This little thing was inspired by a recent conversation……
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forever haunting me
.
Her metaphors possess me
like a supernatural entity
clinging to my soul in desperation
Refusing to release me
as if it never had a body
to claim as its own
The ghosts in her verses
engrave poetry on tombstones
inside the graveyard of my heart
As her poetry eternally echoes
for her words are spirits
forever haunting me
.
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Beautifully written
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Flattered by your words. Thank you so much for the read and your kindness. It is greatly appreciated
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My pleasure
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One’s love may move on, but strong past loves will always remain,
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Yes, those memories do cling to us. Thank you for reading.
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I am floored by the beauty this poem poses. I mean oh my word
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You are very kind and generous with your comments. You have me blushing. Thank you so much for your kind words. They encourage me to write on.
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Hehe oh wait I think I’m blushing too 😊
Urgh it was a sneeze 😐
Your welcome though 🙂
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Lol
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this is so meaningful and true!
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Flattered that you think so. Thank you so much for reading.
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It’s my pleasure!
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Your lovely words will haunt me forever lol. I loved it!
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LOL Thank you so much Winnie. Appreciate it.
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You’re welcome, Drew! It’s really haunting me lol. It’s like the LSS (last song syndrome. LPS then lol.
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LOL Have a great weekend Winnie. LOL
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Have a great weekend too, Drew.
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Thanks
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You’re welcome
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Getting the feels… beautiful…
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Very humbled that you think so. Thanks you.
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Welcome…so well written…
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Quite a fresh take on the power of poetry to move us. Thanks for sharing it!
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Very flattered Paul. Thank you so much for stopping by to read. Appreciate it.
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Very ethereal. I love this one!
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Flattered by your words. Happy that you liked it.
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. It is greatly appreciated.
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Good to see you writing!
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Feels great to be writing.
Sorry, this was in my Spam
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Beautifully penned! Brilliant piece
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Very flattered. Thank you Ana.
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My pleasure truly😊
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A metaphorically excellent piece of writing.
You make me think.
Haunting
Daunting
Bunting
Shunting
Hunting
Bunny
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This is hysterical. LOL Thank you
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I have known this…
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Smiling.
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😉
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Poetry has the power to hold us in its thrall. This is hauntingly lyrical, leaving one thirsting for more.
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That is an amazing comment. So happy you had me pull this out of my Spam. Thank you for your very generous compliment.
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You are always welcome. Words that strike a chord must always be appreciated. I am happy that it made you happy.
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You sure have. Grateful
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I have a feeling you will like the other comment too that you have retrieved from your spam. Do you mind if I accept your gracious gratitude on behalf of that too, to save you the trouble?(smiling)
I am truly delighted that my words have given you joy. Bless you dear.
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First, I have had this problem crop up before.
It wasn’t only you that fell in Spam. There were nearly 40 comments there. My blog does bulk dumping into Spam. So, I will be getting to your other comment soon. Thanks for the heads up.
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That happens most probably because you blog on certain days only, so there is a barrage of comments. As a result some of them automatically land into spam.
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Makes a lot of sense.
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On most days I do. Lol
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LOL
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Good weekend!
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I think first loves that we have lost will always haunt us.
However I try very hard to focus on the love I have presently and supports me.
Cheers, Jules
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Always better to concentrate on current loves. The ghosts of the past can hurt.
Thank you so much for reading my poem and for your words. I appreciate your time.
Sorry, for the delay in my response. This was sitting quietly in my Spam.
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I have had an issue with several good ‘friends’ that now always end up in spam… So now I have to check daily.
It is odd how old flames spark memories. 😉
No worries.
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It sure is. I never do this, but if you can take a peek at today’s poem. I believe you may appreciate that one as well.
And let me thank you again for your beautiful words of support. You made me so happy.
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OOOOO, I like it!
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Happy that you do. Thanks for letting me know. Appreciate it
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This is hauntingly beautiful, Drew! I have no words to express just how much it moved me 🙂
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Humbled. You are so sweet to say that. Thank you so much. I so appreciate your comments. They are gems illuminating this page.
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You are such a wordsmith, always knowing the sweetest things to say whether in comments or poems 🙂
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You are very sweet. Thank you
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When a poem makes a person feel, it is special. “As her poetry eternally echoes, for her words are spirits, forever haunting me”
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Humbled. Glad you liked this. This one haunts me as well.
Thank you for reading and for your very kind words.
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Beautiful and powerful 💕
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Humbled by your words. Thank you so much
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Wonderfully penned. Really well done here.
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Thank you so much. Happy that you think so.
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‘The ghosts in her verses
engrave poetry on tombstones
inside the graveyard of my heart’
This left me speechless, Drew! 🙂
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I think those were my favorite lines as well. Thank you for reading and for sharing you lovely thoughts. Means a lot.
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Always a pleasure to read your poetry 🙂
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You are very sweet. Thanks
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Potent! One particular love haunts me, too. Wispy, naughty thoughts of him invade my mind. There are nights I wish he were more than just a ghost. 😈
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Oh, my. I know how you feel. Smiling. (an evil one at that). Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts
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Hauntingly beautiful! I can relate to this. Like a person’s words are so engrained, they are literally sketched on my insides.
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Exactly what I was trying to say. You read me so well. Thank you
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SHE’LL BE THERE, IN THE BACK OF YOUR MIND…!
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Embedded well I might say.
Thanks for the reblog John. Appreciate all of your support and friendship.
You are a good man. Very unselfish. May God bless you always.
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Thanks…but we all have strengths and weaknesses!
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P.S.–I like people willing to talk with me! 🙂
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Haha. John, you don’t have a search button on your blog. I found a comment you posted in my Spam. It was something you wrote specifically for me. I would like to find it.
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WHAT—NO SEARCH WINDOW? MY should be on the right side, 2/3rds up the page. Your comments I frequently—but not always—have to approve. what was the subject?
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You dedicated something to me. It’s called “Been and Cried That.”
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Posted July 16th, 2018, BEEN AND CRIED THAT… about we men’s emotional makeup and how we handle it.
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Very nice.
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Happy you think so. Thanks
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Damn beautiful. Poignant yet gorgeous. Lovely is the word 😊🌸
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Your reaction made my day. Wow, I am smiling from ear to ear. Thank you so much. I appreciate your time and words.
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My pleasure always my friend
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Great poem Drew! I read your words like it was my pain demons haunting me.
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Sorry to hear that Walt. We all have demons. I have learned it is a part of life. Thanks for the comments. Be well.
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You’re very welcome Drew. Great poem.
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Thanks
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Lovely poetry 📝
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Appreciate that. Thanks
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This was a wonderful piece, so many great lines…a welcomed haunting. Bravo!
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Oh, I am so hapy you think so. Thank you for the read and lovely words. You are so sweet.
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You’re welcome!
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Well done!
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Thank you
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Incredible metaphors, haunting in itself…
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Humbled by your amazing words. Thank you very much. I so appreciate your comment.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you so much Chuck, appreciate the kind gesture.
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Have you taken a peek at my to do list?
🙂
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Do you have the link? I would love to.
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Reblogged this on MY ENDURING BONES and commented:
A Haunting poem from The Lonely Author.
You will LOVE this.
amm
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I am very flattered that you shared this poem. And thank you so much for your kind words. So appreciate them.
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Words find a way to our soul and stay there forever sometimes. Beautiful poetry Andrew.
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Tty hank you so much. Appreciate your words. And yes, words can penetrate very deep.
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Welcome Andrew. Lots of healing thoughts your way so that you are able to fully make the transition
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Thank you. I have kept myself occupied. Quite a bit of writing too. Thanks
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Good for that. Keep it up.
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I will. Thanks
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Hi, please have a look at my blog too !
https://themidnightweaver.wordpress.com/2018/09/02/annie/
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Thanks so much John,
Appreciate it.
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I am so glad to have this opportunity to read your words!! 😊
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That is very kind of you.
Thanks
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Goose bumps… wow… just wow… Words seem to fail me but the way you have stiched them is stunning
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Your comment gives me chills. Thank you so much for expressing your wonderful response.
It is filled with encouragement. You made me smile.
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This poem is suburb. It is so you too. 🙂
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Why thank you Stella. Means a lot coming from you.
My friend are you well. I haven’tseen you post for days.
Just say hi so I know you are okay
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I’m ok. A lot going on. Thank you Andrew
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Have a beautiful week.
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Sad but true
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Appreciate that. Thanks
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Halloween poetry! Sorry am a wee bit too late! 😖
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Haha . Yeah romantic Halloween poetry.
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Oh yeah!
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