into this mold. Beautiful but she never really developed her xocial skills, thius she never finds a person who can relate to her. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
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A beautiful piece you have written, but sad.
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Thanks. It was rather sad. Tomorrow’s poem will be bursting with affection & positivity.
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Your poems are always a joy to read.
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Smiling.
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The other day, a friend called me a funny chimp and I haven’t stopped smiling ever since. Keeps popping into my head.
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Good.. you funny chimp. Smiling.
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LMAO
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I am glad that I can make you smile.
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Always successful
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Thank you. Smiles.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
NOT THE ONE MOST CLAMORED AFTER????? WHAT A SHAME!
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LOL Thank you so much Jonathan. I appreciate it.
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Sad but lovely.
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Thanks
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You’re welcome. You write beautifully. xx
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Don’t make me blush or we will get back in the Caitlyn conversation again. lol
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š xx
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sad. but i don’t think there are lots of pretty girls unloved, there’s just so many unromantic guys….LOL
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There is some truth to that. But I personally know a girl who is so beautiful, she never can keep a guy. Shrugging. Perhaps she never really developed certain social skills to relate to others.
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hmmm…then that’s a different story
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That was Mandy Moore. Damn I need my glasses.
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he he he he
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lol
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Beautiful and haunting. Well penned!
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Aw, thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
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My pleasure š
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Nice and dark, just the way I like my poetry. š
Great job–this is lovely and flows nicely.
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Thank you so much for reading and saying that. I appreciate it.
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A clever rhyming poem with so much truth carried within these words… Great analogy dying leaf on a twig… Makes me feel for all those women unloved… š well done.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I think writing novels comes easir for me, so the poetry thing is a work in progress. Thanks for reading.
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… Since I only started writing last March, mine is definitely a work in progress… keep the impetus goin’. !
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You as well. Thanks
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Reblogged this on My Daily Musing and commented:
This poem is haunting and lovely at the same time.
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Thank you so much for saying that. And thanks for the reblog. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful day.
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You;re very welcome, :). You have a wonderful day too.
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Thanks
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Thank you so much for the reblog. I appreciate it.
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What an image your words paint.. I feel her loneliness
Great write up
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Thank you
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So welcome š happy Saturday to you
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To you as well.
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Reblogged this on ' Ace Friends News '.
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Thank you so much Ian. I really appreciate it.
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Beautiful and dangerous women captivate us men and we love it but then the pain oh my life Andrew – Great writer you are my friend you will go far l will set you up a free magazine and share your posts as l did last year for my other friends – let me know take a look here for what l mean at aceworldnews.wordpress.com Ian š
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Thankyou so much. I will take a peek. I am flattered by your gesture.
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An unusual of yours, with sadness that envelops the reader while the senses see this beauty dry and decompose in front of our eyes.
The first stanza is my favorite one!
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It was. I loved the image. It inspired me. Tried to use more symbolism, the way you do so well. Thanks
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š Well, at least I am good for something.
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You are good for so much. You are a soul healer.
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now i m replying in urdu related from a greek prince narciuos in ancient age of greece -“hazaaron baras nargis apni benoori pe roti he;badi mushkil se paida hota he chaman me deedawer paida…..”written by iqabaal – a famous urdu poet.
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What does that mean?
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i try to u dt understanding as i can do.in ancient age a greek princ was most handsome.he thought dt he was only one very very smart n beautiful guy on whole world.often he had to see his own face in mirror or pounds n Äŗakes water .mostly beautiful girls liked ,wanted him n fell down in his love.bt dt prince named narcious ignored all those girls.one day ,a most beautiful girl had angerd on him n cursed dt nobody would liked n loved him forever.he would be alone forever also after his death n his rebirth.it is said dt after death he had taken rebirth as a very beutiful flower named narcious.dis narcious calls as flower of Nargis in india.dis flower blossems secluded n haunted forest farest from city or village.any lost wanderer may reach there n see dt flower nargis then he attrect n adore dt flower becuase its beauty. dis flower is most beautiful bt has no fragrance coz of curse.its beutiness forces to fall down in it love.so dis is called dt dis flower is helpless to get somebody’s love n has to weep on its lonelyness.ur blog”pretty girl unloved” reminds me dt cursed flower.plz try to understand what is said by me because my english’s knowledge is not good.if u have understood plz reply me.i think dt beauty has not any value without love.
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Beautiful story.
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welcome o lonely auther dt is not mere a story dt is truth n belongd from greek civilization.sure.
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Interesting. Thanks
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did u try to see movie”PAKIZAA” realzed in 1972a.d.?plz reply.
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No, I never saw that movie. It was good?
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yeah.it is a good movie specialy feet’s beauty is main reason.
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