Through My Eyes
When I tell you that you’re beautiful
you don’t believe a word I say
when I tell you you’re amazing
you smile and walk away
you focus on a new wrinkle
complain about an extra pound or two
yet my opinion never matters
you swear I have no clue
You distort the vision before you
haven’t the faintest reason why
but you always fail to acknowledge
that mirrors never lie
perhaps I could help you love yourself
help you spread your wings and fly
if only you could admire your reflection
through my eyes
ahhhh. Such a great poem. 🙂
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for stopping by to read. I appreciate it. Have a great day.
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This is just beautiful.
Commendable
Appreciating Beauty
Making her Recognise
If at all she was Intelligent
And Could have given a Chance
Her Beauty would have Boosted
I Loved to Read it.
LOL
Shiva
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Thank you so much for contributing your kind words to this post. At times a lady fails to recognize her beauty, meanwhile their partners can see all the magic & wonders in their spouse. Thank you for your kind comments. And thank you for stopping by.
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simply beautiful… cherishing in action…
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Smiling. Thank you for your kind words. Glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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Maybe that’s why men love/hate women. Because they always complain :))
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Yes, you are corrrect. Life is too short to hate or to complain. Our precious time on Earth needs to be dedicated to love and happiness. Thanks for reading Monica.
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Always with pleasure 🙂
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Aww I just adore this! Such truth. ❤️
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Thank you. Such a sweet message from the Queen of Hopeless Romantics. Thank you so much Jennifer. I appreciate it.
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Perhaps you are King of Romance! Such beauty in your words. 💕
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Haha Oh, Jennifer. Thank you so much for saying that.
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Its the truth!! xxx
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Thank you.
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Wow that’s beautiful!
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Smiling. Thank you for stopping by to read. I appreciate it. Have a great day.
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Smiling. Thank you for saying that. I appreciate your kind words. And thanks for stopping by to read.
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Yeah you’re welcome 🙂
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If only the ones we love could see themselves as we see them, how wonderful they would feel about themselves. However, when media and society has determined what ‘beautiful’ is and isn’t, it’s tough for many who want to make every blemish disappear. Great piece, Andrew!
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Exactly. God that was a great summary. I visit blogs and read how you breakdown poems with your insightful commentary. You leave me mesmerized. Thank you for your kind words.
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It’s because the writing moves me, my friend. You are most welcome 🙂
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Smiling. Thanks
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🙂 welcome!
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❤ Through my eyes 🙂
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Beautiful 💮 💮
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Smiling. I hope you find all the beauty you possess when you look into your mirror. Thanks for stopping by my friend. Have a good one.
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My pleasure, thank you! Take care my friend 🙂 🌼
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Smiling
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🙂 🙂
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Excellent.
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Thank you for stopping by to read. Have a wonderful day.
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Likewise
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Another beautiful one. You’re on a love spree 🙂 So true that many women are incapable of seeing their own beauty.
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the closer we get to Valentine’s day the mushier I will get. Oh, these next few weeks will be a regular love-a-thon. Laughing. Geetha, tell me what is better than love?
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I guess there is nothing better than love and actually, if you think of it, everything is love because everything is energy and love is the greatest source of energy 🙂
Be mushy as much as you will my friend. We WP followers will not complain and I am sure as heck your wife won’t be complaining either 😀 😉
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Laughing. The Lonely Musher agrees with you 100%. There is nothing better than love. As for the Lonely Wifey, she loved this one. She suffers from that terrible affliction of looking in the mirror in search of flaws. Alas, she and others choose not to listen to the compliments of the person closest to them.
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Personally I don’t have that problem anymore but there used to be a time so I can relate 🙂
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Good for you. And with all due respect my friend, you are a looker. And then with all that inner beauty you possess. Don’t EVER sell yourself short.
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Awww, you’re such a darling. I wonder how your wife even doubts herself anymore. Thank you dear, I am not planning to sell myself short though I may have done in the past. It is better to be alone and then have the right person in your life than to jump on the bandwagon just not to make your friends feel strange at parties or dinners out as couples 😀
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Exactly. Remember you are special.
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So sweet of you Andrew, thanks a lot for your kind words 🙂
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Smiling. You’re welcome.
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See it through your words…. 😉
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What a beautiful comment. Thanks!!!
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If only
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Smiling. Don’t say that Rita, you have an unshielded heart. Love is meant to be for you.
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I have it but I don’t always understand what he sees that I can’t see. That mirror is a bitch at times.
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In addition to your outer beauty, he can see what the mirror doesn’t show. The inner beauty of your soul.
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Oh you are a silver-tongued Chimp and I thank you. Did I lose you when I changed the blog settings? I didn’t mean to drop ya.
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You lost me? Yeah, you did. I can’t get to your blog. Followe me so I can follow you. I am pouting.
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I made it private for just the folks I connect with – you be one. I’ll add you back. Sorry
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Cool. Don’t want to lose my connections.
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You are a highlight of my reading!
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Thank you for saying that.
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Done!
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Thanks
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Feeling that you are beautiful has little to do with how you really look. Some people have loads of self confidence and healthy self esteem where others have little to none. Perhaps it’s the way they were raised, either praised and encouraged or constantly criticized. Whatever the case, sometimes a beautiful person can’t see what the person who loves them does. Which is why it’s so important to keep telling them. I loved this…
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Smiling. Agree with everything you said. Honestly, I have been with many types of women to the point where I have been accused that I don’t have a “type.” My desire has always been to connect with the person inside cause that is where you find true beauty. Thanks for your thoughtful words.
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Always a pleasure, Andrew. You inevitably touch me with your writing. Sometimes, I feel like you’re writing about me.
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Smiling. I am writing about everyone. We are all sensitive, insecure, flowers in search of love. Kind of like that feather in Forrest Gump. Thanks.
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All together now: awww. (See? The syndrome has hit.) But seriously, what a great (and romantic!) piece. I hope we all get to see ourselves through the eyes of others. Beauty (and flaws) and everything.
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Aaaaaawww. Exactly. Sometimes, the flaws are the best parts.
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Does it rub off on you, too? The syndrome, I mean. Not the flaws. The chimp has no flaws… Not that I can see from here. But then I’m too far away. Lol 😀 Seriously… Yes, loving someone, for their beauty and their flaws. The best kind of love. 🙂
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Loving the beauty and flaws is what life is alkl about. The syndrome? Hmmm. Well, I could have looked like Bradley Cooper. Naw, I am happy being the lonely chimp.
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Gasp. Bradley? Is that you? Why is there so much hair? Lol.
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Your words speak true to so many of us. Most of us women are too hard on ourselves. Beautifully written my friend.
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Thank you for your kind words. 1- Don’t be hard on yourself. Life is hard enough. 2- While outer beauty is fine & dandy, it is through the soul where people need to connect. 3- Happy Birthday to John. Hope he has the best day!
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Thank you so much. I will pass the message along. Smiles.
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Thanks. Save me a piece of birthday cake.
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Will do. Smiles
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I’d like to reblog, lonely chimp, hoping you know this cause I never see my comments on your blog. Either they are in your spam or you don’t love me at all!
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Reblogged this on LadiesWhoLunchReviews,etc and commented:
A lovely poem by a the lonely author! Hoping he knows I’m reblogging cause I never see my comments on his site and think they are going into his spam (which seems to happen a lot!) Or I might be the only girl in the world that the little chimp is ignoring, sniff 😦
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I have always wished I could see what he sees. Although, beauty isn’t just the visible. Some of the most stunningly gorgeous people are marred and scared when they expose their ugly hearts. 🙂
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That is so damn true. And I have loved some people who may have not been the prettiest, but they had hearts and souls that radiated extraordinary love and beauty.
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Yes Sir! Beauty outside can NEVER mask the ugly inside. But, a stunning soul can make a plain facade shine. 🙂
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Trust, me I have dated all types. I always search for a warm soul……and nice feet.
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What if she is beautiful, inside and out, but doesn’t have good feet? 😉
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Damn. That is hard, but in the end my true happiness would make me pass.
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👟👞👡👠👢 a little porn just for you! 💋
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LOL
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💋😃💋
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Boy, are you ever a romantic. Sigh….
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This sappy chimp gets like that sometimes. Thanks for reading.
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No more tingles…..please. Too much. Your work is sumptuously evocative and sensual.
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Smiling. Thank you so much for reading. You are too kind. Thanks
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I am honest. From where I am sitting or lying, I say it as I see it and I see it with fireworks.
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Blushing. Thank you so much.
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Love it! Great job!
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Thank you for stopping by to read. Glad you appreciated it.
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You’re welcome. How are things going?
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Can’t complain. How are you doin’. See the New York accent? “doin’.”
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Interestin’! I’m doing pretty well, thanks. Reading Hell Fire by John Saul! It’s really good. Were you the one that said you liked his books?
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Yeah, it was me. I read that book some time ago. You know I love his work. Enjoy.
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Yeah, he’s a GREAT writer! The only thing is that his books always deal with an event that had to deal with”one hundred years ago…”! He is a good writer though!
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Yeash, that is true. Ennjoy the book.
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❤ perfection!
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She is so lucky to be loved through the eyes of your heart ❤️
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Smiling. Thank you.
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😊😊😊
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Was this one written when you were dating Meg Griffin? I hear she had some self esteem issues.
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LOL No, that was one one gal this chimp never dated. Laughing so hard.
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Mmmm…I somehow knew you’d deny it!
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LOL
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Beautiful and sweet but also, sad. I don’t think we can give another self-acceptance. I wish I could.
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You are so right. As hard as I try, self acceptance has to develop from within. Thank you for stopping by to read and contribute your thoughtful comments.
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You’re welcome. My pleasure, always.:0)
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SHE SHOULD—THROUGH HIS EYES! 🙂
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Thank you so much for your support. I appreciate the reblog.
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Wow!! What an emotional poem. I love reading your posts.
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Thank you for saying that. I hope you are well. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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Ohhh I love love this poem! I guess we, women, are overly critical of ourselves. Yes we do notice an increase in a pound or two. Or even our ever-graying hair..aahhh the list goes on and on.
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Exactly. You know one thing I love to see? Love lines (otherwise known as crow’s feet). I find it so sexy, but women fret about these things. Women are TOO critical of themselves. And it is a shame they never truly appreciate their own beauty. Thanks for stopping by.
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Oh those I love too on women! It’s been said that they’re signs of happiness. I hope I get them real bad when I get older 😉
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Smiling. I am sure you will.
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Some peopke find it hard to take compliments.
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That is so true. Thanks for stopping by.
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Lovely pim😊
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Thank you for stopping by to read.
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So sorry I meant poem not pim.
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I understood. I haven’t learned how to correct comments yet. Thanks
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Same here. 🙂
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Your words are beautiful
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Thank you.
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Yeah.d girl’s beàuty is in ur eyesthere is not need d
Mirror.
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Exactly.
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Indeed.
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holy archives, batman! you read ‘electric eels’? I even had forgotten I wrote that essay. much gratitude for the scrutiny. cheers!
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Lol. You gave me a good laugh. Sometimes, I poke around to see what I find.
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Aww…you’re very very sweet. Lamest comment evee
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lmfao
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