I Am Fearless
I am fearless
the evil monsters
beneath my bed
were slain long ago
thugs in dark alleys
can’t terrorize me
conquered them before
it doesn’t matter
when death decides
to call my name
I am fearless
yet
every time you hold me
I tremble
Photo taken from nbcphiladelphia.com
The end really surprised me.
Now I’ll be wondering about trembling
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Smiling. Sometimes trembling is good. Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
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.Nice.
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Thank you. I appreciate you stopping by.
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Oh, this is definitely one of my favorites! And exactly how it should be 😉
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Smiling. So happy you appreciate this one. I wasn’t sure about this one discussing fears and then that final two line. So, thank you very much.
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It really resonated with me. Love it ❤
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That is sweet. SMOOCHES
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Powerful.
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Thank you
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The last two line…took my breath away
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Smiling. They did? Are you sure it wasn’t asthma? Thank you for your kind words.
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No its not asthma, it’s called wordophilia! 🙂 You are welcome
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Nice
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Death calls our name the minute we are born. Not romantic today I am not. lol
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LOL Today you are a realist. Our journey toward death is one of the things we all have in common.
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Nothing wrong with reality nowadays. It keeps me humble lol
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It does that to all of us.
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Wow!
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Thank you. Mucho appreciated.
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I like the poem and wish I too, was fearless
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I am a coward when I think of her not being near me. So, I can’t say I am totally fearless. Thank you for reading and for your comment.
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Oh my! This sounds like one of my poems in my book. It gave me shivers to read. Well done
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Are you serious? Does it appear on your blog? Thank you.
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It’s in my book only. Of course it’s not the same wordings but the very same scene and thought. It shows we think alike some 🙂
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Great minds. lol Have a great day Jacqueline.
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Have a good one as well 🙂
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Thanks
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So true. I am afraid of very little in my life except that one thing….
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One thing???
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The way a woman can make me feel. Nothing else matters.
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Understood
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Wow! Super!!! What a final line……Phew!
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Thank you. Happy you like this. The final line says it all. Have a great day.
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Really like this, LA.
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Thank you. Happy you appreciate it. Have a good one.
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Great write 😀
Nothing more powerful wonderful scary or amazing than love..
Such a hold it has on us
tender us weak – bring it on😀
Love this post
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You are right. Love can be all of those things. Thank you so much. Your beautiful comments always make my day.
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Very welcome 😀
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You’re welcome 😀😀😀
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Maybe it’s LOVE? :))
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I think so. Thank you
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😀
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very. very. nice.
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Thank you. Appreciate it.
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Aah so beautiful, contrasts of fear and love together like that. This makes me daydream and that is not good cause I have to work! 😉
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Laughing. Daydreaming at work is not good. Well unless your paid to daydream. That contrast was exactly what I hoped to bring out. Thank you for your kind words. xoxo
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I fear I will always be a daydreamer. Sigh. Lol. 😉 💜 xo
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Me too. We are romantics. xoxo
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Ohhhhhh, this is so good Chimp. The romantic and passionate ending really did turn things around.
🙂
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Smiling. So happy you asppreciate it and happy you said that. It was the effect I was hoping to achieve. Thank you so very much.
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Always welcome Chimp. 🙂
Have a great day.
🙂
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Thanks. You too.
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🙂
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Nice piece my friend. From the worries of a child, to the grown up threat to love and its effect ☺
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Glad you appreciated it. Thanks.
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What an amazing poem. This poem totally captures what it is to be completely in love. You understand how fortunate you are and how rare true love is. Well written, Andrew, one of your best.
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Smiling. I love your words. Thank you for saying that. Thanks for reading.
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This is absolutely beautiful. I am missing you and your amazing words very much. I hope all is well and wonderful in your life, Sir. xoxo
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Busy busy busy. Otherwise everything is great. How are you? xoxo
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Same as you. I am missing writing very much. Hope to have more time soon. Mostly I am missing the wonderful connections with the amazing people, like you. Think we REALLY need to sit, enjoy the summer and share a drink very soon. 😊💋
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Sounds great. Missed you too. I checked my blog settings the other day to be sure wordpress hadn’t disconnected us.
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Can’t be disconnected, EVER! We will find each other one way or another. 😘
I want MORE time. There is never enough. I promise to try and do better communicating, one way or another. 💋💋💋
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Exactly. But I have had WordPress unfollow blogs. So, I checked because I haven’t seen a post from you. Missed you and your work.
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You are too sweet. Life has just been kicking my ass. Hope to be back very soon. 💋
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Hey, life better stop doing that. There will be nothing left for me to kiss. LOL XOXO
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Baby, I ALWAYS have something for you to kiss. Let’s start with my heart. XOXOXO
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Would love to start there. XOXO
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And it’s only the start! 💋
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Oh, I KNOW. Won’t need a road map either.
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Sure hope you know brail! 👋🏼
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Yeah, like the old Yellow Pages commercials. Let my fingers do the walking. Mouth too.
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YES PLEASE! Pretty Please! On my knees begging! Please…💋
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Smiling. I am serious.
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I am too! 💋
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We have to see how and when we can do something.
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Yes PLEASE!! Can’t wait! 💋
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I just found this message. Kick back. Miss you
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I miss you too, Very Much. 💋
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The power of a woman.
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Oh, women have so many powers over men, it is a shame most of them don’t even realize it. Thank you.
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Probably more than you think do!
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Great!
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Thank you my friend.
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*Sigh* Love the last two lines!!
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Smiling. Happy that you liked it. Thank you.
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The last lines were so unexpected and had me longing to be the cause of some one’s trembling.
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Awww, I am sure someone trembles when they think of you.
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Very interesting ending, I’m still trying to figure it out!! Is the fear of being consumed by love, more powerful than the fear of death?
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Smiling. It’s open to interpretation. Thank you for reading.
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That’s the wonderful thing about poetry we all take from it what we see… 🙂
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Exactly. Thank you for stopping by.
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Fearless of all…except the loss of our greatest treasure…our significant other.
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Exactly. Thanks for reading. Have a good one.
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Ohh, I love where you went with this. Love it.
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Smiling. So happy you enjoyed this. Thanks.
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Nice twist at the end.
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Thank you.
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You go knight in shining (7 year old) armor!! 😉
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Hahaha Thanks
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No one does romantic poetry quite like you, Andrew. Nice… 🙂
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Awww, thank you for saying that. I appreciate your words. Hope you are well.
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Doing fine, Andrew, hope you are too. 🙂
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Yes I am. Thanks
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Perfect….
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Thank you. Appreciate that.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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I like that, very much. The vulnerability of love.
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Smiling. Happy you appreciate this. Thank you so much for reading.
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Excellent. I love the contrast at the end – so powerful.
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Thank you for your encouraging words.
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I love trembling. My bones make the most delicious noise. Your poem was unexpectedly vulnerable and charming. I though at first it was going to be dark and boastful. Nice switch!
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Hahaha Too funny. Trembling can be fun. Thank you for saing that. I was trying to lead readers one way and twist it in another. Thanks.
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Wow.dis is d positve thought.positive thinkers always win n get thier target.wonderful poem.
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Thank you. I am happy you liked this. Thank you so much.
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Welcome dear.
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When we are in love, I do sense our being at the other person,the one we love and adore ‘s mercy! I like the vulnerability of trembling, Drew.
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Smiling. Happy you appreciated this. I too like the vulnerability of trembling. It feels wonderful when someone can make us tremble. Thanks. Have a great weekend. Looking forward to more photos.
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This is terrific…loved that last line!
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Smiling. Thank you. Appreciate it.
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Smiles. My pleasure always.
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I LOVE being scared in that way. ❤️ Love the last line. I’ve missed your posts so much. Been away from WP lately. Reading your poems makes me realixe how much I’ve missed this place. You always write with emotions I can feel. ❤️ Hope you’re doing well. 🙂
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Thank you. You are a person who writes with quite a bit of emotion, too. So, I am honored. Your words made my day. Thank you.
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Wow! Unexpected ending; brilliant work. Loved it.
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Smiling. Delighted you liked this. You made my day with your kind words. Thank you.
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I also no longer fear any of those things but tremble when my wife is near. Our life has really been changed by her black belt in karate.
(I’m joking of course. As ever, I admire how well you write this kind of love poetry. You’re very good at it.) 🙂
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Thank you. Imgaine if our wives had black belts. I’d never forget to throw out the garbage. Wait, she’s calling now…yes dear.
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Good luck! 🙂
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I absolutely love this poem. There’s nothing sexier than a man who trembles from love.
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Wow. Thanks for saying that. Happy you liked it. Thanks for those kind words.
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How very romantic! Loved this 🙂
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Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Happy to hear you liked this. Thanks. I appreciate your words. Have a great day.
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Do stop by my blog as well. Have a great day 🙂
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Thanks. I will.
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Ohhhh very nice.
love it.
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Thank you very much for reading and for your kind words.
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Nice one 🙂
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Thank you. Glad you appreciated it.
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Hmm 🙂 Have Blogging 🙂
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Happy weekend.
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Happy*
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Too rushed to find my post.
❤️
Missing you
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Missed you as well.
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♥
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xoxo
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
HE SURE IS! 🙂
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LOL . Thanks John
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