Writing To Forget
The beautiful woman
sat at the empty bar
lost in deep thought.
Why was she there
trying to remember
or drinking to forget
I recognize her sadness
It plagues my dark eyes
causing deepest thoughts
as I quietly pen my words.
Am I trying to remember
or am I writing to forget
Image taken from Pinterest
beautiful!!!
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Thank you my friend.
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Maybe trying to remember something she used to know or forget something she wishes she doesn’t know…or both…you captured the kind of mood that tends to descend on me in late summer. Beautiful flow.
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Happy you appreciated this.
Sorry, for the delay in my response. After my little accident, my blurred vision has made it challenging to keep up with my blog. As always, thank you for your kind words. You are always so poisitive and supportive. It has been a blessing to find you.
Thanks.
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I’m so sad to hear that…did you fall again? I’ve been struggling too and my blog is neglected, also. It’s hard when our bodies don’t co-operate with our dreams and plans. I’ll keep you in my prayers.
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Thank you.
Yeah, another fall. Now severely blurred vision. I have been neglecting my blog as well as you can see by the delay in this response.
Be well.
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It all depends what she did to you lol
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LOL LOL
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…..or are you a crazy stalker…!
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Always have been for a nice pair of crossed legs…
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Reblogged this on Have We Had Help? and commented:
Another cracker of a poem 😉
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Thank you Jack. I appreciate it, Sorry for the late response. I have fallen far behind on answering my comments. This thing called life has been very hectic. Thank you.
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Once Again a Fabulous Poem. Your words make people Think. I Love the way you charm people to think about your words after reading your poems.
Brilliant
Cattie
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Thank you for your kind words. Happy that you liked this. You mae me feel so good. Hopefully, I do make people think. Thank you so much for stopping by.
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Keep it Up. You are Really Good.
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Thanks for saying that
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Oh I am Your Eternal Fan.
Tell me about yourself.
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Thank you for saying that. You are too sweet.
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on newauthoronline.
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Thanks for the reblog. I appreciate it. You are so kind.
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nice
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Thank you
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Beautiful!
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Thank you my friend.
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Oh wow. This. 💕 💕 💕
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Happy you liked it. Thanks.
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Of course! 😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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Fab image – was this an image prompt? It so fits your poem!
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I accidentally came across this image so I used it as a prompt because the young lady’s face reflected so much emotion. It made my imagination run wild. Thank you for reading.
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Whether it’s to remember or forget, I wouldn’t let my wife know. But she’s quite a lovely memory to have.
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Smiling. Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment.
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Oh, all the ways we try and drown our sorrows! We just have to be careful so that we don’t “drown ourselves” in the process, I suppose. 😉 I am very touched by this piece of writing, as I am currently trying to find more productive and healthy ways to process grief, etc. A great write my friend! ⚘
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Wow, what a beautiful paragraph. Sorry, it has taken me so long to reply. I am so concentrated trying to keep up with posts, I fall far behind on my reading. (My eyes can only do so much).
I have always drowned my sorrows in my writing. It has been the outlet which has kept me away from drugs, alcohol, and other sins.
I am flattered by your comments. Thank you so much. I appreciate your visits. And thrilled you enjoy my writing.
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Thank you! No worries, I am way behind on my reading, too! I hope your eyes become better soon, I remember you mentioning an accident. I hope you can heal from it. Take care! ⚘
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Oh, I have to wait for the doctors to give me a surgery date. I should be okay after that. Thank you.
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⚘ Get better soon, fingers crossed!
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Thank you. I so appreciate that.
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Looks like you failed 🙂
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LOL You’re right Derrick. lol Thanks
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We see ourselves reflected in other people. Sometimes the image is astounding, other times it’s painful, and occasionally it’s a wondrous moment.
This is a lovely poem, Andrew.
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Happy you liked this. Thank you for your thoughtful words. Have a great weekend. (As you can see, I am trying to catch up to my comments. Reading blogs take so much time, I fall behind on my own blog.)
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Sweet melodious poetry, I think she’s waiting for the right guy to come 😊
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Smiling. That would be so cool. I hate to think she is sad & alone. Her expression did inspire me. Thank you for reading and for your comments.
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You are welcome 😊
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Great poem Andrew. well written !! 🙂
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Smiling. Thank you so much for your lovely words. Have a great weekend.
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You are welcome !! you have an awesome weekend. 🙂
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So poignant, Drew *sigh*
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The painting and her face inspired me. I was trying to figure out what was on her mind. Happy you appreciate this. At one time or another, we are all trying to forget. Sigh.
Thank you.
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Well, I love it, mwah! ❤
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SMOOCHES. Are you totally over your illness? Today, I have the worsde sinus headache. It is humid here and I have been drinking hot tea all day trying to sweat this out. 😦
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The cough lingers and we just had a big rainstorm. Now it’s warm and overcast. I’m having tea, too, and watching my Cubbies annihilate the Mariners (11 – 0 right now). This weather lately is just the pits. Hope you feel better soon! It’s hard for me to think straight to write fiction when I’m not feeling well. I also have some tests coming up in a week but trying not to worry too much ahead of time. Plenty of time for that later if necessary, lol.
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Hey, my Yankees just handed you the World Series with that trade for the relief pitcher.
Yeah, it is terrible and uncomfortable being under the weather at this time of year. I hope you get better soon.
Go Cubbies. (It has been too long. Damn, it’s your turn now).
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Yes, I don’t know about Chapman personally, but, man, can he pitch! And we do appreciate the trade, but I think we gave your Yankees one of our best minor leaguers 😉 From your mouth to God’s ear! It would be so great to see them win (especially since my brothers are big White Sox fans, lol)
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I know the pain of watching cross town rivals win. (Although the Mets rarely do. hehehe). Go Cubbies
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Thanks! You wouldn’t be saying that if your Yankees were anywhere in the running, would you? LOL Feel better, my friend!
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lol No I wouldn’t. But a Yankees Cubbies world series would have been cool.
Anyone as loine as its not the Mets or Red Sox.
Thanks
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Of course, lol!
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Beautiful 🙂
She drinks to forget, you write to forget.
Sometimes, all of us have something to forget.
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Smiling. That is so true. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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😀
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Sound exactly what should be in a bar
Great read Andrew
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LOL I knmow Sheldon. I have been there myself. Although in my single days I would have tried to get to know her.
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Superb reflection on a stunning picture/image. 😉
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It is a great image. It inspired my thoughts. Thank you.
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Super!
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Nice! Writing can help to get you through the deepest pain. So writing to forget is a very valid idea in my own opinion. However if you are writing to forget, it is truly ironic on the most basic level that you are basically immortalizing what you are trying to forget.
Unless you are writing something else non stop to forget the pain of a certain even, or loneliness, or every day life.
Great poem.
Cheers! ^_^
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I am thrilled by your comments. You interpreted my thoughts perfectly. Thank you for taking the time out to stop by and read and for your thought provoking comments. I appreciate that. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Maybe trying to remember TO forget.
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LOL I think the was my Wednesday post. Thank you.
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Was it? Maybe I’m behind. I seem to be running behind and on empty these days….
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Take a deep breath and try to enjoyt the weekend. I was kidding with you. But it is true, my previous post Remembering To Forget You. Be well my friend.
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I’ll have to check it out. I’ll have my usual week-end…or week day for that matter….LOL
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lol
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This is very good. It has this beautiful melancholic taste to it.
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Smiling. Glad you appreciate this. Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments. Have a great weekend.
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Thank you
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This poem has a melancholy tinge to it that works really well. I too wonder if they were trying to remember, or forget?
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Smiling. That was what I was asking myself as I studied the lady’s face in the painting. Thanks you for stopping by to read and comment. Have a lovely weekend full of sunshine and smiles.
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I like this; it’s always a good thing when you go through the pain of remembering something in order to write it down, and then suddenly (sometimes) the pain is gone. Even to the point where you read what you’ve written years later and think “I wrote this?” Great poem.
Don’t think I could forget the woman in the painting, though. Have a good weekend.
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Funny you should say that. I have done exactly that. read something years later and questrion myself. Amazing how we evolve as writers and people. The woman in the painting is amazing. She inspired me to write this. Thank you for stopping by to read and for your comments. Have a good one.
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A wonderful sequel to the last poem I read that you wrote. The oxymoron, “remembering to forget” is a topic that can elicit strong emotions. Your writing style SUCCESSFULLY allows each of us to use our own lives to create the affects we seek when reading your ART! Thank you for helping bring out the emotions that sometimes lay dormant.
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Thank you. I posted this without realizing it was a sort of sewuel to Wednesday post. Thanks for your kind words.
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Short and to the point. I enjoyed it!
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Thank you. I try to be brief in my writing. Thanks for reading. Have a good day.
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Great post!
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Thank you for saying that. Much appreciated.
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You are welcome!
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Well written ! 🙂
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Thank you. Have a great weekend.
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Super Andrew.
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Thanks John. Appreciate that.
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🙂
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hey dear dew.u r only writing n dt beautiful woman’image is inspiring u .seeing dt pic,i think-she is waiting alone for long time n drinking to remove her depression n anxiety for her beloved.m i right?
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Yes, I think so. She is sad or thinking about someone who is not there.
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Beautiful writing.
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Be well.
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Enjoy your weekend!
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Thanks. You too.
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Interesting comparison between the wanting to know which one. Of course, I write to forget what I remember. 🙂
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LOL Great response. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Nice, Andrew. The parallel works wonderfully. 🙂
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Thank you
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Very nice!
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Thank you for reading and your kind words.
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Beautiful poetry, as usual…brought back a memory…
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It did for me too. Thank you for reading.
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Welcome.
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Excellent thought to ponder…
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Thank you for reading.
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Always…..wish you write more! 🙂
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Thanks for saying that.
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You’re welcome. I really do miss your writing. Loved your little series, Devil Girl, etc. Would love to see more of them.
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Awww, thank you for saying that. I appreciate it.
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This is excellent, I love the ending!
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Thank you so much.
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Hai I have nominated you for liebster award .check my blog:)
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Sorry, I don’t participate in the giving or receiving of awards. Thank you for thinking of me.
And yes, I have been following your blog. Be well my friend. And thank you.
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Tats ok ,no probes:)
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hey dew.today is friday.why did u not write some new?i m waiting.
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What I’m about to do…drink to forget/write to remember…
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Laughing. Thank you for reading. I appreciate it.
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I enjoyed reading your poem, but the situation faced by the speaker in the poem never happens to me. I can’t spend time pondering the background and the thoughts of beautiful women at bars. My wife doesn’t like it.
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LOL I don’t even know how to reply. LOL
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Lovely, poignant write…
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Thank you. I appreciate your words. Especially this coming from you.
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Aw, it is my pleasure. I love to read you.
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Thank you. I have been so busy this week I am far behind answering my own comments. I am almost cross eyed. lol Thank you.
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I am the same. A backlog of several days. Smiles.
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And I thought I was the only one.
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No indeed.
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Gorgeous picture depicting so much emotion
and words that draw out the imagination
I love this 😊
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Delighted that you liked this. That image does make the imagination wander. Thank you for your kind words.
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You are so welcome 😊 I always enjoy your writings
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Nicely written. Very thought-provoking.
I enjoy watching people and trying to decipher their thoughts.
I try to read their body language if they’re with someone to see if it’s a loving relationship or one of turmoil. It’s amazing what we can discover from just quietly observing.
Quite a few of my posts have been inspired by this process.
I enjoyed yours… ☺
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Thank you so much fpor saying that. I love to read loggers insights to my post and hearing aout the things that inspire them.
Sorry for the delay in this response. I am contstantly losing comments that reappear days later. and now with these vision problemsl it has gotten very hard to keep up with my blog. Thanks for your wonderful comments.
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You’re welcome. ☺
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Sorry your vision is problematic. Hope you get some sort of relief with that soon.
Be well 🌷
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Thanks so much. This was very helpful. Appreciate that.
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You’re welcome.
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