The Pharaoh’s Bride
“Time can heal the broken heart, but it can also hurt the waiting heart.”
Darius rested underneath a weeping willow. His disheartening journey has lasted longer than time.
Five thousand years ago, he adored the woman he protected; the Pharaoh’s young bride. It started innocently, exchanging forbidden smiles and glances.
Until, one day Aziza lost her balance and fell into his granite arms.
A week later they feasted on grapes; as they made love on the banks of the Nile beneath the radiant moonlight.
News of their secret romance reached the Pharaoh.
Beaten within moments of death, Darius pleaded with the Pharaoh. “I prefer to die a thousand deaths than to live a day without my beloved Aziza.”
Pharaoh ordered his magician, “Poison my disloyal wife. Reward her with the gift of reincarnation.”
Hot tears blended with the crimson blood upon Darius’ face.
“Let Darius live forever. He can suffer through eternity watching her die ten thousand deaths.”
Through the centuries, Darius walked the Earth alone. He found her soul in women of different lands. He buried her a thousand times.
Since Columbus discovered the New World he has yet to see her.
He may never find her again?
Time can heal the broken heart, but it can also hurt the waiting heart.
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This is a mansuscript I have outlined and is currently waiting to be written. It is the story of Darius and his eternal search for his beloved.
Photo taken from Pinterest.
WOOOOOW! This is just a great beginning of a great story in the making! It’s intriguing and engrossing. I would love to read this novel of yours. 🙂
Love this line a lot: ““Time can heal the broken heart, but it can also hurt the waiting heart.”
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So happy you liked this. Trust me your comments thrilled me. Poor old Darius understands to well the good and bad ways time affect the heart. I started working on this right after I started receiving these positive comments on my blog. I appreciate your wonderful words of encouragement. They push me to go on. Thank you.
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Thank you so much for linking my tale to your daily read post. I appreciate that. Have a wonderful weekend.
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I think I am also in search for ages and its hurting me.
Shiva
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Sorry, to hear that. Love arrives when we are ready. I really believe that a devine power has a plan for all of us. You day shall come. Thank you for stopping by to read. Blessings to you my friend.
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What I mean here is the search for the beloved of the description you have given of the lover. That I am in search and I feel most of us do that secretly in one corner of our heart. I hope you understand.
Love to You my Dear Friend!
Regards,
Shiva
🙂
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Beautiful thoughts my friend. Wishing you all the best.
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Oh my – I’m already hooked 😀 I’m such a lover of words and this Script grabbed my attention.. Finish it already 😊
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Hahaha I have started working on this. I received so many sweet and encouraging comments, I am inspired to get this script done. Thank you so much.
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So exciting 😀 move that hand – we are waiting
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LOL
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😅😅😅😅😅
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fascinating beginning!!- and I love the concept of searching through time.
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I think the story has a lot of potential in the experiences the main character can learn from during his search for his soul mate. Thank you for the encouraging words.
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🙂
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I must say he is a patient man… he could probably become a grand master of chess over the centuries.
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Smiling. Thanks. I envision him picking up wisdom from the ages. Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you stopping by. Have a great day.
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well egypt is an ancient civilization… and if he was a globe trotter… I bet he ran into some of the brightest minds known to man
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Smiling. Love your comment and attitude. You are so right. Thank you.
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Lol. Great idea. I need to incorporate this into my tale. Thank you.
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Man it’s amazing i actually went into a dream world and like i can feel the pain to see the loved one dying again and again in front of him…really awesome
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
Sorry, for the delay in this response. I just returned to blogging, so I am catching up on old messages.
Be well.
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