Eternally Yours
Tyler remembered driving through the heavy storm. Rain covered his windshield like a thick blanket of dripping wetness. He had no recollection of how he arrived in the hospital. He just knew he had to survive until…she arrived.
Too many strange faces before him. They brought little comfort; only she could provide relief. He ignored the weak signal of the electrocardiogram knowing the inevitable moment was upon him. He faded in and out of life. Then, suddenly she appeared.
he felt a familiar comfort
looking at that best thing
that ever happened to him
he admired her loving face
why was life terribly unfair
one lifetime wasn’t enough
time to be in love with her
staring at the best of his life
he suddenly felt tranquility
as he took his final breath
He saw eternity in her eyes
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The Lonely Author 
This is really beautiful Andrew.
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Thank you.
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Welcome dear friend 🙂
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This is just… beautiful… and heartbreaking. But still beautiful. I love this.
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Smiling. Love until the last drop. Thanks for your kind words. And thanks for reading.
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Great work
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Thank you for the compliment. And thanks for reading.
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Lovely write. I envisage an old couple in this.
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Thank you. I did as well.
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How beautifully sad.
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Smiling. Thank you for reading. And thanks for the compliment.
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Consolation writ large!!!! 😉
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Smiling. Thanks.
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Much nicer.
More love!
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Thanks for reading. Love until death do us part.
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Absolutely.
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Beautiful, Andrew.
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Thank you.
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You are welcome!
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you. Love until the end. The way it should be.
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Outstanding! Beautiful ❤️
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Thanks you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you stopping by to read and comment.
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My pleasure
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Ok, now you have me worried! Another sad poem, two in one day? Hope it’s just a mood and nothing is wrong!
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Receiving a lot of bad news this week from friends & from daughter’s mother. A tough week. Mushy just wasn’t in me last night.
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Of course not. I’m sorry to hear that. Bad news always seems to rain on you all at once. Sending love.
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Receiving it with joy. Thanks.
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I only wish his last breath lasts till eternity… or he could stay in the illusion of it… But life isn’t always fair as he already knows, and so only a glimpse can be his, and that glimpse can be his eternity.
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Oh, I love your beautiful comment. Thank you. No, life isn’t always fair. But if we find the right partner, it sort of balances out. Thanks for reading.
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will comment on this, once I find that.. Till then, the pleasure was all mine 🙂
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Smiling.
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I suppose that with the right person one lifetime just isn’t enough. Sad but beautiful. I like how he held on until he saw her…that final connection.
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I love your words. With the right woman one lifetime isn’t enough. Not if he is grateful for all she has done. Yeah, he clung to life just to make that final connection with her. Thank you for reading.
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Smiles. Thank you. It was my pleasure.
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Absolutely Beautiful. You are able to capture emotion so wonderfully in your words. XOXO
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Thank you for saying that. Glad you enjoyed. It is love as it should be. Love doesn’t have an expiration date. Well, it does, but it shouldn’t die until the very end.
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It NEVER does, just drifts into a memory. ❤️
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Yeah.u have said true dt Love doesn’t have an expiration date.
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Exactly. Thanks for reading.
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Beautifully touching…
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Thank you. Love as it should end.
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I hope that was a lovely Angel.
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Smiling. It was his devoted spouse. An angel in his eyes. Thanks for reading.
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That’s better. My pleasure my dear Sir 🙂
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😥
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Smiling. Love has no expiration date.
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So true.
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Oh, no, I need them to shock him back to life — unless, was she already gone and he saw her as he died? Cut it out, I need that HEA!
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LOL What a response. That is the only time love should expire. Thanks for reading.
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Sorry, too many romances lately, really screws with reality. Sending more hugs 🙂
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Thank you.
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I’m shivering. To be loved so much, to love this much, and to know it’s enough. Great poem, Andrew.
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Wow, thanks. Love shouldn’t have an expiration date. Thanks for reading.
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True love doesn’t. But you knew that.
Wishing you and your family the health you need.
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Thank you so much. Aww, you touched me. I hope you and yours all the best as well.
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Awesome. Thank you for igniting the spark I didn’t even realize was there.
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Wow, thank you for saying that. And thanks for stopping by to read.
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Gorgeous, Andrew. That last line… Sigh.
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This is the way love should end… Thanks for reading.
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I’ve felt that before. That type of love, the kind where you are terrified of dying because you feel like a lifetime still wouldn’t be enough time to be with them and you’d miss them too much. Ah… How I want that again.
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You will feel that again. Have faith in yourself.
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Touching and getting teary eyed — on a Friday! Nooo!
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Sorry. That is how love is supposed to end. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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It should! That’s why I’m dying first!!!!
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LOL
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A heart flanked by a couple of “P waves.”
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lol Thanks for readng.
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YES!
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Thank you for stopping by to read.
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I hear stories about how people hang on until they’ve said goodbye to the ones they love. Beautifully written and a true testament to love.
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Thank you so much for saying that. I know of a case like that of a dying man holding on until his wife arrived. Thanks for reading.
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Loved it 🙂
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Thanks. And thank you for stopping by to read.
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This is heartbreakingly beautiful, Andrew. The last line. /infinite sigh
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Smiling. Thanks. That is how love is supposed to end. Thanks for stopping by to read. I appreciate it.
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Poignantly beautiful….
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Thanks. Love as it should end. Thanks for reading.
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Always my pleasure 🙂
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Thank you so much for the reblog.
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So very love-ly… One life time not enough to love… Loved this one. I have witnessed a friend and my mother hanging on determinedly to this life waiting for a loved one to come say goodbye, but in each case, they didn’t come. So glad your poem has a peaceful ending!
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Smiling. My father did that with me and mom. He died a minute or two after we arrived. This is when love is supposed to end (when death arrives).
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True love is eternal. I watched my friend and Mother hang on till it was painful to watch, waiting for a loved one to come, but they never did… So glad your poem has a peaceful ending. Heart rendering this one…
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Thanks
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I appreciate them. I wish you a weekend full of love.
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Nice post!!!!
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Have a good one my friend.
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Have great weekend, my friend!!
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You too Kally.
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Thank you for linking to this write. I appreciate your support.
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Two beloved’s heart beatings r in shape of heart ,l think dt they r joined eternally with each other.oh u have not replied about dt hindi lines of my song.r u a lazy chimp?
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NO, not lazy. Too energetic.
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Then why can u not understand dt lines?u say dt u can translate in english.lier lonely authar.now i have understood all urs lies.i m in tear now dt how much i m a foolish guy.
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NO, I didn’t have a chance to translate in Google. Don’t say that.
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Hey lier.u said sometime before n also forget.dt line means-love is a uniqe type madness;careless from everybody ,n every happienesses and worriness(sad n joy)
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Love is a little madness.
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N beyond of all happieness n worriness .aa hi jaata he dil jispe aana hota he.( but one time he like some one u should think dt liking is forever.)
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Love should be forever. Or at least until death separates the lovers.
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Death is unable to seperate them coz thier souls r melted into each other after death dt melted soul r melted into God.
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THank is such a beautiful thought. God bless you my firned. So happy to know you.
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Welcome my nice guy
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that few little lines speaks so much… I don’t know what you intended it to be but to me it is like one finally getting to see a little bit of love and care in the eyes of the one he loves… SO beautiful in the charming snow ….
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Smiling. Thank you for saying that. Every one interprets poetry in different ways. So there is no wrong or right way. Personally, I see women as fragile birds that need to be taken care of, love, and appreciated. And sometimes, we even havw to let go so they can soar. Thanks for reading my work. Happy it inspired you to comment,
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wow that’s a new way I heard about how one sees women! The pleasure is mine, your blog has wonderful stories and each time I visit I get different punch of emotions… Thanks for that. 🙂
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My cat jumped ontop of my keyboard. I think one of your comments was accidentally erased. Thank you so much for being kind enough to drop be and read my work. I appreciate it.
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oooh that’s bad.. No problem since I will be dropping by to read more in no time.. :haha 🙂
see you… Have a happy sunday and Valentine’s 🙂
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Thanks. YOu too.
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Awwww.. So sad in the most beautiful way.. Tugs at my heart
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Smiling. That is the way love is supposed to end.
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You are a good man – you understand 😊
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Smiling. You are too kind.
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It is true – good men are easy to spot – few and far between..
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Smiling
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A beautiful and heart palpitating write!
-Dajena 🙂
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Smiling. Thank you.
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You are welcome! 🙂
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Reblogged this on ' Ace Friends News ' and commented:
So much of this Andrew teaches me about who you are and how you became the person you are – your a deep loving and kind man with a deep heart of love and more .. Ian
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Thank you so much for the reblog and kind words. I appreciate it. Thanks Ian.
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Hauntingly beautiful … *I’m speechless*
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Smiling. Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment. I appreciate that.
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always … 🙂
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Thanks for linking to this post.
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