Devil Girl Diaries – 12 (Home Sweet Home)


Every man has that one unforgettable woman that will haunt him until his final day; the girl that got away. Allie detested television, vanilla ice cream, and missionary. She explored the depths of her sexuality; while I discovered the heights of my pain. My muse had a nickname. I called her Devil Girl. I write these words to ease my sorrows. My name is Andrew.

This is our story.

Allie let me plan Friday night sexcapades
I prepped a good dinner
She wore a black negligee
me a white shirt and tie
nothing else
we ate, laughed, flirted
after a little fondling on the couch
she showered
she entered the glowing bedroom
one hundred candles filled the room
I lifted her to toss her on the bed
pushed her face down
I started kissing her feet
moved past her ankles
alternating between soft bites
demanding kisses
slowly worked my way up
She squirmed and sighed
A slap of the butt
Changed the mood
pressed her face against the wall
pulled her hair
slapped her bottom
took what was mine
we baptized every room
the kitchen counter
dining room table
hours later I woke
to find her gazing at the walls
are you okay I asked
she answered with a melancholy smile
I sadly realized
our souls were disconnected
are you addicted to the rush Devil Girl

More next week


67 thoughts on “Devil Girl Diaries – 12 (Home Sweet Home)

  1. There are some that need the intensity to chase away other demons that pursue them in the quiet and calm. I don’t know Devil Girl, but it sounds like she may have been running from some demons.

    I don’t want this series to ever end … but sadly, we all know it does. Just give me fair warning before we reach that point. Please. That way I can find something else to chase my demons. 😉

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    1. You don’t want this series to end? You devastated me with this comment. I don’t know what to say. One of the nicest compliments I have ever received about my writing. (It had to come from a Southern Belle). Thank you so much. Yeah, she ran from her demons. I guess we all do to some extent. Thank you for your kind words, you melted the snow outside my door and made this humble chimp so very happy.

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      1. Reading this series is like going through a slideshow of images portraying your relationship — we catch glimpses that allow us to FEEL the depths of your and Devil Girl’s personality, but no detail to dull the ecstasy of the “ride”. 😉 I wish something would melt the snow and ice outside my door!!! This Southern Belle needs to move further South, I’m afraid.

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        1. I am the biggest optimist I have ever known. Yet, today, I woke up doubting many things including my creativity. Your comments is the medicine I needed to today. As for the further South comment, I will be glad to meet you there. Thank you for lifting my spirits. Much appreciated.

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          1. And I am the biggest realist I have ever known. I can assure you there is NO reason for you to doubt yourself … especially your creativity. I’ve never been to Key West. Have you? Hey — chin up!! You have some fun to embrace very soon!! (Or have you forgotten?) 😉

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  2. Seems like she was in it for more than the immediate sensations, some old love perhaps tugging her soul. Maybe this is where her own devil came to stake claim, without regard for her heart or yours.
    Then again, maybe I’m too much of a skeptic to believe anything so intense and passionate can last forever. Hurt, however, that can last forever. Longing and regret too.

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    1. Oh, what a comment. Yeah, hurt can last forever. She was only happy getting a rush. I was fine with that (sometimes) but I felt “lovemaking” needed to be added to the mix. People should always be mindful of their mate’s needs. It can’t be all one way. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.


  3. Your devil girl had demons you couldn’t slay with any amount of rush or love making. It would never be enough because her void came from inside. It’s sad, really because it seems like you truly cared for her and treated her the way she should be treated but she just wasn’t ready to accept that type of love. Girls like that make forever muses.

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  4. Oh….how Saturday mornings take my breath away. I always seem to forget about this story until I see the picture on Saturday morning, and suddenly my entire day is made better. You ARE killing me by dragging this out as long as you have, but I will recover enough by next Saturday to experience the euphoria all over again. XOXO 🙂

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  5. I’m concerned about this relationship and am beginning to lose sleep over it. 🙂 Please don’t turn her into a “sugar” daddy. Don’t add poor nutrition habits to this challenging relationship, PLEASE!!! 😀

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