First, I would like to thank everyone who followed my time traveling tale of love. When I originally wrote the story, I meant it to be a one time short and nothing more. Many of you suggested turning this into a larger story.
As days passed, I realized how this can become a screenplay and novel that could draw interest.
I want to use this post as a reference guide, ; collecting and storing suggestions here.
I will set the story in the near future (2030 or 2040) because of the school shooting. Obviously, I can’t have my characters going back to the 1980s when school shootings weren’t prevalent.
Please use this post to submit suggestions on this story that is being formulated in my head. Any suggestions you may have to enrich this story will be greatly appreciated.
1 – I need a new title for this story. I have searched for names using the word “time,” but it isn’t necessary. All title suggestions will be considered.
2- Also, want to change the name Josephine. It was fine when I thought it was a one time piece, but I prefer my female lead to have a stronger name.
3- Any comments or suggestions about Jack (appearance).
4- Any other ideas or suggestions
Thank you.
I am rubbish at thinking of names for characters and stories, so I’m no good to you. There are a lot of random name generators (for characters and titles) out there on the interwebs, they might give you something, or jog your brain into thinking of something if you haven’t already tried them.
Good luck!
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You are hard on yourself. Laughing. Hey, thanks for that idea. I will see what they come up with. Thank you.
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That’s why most of my stuff only has two characters, he and she 😀
No problem, us writers have to help each other out 🙂
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LOL Thanks
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I’d go with Scarlet or Kristin. I really do love these 2 names ! And good luck with your novel 🙂
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I like them too. Escpecially Kristen. (I aodre the name Scarlett, but after gone with the one I think their is only one true Scarlett in literature and film). Thank you for your suggestions.
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“Sayward.”
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Is that for the novel or for the female character? Hope you are well.
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A Time to Love! Or so would the title be in my head. Love knows not time and his love is timeless through out time.
And I think the name Josephine is just fine. through out the story she is that delicate and beautiful lady in a wheel chair. Only in the end she becomes like him. Just like every rose has a thorn.
You cold develop the reason why he works in that lab to change time. how he got to know her story.
Still this is your story. I enjoyed reading.
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A Time To Love. I adore that title. Seriously, I think I will use that name. It is so perfect. Thank you. Yeah, now I am going to do the writer’s work of developing the story, backstory, and characters. Thank you for your suggestions, it really has me excited to get this done.
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Oh gosh, Josephine is a pretty strong name. If I had to go stronger I’d probably start going to the Greek goddesses or warrior names…Freya, Athena. Drawing a blank on the rest but maybe after giving it some time…
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Your are the third person who is okay with the name Josephine. Ah, but the Greek God names would be good. I wonderful if their is a goddess for time? I will research this. Thanks for the idea.
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That would be a good one. I did a very brief google search on the goddess of time and it looks like there was one but I don’t see a name for her.
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Do you know this just popped up in my dashboard. Damn, that would have been perfect. I know the Greek God for time was Cronos. Probably will name the time machine with a similar name.
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How about shortening Josephine to ‘Jo’, it reminds me of the tomboyish strong headed character in The book “little women”
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Good Luck, Matey! I’m it will be gripping…. 🙂
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Thank you. )This just popped up in my dashboard).
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Hallie, Jocelyn, Tasmin….Curious why you don’t think Josephine is a strong name.
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I don’t know. I don’t find it to be a strong name. Maybe its’s just me. Thanks for your suggestions and for reading.
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Pretty happy that you’re thinking of expanding this story. All the best!
The title could be :
Ordainment/
Saving (your female lead)/
The Time Traveller/
Love, Fate and other dynamics.
Jack could be created in the mould of Clive Owen, an everyman who would stop at nothing to save his wife.
Josephine’s name could be Helena/Marissa/Mel/Serena.
Don’t know much. These are just what I could gather off the top of my head.
Hope you make a great screenplay.
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Great siugesstions. Thank you. I like your suggestions for the female lead. And Clive Owen can start in anything I write. Thank you.
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You’re welcome. Happy to help, as always. 🙂
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Alexandria, A.K.A. Alex is a very strong female name. Another interesting twist I thought of, considering the future, i.e., 2030 to 2040 might have some private schools allowing high school students to carry firearms. I hate the thought, but it may make for a good story.
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Wow, that thought of schools permitting fire arms is an amazing statement. I really have to consider that. Wow. Thank you so much. Oh, and I love that name. Jack can call her Alex. Very strong as you say. Thank you.
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Thank you. I enjoyed the exercise. Keep us posted on your progress.
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Thanks. I will.
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How about Cara? I think short names have a certain appeal. Jane, Jan, Lana, Olivia, Maya, Elise. Jack should be lean but muscled, athletic. Dark hair, not clean shaven, green eyes. A title? I’ll have to think about it! I love that you’re going to put some flesh on this piece- it’s a great story!
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I like Olivia and Cara, Abosultely aodre your description of Jack. Thanks for the suggestions and compliments. I keep my posts bare of description to keep them short. But now I will flesh out the characters and story. Now, the fun begins. Thanks Meg.
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You’re most welcome! Best of luck!
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Gracias.
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De nada!
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For the title: Now and Then, Back to the Future (oh wait…), Clock Walker.
Just what spring to mind.
Have fun turning it into a screenplay.
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Thank you so much. I like that Clock Walker. Thank you.
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I like descriptions of people that are short on physical aspects and longer on their presence. Someone muscling into a room, or sucking out the oxygen everyone else is trying to share. Those are well used so you’ll have to find something fresh, but that’s the idea. Might not tell you how someone looks, but you know how they function.
For names, you could do something quirky. If he is Jack (keep this) then she could be Jake, but short for Jacqueline. Or keep Josephine but call her Josey.
So far in the future, you’ll have to think about the advances in technology – identification via iris, everyone with a chip implanted at birth, etc. – way more than I can imagine.
I like the idea of expanding the story. Sounds like work but fun work.
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I’m looking forward to the novel. Isabella has always seemed a strong name to me. I will have to go back and read it again to have it fresh in my head for any other suggestions about title or Jack’s appearance. 🙂
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Isabella is the name we are holding in case we ever hae a little girl. That is how much I love that name. Thanks so much for the suggestion.
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Let’s see, I like Sara, too, because it’s a strong, old fashioned name with a contemporary spelling. I love Blythe, but that sounds too airy, maybe, not solid? I can’t wait to see what you do with this! Looking forward to it…
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Thank you. Yeah, I want a strong female name because I turn the tables and make her the heroine. Thanks
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I have always loved the name Jordan, for a girl. It’s strong, yet sexy. imho
oh, and here’s a link I found to famous poems about ‘Time’… maybe there’s a poem in there that has a line that would strike you. 🙂 Good hunting!
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/thematic_poems/time_poems.html
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Thank you for being so thoughtful to supply this link. Jordan is a great name for a girl. Thank you so much for being so helpful.
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My pleasure. Have a wonderful evening 🙂
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Thanks . You too.
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Timeless Love
Zoe for the lead.
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Timeless Love is very good title for this story. Love the name Zoe, too. Thanks for the suggestions. I appreciate it. Be well.
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🙂 have fun! I hope you’re also well!
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Yes, I am. Thanks.
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The song Diamond Eyes by Deftones has a cool time reference. “Time will lead us to the same realm”
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I like that thank you. Sorry, for the delay in my respnse. This just popped up in my dashboard.
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All good, I’ve had issues with browser and app, thought maybe it had gotten lost in the cyber space dryer (with the missing socks). Have a great weekend! ❤️
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I have had so many problems with comments appearing days later. Thank you. You too.
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You’re welcome! Sorry to hear re comments…that stinks.
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Sure does. Have a great weekend. Be well.
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A great idea, truly. “Eons of Love”, (I love the world “eon” cause it seems rarely used in everyday language), “Rewind to Love” lol perhaps too much 80’s cheesy… Aah, I suck at titles, sorry….
About “Jack”… he has GOT to have dark hair! 🙂 I don’t know why though. xo
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It is rarely used. Rewind to Love is good too. You are the second person who said that about Jack having dark hair. Most of my protagonists do, but I thought that was due to my wanting to inject myself into my character. Thanks for your suggestions. xoxo
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1.look at shutterstock for inspiration photos for your characters. 2.think about the qualities of your heroine. Does she have anything particular about her? Is she unique, timeless? Think about these things. If you find one, reverse look up baby names for a name with that meaning. 3.don’t think about the title until the first or second draft is finished. You might pick up on some underlying theme that suits it better. 💕
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Oh, thank you for the ideas. Visualizing someone through photos is something I have never done, but should make the task easier. Thanks for the suggestions, I will search for female names related to time.
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I’m happy I could help! Hopefully you’ll find what you’re looking for. 😊
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Either way I will enjoy journey. Thanks
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That’s what it’s all about! 😊
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I think Amelia is a strong name. It is also very popular right now, so it would be a name you will hear a lot in 2030 among adult women. Just saying. 😘
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I love that name. You wouldn’t be offended if I named a character after you?
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Offended? No. Humbled and honored? Absolutely! 😊💋
FYI: I missed you the last few days.
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We had guests popping into the house all weekend. It was fun but draining too. I have EMAILS to respond too. And I am struggling trying to catch up to my reading of blogs. You were missed as well. If I had a bed in the empty bedroom you could have come to enjot the festivites.
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I would have DEFINITELY been there. When you get caught up on your reading, I hope my other post will bring a smile to that lovely face. 💋
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Good. I will skip everything and go right to it.
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Hope it’s worth the interruption. 😊
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I’m sure it will be.
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💋💋💋
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God, I just want to smooch you to death.
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To delirious euphoria Yes! Death, not so much. 😉
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I think “A Time to Love” and “Clock Walker” are both good titles. Here are a couple of other suggestions:
– “Past Threats to Future Love”
– “Fixing Love in Time”
Also, I think Josephine is a good name. Maybe not the strongest name out there, but a Josephine had to put up with Napoleon, and that couldn’t have been easy.
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Oh, I like the Fixing Love In Time. Amzing how none of these ideas crept through my mind. I was blank. I am starting to think of leaving Josephine becuae you or the fifth person who said that. Josphine did put up with the little dictator. Thanks for the suggestions.
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I would not be any help to you on picking out the title name for your works. However, dare I suggest a unisex name for your heroine? Rowan, James or Ryan. I feel unisex names are strong for women. Yet, Josephine is lovely too. Smiles.
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Wow. I like Rowan and Ryan. I love the unisex names for girls. Thanks for the suggestions. How was the trip?
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It was miserable because of my bum knee. I can’t walk. I have it elevated now and resting it. Apart from that, it was good. I guess the traveling really aggravated my injury.
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That sucks. Last year when I did the four hour flight to see the in-laws, my back was a wreck for a couple of days. Get rest. Work awaits you.
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Did you have to remind me?
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Laughing. Sorry.
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Meg’s description of Jack pretty much matches mine…but dark eyes. You know who I like for him from the last installment.
Title… I only had some simple thoughts: This Time, Another Time, Next Time, Rewind. Fast Forward.
For the female name, obviously it should be Sandra. Aahhhahaha… joking, of course. If I think of anything for real, I’ll get back to you.
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Okay, Jack will be dark haired and dark eyed. Strong but not bulky. Thanks for the suggestions. Someone told me “A Time For Love.” What do you think of that title? Sandra is a nice name? You don’t like it?? You wouldn’t be offended if I ever used your name?
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Congrats on doing a screenplay – way to go! I haven’t read it, I will have to go back and check it out since I found you just recently.
For a futuristic name, maybe you could shorten it to simply ‘Jo’, or how about ‘Jocelyn’? Or do you want something away from Jo altogether? As for appearances, tall, dark & handsome always works for me! Good luck!
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Tall dark and handsome wins!!! I have had many ladies saying that. Laughing. I have two completed screenplays, this one will be number three. Thanks for dropping by to read.
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My pleasure, wow – how exciting. I guess us women are pretty predictable. 😉
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Hahaha That is funny.
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I like the idea of crowd sourcing suggestions. unfortunately, I am short on sleep and low on ideas just now.
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Cool. But it is a good way to get good ideas.
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True if you get lots of comments which you, my friend, certainly do 🙂
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Thank you
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🙂 You’re welcome
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Josephine is a pretty name. I like it. As for the title, maybe try a less obvious choice, like Ripples (you know how one thing affects another in time travel). Just a thought 😊
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Wishing you great success–here’s a title suggestion: “Time and No Time”.
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This is a wonderful idea! I was so hoping you would do more with this! Suggestions for title: A tryst with destiny, Bound by time, This moment in time
I think Rebecca is a strong feminine name but you have been given some really good suggestions. I wish you much luck with this my friend!
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Thank you for your wishes. I am so happy I popsted this. There have been so many great suggestions. I like This Moment in Time. That would be fitting. Thank you.
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My pleasure. Smiles.
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Looking forward to the screenplay, Andrew! 😀 A Love That Stands the Test of Time. I have always liked the name Isabella or Isabel. What have you been thinking of for a title and female lead name? I wish you the best in making a decision! Hopefully you are better at making decisions than I am. 😀
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LOL You are so funny. I have receieved many great suggestions. Thanks. And thank you so much for following my little story.
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Haha! No problem. It was wonderful 😊
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Women’s names that have a male connotation to them such as Stephanie are generally considered stronger.
The word time does not need to be used but a related word does such as Chrono or Chronos or Chronological….
As for the appearance, I though of the actor Jon Hamm wearing a suit with no tie, maybe a lab coat? Something that changes colour or style when he returns to denote a different future…..
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Many people have said that about female names with male connotations. Wow, ther use of Chrono will be perfect for this story. And your idea to deonte the different time periods is perfect.
Thank you so much. This was very helpful. Thanks.
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Pleasure. Good luck with it all old chimp 😉
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Thanks
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Title: Real Time?
Name: The strongest one for you must be Allie, but maybe not for the book’s heroine – Alex perhaps
Lots of other good suggestions here, though
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Thanks for reading Derrick. You made me laugh wioth the Allie suggestion. Real Time is pretty good too. YOu are the second person who mentioned the name Alex. I really like that one two.
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I think real Time would need the ?
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#2 I like the name Scarlet. Powerful, attractive, sexy; a character able to draw attention or blend undercover.
#3 I picture Jack to be similar to a Tom Cruise actor. Provides good looks, an attitude, an inner and outer strength; a confidence people are drawn to.
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I see Jack the exact same way. Same with the female lead. Thank you for your contribution.
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How about Dajena hehehehe just kidding! Is “Ray” one of the new names?
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That is a pretty name.
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🙂 🙂
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Good day Andrew bet you throughout l forgot you and publishing your piece on A Better Life – No .. Just waiting for it to develop into the real you l posted a number of your other prices on friends news – As l was setting up a number of other news services at the time – so did not comment on each one but your now on my publishing panel of authors and also posted secret on acesalesnews.wordpress.com this told me all about you – So got together the 4 scenes of the play and titled them FEATURED: A Better Life ( Screenplay in Four Parts ) by The Lonely Author then you as usual blow me away with your plan to change names etc well name could be The Secret Time as it connects to the person inside you and the name of your female could be that person that you wrote about as devil woman as that is also part of you and you remind me of a type of ‘ Raider of Lost Time ‘ another titled its your book and it will l know be a bestseller as is the author – let me know kind sir and l will post all of the parts with changes or without your the writer and boy what a great writer .. Ian
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The name change is in the distant future when I complete the screenplay and try to sell it to Hollywood. For now it remains A Better Life. Thank you for all of your support. You can post as is. And thanks for the name suggestions. Wow, you blow me away with the compliments. Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
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Okydokey my friend hope you keep well and Hollywood here you come 🌟
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Laughing. Thank you so much. Take care. Things are getting dangerous on your side of the world. Be safe.
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You too my friend God Bless you and your Family in my Prayers 🙏
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Thanks
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Just posted your soon to be screenplay starting Harrison Ford and Sienna Millar .. Ace Sales & Authors News .. Ian PS Will add link in a minute ..
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Laughing. Thank you.
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Here is that link .. Fab post mate really l know good when l see it from the ❤️
http://wp.me/p5klTt-hx
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Thank you.
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Thank you. I will.
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Reblogged this on LIVING THE DREAM.
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Thank yuo so much for the kind gesture of reblogging my post. I appreciate your kindness.
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