Huddled Inside My Soul
Come to me
On your darkest day.
as shadows consume your light,
as tears douse the overwhelming fires
choking you in their solitary smoke.
Come to me
when your heart falls into the abyss
drowning in dark seas of solitude,
in a world eclipsed by loneliness.
Come to me
I can make you whole,
basking in my light,
once you are
huddled inside my soul.
Photo from Google Images
Lovely poem… and a tempting offer if I ever feel that low… 🙂
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You made me smile. Thank you for reading and your so very kind words. It is appreciated.
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Really nice. Get some of those poems published my friend.
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Are you serious? Thank you for reading.
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Yes I am serious
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We have to talk seriously about this. Thank you
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Use my contact form on my site at the far right corner
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Cool. I will hit you up tomorrow. I have to get my beauty sleep. lol. Thank you.
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Ya I am taking the cucumbers off my eyes and peeling the avocado mask and ready for a night night
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You almost made me piss myself. lol. Does it help?
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I got skin that is so soft LOL
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LOL This was in my spam
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Beautiful, Drew… Such a comforting place you have created. 🙂
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Thank you so much. I found this in my spam. Please check yours, I am falling into one’s spam foldr as well.
Thank you
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Yes I check mine often. It’s very frustrating to find real people in there!!
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lol
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Beautiful imagery in this one.
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Thank you so much. Happy you appreciated it
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The whispers melt my heart…
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You made me smile. Thank you for reading and your kind words.
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You got me with the title itself. Huddled inside your soul provides such a breathtaking image. the compassion in your soul shines through in this poem. Bravo, my dear.
P.S. This didn’t appear on my reader either. Im so pissed with WP
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Yeah I don’t think it appeared in anyone’s reader. Thank you for letting me know.
As for my soul. I have so much love to give, I have a place to harbor and protect the weary. Of course it is available to you.
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There are two posts up for you. One inspired by your comment on mine and now in response to this post of yours.
You may delete this message of course. 🙂
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Will be there shortly.
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You touch places in the heart that often are hidden in darkness. You have a wonderful talent – thank you for sharing it with the world. Loved this one
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Delighted that you loved it. I am humbled by your words. Thank you.,
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The pleasure is all mine 🙂
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Nice! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you
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Your soul as a refuge for your love. Beautiful.
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Happy that you liked this my friend. Thank you for reading and for your kind words. Have a good one.
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This is gold! I love and have been enjoying your work for a long time now, and I think it’s high time that you publish a book, Andrew.
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You made me smile Diana. I am trying to publish my novels and sell my screenplays to Hollywood, so I haven’t even thought about selling my poetry.
Now, you have me thinking.
Thank you for the compliments and support.
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That’s wonderful! Hopefully, one day, I’ll be seeing a screenplay by you.
You’re most welcome, Andrew. Keep up the wonderful writing. 🙂
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Thanks
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Most welcome.
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So beautiful..
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Thank you Leslie. Appreciate your words. Have a good one.
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And you. Smiles.
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Gloriously heartfelt writing, this was a joy to read. I agree with the other comments here about you being published!
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Oh, you make me smile. I am trying to publish novels and sell my screenplays, I haven’t even thought about publishing my poems.
Thank you for the encouragement. I will have to think about it.
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This poem is very peaceful, I loved every word of it
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Thank you so much for reading and your words.
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Your welcome 😊
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Such warmth!!
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You made me smile. Happy you appreciated this. Thanks so much for reading.
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With words of loving warmth, you made me smile first…
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Thank you for saying that
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Of course, if it is my darkest day forget it.
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LOL I will be waiting John. Thanks for reading.
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😀
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I felt this way last night, like all I needed was to come home and just be comforted in exactly this way, and nothing else would do.
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Sorry, to hear that. And here I was with an empty soul waiting o provide warmth and safety.
I hope your today is full of sunshine and smiles.
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Wish You A Very Happy Holi…
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Thanks
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Beautiful. Specially the last few lines. 😍 Love and kindness all over. 💜
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You warm me with your kind words. Happy you appreciate this. Thank you for reading. Have a wonderful day.
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Your welcome Andrew.😊 Have a blessed day.
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Thanks
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This has such a warming feel to it when you read it – beautifully written ♥
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Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comments. It is greatly appreciated.
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Reblogged this on Removing The Veil and commented:
Love this!!
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Thank you so much for the repost. I appreciate the kindness.
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You’re very welcome. That poem really spoke to me like How God calls us to His Light. 😉
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Yes always he does. We just have to be open to see it. Have a blessed day.
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You as well! 🙂
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Thanks
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Who can resist and invitation like this? I love the repetition of ‘come to me’. And all the rest, of course.
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You made me smile. lol Thank you. I feel so much love for people, I wish I could protect everyone. Thanks for reading and for your lovely comments. And between us, the “come to me” is what I liked most as well.
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Meant ‘an invitation’, sorry.
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Hey with my blurred vision I saw invitation. So don;’t worry. LOL
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Ok! I wear glasses too!
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lol
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I don’t. Until my eyes haven’t completely healed. So I can’t.
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Oh, I hope they are healed soon.
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Thanks
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I’d like to say man up! But I fear I would be only too happy huddled there…. 😉
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Lol. You would be welcome my friend
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What a lovely call… I think that special someone will come
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Thank you. Appreciate that
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You have such eloquent wording!
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Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it. Also thanks for reading.
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How much room you got inside there? Can I make an appointment?;)
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There will always be room for you. Thanks for reading.
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You’re welcome!
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Stella, I just commented on three of your poems and my comments seem to be going into your spam folder. Your writing is great today. I want you to see my comments. Be happy my dear friend.
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I’ll check it thank you for telling me.
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You writing is too good for you to not see my comments.
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Aww thank you. I needed that.
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Oh, Stella. I don’t want to miss a word of anything you write. Post your grocery list and I will read it.
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I checked and my spam is empty. Not sure what is going on.:( I hate to miss you comments also.
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You’re kidding me. I will comment again
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Lol this has actually happened before. I’m sorry
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Very frustrating
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Yes.:( I’m gonna contact WordPress but I’m about to leave class.
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Toodles Have a good one
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Beautiful poem to read when our soul is lonely and hurt.
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You made me smile. Happy you liked it. Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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Always the white knight!
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Smiling. That Is my nature. You know me all too well. Thank you for reading. My post failed to appear in the reader today. Some wordpress glitch. Hope you are well.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
Forever huddled? Good stuff–keep on doing it! 🙂 someday…mine might be as nicely detailed as yours are–if i stop with the limericks! 🙂
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lol. Thank you so much. I appreciate all of your support.
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oh this touches the heart. so gentle. so beautiful.
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Delighted that you appreciated this. Just wanted to share all the love I feel. Thanks for reading.
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ah. it’s so good. thank you!
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Blushing
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This was a lovely poem!
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Didn’t appear on reader, though! Dunno.
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Thank you. Yes for some reason WordPress excluded me today. Thanks for finding it.
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Thank you. Appreciate it.
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You’re welcome! 😊
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I see.
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such a beautiful poem ❤
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Very happy that you liked it. Thank you for reading and you words of appreciatrion.
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That temptation is difficult to resist. Your poem captures the complexity of a relationship.
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You made me smile. How did you find this. Some WordPress snafu kept this off of everybody’s readers. Thanks for reading and your sweet comment.
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Reblogged this on The Lonely Author.
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Wonderfully written as inspiration for a most depressed person.image are so much beautiful.yeah it is enough to say to somebody-“i can make you whole;basking in my light….”most motivating lines.all poem is full of lovely words,dear andrews!!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I wish there were a place for the depressed to rest and find the light. Too many people wander all their lives lost. Thank you for your kind words.
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Most most welcome forever,dear andrews!!
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Stunning! ✨💚
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Smiling. Happy that you appreciate this. Thanks so much for reading and your lovely compliment. It is greatly appreciated.
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In boliwood old movie’s song is a little bit same as your poem”if anybody may hurt your heart ; leave you aching alone in your darkness ,then you come my dear……”.this is a special song for me because many years ago ,my beloved would sing dt song many times for me.i loved him very much but he was married having a baby child.so i had not expressed my emotions for him towatds him and ignored.but still now he was often remided me in my memory when i hear that song.he was really most kind person n helping nature.you know memory is stubborn.i will send dis song with english translation if can search dt on google,dear.oh andrews!!you have reminded me my old kindhearted friend.now i don’t know-where is he?
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Is it good that I reminded you of him? Some memories hurt.
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Yeah.but i most love my sweet memories belonged from my first spritual love.that’s feelings are alive still now n have most importance in my life.he knows this fact n keeps its glory.
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That is a beautiful thing to say.
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Yeah.it is only thing which keep me happy always.i feel -i have not lost my love.he is in my heart.
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He will always be there. That is the beautiful thing about love.
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Oh dear andrews!!you are so much sweet.
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😢😢😢
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No.i don’t know-he was my beloved or only friend.becase before meeting him i have given my heart to my university’s life unfogettable guy.here is not my fault ,dear andrews.!!what do you think on my dis story.my first love was last love n will be in my memory forever.dt love was pure as worship of God.we both talked only by eyes.no touch,no datinig n no promise.he had perposed me but i had not replied coz of my shyness.
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Many times our first love is the most powerful love. And we cannot forget them no matter how hard we try. Oh, my you never replied. That is so sad. You may have lost the perfect person for you. He could be your soul mate.
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Yeah.you are right.he could be my perfect person,n i have lost him coz of my innocence n shyness.his life has suffered many tragic events as my life.but now i can not do anything beside best wishing n praying from God.now it is enough to me that he n me regards each other.am i right,dear andtews!!
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Hopefully he is doing well and that he is happy. We cannot change the past. The only thing you can do now is seek you true happiness in another.
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Oh my dear andrews!! how can i tell you.?i am with my family with full loyality but he has disturbed family.so i said that now i can not do for him anything but only praying for him.perhaps he is divorced n adjusted according as he like.
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Yes. You can wish and pray for him.
But you have your life and he has his.
I pray fro happiness for both of you.
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You are right dear!! I understand.welcome for your kind reply.
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Dis is good suggestion,dear!!
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Dear andrews!! it is true that true love can not recieve anyone.
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I think true love can last forever. What do you mean by your question?
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In indian culture-we think that we can get physical love after a little bit or more struggle but true love which we can not get ,are converted in spritual love who is immortal.my soul says-in next birth we both will meet each other surely.
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I understand now.
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I am glad that you have undestand.dear friend !!
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Your poetry is breathtaking. I enjoyed this poem so much. The power of soulmates (if you believe in them) ;). Thank you always for posting- get your work published!
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I do believe in them. Your making me blush. Thank you for your kind words of support. And thanks for reading.
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Of course. I believe in them too.
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Very nice
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Thank you for reading and for your words.
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Each line carries so much meaning. Truly a beautiful composition 🙂
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Delighted that you enjoyed this. Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment. I truly appreciate that.
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The pleasure is mine 🙂
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Fantastic! I really love this poem. Have a great weekend! 😀 Amanda
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Thank you so much., Your visits always spread joy and light. Have a great one yourself.
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OMG, you are such a gentleman! Thank you. 🙏
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That’s a cold catcher
Huddled inside my soul
Don’t forget to pet the monkey Andrew
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LOL Hysterical. Thanks Sheldon
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You are welcomed
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Isn’t that exactly how life feels at times? Thank you.
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Thank you for reading.
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That line “as shadows consume your light..” That really hit me.
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You made me smile with this beautiful comment. Sorry, you can relate to this. I wish no lone had to have bad days. Thank you for reading and for your comment.
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Lovely use of words. I found it haunting yet inviting 💜
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You made me smile Hayley. Happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for reading.
By the way, I left you a message on one of Le Petit Muse posts. lol I believe it is a post about our favorite videos.
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Excellent
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Thank you so much
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Hey you could sell poetry in subways or bus depots! If people can play their guitars or whatever instrument they bring, why not poetry?!
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That really is a unique idea. Thanks.
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