My Crescent Moon
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She believes she came from the dark side
Never realizing she descended from the stars
More stunning than the rings of Saturn
She radiates a love as red as Mars
I admire her imperfect little craters
Loving every phase unless she’s blue
She will forever be my crescent moon
Longing to be new
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This reminds me, I gotta study Geography too…😂. Jokes apart, it was too…good. 👍
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Thank you very much for your words and read. Now go study. LOL. Thanks.
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Yeah, I must go to study. Bye, have a nice day…😃
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You too. Good luck.
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Beautiful 😊
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Appreciate that. Thank you.
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Such a planetary way to express!! Love it..
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Lol. Thank you much.for the read and the comments. Much appreciated.
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That’s beautifully expressed… and I’m impressed!!! :-*
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Thank you so much for saying that. Appreciate it.
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So sweet and supportive and loving. =)
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Happy you enjoyed this. She needed some support. Thank you so much.
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Yeah she deserves so much love and recognition for the amazing person she is every day. 🙂 I am so glad you are there to give it to her.
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My Baby deserves so much love and affection. And I will try to give her all that I have.
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You are such a good man for saying that. I don’t know if anyone has said this to you before, but you are like a guy from a book. Nice, respectful, caring, loving, supportive, protective, understanding, gentle. Dude…. nobody is like that. Normally, girls think that guys like that only exist in fictional books. Nandita is lucky because she has found a real-life guy like that, in you. 🙂
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Maureen. you have overwhelmed me with this comment. I don’t know what to say. Thank you. Baby, come help me here.
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You’re welcome.
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Such a sweet gesture to raise her spirits. beautiful
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I really hope it works. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Appreciate your support.
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It will surely work. Don’t worry😊
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Thank you.
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She will truly love your lines! 🙂
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I hope so. Thank you for your kind words of support. Appreciate it.
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This was just nothing short of wonderful. I love it. ❤️
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Wow, thank you so much for your kind words. Appreciate it.
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You’re welcome! I’m so glad you appreciate it. ❤
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This was a delectable dessert after a nice dinner. Hope your lady love feels better by the morning.
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She isn’t feeling well yet, but it definitely put a smile on her face. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Hope she gets better soon.
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thank you so much. We appreciate it
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The way you see her is just stunning. What a beautiful love you have!
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You are so sweet to us. Thank you for being so wonderful and supportive. We both appreciate it.
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Wow!! That poetry…Love love:)
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Very happy you liked it. Thank you for your read and comments.
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Hmm I now see why she was feeling down because moons are usually up. LOL! Sorry I just had to, but hope she’s feeling better in Jesus Name!
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That is so sweet of you. This cheered her up a bit. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings to you as well.
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🙂 glad to!!
You’re welcome much! Thanks! And remember Jesus loves both of you guys!
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Thank you so much. Appreciate that reminder. God bless.
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No problem 🙂
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Beautiful 💕
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Delighted that you think so. It made Nandita smile, So the little poem served its purpose. Thank you for your kind words and support.
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It’s amazing to read something which is so mesmerizing!!!
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You are very generous with your compliments. Thank you.
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Beautiful ❤❤ So creative🍒
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It is easy to be creative when one is loved by such a beautiful Siren like Nandita.
Thank you so much for your kind words. They are appreciated.
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👍😎
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Muchas gracias.
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Love is, quite literally, universal here 😊
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Isha, that is a good observation. Thank you so much, Appreciate it.
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The Luna that eclipsed your heart, a perfect tribute to her indeed Drew and the picture is wonderful. I love the ending because I feel it’s always a new moon so you just fall in love with her everyday, your love is never ending. That’s so special, I see why she can never be truly blue with you Drew. Wow, that was cool. 😉. Anyhow, that was Earth moving, and she’ll be seeing stars after reading that. Great job.
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I love the way you break these things down and then add a layer of your own Jokerswild special touch. Really happy you liked this. Thank you so much.
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This is gorgeous ☺️
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Very happy you think so. Thank you so much.
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I would have always believed so, had you not loved me the way you do.
Thank you for this, my love.
You are my light..❤️❤️❤️
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Amor, I just want you to know I am here for you. I love you with all of my heart. ❤ ❤ ❤
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I do too ❤️❤️❤️
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So beautiful. You two are inspirational
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So happy you liked it Lorraine. Thank you for reading. I needed to do something to cheer up my baby.
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Awww. Bless you xx
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Bless you too. Hugs
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So sorry you have been feeling down Nandita. You are a shining,light. Both of you.
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Those first two lines could stand completely on their own. The image they evoke is minimal to the emotion a reader can pull from that.
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Now, that you mention it, you are right. Thank you for kind words. Appreciate your sharing your thoughts.
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The one bound to earth
Sees the moon
Only in phases
The moon in fact
Has all the phases
That you see
And some more
And yet not.
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Thank you so much Ismail for your thoughtful words.
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You can bank on me for spewing nonsense 😂
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LOL You are too funny. Ismail, your visits and words are always appreciated.
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It was out of this world! Very cute and sweet. Being blue is the worst…
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LOL Yeah it is. Thanks Diane. Hope all is well.
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Back from vacation in Las Vegas with my siblings. Didn’t win anything but we sure had a good time!
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Great. When you have a chance, I just posted a video where I recite 2 poems. You get to finally hear me.
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Ooh, I’ll be over to visit tonight! Cannot wait
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Thanks
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Most lovely your crescent moon n will be yours forever.dew!!
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.
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Most welcome, dear.
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This is just too lovely. 🙂 x
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Thank you so much for yor kind words. They are greatly appreciated. Be well my friend.
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So beautiful and sweet! I LOVE this!!!
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Alyssa, always so kind. Delighted that you liked it. Thank you so much.
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Everything and anything you write is amazing! You have great talent and I love that you write with such emotion!
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You are very sweet. It is easy to write with emotion when a person is so in love with a beautiful poet.. Thank you.
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That is beautiful! I am so glad y’all are so happy! Both of you deserve nothing but happiness!!!
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Very grateful. Thank you.
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You are welcome!!
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Lovely 😍
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Thank you so much
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Happy that you think so. Thank you.
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What a lovely tribute to the one you love.
We visited Griffith Observatory over the weekend. You might not know the area so I’ll mention that it’s in the hills above LA, made famous by the movie Rebel Without a Cause staring James Dean, Natalie Wood, and Sal Mineo. I used to love going when I was a teenager and then a young college student, staring at the stars and planets through the big telescope on the roof, wandering the exhibits. Anyway, I’ve long reflected on the idea that we are all made from stars and wished we could remember that more and fight less. A bit distracted from your poem here, but you also mentioned that your N is descended from stars. Just so.
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Well, the Big Bang theory states that everything in the universe, including us. came from that original cosmic explosion. So, in that sense we are all cut from the same cloth. If people thought like you and I, the world would be a different place to live in. I can see why you discussed stars after reading this. lol
I want to say something to you. I don’t like to air dirty laundry here, but you have been so supportive of my relationship with N. Obviously, something went wrong here at home. I am still legally married with Allie, because she is an immigrant, and as you well know, the climate here is not very favorable for these unwanted “outsiders.” She is waiting for the notice of her test for citizenship. Once this is done, and I know she can’t be deported, everything will fall into place for Allie, N, and myself. And everyone will live happily ever after.
Thank you for everything.
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A thing of beauty!
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Happy you think so Malcolm. Appreciate that.
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Beautiful!❤
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Delighted that you think so. Thank you so much.
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Beautiful🌺🌺👍
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Thank you so much Nidhi
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Very beautifully written! ❤
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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Your welcum! 🙂
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This is a beautiful poetic surprise! I bet she loved it 🙂
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Yes she did. Thank you for your kind words. Appreciate it.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
AH…LOVE’S SIMIALIES AND METAPHORS!
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She believes she came from the dark side Never realizing she descended from the stars – wow, just wow.
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Seriously, I think it is a pretty good description of my sweet Nandita. She doesn’t realize what a treasure she is. Delighted that you liked this. Thanks so much for expressing your thoughts. Mucho appreciated.
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Beautiful, l love coming to your blog.
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Very happy to hear that. Thank you.
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Beautiful writing!
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Thank you. Appreciate that.
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You’re welcome.
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You sound like an astronomer, and, she, the unexplored universe only you have the map to.
Ummmm that sounded waaaaay better in my head, I swear.*hides face*
Beautiful piece, Andrew.🎀
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LoL. Thank you so much. Nandita does inspire me to new heights. Happy you liked it. Appreciate your words.
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😀
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Very beautiful writing. I feel like this could be a song! ❤
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Very happy that you think so. Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comments.
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A candle give us light but lives in darkness.your crescent n you are like that candle .beautiful verses.
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A candle give us light but live in darkness n feel as.you n your crescent are like that candle,dear dew!!
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Sorry, this was in my spam. Thank you for reading.
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Beautiful! Ciao,65Luna
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Thank you so much
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Amazing
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Be blessed! Beautiful words!!
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Thank you Lity. Appreciate it.
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❤❤❤❤❤
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Thank you
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Fantastically penned! Such a wonderful piece!
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Thank you Ana
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What an ethereal way to express love… ❤ (I'm sure she was super happy) 😀
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Yeah, she was. Thanks for reading and for your words.
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So beautiful and sweet!
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Happy that you think so. Thank you my friend.
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😄😄
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