Tears That Never Seem To Fall
Amanda is no different
than you or me.
She wears a mask
that always keeps a smile.
It prevents the tears
that never seem to fall.
On rainy days
she sits by the window.
Gazing at her reflection
in the window pane.
It appears as if
the drops of rain are
streaming down her face.
Photo taken from Pinterest.
ooooh. what a beautiful melancholic poem, Andrew. I hope she’ll let go of the mask soon.
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Smiling. I am happy you enjoyed this. I think many of us hide out tears behind our smiles. Thank you so much for reading and for your sweet comments.
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That is so true. We wear masks either because we don’t want people to pity us or because we think no one will care.
You are welcome. I love all your pieces, Andrew. You are one skilled writer. 😉
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Now you made me blush. Thank you for saying that. You are much too kind.
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honest. 😉
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Sad, sweet!
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Thank you. Appreciate that.
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nicely done
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Thank you Joseph. I appreciate that.
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Pas de sweat
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LOL
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So Lovely. And such a lovely name. And such a lovely picture. Such a beautiful woman. Oh, sorry I got carried away once I saw the name, Amanda! 🙂 It is lovely though. 🙂
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Hahaha. I have always lived that name. Perhaps will use it if we have a girl. Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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Yay! Did I miss something? Is Allie pregnant??????? Or do you mean in the future? An excellent choice either way. hahaha
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In the future. Lol
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Oh, okay…..:-(((((
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Lol
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Sorry, how ungracious of me. Thank you, what a nice compliment. 🙂
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LOL toi funny. Hey don’t you sleep?
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Sleep? What’s that? Besides, what about you too? lol
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Lol i do 4 or 5 hours a night. Lol
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Hey, join the club!
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Thanks for reading. Wish we didn’t relate to this
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Too much sleep messes me up big time. So weird eh?
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Messes me up too
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I can relate. Well written 😊
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Thank you. I am thrilled and a little saddened by your comment. Maybe I shouldn’t be. Most us can relate to hiding our tears behind a smile. Thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts.
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I think we’ve all found ourselves donning a false smile for the sake of another. We tend to hide our truest feelings…
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Exactly. We all have our brave face for the public. Thank you for reading. Have a good weekend.
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Thanks, Drew, you too 🙂
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Thanks
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Sigh. I know this feeling.
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I think many of us can relate to Amanda. Thank you for reading. And for sharing your thoughts. Have a great weekend.
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You as well.
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Thank you. Don’t you sleep? Lol
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Not much. Just a few hours here and there.
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I shouldn’t talk. It’s 2:40 am here.
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Ha. I understand.
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How sad, to wear a mask, to hide everything, and then be revealed by the rain.
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Smiling. Ironic. Thank you for your insightful comment. How many of us wear a brave face everyday? Thank you. Have a great weekend.
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How many of us wear a strange mask every day and remain oblivious that everyone sees through it?
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Exactly. At one time or another, all of us have done that.
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Relatable and poignant, you got me all the way.
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Thank you for saying that. I suspect many of us can relate to this. We hide our tears behind our smiles. Thank you for reading. Have a lovely weekend.
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So beautifully insightful Andrew. I think we often hide our sadness to protect others. It feels much better to let it out., have a good cry . Lovely poetry!
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Thank you for your kind words. It does fel better to let it out. Or as in our case, to erite it out. Happy you appreciated this piece. Thank you. Have a great weekend.
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Happy Friday and a wonderful weekend to you!
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Thank you. You too.
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Something about the rain….
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your taking the time out to drop by. Have a great weekend.
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Tears on the inside hurt more
being afraid of your feelings
Is a hard way to go
Great one Andrew
Have a great weekend
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Yes that is true, Sheldon. Good observation. Thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts. Wishing you a happy weekend as well.
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Beautiful poem and tribute to your wife ☺
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Oh, that wasn’t for my wife. There is not reason for to hide her tears or even want to cry. At least I don’t know of any.
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I hope there never is a reason for her to cry. 🙂
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In seven years, I have never seen her cry. Thank you.
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I hope you never will–unless you become a ghost. 😉
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lol
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🙂
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Oh I know how she feels! Keeping a brave face, not letting others see how you really feel. You’ve captured it perfectly.
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I think most of us can relate to this at one time or another. Thank you for reading and for your kind words. I appreciate it. Have a lovely weekend.
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Superbly written…eloquent image….to which many can relate. 🙂
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Thank you. Unfortunately, many of us can relate to this.
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Indeed….
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Lovely Andrew, you’ve captured such a melancholy mood. Wonderful writing! Enjoy your Friday and the weekend. ~ Mia
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Delighted that you like this. Please make sure you enjoy your weekend too. Thanks.
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You’re welcome, thank you.
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So lovely and so relatable…
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From time to time we all hide our tears behind our smiles. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Have a lovely weekend.
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We do. Smiles. Enjoy your weekend.
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Thanks. You too
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God bless Amanda. God bless us all. Beautiful piece
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Agree with you 100%. Thanks for reading.
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My pleasure
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Fake it ’til you make it; that’s what I’ve been told. It sounds like for Amanda this concept has become an art form. I think she needs a good hard hug!
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She sure does. As many of us do from time to time. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Mucho appreciated. Have a lovely weekend.
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I think you’re right. She needs a strong hug and probably a good cry, too. Thank you for treading. Have a great night.
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Yes that’s me on a rainy day. We all need to cry once in a while.
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Exactly. Thank you for reading.
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Ah…I don’t cry. I remember the Loser puppet choking up when my son said “I like your smile, mom.” That may have been the last time I smiled in front of either one of them…..five years ago,
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Oh my. Do you know when I wrote this, more than once, you came into my mind. I suspected you have been hurt so much and for so long, your tear ducts have dried up. Thank you for reading.
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Maybe. Or maybe I don’t want somebody to make a snide remark. I remember talking to my daddy about my little brother (I didn’t know what I had done at that point.) He said “youngun’….I would cry my eyes out if it would do any good.” Maybe that’s what happened to me….it never did any good…so I stopped. I think when I just teared up…not cried….about my son and the Loser puppet asked me if I was proud of myself….I remember thinking….never a-fucking-gain.
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Understood. Better that you didn’t give Loser the satisfaction. I would love to give you a big hug but you would probably push me away.
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There’s a difference, you know….between disingenuous and real. I would accept a hug from you…because I know it would be out of caring.
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Oh, that is so sweet. I truly feel knots in my gut reading some of your posts that discuss your life with Loser. No woman, man, or child deserve to be treated the way you have been treated.
I really wish you all the best.
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Thank you for your kind words. If you ever make it down my way, not only would I give you a hug….I would give you a smile.
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Thanks for saying that. Well, in 2017 or 2018 I will be relocating. Not sure if it will be to South Carolina or Florida. Maybe we can meet one day and have lunch.
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South Carolina? How cool would that be? That’s where I am….and since Deb is moving to Florida…I have promised to go down and hang with her.
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That would be cool. I have to go south. Need to get away from the cold and ice. We are hoping it happens in the next year and a half. I know South Carolina has plenty of great areas and houses to purchase.
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Depending on where you are, in South Carolina, you may not be able to escape the cold and ice. That’s why I came back. I missed the snow and the change of seasons. 🙂
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That is something I would miss as well -the change of seasons. So, I would have to go to the southern most part of South Carolina?
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Central or the Eastern Coast maybe. I lived in Columbia and only remember is snowing once. I lived in Charleston and it only snowed once. It was gone the next day.
Upstate Carolina gets a little colder and more snow. Southern Carolina, I don’t know about. The whole time I lived in central Florida, it never snowed but it did get cold in the eighties. It doesn’t anymore. Only had one hurricane and it was mild.
I have always heard that the reason they chose Cape Canaveral to house the space shuttle was because that coast never got hit by a hurricane. It sure didn’t when I lived there.
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Interesting. I didn’t know that about Cape Canaveral. So, we’re not sure where we’re going yet. A lot depends on the prices of houses too. Thank you for your help.
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Sure 🙂
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If you don’t mind, I’d like to talk to you more about this when the time is near. Thank you.
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Be happy to. 😊
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Thanks
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Oh those tears that refuse to fall are the most painful. This was wonderful!
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Smiling. Yes they are. Thank you for stopping by to read and leave such lovely comments. Have a wonderful weekend.
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It appears as if
the drops of rain are
streaming down her face. – Man, what a great concept, and those last lines drove home the message with that haunting imagery. Awesome my friend.
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Thank you so much. Appreciate that. Thanks for reading.
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This is beautiful, Andrew. I love it that you leave us with the portrait without a fix or wish. The reader is left with a snapshot, their own wondering and empathy. 🙂
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Smiling. Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughtsd and kind words. You made my day with your comments. I appreciate that so much. Thank you. Hope you and yours have a wonderfful weekend full of sunshine, smiles, and creative inspiration. Be well.
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Lovely, Andrew. I don’t like to cry, but I love the rain. 🙂 Hope you have a beautiful weekend!
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Smiling. We are the same. I fight back the tears and I do adore the rain. Thanks for reading. Hope you are well. Wishing you and yours have a lovely weekend.
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This is wonderful. Melancholy, but poignant. I believe we all do this to one extent or another, but it would be lovely if we didn’t have to. Or feel like we have to.
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Oh, you are so right. I wish we didn’t have to do it. Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment. I hope you and yours have a lovely weekend.
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Of course. You, too!
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Thanks
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Many can relate, could be Amanda or any name but you’ve done such a beautiful job with this creation. Peace and love and let the rain fall where it may 🙂 Kim
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Smiling. Your comments were beautiful, they should have been their own post. I think all of us at one time or another hid our tears behind a smile. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Thank you, you also my friend. I hope to perhaps even get a post out today…been slacking lately. But did get to sit next to Santa Claus today in 94 degree weather….didn’t sit on his lap….would hurt the poor guy 🙂
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LOL
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Wonderful n heart touching lines.dear dew!! u r absolutly right dt most of us r wearing d mask of happieness.i think dt it is too compulsory for person in dis selfish world because nobody know d value of tears n donn’t bear tears.they want to live with false enjoyment,affection n attrction only.
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Exactly. I agree with you. Thank you for reading and your kind words.
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Beautiful n impressive pic of our amanda.
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Yeah.we didn’t have to do it.
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I think it’s a misconception that to not cry means you’re strong. Letting your heart feel takes a lot of courage. What an amazing and brilliant poem! The image goes so well with your wonderful creativity. xo
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Smiling. I agree with you. Sometimes you need to let it out. Holding it in is not good for your health (physical or mental). Thank you for your kind words. This was one of the few times I liked what I wrote. Thank you and have a good weekend.
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An insightful poem… really thought provoking. Have a nice weekend! 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading. You too.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Have to agree with Alexis….great poem.
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Thank you for saying that. I am so happy that you liked this little poem. I appreciate your kind words. Have a great weekend.
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You have a good weekend too.
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Nice poem. This is a feeling that many may relate to. The tears that sometimes only fall when it rains.
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Thank you for saying that. I am so happy that you liked this little poem. I appreciate your kind words. Have a great weekend.
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Nice… gotta love when poetry & metaphor merge, on what seems a casual, spur of the moment piece… If you had to sit there & stare at the picture until your forehead started to bleed, even better… ’cause you made it seem easy.
*wink*
gigoid
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Hahaha that was funny. Thank you. Maybe you’re right. Happy you liked it. Thanks for reading.
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Paul thank you so much for the,reblog.
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You’re quite welcome:)
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You create a picture I see so many of us experiencing in real life. Sometimes I wonder if we don’t confuse the reflection of the rain drops with our own tears of joy and sorrow. Beautifully written.
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First, sorry in the delay in my response. I have been losing 30 to 40 messages a day. And they pop up back in my dashboard days later.
Thank you for your lovely comments. I imagine many people can relate to this. Thank you.
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No worries. I’ve experienced similar problems.
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Thanks
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Poor young women. It can’t be easy to keep from tears if she’s sad. I guess she’s letting the rain do her crying for her.
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Thank you Bun. Now it can’t be easy for them.
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I love this!
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Thank you. Happy you liked it. Thanks for reading.
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It seems the rain cries the tears she doesn’t know how or rather not shed. Perhaps the rain helps her in ways we don’t understand.
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Thank you. Maybe you’re right. Happy you liked it. Thanks for reading.
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You’re welcome. Love your work. 🌷
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Thank you. You are too kind.
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☺
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Much appreciated. Thanks.
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I love this piece. It conveys so much.
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Smiling. I think most of us can relate to this. Hiding our tears behind our smiles. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Gosh I love your writing😊
Oh that mask we all own.. Necessary sometimes to keep us moving forward
It is so nice to set it free too..
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Gosh I love your writing 😊
Oh those masks.. Necessary sometimes to keep us moving forward
Also wonderful to set it free
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Yeah, they are necessary to avoid breaking down. Agrre with setting them free. I guess Amanda does that by watching the rain drops Thank you for your kind words and thoughts.
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Always a pleasure😊
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The best place to cry is in the rain…
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That is true. Thanks for reading.
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I loved it as I do all your poetry, my friend.
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Thank you. You are so good to me. Have a great night.
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As you are to me…you have a good night too, Andrew.
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This touched me deeply. Thank you, so much for sharing ❤
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Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and comment. I am touched that you related to this piece. Have a great evening.
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Its mid morning in my little corner of the world…but thank you for the sentiment just the same.
Enjoy your evening…wherever it may take you 😊
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Smiling. Thanks.
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Unfortunately, I know Amanda very well. You truly did her beautiful justice Sir. xoxoxo
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Do you know, I wrote this thinking of you and the subject matter of your recent posts. I know you are strong and good hearted. I imagine you fighting back the tears.
Thank you for reading and for your kind words. Be happy. Be well. xoxoxo
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The fact that you might have been thinking about me makes my heart melt. I do find myself fighting back tears, but doesn’t everyone? You are too kind and too wonderful for words. XOXOXO
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Thanks Big hugs
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Wow. Amazing write! 💜
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Thank you so much. I am delighted you liked it.
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Lovely Post on the sorrowful aspect of one.
It’s so private.
Is is something even I want to write on.
May be soon I shall come with those words.
Meanwhile you could see my Haiku ” know life best ”
Thanks
Shiva
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Yes, it is a sad poem. Thank you for reading.
I will search for your Haiku and comment. Thank you for sharing.
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Tear drops of rain and angst … I know the feeling and it’s sometimes therapeutic. So well written Andrew.
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Yes, rain drops representing the tears she refuses to shed. Yeeah, it can be very therpeutic.
Thank you for your kind words.
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It’s my pleasure. Your words often hit me right in the heart.
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Wow, thanks for saying that.
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It’s true.
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Thanks
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beautiful lines, poetry at peak. followed your blog, check mine if u wish to read/follow.
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I will check it out. Thank you.
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