Pantomime
She loved him in loud silence
her heart cried out in quiet agony
every day that she went unnoticed
led to barren nights lost in chastity
She loved him from a distance
thought she worked by his side
they would be so perfect together
her insecurities dared not confide
She vowed to love him for eternity
her life lacked rhythm or rhyme
she would adore him in loud silence
With a heartfelt pantomime
This a reblog for anyone who may have missed it the first time and for my newer blogging friends. Still struggling with the vision. I have tried to keep up with the reading posts. WordPress still does not allow me to comment on blogs. Miss the conversations. I will reply on my blog today, if WordPress allows.
Wiahing all my friends the best. Be happy. Be well.
This is wonderful, Drew! And I would raise holy hell with WP. Happiness Engineers, my ass!! Make them fix it!
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Finally fixed. Thanks for your lovely words of support.
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Always, I would hate to see you disappear because they’re too stupid to get it right!
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Lovely once again. I hope that you get some relief soon for your vision. I can only imagine how frustrating and disheartening it is. Be well my friend.
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Yeah, it is hatf. Thank you so much. I am taking it one day at a time.
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A witty poem and heartfelt observations about unrequited love.
WordPress better let you out of the bubble. I miss you.
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I missed you too. I am free at last. Thank God o mighty I am free at last.
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LOL
I see you found us at Today’s Author! Cool!
How are your eyes?
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Waiting for surgery. Getting blurrier by the week. Thank you
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I can’t exactly click the “like” button for this comment. Wishing you well on the upcoming surgery.
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Thanks. I will keep you posted.
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Why were you put in a bubble
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This is a lovely poem, kind of sad though. Sorry to hear about your vision struggles Andrew, I wish you well. Thinking of you.
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Thank you so much. Happy you liked this. And thanks for the kind words.
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You’re most welcome.
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hope it works itself out for you! 🙂
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Thank you so much. Appreciate that.
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🙂
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Best wishes to you and a speedy recovery.
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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oh wow. this is a beautiful but aching piece, Andrew! I hope vision will be better, as well as WP! ❤
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Delighted that you appreciate my little poem. Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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always my pleasure, Andrew. 😉
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beautifully written
thank you for sharing dear
kisses
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Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and comment.
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Awww
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Thanks
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Lovely lyricism. Great depth. 😇
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Thank you so much.
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I LOVE women who love me in loud silence, and sometimes they love me in loud whisper, too.
Take care of yourself! Eye wish you well.
~PR
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Thank you so much.
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I feel as if you have written this poem on “Me and He”.
Cause I’m feeling the same way……………………………….
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Wow. You can relate to this. Thank you for reading. And thanks for your comments.
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But did you really write this poem to express my feelings on “He and Me” ?
How can you read my mind ?
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… you write so beautifully. 😊 it was good to read.
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Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and leave such lovely comments.
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I do hope eyes improve
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Thank you Derrick.
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This is beautiful
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Thanks for saying that.
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Hang in there, Andrew…
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Thank you.
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Beautiful, yet so sad! Made me feel her pain!
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Thank you for saying that. I appreciate it.
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Once again you stir the strings of feeling. This is very well done. I love the flow, the sentiment, and the perfect balance.
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I hope you can read my comments. This is beautifully written😊 I hope wordpress fixes your ability to comment!
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Ahh, love unreturned. Which of us does not know that feeling? Lovely…
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Yeah, I think most of us have lived that at one time or another in our life. Hope you are well. You are a week away. My Chimp fingers are crossed.
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Thanks, Andrew, I’m anxious to go already!! Repotting plants this afternoon, acting like I won’t be able to use my arm again, lol. Also last session with Pat, my trainer, b4 surgery today. Any news on you yet??
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No, the doctors are having problems with the coordination of this thing. I don’t know if you read a post about my surgery, I went over two months with no use of my arms after my spine surgery. So we should never assume anything.
You will be fine. I just know it. xoxo
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Thank you. I feel as well prepared as I can be. I do remember your post. I think I’m struggling with having to give up control here. It will probably be easier than I think, but I tend to expect the worst. God, imagine if I wasn’t on anti-anxiety meds, I would be crazed by now. This is very mellow for me 😉
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The post was When My Wife Became My Hero. She has to do EVERYTHING for me. and I mean EVERYTHING. lol Don’t worry be happy. Everything will turn out okay. Allie always laughs at me. I walk into surgeries as if they were trips to candy store. Flirting with all the nurses and stuff like that.
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Well, I do have gorgeous doctors! No wonder we’re friends, we are very medically oriented Lol. I do NOT want to think about what poor Allie had to do for you, that is true love! And of course I would do it for hubby and he for me. That’s life sometimes xoxo.
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Exactly. XOXOXO
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The line “she loved him in loud silence”… Ohhhh I have felt that all too well! Great poem!
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Smiling. Thank you. I think most of us have done that at some time in our life. Happy you appreciate this poem. Thanks for reading. Have a great day.
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That us annoying yjay you are having trouble commenting. I hope your vision gets better and that you are able to comment. I would miss the conversations, too.
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I just got the commenting ability back. It was awful to read posts and not be able to comment. It was driving me crazy. Thank you.
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Yay!!!
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Wow!!
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Thank you
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You’re welcome
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Those mimes have a hard time finding love.
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LOL At least no opne can accuse them of nagging.
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I’m ready to sic the pit-bulls on WordPress! Maybe we’ve all been hacked by some Nigerian drug lord…or the FBI…or the IRS. UGH!
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LOL You made my day. WordPress has so many glitches they are driving me crazy. I just got the ability to respond to comments and comment on posts.
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I thought for a while that my cyber husband was cheating on me 😦
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Your cyber husband was busy cursing at WordPress. He wouldn’t cheat on you.
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I have already lost any chance of seeing the pearly gates after calling WordPress everything but a child of God.
Your cyber wife will never cheat on you either 🙂
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Happy you won’t cheat. C well trust me we will fry in hell together cause I spent thecweek cursing wordpress too.
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Couldn’t think of better company. 😘
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Same here
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loved it 🙂 🙂
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Thanks so much
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wonderful! You can feel her heartache!
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Smiling. Thank you for taking the time out to read and leave your wonderful comment. Mucho appreciated.
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😊
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Touched my heart
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Thank you for saying that.
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wow the last stanza gave me the chills. It’s so hauntingly beautiful.
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You made my day. Happy you appreciated this. Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome 😊
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You’re welcome.
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I think it is because I am so sad today that your poetry and the Pantomime “photo” seemed to echo my insides. Keep on keeping on.
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Wow, sorry to hear you are having a down day. I reblogged this one for my newer followers who may have missed it. Happy you liked it. Thanks for the encouragement.
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Too familiar 🙂
Hope things improve for you soon on all fronts!
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Thanks so much. I appreciate that.
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You’re welcome!
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Awesome. Girl&World’s blog led me to this lovely post of yours. Just found a great new blog to follow! 🙂
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Thank you so much for saying that. I appreciate your words. I will follow you as well.
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Thank you, Lonely Author. I consider it an honor. 🙂
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Rather sad, loyalty is no problem here. Andrew love the phrase, “loud silence” brilliant. Lovely and heartfelt poem. Wishing you well. ~ Mia
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Ahhh, thank you. So happy to be able to finally answer everyone. Thanks for your lovely comment. And thanks for all of your support Mia.
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You’re very welcome Andrew.
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WordPress problems can be so frustrating! I hope that it gets fixed soon and you can get back to your regular routine!
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Things are finally back to normal. Thank you. Feel so much better now.
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Great poem.
Glad your issues are being resolved with wordpress. Wishing you the best with your vision.
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Thank you so much for your kind words and support. Much appreciated.
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☺ 🌷
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Your most welcome. ☺
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Lovely tale of unrequited love. Eternal story, sometimes repeated but yours is an original beauty of a tale. Poor silent young woman!
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That was such a beautiful thing to say. I love this comment Robin. Thsnk you.
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Your writing holds depth and layers, Drew. You write from your soul. ❤
Hope your eye surgery gets coordinated. On 9/20 I get my eyes measured for my one cataract surgery and new lens. I think it is cool they measure both so they will balance each other. 😉 My surgery isn't until end of October.
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Thank you. Appreciate your words. You are so sweet Robin.
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I just ama little late to each place I stop but I do believe in making the comment say something to the one who bothered to write and post. 🙂
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Robin, thank you. With these struggles with my vision, I am very late responding to comments.
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This is beautiful.You carve the essence of unrequited love and present it in a very sublime and witty manner .
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Thank you for saying that. Glad you appreciate it. Thanks.
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Wink wink to wordpress who have disturbeb her n broken her heart.ha ha ha.
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Thank you. Hahaha
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Welcome dear dew.
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Wonderful poem.i always remember dis poem because i donn’t belieive on wordprss.he is badass.
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Awww thank you for saying that.
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I m now very much happy on ur preseniting on my blog.realy.welcome dew.
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Heart touching poem “…loud scilence…”what a tearful feeling ..
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Thank you so much for your comments. I appreciate them. Being unloved is very sad. Thanks my friend.
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No being unloved is never sad.coz feelings of love is with her forever as meera.
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Being unloved is one of the sadess things.
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Bt dear dew !! Having love is a blessed thing.one side love too vunerable n as worship of God.it is beyond of realitic world bt near by of God.i think coz i have felt dis.dis type person is never alone coz those feelings r forever with him.in our litratures,mostly writers have discribed about of dis love.personal love converts in God’s n its universe”s n humanity love.love means no getting bt sacrificing.
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No.unloved is no one sadess thing because he/she have a lot of feelings.these feelings r forever with him.dt guy never be alone coz of his beloved’s rememrance.as soulmate dis rememrance always walks with him.u know-true love demands sacrifice.love one side or both side is love who converts in spritual love at last.r u agree?dew !! Plz reply.
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Hey dear dew.today is my birthday.plz read my post ‘life as swing’ n reply.dis poem is translated form my other post ‘zindgi ek baar.’
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Hey dew !!where r u.
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I am here. I was resting.
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Okay.
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Well done.
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So Nice.
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Thanks
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What a shame. Unrequited love isn’t much fun. 😦
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What a lovely way of seeing unrequited love….so true and visualizing to the fact
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I imagine how laden her thoughts are. Your words evoke an imagery in mind. Sorry about the sight issue and WordPress. Hope you get it sorted soon.
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Amazing from the first line to the last. Love specially when it says, she loved him in loud silence !!!
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Thank you so much for saying that. Delighted that you like this. Thanks.
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Always welcome 🙂
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Loved it.. Excellent work
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Thank you
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Thanks so much Ian.
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I love it more the second time around 😊
Hope you’re feeling better my friend
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I love the poem. Unrequited love, not so much 😉 😛 Hope your eyes are feeling okay today xoxo
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