This is a personal favorite of mine. Hope everyone is doing well. Happy Thursday.
For the next six weeks (leading up to Valentine’s Day) Lonely Author will dedicate most of his posts to his favorite subject; that thing called “Love.”
Melted
We shared glances from a distance
Like beacons in a crowded room
Our bodies gravitated to the center
fingers entwined like bride and groom
dance floor darkened like the universe
yet I found myself basking in her light
cheek to cheek we swayed in unison
flames of passions dancing with delight
Intoxicated by her scent skin and touch
was she feeling the wonders that I felt
adjoining hearts performed a sweet ballet
I shrunk inside my shirt my pants my belt
suddenly she was no longer in my arms
lights go on as the music is finally done
finding our empty shoes I suddenly realize
this beauty and I slowly melted into one
The Lonely Author 
I really like how together the 2 of you have become 1. Nicely done and I had thought the shoes were like the glass slipper (left behind) before I read this. 🙂
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Smmiling. That is how I see love and relationships. The pair should melt into one. Thank you.
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very deep -love the ending 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Wow, that was beautiful. Melted my heart.
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Thank you for saying that. I appreciate it. Be well.
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i love the shoes!
and the poem, of course…
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Thank you so much. Have a great day
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Lovely romantic dance…with a touch of Cinderella…
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Thank you for stopping by again, I know you already read this one. Thanks
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I love the concept of melting into the beloved 🙂
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Ne too. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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Welcome 🙂
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Like butter on my toast this morning! 😜 great post! :]
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I am getting ready for a late lunch. The melting butter on the toast gave me a delicious image. Thanks and be well.
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Haha! I am glad I could provide you with such a yummy image! Lol have a nice lunch! 😀 it’s almost the weekend…for some!
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Yes, it’s almost the weekend. Deep breath. Can;t wait. Thanks
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Super…..Poem….AND Picture! 😉
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Thank you so much
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Ah, I love that feeling when two become one 😉
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Exactly. Love can be so wonderful, other meltings too.
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Mm, now you have thinking…
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LOL
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Wow!! I love this one too, what a beautiful ending to a beautiful evening 🙂 I think I just melted too 😉 Hope you are doing well, Happy Thursday to you, the weekend is just around the bend.
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Laughing. That ending was a last minute change and I think it ended this write so perfectly. Yeah, we are at Thursday. Almost there. Thanks for accompanying me this week. It has been a pleasure finding your positive comments here waiting for me. Thank you.
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Aaww that’s good you’ve been positive all week! 🙂 It’s great to read your work, so I can’t help but comment on it. Nice late minute change then! Tomorrow is Friday my usual craziest day of the week but I’ll be sure to check on you. Have a good evening 🙂
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Lovely to read again..
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Thank you, but not any lovelier than finding you here once more. Thanks my friend.
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You’re too kind and you’re most welcome. Smiling.
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Wink. Be well.
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~winking back~
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This is simply perfection, a beautiful twist on a common phrase.
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Happy that you enjoyed it.
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Hey dew.very much beautiful lines ,u wtite for whoever bt i see in ur poems all dt my heart want.thanks ur poem as i feel happy.bless u dear dew.
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them. Blessings to you and yours.
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Welcome .my lonely star had deapeared.bt dis night it has twinkeld again.
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Only for a feww minutes. I will be back next week. Thank you. Be well.
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Welcome.with best wishes for u n urs family members.
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Thank you
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Relatable poetry, you captured that moment of feeling one, of melting in to one another, not easy to do.
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Thank you for rading and sharing your thoughts. And by the delay in this response you can see I am a week behind in comments. Thanks.
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No worries man 🙂
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Lovely piece Chimp.
🙂
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Thank you. Appreciate you stopping by to read and comment. Also appreciate your words.
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🙂
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I want to melt. Please. XOXOXO
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Melting is good. Thanks for reading. xoxo
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With you, Always. Xoxo
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Andrew, this is wonderful. I love the idea of two melting into one. Beautifully penned! Wishing you well, enjoy your Friday! ~ Mia
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Thank you. Happy Friday.
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You’re welcome and thank you.
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Beautifully written. Happy to be introduced to pieces that I had missed.
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Smiling. Thank you for saying that.
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Smiles. My pleasure.
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Melting and melding. Beautiful imagery!
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Thank you. Happy you appreciated it.
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As romantic as ever
Melts my heart 💕
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Thanks. I love this thought of two people melting together.
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Yes.. Absolutely beautiful
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Thanks
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😊
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so beautiful, Andrew! 🙂
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Thank you so much. Be well.
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You too, my friend! 🙂
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Thanks
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You ravished her with melting love until she became contained in you and a part of you. Sweet:-)
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Laughing. Yeah, they melted each other. Thank you.
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