Longing To Belong To You
We won’t ever see forever
never live our lives in love
a depressing finale so final
my beating heart so beaten
and longing to belong to you
We won’t ever see forever
never live our lives in love
a depressing finale so final
my beating heart so beaten
and longing to belong to you
The Lonely Author 
This is heartbreakingly gorgeous ❤
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You are so kind. Thank you.
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Reading you is always my pleasure 🙂
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So sweeet of you to say that. Thank you so much.
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🙂
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I understand, man.
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Smiling. Thanks.
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But we’ll embroid the nights of love
Each day with pieces of you and me,
We will erupt dormant volcanoes
And deep in secret lava hide the key.
This was so beautifully sad… Hugs to you!!! And thank you for the inspiration! 🙂
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Thank you for the inspiration. Trying to fight this writers block. Beautiful poetic comment. Thanks.
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such a beautiful feeling … i loved the title
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Deep words my friend. Deep indeed. I think you need a refreshment. Check out the new “Mountain Dew Green Screen” @ Gastradamus. Your comments and feedback would be appreciated. Keep it up
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THank you for stopping by my friend. I appreciate that. I will drop by to read your latest post. Thanks for sharing.
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Well written and well done. Makes you think
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Thank you. Not bad for a horn dog.
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lol
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Beautiful 😭
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Lovely… and sad.
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Thank you. (Hey, this and another 70 messages just appeared in my dashboard). Thanks for reading.
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Oh wow… good luck catching up with that!!
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I lose about 30 to 40 comments each day. And they reappear in my dashboard two or three days later. Ugh.
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Wow that’s crazy!
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bravo!
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Thank you so much.
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Full of longing. Lovely
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Thank you Miriam. Appreciate that. Be well.
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Really I tersting juxtaposition….good indeed.
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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Oh my, this is GOOD (though heart-tugging sad).
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Thank you. It was a struggle to write because of my writer’s block. Appreciate your compliments.
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Just keep writing your way through the block–even if it seems like crap, keep going. You may be surprised at the results.
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That is exaclty what I am doing. Trying to write through this. Hopefully the words will begin to flow. Thank you for your supportive words.
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Hey, I’m always glad to help you out, cheer you on–it’s my job, I’m hoping to get tenured 🙂
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LOL.. Thanks
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Most welcome 🙂
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I love the play of words and alliteration in each line. More so the last line, which re-affirms the title – so full of feelings. Beautiful, Andrew.
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Thank you, Love this comment and your appreciateion of this write. It was a struggle to get done. Thank you for your kind words.
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…but still longing to belong to you?
What a longing!!!
Shiva
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Smiling. Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate them. Be well.
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I hear that Chimp….
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Thank you.
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It fits somewhere…..Needs a bit of ‘oiling’. 😉
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Laughing. Lately, all my writing needs oil. Struggling with this writer’s block. Thank you.
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Hang in there….The Muse is never far away….Little steps go a long way. 😉
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Thank you
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So sad… That was unexpected. I mean, you have written sad before, and done it well, but this one feels almost “heavy” with it… Perhaps because it is so brief…?
Or perhaps it is merely the lines: “a depressing finale so final, my beating heart so beaten…”
Or maybe I’m just feeling a little like that myself today, and your words have captured that mood perfectly…
In any event, an emotionally charged and evocative work. Well done, sir!
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I am struggling with writer’s block and I just came out of a diffcult (stressful) period. So, lately my writing has been sad or dark. Thanks for reading.
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Good luck, my friend… You know you will get through it; you always do. Maybe take some comfort from that… 🙂
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Smiling. I know I will eventually get through it. I will seek comfort in that. Thank you.
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this was beautiful.. each line meant something and added something .. 🙂
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Thank you for saying that. I appreciate your words.
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🙂
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Wow..every line is so full of emotion that this entire poem is very beautiful. 🙂 Nice work, you recover quickly 😉
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Thank you. It was a struggle to write. Thanks for your kind words.
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You’re welcome. I’m going to send you some inspirational quotes for writer’s block by email later today 🙂 Hope it helps 🙂
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Thank you. That would be great.
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Lovely but very sad…
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Thank you.
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Smiles. Welcome.
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😍
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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How sad is that?
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Chimp pouting. Thank you.
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No, no, why is the chimp pouting? I meant your lovely poem made me feel sad, not that it was poorly written!! You are teasing me, aren’t you??
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Exactly. This Chimp is not a pouter. He is many things, but definitely not a pouter.
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Silly man, you are definitely a tease, though!
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Laughing. Have a great evening.
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You too, write something beautiful…
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I will try. Thanks.
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And you will…
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A long forgotten key for a long forgotten heart.
I’ll say the same thing to you that you said to me. I’m here.
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Smiling. Well, what advice you have for writer’s block? Also, I didn’t see any email?
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Well, you have to be a real writer to know how to deal with that…Ha.
I guess it didn’t go through. I checked my “sent mail” and it wasn’t there. It’s probably just as well…you would think I was a complete and total moron.
It’s getting ready to storm here…write about a tempest..
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Sorry, to hear that. I wouldn’t think you are a moron. Never.
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Oh my. That’s so sad. 😥
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Thank you for reading.
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Oh drew, you’re killing me! The longer we live the greater this reality looms… So gut wrenching. 😦
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Thank you. Fighting the writer’s block.
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Drew, you know what I would love for you to write about? The process of screen play development. We talked about it a long time ago… I “see” my writing and I’d love to put some of it in screen play format but wouldn’t know where to begin! Would you ever want to talk about it here on your blog? I’d really be interested!
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Okay, I will put something together. Let me gather a few ideas and see what I come up with. Cool. Thanks for the post suggestion.
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Oh awesome! I look forward to it! 😃
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Seemed a bit pessimistic, or maybe realistic? Hope alls well.
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I know. This writer’s block has me struggling. It is showing up in my words. Ugh.
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Dont sweat it, it’ll come back. Going through the same myself a bit, I need to step back from writing a bit and read more.
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Perhaps I should do the same. Good idea.
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Depressing…
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I know. This is the stuff that is coming out of me. Freaking writer’s block.
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I didn’t mean that in a bad way, just commenting. Anyway, depressing stuff is better than nothing!
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Laughing. I understood. lol
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So beautiful!
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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Why? Both taken? Too late?
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Don’t know. That is what came out of my cloudy headed. This writer’s block is making me agonize over every word. Thank you.
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Didn’t seem blocked to me. Well, they gotta come out somehow. Don’t ask me how!
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Laughing. Thank you.
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Always and forever and a day.
wish for that time to spend with you.
great short writing. Slowly your mojo is returning.
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Thank you for saying that. Every word has been a struggle. I appreciate your supportive words.
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So deeply gorgeous and heartbreaking as well.
Man, I feel my heart beating because of this. I love it my friend. 🙂
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Thank you for saying that. I appreciate it.
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You are welcome sir. 🙂 I’m always here to show support.
P.S Got another fun poem I posted for you to read. Go check it. 🙂
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I will read it later this afternoon. Thanks.
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“my beating heart so beaten”
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says it all – right there. thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words. Much appreciated.
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Woe amazing
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Thanks
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Wow*
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Thank you for reading.
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I don’t see that you have writers block. This was sad, but beautiful.
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Thank you for saying that Scarlett. But every word has been a struggle. Nothing is flowing. Thanks for the support.
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Always..
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Webster’s definition of DESPAIR: Refer to the lonely author’s , “Longing To Belong To You. You will find the same referral under the word, HEARTBREAK!
Well done.
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Laughing. Thank you.
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And you said you had no mojo? I beg to differ.
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Thank you. I am struggling to get each line down. Usually it cmes fairly easy for me. Thank you for reading and for the confidence booster.
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Very nice. Sometimes we say the most with the fewest words.
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That is so true. Thanks for reading.
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Beautifully tragic
Well done
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Thanks. Struggling with writer’s block.
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I’m sorry. I hope it passes quickly. This was a wonderful piece
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Thanks for saying that.
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You’re welcome xx
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xx
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Andrew, beautifully sad! An excellent poem. Enjoy the rest of your week. ~ Mia
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Thank you. Have a great weekend.
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You’re welcome, thank you.
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This makes me feel lots of emotions! Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment.
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Hey dew.!! A lot of depression .why?
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I have writer’s block. I am having trouble getting inspired and writing my love poem. What should I do?
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Plz take ispiration from nature n ur many friends.they r type of love.love has no boundries.it is free from all burdens n coz of relaxing ur soul.
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Thank you. I appreciate your words.
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What a small but gorgeous poem 🙂
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Thank you for saying that.
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I am glad that I can comment on your blog because I can’t do it on other blogs. 🙂
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I hate when that happens. It can be so discouraging and frustrating.
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Oh, yes! I know 😦
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I hope it gets fixed soon
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I hope, too
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This is so beautiful. Truly.
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Thank you for reading and for saying that.
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How can something so sad feel beautiful?
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate that my friend.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
YOU HAVE IT BAD, MAN—-BUT I KNOW IT WELL—THERAPY POETRY! 🙂
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Hahaha Thank you.
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Oh my
So sad in such a beautiful way..
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Thank you. This was borderline depressing. I was fighting my way out of my writers block.
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True – quite sad – but the writing pulls you in 💕
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Thanks
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😊😊😊
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Hey! Unfollowed by mistake. Stupid phone! This is beautiful write up! You already know how much I love your posts. Take care. Happy blogging 💕
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That is quite okay. Happens to me all the time. Thanks and have a wonderful evening.
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😦 very sad but amazing story put in few words.
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Smiling. Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
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