Huddled Inside My Soul
Come to me
On your darkest day.
as shadows consume your light,
as tears douse the overwhelming fires
choking you in their solitary smoke.
Come to me
when your heart falls into the abyss
drowning in dark seas of solitude,
in a world eclipsed by loneliness.
Come to me
I can make you whole,
basking in my light,
once you are
huddled inside my soul.
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Had to read this over a few times. Such beautiful comforting words.
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You made me smile. Thank you for your kind words. And thanks for reading.
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Glad for that! Take care and enjoy the weekend.
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You too
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I read this a few times too 🙂
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That is cool. Thank you for saying that. Appreciate your words of support.
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Ah, be still my heart! Swooning here and all aflutter💋
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LOL We need a little swoon in our lives. Thank you for your kind words.
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The metaphors in this are right on and evoke powerful imagery. Beautiful work!
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You made me smile with your words. Happy you appreciate this piece. Thank you so much for taking the tie out to read and comment.
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My pleasure! 🙂
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What a wonderful invitation for someone to have. It sounds super-comforting and warm, being huddled inside the soul of person who has invited you there!
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You made me smile Sarah. Thank you for your warm words. They are greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading, too.
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Might have to take you up on that offer one day.
A beautiful and comforting read that melts into your soul…… 🙂
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Smiling. Thank you for your lovely words. They are greatly appreciated. Hope you are well.
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I am well thanks. Spending Saturday firmly situated inside my house because snow. Have a lovely weekend 🙂
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Thanks. Be safe
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This is a memorable poem for mine as every words are playing with string of the heart’s guiter,dear friend!!
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That is such a lovely comment Aruna. I feel honored that you love this post. You can always come and huddle inside my soul.
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You are most kind n wise man,dear andrews.
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Thank you for saying that
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You are most welcome,dear!!
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Hey andrews!!where are you?have you not seen the posts send by me.
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I am starting to read posts now. I will find them.
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Okay.dear!!
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Hey andrews!!plz see d video on you tube with english translation n reply-how is that song.
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I will
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Ok I’ll come to you lol 😂😂😂 great poem, I truly enjoyed it! God bless! 🙌
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Thank you for your kind words. God bless.
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You’re welcome much! 😊
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Amazingly written..!!
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Happy you liked it. Thank you
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Such sweet loving strong and comforting images your words paint.. beautiful write 😊
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Delighted that you appreciated this. It makes me so happy that a wonderful poetess such as you likes my work.
Just an FYI; I found this in my spam folder. I believe some comments I have left you may be in your folder as well.
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😮 omg – that’s frustrating – thanks for telling me!
Your writing inspires me – it is always written with passion –
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Thank you for saying that. You are always so sweet.
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😊
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https://thoughtspenwords.wordpress.com
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Is this your comment?
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Love!
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He smiles. Thank you my Queen
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You’re welcome ❤️❤️
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What you have here is so powerful, I felt every line. I am finding myself there. For a moment I lost myself relating myself there.
And yeah, I also noticed this one not having a disclaimer. That tells me so much.
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lol. It has no disclaimer because I want everyone to feel free to reach out to me. I honestly love people and I never want to see anyone going through. bad times.
Thank you for your worda.
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I thought so, that’s totally me.
You’re welcome.
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Always lovely, the idea of unconditional love is so appealing. Another wonderful romantic poem, Andrew.
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Thank you. Love should always be unconditional. Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Here i have send you some posts as huddled inside me.plz dear!!see them n replly.
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I will. It. has been a busybday
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Andrew, we were on the same wavelength last week blogging about our souls! 🙂 I love your poem, it has a really nice flow and your choice of words are so soothing. I noticed you liked my recent post in my email notification but then it didn’t show up on WP for some reason. I hope there’s no issue with WP again. Hope you’re having a lovely weekend with friends and family.
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We were on the same wave length. lol
As for your post, I read it on my phone, but didn’t comment. With my vision problems I avoid commenting via phone. I saved the email notification to add my comments as soon as I have a chance.
Hope you are well.
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Ok no problem Andrew, I hope you’re feeling better each day. It’s great to see you blogging again. I’m doing well thank you 🙂 Have a wonderful week.
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Thanks. You toi
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Yes, that’s true love; making one happy in the darkest days. Beautiful poem… 🙂
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Happy you appreciated this.
Thank you for reading and your kind words.
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Always a pleasure reading your words… 🙂
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Thanks
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Great post!
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Appreciate that. Thanks
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Welcome!
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So beautiful and romantic! Love these lines: ”Come to me
I can make you whole,
basking in my light,
once you are
huddled inside my soul.”
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You made me smile. Thank you for your words of encouragement. I do appreciate them.
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It’s my pleasure! I have so many catching up to do on your blog. So many great bloggers like you I can’t keep up.
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I know it is hard. Thank you
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You’re welcome!
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Beautiful poetry… as always.
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Thank you so much for saying that
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So beautiful, Andrew. This is amazing poetry.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Happy that you liked it.
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What a lovely write Andrew! Sounds like a soothing and comfortable option. I hope you and Allie are doing fine
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LOL We are doing great. Better than ever. Thank you for remembering her. And thanks for your kind comments.
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Welcome. I am glad you are doing great 🙂
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Lovely poem 👌
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Thank you so much
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Welcome 3
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gorgeous write!
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Thank you so much. Appreciate that.
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Encore, Encore. When’s the follow up, the blogging world yearns for more. The way it ended was sensational
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Oh man you made me happy. Thank you.
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I’ve heard a lot about you. Now I understand why. This is beautiful .
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Thank you for reading and your comments. You heard about me?
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Yes sir, through comments people have made a on your posts and in replies to comments you’ve made. Good things from Michelle, Linda and Nandita among others.
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You made me smile. Three very special ladies. Walt I passionately follow everyone who follows me. I will drop by your blog tomorrow. It is getting late here in NYC. Nice meeting you. Thanks for the kind words. We can meet tomorrow on your blog. Good night. Andrew (or if you prefer Drew).
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Thanks Drew. Sleep well.
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Thanks
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Awesome! A very visual poem.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time out to read and comment/
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You took me with your words. Calming, beautiful writing.
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Thank you for reading. Much appreciated
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Outstanding sentiments
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Thank you so much. Really appreciate the reads and your comments.
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Great to read 🙏🏽
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Thanks
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Reblogged this on The Oregon Influence and commented:
The safest place, huddled inside a soul.
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Happy you appreciated this. Thanks so much.
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You’re welcome. Thanks for sharing your talent as always. 🙂
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Awwww thanks
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Everyone would desire such a soft place to fall. Meanwhile there is this beautifully written poem. Thank you.
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Thank you so much for reading. I will be honest with you, I don;t like everything I write, but I do have a thing for this little poem. Thanks for your lovely words. Appreciate it. Have a wonderful day.
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This is beautiful, I am going to reblog this poem for you.
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You made me smile. Thank you so much for the kindness.
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles.
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Thank you so much. I am honored by your gesture.
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This is so beautiful and soothing 🙂 Huddled inside my soul 🙂 the words oozes with warmth 🙂
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Yeah I was in a special place when I wrote that. Thank you.
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I hope you keeping going to the special place 😉 so that we can read more such warm poems from you 🙂
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Thanks so much.
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🙂
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Such beautiful and soothing lines! Your poems are amazing!
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Thank you for saying that. Your words thrill me.
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You deserved it and it was my pleasure to have read such amazing words. 🙂 🙂
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Thanks
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Thank you so much. Appreciate the kind gesture
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I find so many themes in your work that are similar to my writings. It’s just that yours talk about the beauty of love. Mine talk about the destruction it leaves behind. And, the rebuilding. Sometimes.
Sigh I sound so morose.
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You made me laugh. I will go through your posts tonight. I love love. It’s the greatest thing in the world. I don’t question it. I just bask it.
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Do that. 🙂
I don’t. I don’t really believe it exists either, if I am being honest.
But, well, I am writing about life post a meeting with love all the time. So, I guess, there are some traces of it outside of books afterall. Your writings sure make it seem that way.🎈
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I find traces of it all around me everyday. I will write about love until my final breathe.
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Very inspiring!
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Thank you so much. Appreciate it.
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Very beautiful. Refreshes the soul. 🙂
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Thank you.Appreciate that
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Do follow and like my blog and check my article. Thankyou
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Such a heartfull poem..Just lovely 💕
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I forgot all about this one. Happy you liked it. Thank you for your kind words.
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Its great how WordPress sparks these reminders.
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Yes, it is. Thanks
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❤
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Grateful for your emoji. Thank you for sharing your thoughtd.
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