they belong to you and no one else
.
Jammed my jellied kisses into mason jars
Stacked them all neatly upon a shelf
Stored away all of our antique memories
they belong to you and no one else
Folded all of my unused embroidered hugs
Finding chores for my lonesome self
Bubble wrapped eternal promises unkept
they belong to you and no one else
Fine pressed caresses are hanging off a rack
Staying busy since you left me by myself
Polished all of the shiny vows meant for only us
they belong to you and no one else
,
Apologies for this bad poetry, Lonely Author can’t find his mojo.
Being way harsh on yourself.
I thought this was a very creative piece and the power comes from the imagery.
Jammed my jellied kisses into mason jars
Stacked them all neatly upon a shelf
^
Great vision, continued on through, of storing the essentials of a relationship, to be used again or not, I’m not sure.
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Smiling. Thank you for your kind words. I was in a bad funk when I wrote this so perhaps I was too harsh on myself. Very happy with your comments. Makes me feel a lot better about the piece.
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I get that.
We can write great pieces but sometimes when the minds supercritical it doesn’t matter, we go a bit Van Gogh.
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LOL Exactly.
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wow such a nice words, they belong to you… hmmm i enjoy a lot
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Happy that you did. Thank you for reading.
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Glad he lost it, I liked this a lot!
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Very happy you did. Thank you.
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