Drowning In Thoughts Of You
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Señoritas start to sway
As a smooth samba plays
Adrift like a cube of ice
Lost in you is so very nice
Feelings I can no longer deny
Entangled between your thighs
Your firm body can intoxicate
Of that there can be no debate
I want to kiss your sensuous lips
Feel you grind against my hips
Now mojitos are downed in haste
I long to savor your sweet aftertaste
Your body will be my shrine
When your sweat mingles with mine
The cantina never set the mood
As I slowly became unglued
Submerged in a mojito or two
Drowning in thoughts of you.
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Mojito brings the beast in you. a gentle loving beast. Love these collabs of yours with mojito.
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A few mojitos and the right LADY on your mind and you can create anything. Thank you for your encouraging words. Try it. You will like it.
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I did, this was my second hand drink. 🙂
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Lol
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Turned up a notch?! You’ve have set it on fire, amigo!!!
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Lol. Thanks for the kind words. You inspired me to write more. Thank you. I appreciate it
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You really inspire me to write more. Thanks for your kind words. So appreciate it.
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This is so impressive!
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Thank you so much. I appreciate that. I don’t do too much erotic stuff. Thanks
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LOL. Several mojitos and thinking of the right lady inspired this.
At least you didn’t have to fan yourself.
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Oh boy, you know how to set hearts afire.
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Thanks for saying that. I was a arsonist in another life. Thanks for your encouraging words.
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Pass one of those Mojitos over here!! 😉
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Lol.. I was very inspired. A few mojitos and a sensual lady will inspire writes like these. Thank you
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It was beautifully written, Drew 🙂
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I’m feeling particularly hot after reading this. Time to reach for a mojitos. Loving this, more please. 💕🙂
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Thank you Miriam. Appreciate your words. I tried to do it as tastefully as I could. Thanks for your wonderful support.
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Hi Andrew, Dorinda has the right idea, I’d like one too! Very fun and sensual. ~ Mia
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Haha Have you every tried one. They are quite good. Thanks Mia, appreciate your words.
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You’re welcome!
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Oh my … it’s getting hot in here 😶
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LOL Thank you for your comments. I get lucky every so often.
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I need that drink right now. : ( maybe both.
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So kind of you to say so. Thank you for the read and your kind comments. I am going to learn how to make my own mojitos.
Why the sad face? The drink is easy to find, that special someone that we all need, sometimes you will find them right around the next corner.
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i know you’re right as always, However, i am in a situation, not a good one but a emotionally starving one for the past ten years, and i’m still in my twenties. But i still have a bit of hope left.
Thanks for being such a good man.
; )
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First, I am not always right. You sounded like an old girlfriend of mine. lol
In similar conversations with friends, I always say, we have to always look our best to make a good first impression. We don’t know if that perfect person I around the corner. Or perhaps you will meet him/her tomorrow or next week. The important thing is not to worry about it and definitely not search for it. Love comes at the most unexpected times. Never when we are looking for it. It will come to you.
I hope you found some solace in my words. And thank you for the wonderful compliment. Be happy. Be well.
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i did find solace thank you. But now i feel guilty. I am in a relationship, for ten years now and i know for a fact he does not love me, but he cares i think, i don’t wanna bore you with my moaning, so anyway, i’ve been drifting, for a long while now and in some ways i have given up and see this as temporary, because everytime i want to love him he pulls away. Any woman can tell when they’re loved, right? This is not love this is something else, i think he’s trying to do the right thing, but my daughter doesn’t see what she should, she sees the truth.
I know my life will get better and i know i deserve happiness, i just have to hang in there, luckily i’m very very very patient.
thanks for your effort to talk to me, agian your wife is sooooo lucky to have you and everyone in your life, you’re a great friend.
: )
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That sounds like a challenging situation. Children often fail to the see the realities before them. People stick it out for the little ones, often sacrificing years or their lives for the sake of their children. I did that for my daughter. I spent several years in a dead end relationship.
The only thing you can do is try to make things work, or perhaps slowly do things in preparation of the day you have the chance to move on.
Better days do come. I am an example of that. To enjoy the rainbow, a little rain must fall.
Thank you for your sweet words. I like to be there for people. Since I had to get through my adult life with no parents or family, I appreciate the importance of having a support system.
Be well. I hope you eventually find the happiness and love that you are looking for.
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Thank you for your support, yes my situation is extremely challenging, more even than i can tell you, but details won’t make things better, but i geuss it makes me a bit stronger for the future, i know it will get better, it must.
And i promise one of these dys i will send you a good news message and not this morbid stuff, promise.
thanks again.
; )
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Hey, I look forward to that message. Keep smiling. Good vibes bring good things. My thoughts are with you. Be well.
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: ) thank you, i will be back for advice though in the future, ; D.
I cant thank you enough.
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Anytime. Glad to be of any help.
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; )
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Mood!!! Mojitos and love and sensation!!!!! ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ "Adrift like a cube of ice" wow!!!!!
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Funny you should say that. When I write I don’t worry enough about setting a mood. But on this poem I did. So, thanks so much for your wonderful comments. So with your response, I guess to some extent I succeeded.
On a side note: God knows I was in the mood that night. The drinks went straight to my head. There were so many seductive women there dressed very sexy, yet my mind was elsewhere. Reminds me of an old old song I believe Frank Sinatra sang it. “You, and the night, and the music.”
Thank you for your sweet comments. They are appreciated.
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It definitely speaks of the mood. It definitely does. 😁😁😁😁 and you’re welcome loads.
I haven’t heard the song you mentioned but a similar one coming to my mind right now is Enrique’s “Turn The Night Up”. The drinks, the seduction, the mood!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍
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Yeah, that song is about mood as well. Thank you.
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Two local villages are Tiptoe and Sway. No tiptoeing here with such undulating swaying.
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LOL Love your comment Derrick. Thank you.
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Not bad a tall for someone who doesn’t write erotic very often. Loved the visual. 🙂
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Thanks Dabir. I don’t write it often because I want to stay within the lines of classy and avoid trashy. If you saw the original, it was freaking burning hot. I had to tone it down, Thanks for your wonderful support.
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Well I don’t drink …. but this makes it look like a good idea!!! 😉
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Haha I am not a bigger drink. I drink more win than anything else, but that night…WOW It was special. Thanks my friend for your words and visit.
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You are very welcome 🙂
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Whew, is it hot in here or is it you? So sexy!
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Thank you Diane. Mojitos flowed through me and my imagination. I was inspired that night. Thanks/
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Perhaps I need to drink more! 😉
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Or I need to drink less. haha
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No, I love when you’re inspired! I can take one for the team, lol!
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LOL
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thank you so much. Cheers
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Ohhh! Love this. 🙂
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Thank you so much. So happy that you did. How are you?
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Very busy with my blog tour and also holidaying up in Edinburgh with the folks. And you? How is life treating you?
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There have been betters days. But I don’t like to complain. Nice to touch base with you again. Be well.
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Heady mojitos! Very nicely done, Andrew.
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Wait I am adjusting my tie. Will have to reach for that dial again, to see if I can please my muse. I will. I will.
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She does, she does.
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LOL Happy that she does/
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love in the time of mojitos! Gorgeous write!
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Love your title. haha Thank you so much for your kind words. Mucho appreciated.
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de nada 🙂
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OH LOL Is that the limit of your Spanish?
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Just about! Kidding😊
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Clapping. lol
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Deliciously sexy Drew! Well done. Loved- “Your body will be my holy shrine, when your sweat mingles with mine.” Intimate and real.
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Delighted by your words. Thanks. The mojitos and thoughts of a lovely lady inspired it. But honestly, never received the seal of approval from my muse (as I had hoped). So, I will have to turn things up several notches on Monday.
Those two lines you pointed out were my favorites as well. The thought has me sighing all over again and I haven’t even had a mojito.
So, I guess that it means it was the lady all along.
Linda thank you for your visit. Appreciate your kind words. I have you in my queue. I will be there shortyly.
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Marvelous!
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Oh wow my friend. Well done
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Thank you so much Sarah. Happy that you appreciated it. Hope you are well.
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Nicely done. ☺
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Thank you so much. Appreciate it.
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I don’t know how your muse could not approve. Very very nice Andrew.
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LOL Leslie, thank you for your kind words. Appreciate every one of them. Wishing you a wonderful day.
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Absolutely love this poem! It reads so beautifully and the lines are tastefully seductive 🙂
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Thanks you are the first person to say this. I wanted to make sure I didn’t cross the line of tastefulness. I appreciate your comments., Thank you.
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🔥🔥
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Thank you.
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Most welcome.
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Sounds like a better way to go than most 😉
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Lol. Yeah it is. Thanks for stopping by
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Goodness. Beautiful ❤
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Thank you so much. I appreciate that.
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❤
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Sensually beautiful and wow! The dance of love is in the air. 🙂
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Happy you appreciated it. Thank you Charlie
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You are welcome my friend. Your work always brings happiness to my heart. And thank you for you always being you. 🙂
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Thanks
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🙂
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Whew! It’s summer here and you made the temperature hotter 😍.
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Haha Thank you for your lovely comment. Happy you enjoyed.
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You’re welcome! 😄
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
I THINK SHE WILL—DON’T YOU? 🙂
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I certainly hope so. Thank you John
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Ahhh 😉 so sensual – fun and intoxicating 😊
Love it and love me a mojito anytime!
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Yeah, I love my mojitos too. Thank you for your kind words.
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😊😊😊
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This just made me feel some type of way… You have a new reader lol
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Thank you so much. Happy that I won you over.
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Hot 🔥🔥🔥 seems mojito is a powerful drink 🙂
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You are a talented writer! Love your prose and poetry. I’m finding it weird that I don’t get any notifications whatsoever of any new posts from your blog even though I follow your blog. WordPress is weird. Have a great weekend! – Sherline 😀
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Thank you Sherline. WordPress is weird. Thanks for dropping by,
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Approve?! Is that even a question?! Seriously, great write 😊
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So intensely passionate… fantastic piece!
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I am so happy you read this. It is one.of.my favorites. Thank you for your kind words.
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