The Treasure Seeker

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Wanted to take a moment to thank my readers, devoted followers, and friends for all of the wonderful compliments and comments I have received. Your support warms my heart. If you have found any beauty in my recent poetry, well, it is a reflection of HER love inside of me.

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The Treasure Seeker

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Perhaps this Beach Boy
Is a Treasure Seeker
Or simply a dreamer in search of happiness
For there is a place where love waits for me
Far beyond the mountains of judgment
That I have had to surmount
Past the swamps of criticisms
Through which I had to slosh
This adventurer will cross land and sea
Fighting tears, weather, and lonely hours
Crossing kiss-less deserts and cold moonless nights
My journey will not end                                                                                                            Until I discover that priceless treasure
Waiting at the foot of Her bed

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For Her

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Photo of opening scene from Raiders Of The Lost Ark.

117 thoughts on “The Treasure Seeker

  1. “Cross land and sea, fighting tears, weather and lonely hours” right there is the determination of a true treasure hunter. Anything worth the prize is worth the fight and you are that man, I’d bet dimes to dollars that you could climb a rainbow if you found one. Those lines represent the fight of the purposeful pirate, the treasure seeker you are. You found your treasure, her feet will soon be within reach.

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  2. I think everyone can see the beauty that has grown in your poetry from week to week
    as romance and passion has grown over this time.
    And it’s nice to see.
    Here’s cheers to both you and Nandita.
    And wishes for happiness. You both deserve it. 😊

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  3. Love the message, darling. Love the way you say kiss-less deserts and cold moonless nights.
    A truly adorable write. Thank you, my Beach Boy. Your brunette feels treasured indeed. Love you ❤️❤️❤️

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  4. Go, Andrew, go and be with your beautiful treasure! Honestly, reading the two of you is like reading a lovely romance, full of love and the occasional heart tear. It’s so beautiful and I bet Distance is jealous you can’t be torn from each other.

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    1. I love this comment. Yeah, hopefully, distance is jealous; because we won’t be torn apart. Thank you for your lovely words. Your comments are a treasure for us.
      Sorry, for the late response to this comment, I am swamped at the moment. Again, thank you for making me smile.

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  5. Most lovely lines”-fighting tears,weather n lonely hours,crossing kissless desert n cold moonless nights,my journy will not end….”amaging dear dew.you are a magician of words.

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  6. Amazing lines”-fighting tears,weather n lonly hours,crossing kissless desert n cold moonless night,my journy will not end….”heart touching lines for discovering d wonderful treasure.most lovely.

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  7. The metaphors ‘mountains of judgement’ and ‘swamps of criticism’ and kiss-less desserts made me both smile and feel sad. This was very moving.

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  8. Good morning amor. Slept well? The day has been brutally busy and boring. Still got one more meeting left before I start getting ready for the party.
    Oh your breakfast in in my blog. ❤️❤️❤️

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