The Old Man
The old man journeyed to the park
Where all of his friends convened
He conversed with every pigeon
Because no one else would listen.
The old man always traveled light
Nothing more than lint in his pockets
and a mind no longer carrying the burden
of melancholy memories long forgotten.
Lovely poem👌👍
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Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words.
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😃
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Excellent!
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Thank you so much. Appreciate that.
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You wrote about him beautifully. A very touching poem Andrew.
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Happy that you liked it. I watch these men in the park and try to get into their heads. Thanks for your lovely comments.
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Always a pleasure 🙂
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Wonderful poem and also inspired picture.Bravo Allie !
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You made me smile. Thank you fore your kind words. Happy you appreciated it.
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Great post! Loved the line about traveling light with only lint in his pockets!!
Dwight
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Thank you so much Dwight. Appreciate your input. Have a wonderful weekend.
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You are welcome…and to you as well!
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Thanks
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ah… beautifully sad.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Happy you appreciated it.
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perfection Andrew ❤
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Thank you so much. Appreciate it.
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very nice
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Thanks for taking the time out to read and comment
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Of course! No need to thank me, my friend.
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He conversed with every pigeon
Because no one else would listen.
Powerful simple lines! I am sure Allie is impressed!
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Thank you so much. Yeah she did like it. Thanks for reading
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You’re welcome! 😀
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Wonderful photo and a touching poem! You are very talented.
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You are very kind. Thank you for reading and for your words. Much appreciated.
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thanks Ian
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Welcome as always 😊
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Great post Andrew …Reminds me so much of my care for elderly and when l stayed over after my shift and read to some of them and after finishing l was always told …..nobody speaks to me so thanks please come again …. its so lonely ….l learned that most of those in the home used any excuse to get attention and from asking for the toilet or asking for pain killers even when they were not in pain …..and some others just said l was abandoned by my family and put in here, and forgot about me …this post sums up loneliness of the mind perfectly…… Great insight my friend …Ian 😊👍⭐️
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Wow, Ian thank you very much for your kind words. I see so many elderly people here in New York. And they appear to be fending for themselves all the time. It is really sad.
Great work on your part to devote time to the elderly. ou are a good man.
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You are very kind Andrew coming out of finance into healthcare was part of the need l know God did so when my mother was ill and needed me l had the skills that were given to me for just the purpose ….But the elderly are proud and will never admit needing help it cones from their time many during the wars ‘ Making Do and Mend ‘ was their way to survive and the word in Roman is Caritas meaning charity and we say it begins at home as the Romans lived in family communities and that was so the could care for their elderly and thus apply Caritas …
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Ian, your comments make for great posts. I agree with everything. Thanks. Be well.
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He sounds happy even though he maybe poor and have Alzheimer’s or something or just old age, his life is great for him. He has a purpose and I think that’s one of the keys to staying healthy and living old no matter where you live.
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I agree. He is content with his simple life. And what can be better than that? Thank you for all of your comments and support. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful day.
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You as well.
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Thanks
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Way to step up to the challenge! I’ve enjoyed your lovely comments and felt I had to repay the visit. You are so incredibly talented, I’m so grateful our paths have crossed. Happy Monday ❤
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Niki you made my day. I am grateful for the same. Thank you for reading and your lovely words.
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It’s always a pleasure to connect with kind souls like yourself. ❤
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Smiles. And with you
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I love these lines
“and a mind no longer carrying the burden
of melancholy memories long forgotten.”
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You made me smile. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words. Your input is appreciated.
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What a great little story. Sad but happy. It kind of reminds me of not only my grandpa but my husband’s as well. And I LOVE the inspiration for it. What a great idea for a prompt! I never thought of using an image as inspiration like that. Awesome post!
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Living here in New York I watch the elderly here in Central Park. I often try to talk to them hoping to alleviate the loneliness.
Thanks for the visit, read, and comments. Mucho appreciated.
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So lovely.
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Thank you
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You write beautifully. Happy we stumbled across one another!
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You are so kind. Thank you. I am happy about it as well.
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Very Good! Lint! Pigeons! …Kudos. 🙂
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Happy you appreciated it. Thank you.
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🙂
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Delighted that you appreciated this. Thank you for reading
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Good one! 🙂
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I’m an old man myself and I love this! Please thank your wife for me. ☺
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I sure will. Meanwhile, thank you for taking the time out to read and my post and comment.
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You’re very welcome.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
BRAVO–BRAVO—THIS “OLD MAN” IS AWED AND PLEASED!
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You made me smile. Thank you so much.
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A beautiful moment of understanding his plight. Great significance and closure here!
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Thank you. I appreciate your words.
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💕
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Beautiful poem 💕💕💕
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Thank you so much. Happy you liked it
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Thanks
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Thanks
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