It’s not the wind my dear,
It’s the ghosts of my past that haunt me so
They whisper your name into my ear,
Leaving me breathless and my heart beating in staccato!
Last night, she snuggled into a wooden armchair in her little balcony, looking up to the sky which slowly changed its colour. It started raining, she felt the breeze on her face, and her body. Her expression turned soft, almost gentle. The breeze, yeah it was.
Yeah.i can think about of dis pure love.your little poem give me some sweet memories of my old n only one pure love and i feel-his voice is whispering in my ears.dis feeling is forced me for smiling in dis terrible life.you write so much wonderful for everyone but it is related mostly many person’s feelings.thanks for your beautiful poem n most welcome.hey dew!!you are not museless.you own heart full of love is your muse.am i right?dear!!
Yeah.it is absolutely right.all Holy books say as i said.pure love is related d soul and d soul is related d Supersoul.glad dt you like my comments.they are most lucky who have feelings of love for everybody.in dis way,they are nearest of God.dis is pure love .bless you,dear!!
Dear Lonely Author
You have been gone for long.I couldn’t write without you I felt uninspired lost.please don’t ever disappear on me like that ever again.
N.P Dlamini
🙂 It’s okay, no need to apologize. It is a part of life and experiencing this loneliness simply means we have loved deeply. Something tells me such winds will eventually turn to warm summer breezes – at least that is my wish you for! Oh, and you are kindly welcome!
Glad to see you back with a !boom!. I was really missing your way too awesome poetry and here it is. I don’t have words to appreciate it. I guess I got the gist of it perfectly.
Hahaha You are too kind. You really made me smile with your wonderful words. Thank you so much for reading and for your great commentary. It is appreciated.
No effort really, besides I was the one who fell behind. First I got unmotivated to blog/write and now I have been suffering from pollen allergies that didn’t allow me to use a pc for a few days. I’m trying to get back on my writing feet once again… Also, I should add that reading your work is always a pleasure and never an effort! So keep it up 🙂
Heavy sigh. This is beautiful.
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Happy that you think so Miriam. Thanks.
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So very romantic.
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Smiling. Thank you Shari. Appreciate it.
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and someone very special will love your words.
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Laughing. There is no one special at the moment. Muse-less in NYC.
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I shouldn’t have clicked “like.” Wait for the perfect person this time, please.
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I will
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Now I can click “like.”
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Lol
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Short and sweet. 🙂
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Very happy you liked it. Thank you Alexa.
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Exquisitely beautiful are your words 😊🌼
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Thrilled by your words Sakshi. Thanks.
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My pleasure always Andrew 😊
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Beautiful 🖤 it is just so beautiful.
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You made me very happy Jaya. Thanks.
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My pleasure always.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you. Appreciate it.
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like a soft tap at the framed window, that whisper is as gently as the night itself, very beautiful words
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Gorgeous comment. So fitting. Thank you.
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Lovely , the whispers & windy voices & the spectrum thereafter !
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What a fitting comment. Happy you appreciated my poem. Thank you.
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I feel that hint of sadness.
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That hint of sadness is best defined as longing. Thank you so much for your words.
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Only a person with heart can feel heartache.
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I love your observation. Smiling. Thank you.
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Oh I’ll be listening for the wonderful wind!
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You made me smile. Glad you liked it. Hope you are well. Thank you.
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Hi so nice to know. 🙂 I’m Good. Ridiculously busy but Good!
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That is great. Stay well.
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Beautiful, like the verses of the days of old!
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Happy you think so Isha. Thank you so much.
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An hour past romantic my friend, how loud can silence be? Has a person thinking every time the wind blows.🌹
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LOL Roy, ah you made me smile. Thanks for that. Love your comments. Always so uplifting. Thank you.
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It was my pleasure Drew, beautiful piece as always, your writing is touching.
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Appreciate that my friend. Thanks.
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No problem.
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the breeze indeed whispers something always
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I agree with you. Thanks for reading and your words. I appreciate it.
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Simply lovely… 🙂
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Very happy to hear that from a poet that writes as beautiful as you do. Thank you so much.
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It’s not the wind my dear,
It’s the ghosts of my past that haunt me so
They whisper your name into my ear,
Leaving me breathless and my heart beating in staccato!
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Oh, what a gorgeous comment. I absolutely adore it. Thank you for gracing my page with your beautiful words.
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oh, no mention. it was simply what i felt when reading your lovely poem. so thank you for posting it in the first place =]
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Aw, that is sweet. You’re going to make me blush. Thank you so much.
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lol, if that’s the case, take pictures so everyone can enjoy the sight!! ;]
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LOL
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me gusta
en pocas palabras.. mucho!!
saludos amigo
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Muchisima gracias. Saludos.
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Thank you for sharing.
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Last night, she snuggled into a wooden armchair in her little balcony, looking up to the sky which slowly changed its colour. It started raining, she felt the breeze on her face, and her body. Her expression turned soft, almost gentle. The breeze, yeah it was.
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Wow.most beautiful words n heart touching poem.hey dew!!beautiful imaginary .short poem but long story about which only you know.
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Very deep comment my friend. Happy you liked it. Thanks.
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Most welcome,my brilliant n kind hearted friend!!
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Most soft n lovely style to blame d wind,dew!! Marvellous.
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Happy you liked it Aruna. It was a poem of pure love. Thank you.
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Yeah.i can think about of dis pure love.your little poem give me some sweet memories of my old n only one pure love and i feel-his voice is whispering in my ears.dis feeling is forced me for smiling in dis terrible life.you write so much wonderful for everyone but it is related mostly many person’s feelings.thanks for your beautiful poem n most welcome.hey dew!!you are not museless.you own heart full of love is your muse.am i right?dear!!
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I love this comment Aruna. The muse is my heart. That was beautiful.
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I am happy dt you are agree on my saying lines.be well n be happy forever.thanks,dew!!
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I think-feeling of love is always pure and like to worship of God.in dis way my thought is LOVE IS GOD-GOD IS LOVE.i believe in dis theory.right ?
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You are right. God is love and love is pure.
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Yeah.it is absolutely right.all Holy books say as i said.pure love is related d soul and d soul is related d Supersoul.glad dt you like my comments.they are most lucky who have feelings of love for everybody.in dis way,they are nearest of God.dis is pure love .bless you,dear!!
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I agree. Blessings to you.
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So much thanks,dear dew!!
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Dear dew!! Have you not gotten my any comments on your today’s post”stirring thoughts”?plz reply me.
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I just took them out of my Spam folder.
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Oh.yeah.dt is not big problem,dew!!
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Dear Lonely Author
You have been gone for long.I couldn’t write without you I felt uninspired lost.please don’t ever disappear on me like that ever again.
N.P Dlamini
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Such a romantic painting!!
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Thank you very much my friend.
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So beautiful and sweet
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Glad you think so. Thank you for reading.
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Your welcome 🙂
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There’s something about the whisper that makes a feeling like no other sound can.
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Exactly. That is why I associated it with the breeze. Thank you.
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Quite lovely 🌷
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You made me smile Suzanne. Hope all is well. Thank you. ⚘
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Happy to have made you smile Andrew. Thank you kindly, and to you the same. 😌
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Thanks
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So passionate and beautiful. Loved it 🙂
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Your are very sweet. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.
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You have such an excellent command over words. It is a pleasure reading your poems 🙂
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Thank you for saying that. I truly appreciate your kindness.
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💕💕👏👏 love it
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Very happy that you did. Thank you.
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💕💕
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Beautifully romantic Drew x
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Very happy you liked it. Thank you.
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You’re very welcome 😊 x
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The wind is your voice and the night your embrace.
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That is absolutely gorgeous. Thanks for reading and your words.
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Loved reading it. You are welcome.
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Just goes to show us that even short poems can be so romantic. Well done Drew.
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Appreciate that Walt. Yeah, sometimes even the short ones can be romantic. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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My pleasure.
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Oh, how the lonely heart can stir the elements. This is so relatable. Great piece!
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Smiling. Love your comment. Sorry it is relatable. Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments.
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🙂 It’s okay, no need to apologize. It is a part of life and experiencing this loneliness simply means we have loved deeply. Something tells me such winds will eventually turn to warm summer breezes – at least that is my wish you for! Oh, and you are kindly welcome!
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Your comments are as gorgeous as your poetry. Very grateful for your words.
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My pleasure and thank you for that.
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I can feel the air passing through those few well-chosen words. Short and sweet, in the best possible way. Lovely 🙂
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Thrilled that you think so. Your words make me so happy. Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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My pleasure 🙂
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What an gorgeous comment Isabelle. It was beautiful. Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
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Mmmmmm….Beautiful! 💗
Every lovers dream. 💋
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Smiling. Very happy you liked this. I imagine it is every lover’s dream. Remember it when a breeze whips through your hair. Thanks.
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As I read this reply, a cool morning breeze actually blew threw my open window across my naked skin. Such a tantalizing feeling. Thank you.
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Such a tantalizing image. Tugging on my collar.
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You felt a need to tug your collar? I felt the tingle a bit further south. ✨✨✨
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So good to have you back! This was swoonworthy!
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Smiling. Great to be back. Thrilled that you liked this Sis. Wrote it while on vacation. Thank you so much.
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Hope you had some gorgeous inspiration while on the beach!
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Oh God, did I. It was the vacation of my life. Already making plans to return in February.
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Glad to see you back with a !boom!. I was really missing your way too awesome poetry and here it is. I don’t have words to appreciate it. I guess I got the gist of it perfectly.
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Hahaha You are too kind. You really made me smile with your wonderful words. Thank you so much for reading and for your great commentary. It is appreciated.
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You’re very welcome.😊😊
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Wonderful.
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Appreciate that Lity. Thanks.
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Short but sublime!
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Appreciate that Winnie. Always sweet. Thank you.
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It’s always a pleasure, Drew!
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Ah, beautiful!❤
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Happy that you think so. Thank you so much.
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A thing of beauty!
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Appreciate that. Thanks so much my friend.
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Beautiful…
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Appreciate that. Thank you so much.
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Most welcome…
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The wind is blowing through my Florida room – is that you? 😉
❤️carmen
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LOL You have gorgeous hair. I wish it was me. Thank you for reading.
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Beautiful. I can feel that pain… it’s a terrible feeling. Sometimes it just creeps up on you.
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Yeah, it is. You are always so sweet. Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely words.
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Simply lovely.
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Happy you appreciate this little thing, Thank you Linda.
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Always.
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Wow, I love this one. It’s perfect. Welcome back!
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Smiling. Happy you liked it. Thank you so much
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Beautiful… love it!
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Delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for catching up with me. Appreciate the effort.
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No effort really, besides I was the one who fell behind. First I got unmotivated to blog/write and now I have been suffering from pollen allergies that didn’t allow me to use a pc for a few days. I’m trying to get back on my writing feet once again… Also, I should add that reading your work is always a pleasure and never an effort! So keep it up 🙂
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That is so sweet of you to say. Now, that I am back from vacation, I am looking forward to reading your poems again, Please get better.
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Romantically beautiful and your words speak volumes. 🙂
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Thank you so much Charlie. Hey, I just got back from vacation. I will, catch up with your posts shortly.
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You are welcome, my friend. 🙂
Hope you had a great vacation. 🙂
You’ll enjoyed what I wrote. A lot of wordplay and invention. 🙂
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Scratching my head. Let me see. Liquor, women, beaches, and one party after another. Yeah, it was good. LOL
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hahahahaha!!!! awesome! Seems like you had a good time. Party on Wayne. LOL!!!!
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Partied until I dropped. LOL
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LOL!!!! damn! most of been some party. hahahahaha!!! As long as your happy and feeling good. Then I’m feeling happy as well for you. 🙂
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Thanks
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
CRANKING GOOD!
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That is a first here. Cranking good. LOL Thank you so much John. Back from vacation. Hope you and yours are well.
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GETTING A BANG…out of my slang? 🙂 We’re doing okay
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LOL Good to hear that. Be well my friend,
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Gonna try—
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Such few words and so deeply beautiful!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Appreciate your visit.
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My pleasure 🙂
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so delicately tender!
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Thank you so much for your kind words and the read. Happy you think so. Much appreciated.
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you’re most welcome
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