You

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You

Loving whispered in my ear
passions making me so weak
kisses igniting my lonely heart
gentle fingers grazed my cheek

Sweaty bodies entwined as one
no I never wanted to let you go
gentle fingers caressed my soul
need you more than you can know

My body groans as I see your face
I knew it was too good to be true
yes tonight I made love to another
another night pretending it was you

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106 thoughts on “You”

    1. Smiling. Never really thought beyond the poem. I have been trying to write about different types of love and the different hurdles lovers experience. A relationship like that couldn’t possibly last very long. And it will end tragically. Thanks for reading.

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        1. I don’t know why people do it all the time. Don’t start a relationship unless you are ready to commit to it. If you’re still thinking of someone in your past, then you’re not ready for a new relationship. These things are always detined to fail.

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            1. Smiling Everyday should be wise words day. At least common sense days. Wouldn’t that be sweet? Something new to chew over?? What better relationship can there be than a relationship where he GIVES without TAKING. And she does the same. Two giving people and nt taking should be heaven.

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              1. “Every day = Common sense day. Two people giving without taking = heaven.” You’re on a roll!! I expect to see these quotes in Goodreads very soon. By the Lonely Author. Awesome!

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      1. Agreed! I know a couple of people who are in unhappy relationships and it’s sad to see their spirit die a little more each day. Hopefully they find their true happiness in the long run. I’m doing well thank you. I hope you and yours are well ☺️.

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    1. Thank you so much Meg. You are so sweet. I want to write about the different kinds of love and hurdles lovers face. This is one tragic mistake some people do make. I don’t believe in the old “be with the one you love or love the one your with.” Loving one person, but being with aother never works. Thanks

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  9. DAMN!! This one took my breath. LOVED the surprise ending. I agree with everyone that this is an almost impossible thing to live with, but a lot of people live this way every day. Incredibly steamy way to start my day. Thank you. 🙂

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  12. Ah, unrequited love. Something I know a thing or two about… You are killing me with these, you know. I think you might like my post from yesterday, Unsent love letters-Darling. I think it’s up your alley if you have a chance to read it.

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      1. I’m just giving you a hard time. You don’t know me so I’ll let you in on a secret that’s not so secret, I tend to be a sarcastic smart ass as well as incredibly sweet. You can’t have sweet without salty, after all.

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  15. This is a situation that will likely end, however, are we certain she isn’t fantasizing the same type of thoughts about another man? This might just be a necessary moment of passion for the two of them even though each may be with another person. Filling emotional voids through consensual acts of passion might not end as badly as one might think.
    Your poems always force my mind to reach places it would never think to go on its own. You inspire creativity I never knew I had. Thank you for all your effort.

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  20. do ur love is only for time pass or forever?physical love is trmporary n spiritual love is forevet like ur hollwood’s movie”the note book”.do u love with siprit from any girl in ur life whom u rememberd every moments.i think dt one loves only first sight’s love forever either he could get her or not n rememberd his beloved whole life.ur pic does not show d feelings of love bt lust.if u mind plz sorry.

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  25. I’m laughing right now because a. You have a gazillion comments to reply to and I keep adding more
    And b. I said I was going to stalk you quietly but I am only human. This was too beautiful. Pulled my heartstrings
    Don’t respond!

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          1. Haha , no it wasn’t!
            It was just simpler than your poetry now. Your soul deepens the more you write and that’s why you like your poetry more now. There is more of you in it, good , bad and everything in between

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              1. I never do that. Is that terrible? I think I am too obsessed with being unique and unlike anything else so I never want ideas from elsewhere to creep in. It has to be all me.
                I read that back and it sounds awful but I’m hitting send anyway!

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