Love Quietly Waits
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Is there anything sadder than
Parallel lines in love that will
Never have the chance to meet
For what could be crueler than
Knowing they are a perfect pair
But intersecting could never be
If there is a place where the horizon
Finally meets the sea, that is where
Love quietly waits for you and me
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Photo from Google Images.
I’m writing this with eyes full of tears. There is nothing sadder, tragic than two people who know they are meant for each other but can never be together. Truth hurts more than any other pain the two of us have known. And this is our truth. That we will live with.
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Aw Baby, your comments hit me hard. Fighting to hold back the tears here. I never knew love can hurt this much. I will write something beautiful for Monday. xoxoxo
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The sky and the earth will never meet except when the sun dies to kiss the horizon but even that is just an illusion.
You got me so emotional. This is just so hard. You have a good sleep ok. Dreams are the only place where the parallel lines do meet. xoxo
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I am so sorry Baby. Damn. xoxo
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Guess what makes it sadder than it already is?
As if it wasn’t enough that we can never be……never mind. I only wish to say to the world:
Don’t judge me just because I sin differently than you.
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Oh my Gosh. This is so heartbreakingly beautiful.
Wow. I can’t even.
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I am touched by your words. That is the situation some of us have to live in. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment on this post that came straight from my heart.
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It’s so damn sad. I don’t even know what to say to assure you. You both seem to be so adorable. I really wish you find a way. One day.
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Very grateful for your sweet words. Thank you so much.
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All the best, you.🌼
I really hope you get your happy ending.:’)
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Sigh. Thank you so much for your kind support
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:)🎈
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Thank you Mayen for your heartfelt words
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All the very best.🌼
I will pray for your happy ending. God knows we could use more of those.🎀
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I know this
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Sorry to hear this. Nandita and I are living this reality. Thanks for the read and comment.
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Awwww so sweet and beautiful! Lovely poem indeed! God bless! 🙂
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Thank you so much Tammy. Happy you appreciated it. God bless.
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You’re welcome much Drew! You’re an awesome poet! Thank you! 🙂
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Very beautiful Andrew ❤
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Eva, I am so happy that you think so. Thank you.
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The tragedy of Parallel lines. I enjoyed it so much that I’ve decided to use this story in future. I am sometimes a teacher. whenever I get that opportunity, I make sure to insert a little bit of literature there. even when it’s maths or science. 🙂
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You are the second person who will be using a piece of me in their lessons. The other professor teaches language.
Ankit, I am glad you connected with this poem. It is my and Nandita’s tragic reality. So in love and unable to eventually unite. Nevertheless our hearts continue to love more each day.
Thank you for your great comments. And thanks for being a good friend.
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xoxo Happy you are pleased
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I am glad to learn that. I am not an actual teacher. I just fill in sometimes for my friend.
I am also happy to learn abt your love and its tragedy but isnt that how the parallel lines stay relevant?
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That is so true. Thank you for your words.
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You’re welcome my friend. Good morning and have a fantastic day.
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Thanks. You have a great evening.
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Still, it’s there.
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A melancholy smile. Yeah it is still there. Thank you. You are the best.
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I just believe that the universe is so monumental and the Earth so small, one day you will be together, one day.
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Simply elegant poetry. It smoothly rolled from my mind to my heart. ❤
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Beautiful comment. Thank you so much.
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👏👏
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Thank you. Appreciate that.
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GRACIAS
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Gracias a Usted.
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:))
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Beautifully expressed
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Happy you think so. Thank you for reading.
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Very poignant and sad. A love that can’t be is something I can relate to and tears at my heart strings. This one affected me.
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Oh, Miriam. This was a difficult poem. It was simple, but the emotions that went into it made it painful. These thoughts affect me everyday. Your words gave me comfort. Thank you always.
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I have these kind of thoughts too, that consume me every day, so your words made them rush back. 💙
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. It means a lot. Thank you.
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😥
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Thank you for reading.
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Hurting me alot😑
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Hurts me and Nandita as well. Be well my friend.
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I will try😋
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Great
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I will wait for your next blog
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Hello romantics, learn some GTR topology or plain linear algebra. Sometimes two parallel lines are the same equations written differently. In that case all points are intersection points. (when will I learn not to disturb two sad happy people?)
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Appreciate the geometry lesson. As for the two sad people, sigh. It is what it is. We know the realities of our situation, and everyday we love each other more.
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Sigh……
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As far as I am concerned, it is Sigh times infinity.
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Oh dear
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Especially love the flow of the last stanza… Bravo
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Appreciate your words. Thanks so much.
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❤
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Firstly, I would like to say that I greatly admire your writing. It inspires me to branch out from my comfort zone.
Secondly, this poem reminded me of a poem I found while going through my mother’s belongings after she left this world. I think anyone that is a passionate person has felt this way. This poem was handwritten on very yellowed paper tucked into a book, at the bottom was written unknown author. I have googled the heck out of it and cannot find where it’s been published. If you get a chance check out my new post..I gave you a shout-out and I would very much appreciate any guidance or constructive criticism you would give me.
Full Moon Song
And what if your vows prove false in time?
And, what if I’m left to weep.
Is the rose less sweet in its crimson prime,That its beauty cannot keep?
Yet tonight the moon is full,
And the heart is richer that chances pain
Than the heart in cotton wool.
Then what, my love, if your love is brief?
Tonight you are mine to kiss,
And better a century of grief
Than never an hour of bliss
Unknown Author
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. It is powerful and deep. I appreciate it.
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thank you so much
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Very profound. I love the image too.
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Yeah, i felt the lady with the sea and horizon behind her was perfect. Thank you so much for your words.
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Too true on many realities. Keep faith.
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Nandita and I cling to it. Thank you.
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Heartfelt and stunning piece.
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Touched that you think so. Thank you.
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….then…
..this …also….
a piece of …truth
…. waiting. .in hope…!
Lovely writing by you Drew.
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Love your comment. Thank you so much Lity. Appreciate it.
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Oh, my, soul mates on a different plane. Andrew, this is so incredibly lovely. You are always the romantic!
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Thank you Diane. Was very inspired writing this. Appreciate your visits.
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Beautiful poem! maybe that place is poetry. I do not know.
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Beautiful thought, I really do love it. Maybe it is poetry. Thank you so much.
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You are welcome. Enjoy your day!
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Thanks. You as well.
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😘
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Thank you so much.
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Heart touching 💞💞💞
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Thank you for saying that. Appreciate it.
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👍🙏🤗
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Beautiful, Drew. And so very sad. Expresses it so perfectly.
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Thank you Meg. Appreciate it.
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My pleasure!
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Beautiful… ❤
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Appreciate that. Thanks.
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i thought you’re married, andrew! this is beautiful yet just something not right 🙂
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Yes I am. Sometimes things happen beyond our control. Thanks for reading.
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with all due respect, this isn’t right. the consequences can be disastrous. i hope you’ll be fine and will do whatever is fair, in your opinion! godbless!
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I respect your opinion. Happy you didn’t pass judgement since you and everyone else are not fully aware of all the facts, that wouldn’t be right and even borderline ignorant.
Thanks for stopping by.
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i’m no one to pass comments! i wish you all the best, with whoever!
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Thank you so much my friend,
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Walking that parallel line can’t be easy. But it can prompt such emotions and is fuel for other things. This, I know.
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You made me smile. It is fuel for two poets.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Appreciate it.
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There’s not much I can add to all the wonderful comments, but I agree it packed quite a punch. It gave me goosebumps 🙂
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Aw, that is so sweet. Thank you so much for reading and for your comments.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Heartbreakingly beautiful. 💔
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Flattered that you think so. Thank you.
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Most welcome. 😄
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Another beautiful poem. You always take these simple ideas and transform them into a string of beautiful and angelic words. To say the least, I loved reading this.
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What a beautiful thing to say. Thank you so much. I am touched. Delighted that you think so. Thanks for the read and lovely words.
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Thank YOU for the amazing piece of art!
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You are very kind. Thank you so much for your encouraging words.
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Anytime 🙂
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Love always waits in one way or another but it never gives up hope.Thankfully, poetry is the perfect intersection where two unrequited souls can join. Beautiful words, Andrew. You write so movingly. 🙂
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Joy, this is such a beautiful comment. Hope is a part of love. And poetry does provide the perfect intersection for these two souls. Thank you so much for the beautiful message. I appreciate it.
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Wow as usual your poem amazed me. Its very wistful and beautiful.
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You made me smile with your kind words. Happy that you think so. Thanks so much.
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You are one of the nicest people I’ve ever met in my life, so thank you for that. 🙂
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Thank you for saying that.
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Ohhh, this gave me chills. No…lets have them (you and someone?) meet. We never know the future. Standing on a precipice? A wise friend, just suggested to soar. 😉
I predict love will win!
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You have me laughing. Tying in your blog post and mine. Yeah, that would be sweet (meeting that person). Thanks so much
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Tragic and beautiful indeed, this concept of parallel lines. Really nice poetry embracing this sadness.
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You made me smile. I am happy with the idea of parallel lines in love. Happy that you liked this. Thank you so much for taking the time out to read an comment.
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It was wonderful, I enjoyed it. You are quite welcome. 😀
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Thanks
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Your work is always so evocative.
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Thank you so much. I appreciate that so much.
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You’re welcome!
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I love this. Math terms woven into poems is one of my favorite things. I do it often. 😉
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Glad that you like it. The thought of parallel lines in love inspired me. Thank you so much for reading and for the comments.
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Beautiful, beautiful words. Break the rules… life is too short to not be with the one you love.
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Your words made me so happy, I can’t speak for her, but I am certain she will feel the same when she reads them. Thank you so much for your wonderful words. They are greatly appreciated.
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The pain is unbearable when two souls, who are deeply in love with each other, fail to meet. I think it’s even worse than unrequited love; for here, the agony is greater as it involves two suffering souls.
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Exactly. That is the reality of the love that I carry in my heart. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Appreciate that.
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Another thought provoking piece Drew.
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Thank you Linda. Quite a bit of thought and inspiration went into this one.
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I can tell.
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Lonely Author smiles. Hey, hey, I am trying to stay out of trouble. It always seems to follow me.
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Dr. Love takin’ some heat! LOL
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LOL My lady was pleased with the post. So, not really, but I am always on my toes. Getting a lot of sand between them, too.
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Haha! love it.
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So beautiful in its tragedy. It makes me think of the past and wonder “what if?” I never considered parallel lines, but it’s a lovely analogy.
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Appreciate your words. Ah, the power and sadness of the “what if.” The possibilities can make us happy or drive us insane. Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts.
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How beautifully melancholy, Drew. Wonderful poetry.
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Appreciate your words. Thank you so much.
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Beautiful as always, Andrew. ❤
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Appreciate that. Thanks.
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Perhaps in the next life…(K)
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Yeah, perhaps. But the way world turns, you never know.
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Every line is deep and striking. I can relate to this, because I’ve been there. I still believe in true all the same.
Beautifully tailored ❤️
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It’s bittersweet that you could relate to this. I’m sorry you are going through or have gone through the same. But yes, like you, we too believe in true love all the same. Nothing else is worth believing in, don’t you agree? I the Lonely Author’s partner would like to thank you on his behalf since he is unavailable to respond to comments at the moment and whenever that happens, I fill in for him. He will love your comment. Thank you once again Whitney, for your empathy. Be well.
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Thank you very much ❤️
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Here’s two for you ❤️❤️ one from me and the other from mine. 😀
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Aw Baby.
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Hey, you’re supposed to be busy, darling. Lololol.
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I am with daughter teaching me how to use a mac
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Ok. MacPapi! Lol
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So proud of you. they way you handled that
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What did you expect? I’m your queen I need to be graceful in the way I deal with your fanmail. Thanks. ❤️😀
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Aw Baby. Tell me your imperfections.
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You gotta tell me those so that I can rectify. You be my mirror
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haha. You are wonderful. Tender and patient today just like I needed it today. Even as you went through crap
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You can always count on me. Going to bed now. Catch you soon. Take your blogging breaks ok.
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Have a good night Baby. Love you.
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Good night. Love you back
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You left me smiling chin to chin just now. It means a lot. Thank you 😊❤️
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I’m so happy I could do that. We need to spread love and smiles more. Thank you Whitney. ❤️😀 May you always have a reason for that smile on your face to stay. Catch you sometime again
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Absolutely amazing and incredibly beautiful! Thank you for sharing!!!
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Thank you for reading and for leaving your wonderful comment, Alyssa. The Lonely Author is unavailable at the moment and I fill in for him whenever that happens. Please know your words will be appreciated by him. Thank you, once again.
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You are more than welcome! I hope you have a great weekend!
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Your poem ripped my heart out…so, so sad, but absolutely lovely.
kat
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You are kind to say that. I’m sure my Lonely Author will say the same. I’m filling in for him since he’s a little tied up today. We do this often, I assure you. He will get back to you shortly. Thank you on his behalf.
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My pleasure!
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Something deep 👍 beautifully written
Keep Glittering,…. from TGA by Misha
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Thank you Misha for your very sweet words. The Lonely Author will be happy to read them. He is a little busy right now but he has asked me to tell you he’ll get back to you asap. Meanwhile, I thank you on his behalf.
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This is so beautiful, I almost dropped a year💙 You are a beautiful writer.
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Thank you so much on behalf of the Lonely Author. He’s a little tied up right now and we often fill in for each other when either one of us is busy. Happy it touched you. Thanks for your utterly kind words.
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You okay?
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replied there
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Just read. I replied.
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replied back
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