Misplaced Laughter and Broken Dreams
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After a night of fighting demons
she awakens to a lonesome world of
misplaced laughter and broken dreams.
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A melancholy stranger who has forgotten
how to live occupies her fractured mirror,
an unwanted spirit in a reoccurring theme.
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She inhales oxygen and exhales pain as she
lives her lonely life with a nostalgic longing
to rediscover the happy girl she used to be.
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I’m checking her out right away.
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Thank you
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My pleasure 🙂
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I love this poem!
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Thank you so much for reading. Happy you liked it.
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You are welcome 🙂
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Beautiful
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Appreciate that. Thank you.
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You’re welcome
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loved it
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Thanks so much for reading
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I think I know her! 😉
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The piece was very beautiful, Andrew! Awesome!
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Lol. You recognizing our friend was fine enough. lol. Thanks so much.
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😊
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Hahaha. I am sure you know her. Thanks for the visit.
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Lol! Welcome! 😊
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ICU 🥀 LMAO
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Followed.
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Thank you. Appreciate that
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She’s a beautiful woman and very talented . It was a pleasure reading about her.
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Stella thanks for reading. Happy you liked it. You always make me smile.
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You do the same for me!:)
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Aaaaw.
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Well narrated…She is blessed to have friend like you as you have describes her hollowness with serene.
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Nandita is one of the most talented women I have ever met. She is blessed with intelligence, beauty, and compassion. Any emptiness she may have is due to her ultra high expectations of herself and life. Someday, she will look inside her heart, and learn that true beauty resides inside. And when she looks inside her heart she will understand. Then she will feel complete.
Thank you for reading my friend. I appreciate your comments.
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How kind of you darling.
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A woman can breakdown temporary as her inbuilt strength will gradually ask her, “Get up, collect those broken pieces n let them vanish. Become a warrior again n rejoin the heart with freshness. Spread love n be pure soul.” May b this answers all.
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Beautiful. Agree wholeheartedly. Peace and light my friend.
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Perfect lines for a perfect person. ❤ She is love.
Beautiful writing Andrew. 🙂
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Thank you for your sweet words
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Lovely photo by your dear friend and poignant beautiful words. I look forward to meeting her.
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You positivity always makes me smile Miriam. Thank you so much. Your words are greatly appreciated.
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As are yours, always. 🙂
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Thanks
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Just followed her Andrew. This is so beautiful 💜
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Thank you so much Miriam.
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I wept after reading this. For a long while, I just sat staring at this screen. And I still don’t know what to say. Maybe I’ll say it best through my next post. For now, let me tell you this has touched me beyond words. Thank you my dear for your gift of friendship and love.
Besitos y abragoz
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Nandita, I am humbled that this touched you. I am delighted that you connected with this. No, I should thank you for your friendship and support. You are a warm wonderful person. Looking forward to reading your writing.
xoxo
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A beautiful composition for your friend Andrew. Yes I follow her blog. Agree with you. She is one hell of a poet. Love her work 🙂
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She is amazing. Thank you for taking the time to read and contribute your beautiful comments. Much appreciated.
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Your kindness spilled everywhere, Radhika ❤️
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Beautifully sketched and exactly captures my mood today 🌹
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So nicely written.Her laugh won’t be misplaced anymore
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Aaaaw thank you Ortensia. I appreciate your kind words.
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Lovely words.
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You made me smile. Thank you so much
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A very lovely poem.
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Thank you so much Alexi. Appreciate that very much.
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Your very welcome 🙂🙂
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I see an image walking in these words. Your words paint a portrait.
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Thank you so much my friend. Your comments give me so much pleasure. Thanks.
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You’re very welcome. 🙂
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A beautiful poem and the power of friendship is such a wonderful thing!
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Yes it is. Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and comment. Much appreciated.
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You are very welcome. Have a great day!
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You too
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Beautiful
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Thank you for reading. Appreciated
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You are welcome
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‘She inhales oxygen and exhales pain’ …. just love that phrase. Word weaver you are, this is wonderful.
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Delighted that you liked that. That is my favorite line as well. Thank you so much.
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I agree with everything you said about Nandita…🤗
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She is wonderful. Thank you for your valued contribution to thia post.
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Such a sweet friend you are, my dear Mich ❤️
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As, always so beautiful! And I go to your friends blog and follow now!😃
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your kindness and words.
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A beautiful poem and a lovely tribute to your friend! I will be sure to visit. 💜
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Thank you so much Meg. Appreciate your words.
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Always my pleasure!
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I can relate to these lines. The line ‘She inhales oxygen ….’ is so powerful 🙂
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You made me so happy with your comments. Thank you so much for being so sweet. And thanks for stopping by. It is greatly appreciated.
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❤️
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You can’t imagine how I appreciate that little heart. Thank you so much Rita.
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I hope so. It’s sent with love and admiration.
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Thanks
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SO Powerful!! 💕
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Thank you so much. I know you are very busy. If you can take a look at Monday’s “post, she is love” I know that one will touch you.
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Your writing always does something delicious to me. 💋
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You make me so happy. Thanks. Wish you were writing more, I imagine life gets in the way.
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I have a several partials, but need time to finish. I miss it every day. 😔
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I will be waiting. xoxo
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Good! 😈 I’ll try to not disappoint.
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You won’t
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No Sir…I WON’T!
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Aruna why are you saying these things? She is just a friend. Allie is my one and only love.
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I understand. Please don’t be angry with me. We are only friends. I have Allie. She is my muse and only love
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Can you please delete this?
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when I shift to the laptop I will
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I may have to write a male mirror to this moment that you captured here because it inspired me. I’ll be sure to give credit where it is do. Good art relates to something you’ve experienced in your soul, and this is captured very well here.
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Thank you o much, I appreciate that. And thanks for the visit.
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Reblogged this on The Oregon Influence and commented:
This piece has inspired me to write a male version of this, but before I do, I want this wonderful piece to be known. 🙂
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Thanks
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You’re welcome 🙂 thank you for sharing!
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Beautiful 👌👌
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Thank you so much for your support and beautiful words. I appreciate it. I will drop by your blog
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My pleasure 😊😊
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Very beautiful Drew, and yes, Nandita is a wonderful friend! ❤
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know
Thanks for reading and for contributing your wonderful words.
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My pleasure.
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Aww so sweet, Walt. Thanks so much ❤️
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My pleasure Nandita ☺
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What an amazing story in few lines! Simply beautiful.
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Thanks you so much for taking the time out to read and leave such wonderful comments. I appreciate that.
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beautifully penned!
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Smiling. Thank you for reading and for your words., I appreciate it so much. Thanks for reading.
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Your Welcome. 🙂
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To me, this hits so close to home… I can’t really put down in words how many emotions it brought to me when I read it. Beautifully written!
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Ana, I am so sorry that you could relate to this in anyway. I am humbled that you did, but I rather you tell me your days are always filled with sunshine and smiles.
Thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts. It is greatly appreciated.
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Cheers to a very nice lady… Nandita.
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Thanks for stopping by
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Cheers “boss” treat her well.
She’s a special lady.
And cheers to you.
Take care.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. She is very special. Have a good one.
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Thanks so much, Forrest. I just saw this.
Maybe you can indeed lend me a hand in handling them bullies.
Hope you’re having a good day/evening.
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I think so…
Sorry, you are both experiencing such unpleasantness.
It can be wrapped up by Monday.
I’m always having a great day.
Things will be fine.
You have my word.
Have a nice day/evening.
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THanks my friend. Appreciate your words. I am deleting the Hate Mail post, because I don’t want the haters to think they have won.
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What lovely words, Andrew! Nandita sounds amazing. I’m going to check out her blog before I leave the blogosphere.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. She is amazing. Thanks for the visit.
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Most welcome, Andrew. 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SAD BYUT OFTEN TRUE.
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Yes. Thanks for the reblog. I read something yesterday and commented on another blog. And they credited it to you. So, I am telling you I read something last night that was really good and it was written by you. Sorry, I can’t remember what> And I am ot talking about that casserole. ;p;
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Well—the cassarole was discussed. Some of my readers think the things I re-post are my work—and I’m not sure how to correct that except on an individual basis. Others are doing the best they can with the amount of English they understand! If you could find where someone falsely attributed something to me–but it wasn’t–I’d be grateful.I sure don’t need people saying I allegedly stole their material! 🙂
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No. I complimented something and he said it was you. He said it was your writing
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OH, well thank you for the compliment—and for his being honest in where he got it from.—shows excellent character on his part! You can tell him I said so…and applies to you, too! 🙂
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Thanks. When I remember who he was I will.
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Really like these lines lives “her lonely life with a nostalgic longing
to rediscover the happy girl she used to be.”
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I am bouncing between the laptop and cell. yeah I like those as well. I will miss you. Someday I.need to write something for you.
The Southern Belle who gives them Hell.
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Haha. That would be funny.
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This is a great poem!
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome.
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Wishes galore to this beautiful friendship and soul connection 🙂 I have admired Nandita’s poetry for long and you have done a beautiful poetry for her.
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Thank you so much. She is an amazing writer and even better friend. Appreciate your read and warm comments. Thanks so much.
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I agree with you. You are very welcome.
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Really sweet of you, Pragalbha, my friend in poetry. Thank you.
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You are very welcome. Please know I indulge in your good poetry …I wish I would appreciate with more comments, yet I have changed into this person who doesn’t always comment. I used to be different and hopefully will be back that way 🙂
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Smiling. I understand. Have a great weekend.
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🙂 🙂 Thank You
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Beautifully written and captured. I love your work. Great piece.
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Thank you so much for all of your kind words Whitney. I appreciate them and the fact that you took out the time to read it.
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Awesome, i can tell from the dept ofat the end she is a dear friend. Awesome read. TY for sharing.
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You made me smile. Yes, she is a dear friend. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words.
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The happy girl that used to be… sigh. This line kills me to the bone.
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You made me smile with this amazing comment. Sorry, you can relate to it. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on this. Mucho appreciated.
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I guess in a way, I’m a different kind of happy girl now. More like happy wife and mother haha!
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Exactly (a lot more headaches). Sorry for saying that. You are happy in a different way.
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Hahaha! Yes a lot lot more! I just don’t know why things are more complicated now than back then. Nevertheless, I am content!
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Good
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Be well and enjoy the family
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Beautiful poem. Gorgeous photo ❤
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The photo is my friend. Delighted that you enjoyed this. Thank you do much for reading.
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Welcome 🤗
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This was in my Spam. Take care.
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sometimes you don’t wont to take the step but situations forced you
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That is true, We never know in which direction life will take us. And before we know it we find ourselves in this situation.
Thank you for your contributing your thoughts to this post. Have a great weekend. Be well.
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A melancholy stranger who has forgotten
how to live occupies her fractured mirror,
an unwanted spirit in a reoccurring theme
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Beautiful lines.
I’m fascinated that you manage to revisit familiar themes but make them all unique.
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You made me smile. Happy you appreciated this. Thanks for the compliment and the read.
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Nandita, if you’re reading this, I want to remind you just how beautiful you are. I have a good mind to use your picture for my featured image sun 😉. You have such a pretty laugh ❤
And ‘The Lonely Author’, this was so wonderful to read. You’ve weaved this post so delicately. I honestly loved it ❤❤
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I am honored by your words. Nandita is every you stated and more. Thank you for reading.
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OMG,my darling Su-Vinci. I love you. Or better still, please let me “throw myself” at you.
Damn you are so delicious. And me, a “shameless glutton” .
Oh and yes, please use my picture. The trolls are kinda growing on me. ❤️❤️❤️
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My skin always yearns for your touch.
Let’s not worry about what others say. He probably wishes he was as lucky as I am. That was his/her jealousy talking.
*wraps arms around you* ❤
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Oh boy. Let’s get out of here before darling Andrew throws us out.
*all wrapped and cozy* ❤️
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Don’t mind me. Knock yourselves out.
But while you’ re here, can I get you anything? Wine? Soda? Or perhaps a Red Bull.
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Lol. Yes let’s celebrate your unselfish love for me. For now.
And let this be known to your fans and followers
I LOVE YOU!
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Love you too
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