Beyond Repair
Unloved.
Neglected.
Mistreated.
With love I recovered
all of her broken pieces.
With kisses I attempted
to heal her wounds.
But
trust never appeared,
her tears never ended.
How could I have known
she was broken
beyond repair.
Image borrowed from Google Images
😢 Very sad but we must never give up hope on someone even when it appears they are beyond repair.
Beautiful use of words.
Hayley ❤️
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You made me smile. Yes, we never should give up. Love can eventually heal everything. I guess I am just a romantic. Thanks for reading and for your comments.
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Hayley, thanks for your visit. Love can heal most wounds, I truly believe that. Happy you appreciated this piece. Thank you so much for your lovely visit.
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You’re welcome, it was a pleasure 😊💕
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Andrew, this is yet another beautiful post by you 💖 I remember being this person before and I think what helped me was time, my support system and writing. I’m still not out of the woods but I’m making progress and that’s good. Sometimes a fun girls night out helps too 😉 I love how well you relate to us women. Have a wonderful weekend my friend 😊
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Don’t know how much you remember about my older posts. My father physically abused me as a child, and some of it was borderline cruelty. It was affecting my entire life, until one day I woke and realized, I can’t let the past affect today nor tomorrow. Changed my outlook complete. Now, at times I feel invincible, because I know I can survive whatever comes my way. Writing was a big part of my getting over it.
Yeah, girl’s night out, writing, anything that will distract the mind.
I do relate to women. I guess that was my mother’s influence on me.
Have a wonderful weekend. And thanks for your lovely comments/
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Andrew I’m so very sorry to hear about how you were treated as a child by your father, I did not know any of this. You have the right attitude to move forward and not let the past define you. Your mom is such a loving soul to help you be who are are today which is a very kind man. Thank you so much for sharing your story and more pieces of you. I’ll have to check out your older posts too.
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Thank you for your kind words. Have a great weekend.
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So woeful! I almost feel the pain in this. Well done!
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Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and comment. Happy you appreciated it. Have a lovely weekend.
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This piece is so beautiful and deeply sad but I can relate to her so much.
When you loose trust in trust the whole equation changes.Like you said it’s a “beyond repair ” kind of situation
And restoring it may possibly never happen again
It’s too sad but too true.
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Yes, it is sad when this happens. I like to think love can heal everything, but that isn’t always the case.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and contribute your comments. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful day.
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Your very welcome 🙂
I do wish it was as simple as that too. Hmmm life’s intricacies I guess.
Do have a great day too 🙂
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Thanks
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A beautiful, soulful poem. Such an apt image as well. But I still I hold out hope that no-one is broken beyond repair. Bless you, friend. 😊
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Love, hope, and faith can heal everything. Thank you so much for reading.
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I feel everything you have written in this and appreciate every single word. Thank you.
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You made me smile. Thank you for your kind words. And thanks for taking the time out to read my writing. Appreciate that. Have a lovely remainder of the weekend.
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It appears I have a lot of catching up to do on your blog, as well as some others……Perhaps, after I get my errands ran tomorrow, if, IF, I so choose to do them, I will catch up then……all cozy, with my laptop and fresh clean sheets!! You have a lovely remainder of the weekend as well.
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lol Looking forward to it. Place kick up your feet, get comfy and prepare for the madness. lol
Thanks for stopping by. I am keeping myself on a strict schedule of posting on Mondays and Thursday
only. Looking forward to read your posts as well.
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Madness? HA!!!! Welcome to the crazy train. Enjoy the ride 😂😂😂
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lol
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My favourite part of this poem is the unwritten postscript. …how you’ll never stop trying, healing, loving, saving. Because she is never beyond love’s repair. ♥️
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No one is beyond love’s repair. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Have a wonderful start to the new week and opportunities. I wish you infinite sunshine and smiles.
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Wishing the same & more for you too!
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Thanks
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Ah…feels like a companion piece to my recent poem. Beautiful, and raw.
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I read so much stuff. Did I read yours? Thanks for reading
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👌👌👌
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Heartbreaking.
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Delighted that you appreciated this piece. Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment.
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Beautiful written, a stirring piece Drew.
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Thank you Holly. Honestly, this was okay. Thanks for your kind words.
When I read certain blogs, like House of Heart, I read them for the beauty of the write and to learn how to improve my own writing. (I often read your posts twice for this very purpose). That said, I am working on something for tomorrow, that I really want your opinion on. It will have a much deeper quality than my usual simple writes.
Thanks for your kind words and support. Es muy apreciado.
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Eres muy Bienvenido, mi placer. You are kind Drew, you encourage and inspire me. Thank you so much, I look forward to reading all of your writing.
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Smiles
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Smiles back!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
WELL-DONE–WITH COMPASSION!
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John thank you so much for the reblog.
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Entirely worth my effort!
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Thanks
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You are entirely welcome…and I’ll be back!
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Thanks
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We males don’t always understand, do we? Forced love isn’t love, no matter how we may feel it is love. But, he meant well. She will decide for herself who she wishes to kiss for healing—or the kiss was too soon and the hurt. 🙂 A very real situation described very well. Good job, oh Poet drew!
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You made me blush and that is not easy. lol. Thanks
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As long as it is a happy blush–wouldn’t want to give you any other kind. 😀
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lol
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oh this is heartbreaking. T_T
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This lovely poem covers a theme which has been on my mind recently. I think some people can be broken beyond repair, but sometimes they manage to hide the cracks from all except those closest to them.
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I agree with your thoughts 100%. Many of us are living our lives a little broken. Thank you so much.
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I guess that’s the sad thing, somethujng once broken is never the same. And healing isn’t just something a partner can do, but the person needs to work on healing themselves within. Two way street I guess.
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True wisdom. A partner and love can only heal so much. In the end the person needs to love and heal themselves.
Thanks for reading and for contributing your thoughts.
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You’re welcome 😊
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Simple but impactful.
Somethings you can’t fix.
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That is so true. Love doesn’t heal everything. Thank you
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You truly have a way with words. This is beautiful
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You made me smile. Happy you appreciated this. Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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Compassionate!
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Thank you so much for reading and for your words
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THanks
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As promised my friend just added this great post to friends news here: https://acefriendsnews.wordpress.com/2018/02/16/beyond-repair-the-lonely-author/
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Thank you so much Ian. Appreciate all of your kindness and support.
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Totally welcome now and always Andrew .. As is yours …Ian 😊
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Most depends on how we’ve been broken and by who… being beyond repair is often connected to this…
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That is so very true. Also depends on one’s inner strength as well. Thanks for your comments.
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My pleasure!
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Niet te herstellen .Zo diep gekwetst en diep intriest
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Thank you
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Hard hit right in the gut. Good.
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Thank you so much for your words. Appreciate them. Have a good one.
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Oh my goodness. I love this and all its broken pieces. 😢😢😍😍
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Lol. Thank you for reading.
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So incredibly sad!!!!
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I try to inject emotion into my little poems. Thank you for reading.
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Such a sad poem… but nevertheless, extremely powerful!
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Yes, it is sad that their are people so broken hearted they almost appear broken. Thank you for reading.
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Well written…feel this one deeply
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Thank you for your kind words. Thanks for reading.
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This touched me. ❤
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That makes me happy. thank uou for reading.
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I’m glad
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Very deep and soulful!
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Glad you appreciate this. Thank you for reading and for your comments.
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I missed a lot of your posts, Andrew. So sorry! I will come back and comment soon. Hugs, Robin 🐦
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Thanks so much. appreciate it
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Thanks for this nice post. …
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Thank you for reading and for your lovely words.
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Sad…so well expressed
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Wow, I forgot all about this post. Thank you for taking the time out to read it.
And thank you for your kind words. They are appreciated.
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