The Date
Ray poured rum into two ice filled glasses.
Glancing at the mirror on the wall, he admired the sleek woman kicking off her shoes. She wasted no time heading directly for the bedroom.
This will be my greatest conquest.
He sighed. He never bedded anyone as beautiful as her.
“Ray, what’s taking so long?”
He trembled with anticipation. She is way out of my league. Not the kind of girl I normally pick up.
He hurried into the bedroom as her skirt crumpled to the carpeted floor.
He handed her the drink.
They clicked glasses.
“To new romance.”
Ray gazed into her aqua eyes hoping she melted when she looked into his.
She held up her glass, “To the termination of a beautiful evening.”
Admiring her choice of words, he nodded. Wow, she is a dream come true.
Taking the glass from her hand he pushed her down on the bed. They kissed. Her mouth tasted sweet.
She is everything I ever wanted. I think I could actually fall in love with her. Shame I have to kill her.
First I will make love to her, afterwards I would strangle her. Poor thing never heard of the Online Dating Serial Killer?
He kissed her again.
Her hand caressed the back of his head. She exploded with rage. A violent thrust preceded a burning in his stomach.
Ray staggered to his feet. Looking into the dresser mirror across the room, he discovered the red stain growing around the knife embedded in his abdomen.
“What’s wrong Ray. You never heard of the Black Widow Serial Killer?”
Photo taken from Google Images.
Yikes!
Be careful who you lie with.
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LOL Thanks for reading.
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Nobody gets laid then lol
I like the twist 🙂 How many more victims will she claim?
At least in this she got rid of one bad guy too.
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LOL Yeah. Turning her into a serial killer was a last minute edit. Thanks for reading.
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I can’t get over this poem. The depth that in conveyed by you the writer is is simply astounding. This is a piece that I will lay in bed dreaming about tonight. Please continue to captivate us with your words. The dreams are so sweet a last they fall fast. To mesmerize is to reverberate the oh so sullen whispers of a past Autumn. I would love if you would follow my blog as well. Thank you for your piece.
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Well, this wasn;t a poem. It was a short story. Thanks for your kind words. Let us follow one another and share out posts and ideas.
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Following you now, you are a brilliant writer
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Thank you. I am going to bed in a few minutes. I will follow you and read your blog tomorrow.
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a lovely poem.have u any date with dt well famoused black widow.?if no.plz keep a distance from her n her beloved’s killers.
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LOL Yes, Aruna. I stay away from killers. Allie too.
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okay.u both r wise person.
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Thank you
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Thank you for linking to this short story. I appreciate it. Have a good one.
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poetic justice. :’)
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Laughing. Yeah, it was. Thanks for taking the time out to read and comment. Appreciate it. Have a great day.
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Oh my! I was really getting into this and
Bam! I love the sudden turn
You never know what a blind date holds😂
Great write 💕
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Thank you. I wqanted everyone to get cmfortable with my usual romantic write then twist it a little. Thank you so much for reading.
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Great twist 😊
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Thanks
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😊
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I love this microfiction. When the hunter becomes the hunted, not always easy to cope with especially at the edge of the blade 😀
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No it is not. Thank you for reading. I ahev trie to inject a little more fiction on the blog. Thanks.
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I like your new stance 🙂
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Thanks. Trying to keep things fresh.
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Welcome 🙂
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Oh well, they deserve each other!
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LOL Yeah, they do. Lauhging so hard. I needed this. Thanks
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Glad to be of help! 😀
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Thanks
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lovely n beautyfully imazination,dew.i have seen dt movie a lady(widow)in black who take revenge from her beloved’s killer.
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I saw a movie like that. You see a lot of movies?
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yeah n hollywood’s movies mostly.just now i have seen”wild girl”.u know dew dt i m craziest of movies if these r meaningful.
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Fascinating twist! Good one 🙂
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