Make A Wish
Today I will grant
your every wish
just ask me and
it will be done
I will compliment
you on days your
not at your best
I will embrace you
before and after
every single fight
I will forgive you
for every sin you
have yet committed
go make any wish
and it will be done
just don’t ask me
to forget you baby
that’s impossible
it would be
easier burning
tattoos in the sand
I’ve burned tattoos in the sand. In fact i do it for a living. Easy peasy once you know how to do it horn dog
lol
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Laughing. You’re going to have to teach me that trick. Thanks. lol
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Get your epipen ready lol
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lol
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Now that would be an art to learn. Beautiful poem dear Chimp.
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Thank you.
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Ah, beautiful words. Love this.
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Thank you. Happy you enjopyed this. Have a great day.
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So sweet! Just don’t ask me to forget you, I love that line! <3. Mwah
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It would be impossible. Happy you liked it. Smooches my dear friend.
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Aww, happy tears ❤
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burning
tattoos in the sand
good analogy..
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Thank you. It would be impossible to forget her. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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where is she..?
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This was stricly from my imagination. She is here with me. Thank you for reading.
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nice.. perfectly sweet..
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Thank you
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Hmmmm… Anything you say…
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Laughing. Oh-oh…
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In all seriousness, if more troubled couples took a few minutes out of their busy lives and read your creations, this world would have a lower divorce rate.
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That is so sweet of you to say that. Thank you. I always appreciate your words.
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Lovely 😊 Exotic…dreamy. 🙏🏼
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Smiling. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words. Have a great day.
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This is just amazing. 💖 💖
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Awww, Sarah. Thank you
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😊😊
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What a fabulous poem – the last lines are amazing – it would be easier burning tattoos in the sand. You are head over heels in love, Chimp. Chimpette very lucky.
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Laughing my Chimp butt off. Thank you.
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I am looking dreamily towards the horizon…. 🙂 💜 Wonderful!
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Smiling. The perfect setting to make a wish. Thank you. Have a good one.
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Only one wish for me please. I am such a soppy bugger 😉
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Laughing. Thanks
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The Muse is on the way back…I can see from those final three lines…..Good! 🙂
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Yeah, little by little. Those are the ame lines I liked. Thank you.
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Warmth and tenderness… Care and consideration… So lovely and sweet! 😊
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Smiling. Thank you.
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I love that last line and image: “burning tattoos in the sand.” It feels futile…
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Smiling. Thank you. Forgetting her would be futile. Thank you.
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Wooo Hooo!! 😀 What a poem and what an ending, this is a great one too, I love it. I would also love my own genie in a bottle, it would make life so much simpler 😉
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Yeah, a genie would make life so much easier. Thank you. Have a great day.
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Thank you, I hope you have a great day too 🙂
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Thanks
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Just lovely…
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Thank you
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Sweet and exotic.
really goes with the image.
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Smiling. Thank you so much. Have a great day.
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That tattoo thing
Is awesome Andrew
In the sand
That’s a keeper
Great job
Hats to you my friend
The Sheldon Perspective
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Thank you so much for this great comment. You made me feel so good. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Lovely, and expressive!
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Thanks. I appreciate it.
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just don’t ask me
to forget you baby
that’s impossible
it would be
easier burning
tattoos in the sand < great way to end it. Heartfelt writing LA.
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Thank you for saying that. Appreciate it.
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Like burning tattoos in the sand… Beautiful.
And my one wish in the world? That everyone got all the love and care they needed, regardless of mental health, race, religion, culture, sexuality etc. Everyone is a person.
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I love your words. Yes, everyone deserves love and respect. Thank you for reading and for contributing your thoughtful comments.
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Sweet, and loving. Like a hug in words. ❤
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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Awwwww, you’re such a romantic. It’s so easy to see your passion through this poem.
Just lovely.
🙂
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
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🙂
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I am WAY behind today… But I wanted to say that this is very sweet… and few will ever meet someone like this.
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Thank you for saying that. I am overwhelmed with my reading too. I think I will have to cut down my blogging to two or three days a week to get back to my novels. If not, I will ever reach my goals. Even if I do cut down, I will always follow you closely. Thank you for reading and the kind words. xoxo
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I used to be able to keep up! I think it’s actually good that I’m getting behind — it means I’m spending more time on offline things… which is good for me!
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No, that is GREAT for you. We owe it to ourselves to have our regular lives too. Maybe you can find the time to get to that novel we talked about.
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Maybe. Of course, school gets out for the summer in about a month… LOL… I cannot win!
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Forgot all about that. Damn.
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vaah alladin ka chiraag.dis miracle is only done by u.every lines r toućhed with love
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Beautiful
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As ur pure heart.welcome.dew.
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hope u will be well.have u decided dt u would written one poem in one day.plz reply.
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I will try to write often as I can
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Thanks for reply.plz keep writing.
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I will.
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Promise.
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I promise
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Oh Andrew, this is pure magic! 😊 Some people are truly unforgettable. This also reminded me of Aladdin! 😀 I really enjoyed this one! I think your ‘mojo’ is returning! 😀
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Smiling. Happy you enjoyed this one. Thank you for saying that.
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You’re very welcome! Have a great weekend! 😀
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Thanks. You too.
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thank you for the reblog. Have a great weekend.
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thanks Paul. I hope you have a great weekend.
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You too
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Thanks
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🙂
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Oh My! This is knock-me-over GOOD!
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Aw, thank you. Honestly. I wasn’t very fond of it. Thanks.
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Now see, that’s why we shouldn’t trust our own reviews–I stand by my first words, it’s “knock-me-over-GOOD”!!
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Thank you
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Most welcome 🙂
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This is simply beautiful.. phenomenal ending. Loved it!!!!
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Thank you Scarlett. I appreciate that. Hope you are feeling better.
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I am. Thank you.
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Unforgettable! Tattoos help though when identifying bodies. Why so morbid?
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LOL Why are you being so morbid? Oh, you have me practically falling out of my seat. I wasn’t waiting for that.
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Oh I don’t know. Sorry. It just came out of nowhere! Haha!
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Laughing
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Drew, I’m not sure how I came across this site but if you click on the Table of Contests, there were interesting things to enter and even some BBC things at the end. Hope it’s of interest. https://stuartaken.net/writer-resources/
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Thank you so much. You are so good to me. I appreciate it. Need to give you a big hug. Thank you
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Aww, that’s what friends and family are for and we feel like both!
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Yes we do. Need to sell that screenplay so we get to their premiere.
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I cannot wait! You do all the work and I will cheer you on 😉
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lol Thanks
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Sigh. (That’s all I have.)
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Laughing. Thank you.
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U say dt-Today i will grant,your every wish ,just ask me,it will be done……..my wish is the lonely auther should not go far or desapear.i love his poems.
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Smiling. You are so sweet. This is such a beautiful message. Thank you. I will not disappear. I will still be here.
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Oh my God .u r so kind.urs alladeen’chiraag has has hear my heart’wish
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Plz promise with me.
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I promise you
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Okay.
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U r lefting us as burning tatoos in d sand.i want to see u on ur blog.dis has become my routine.dew.
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Smiling. You are so sweet. I love your comments. You always make me feel so good with your words.
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Welcom .,,nice dew.
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I wish……I didn’t have to wish.
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What is wrong?? Too many wishes?
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Just don’t ask me to forget you..
anything for love..
I love how your imagination works 😀
Great write 💕💕💕
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Thank you. Yeah, I have an anything for love mentailty. Happy you enjoyed it.
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Loved it ❤️
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It would be nice to have someone do all this for me…but it’s beyond my reach, apparently. Only in my dreams!
Nice poem.
😉
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Aw, you made me pout. Thanks for the compliment. You never know what tomorrow may bring. Have a lovely evening and great weekend.
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Lovely and sentimental, Drew! 🙂
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Thank you
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smiling!
how sweet thought!
wat made u write this one
: )
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Not sure what inspired me to write this. Sometimes I wish I can make my partner’s every wish come true. Thanks for reading and commenting. Have a lovely day.
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Sweet and so romantic 🙂
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Thank you. Happy you appreciated it. Have a great evening.
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Thank you for reblogging my post. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful weekend.
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