This is a little throw back to my fiction roots. A short story originally, written in 2016, I now converted it into 100 words.
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The Sorcerer’s Wife
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Our writhing bodies glistened with perspiration when he stormed in.
Most betrayed husbands would savagely behead the passionate lovers. Not the evil Sorcerer, he denied me the most exquisite finale of all; death in her loving arms.
He tossed a mystic powder. A purple dust cloud transformed Isabella into a doe.
Next, the Sorcerer converted me into the most loathsome predator; the hyena.
Now, I watch her grazing in the ominous forest; moving with a familiar grace.
For years I coveted beautiful Isabella.
Oh, the bittersweet irony.
As foul spittle drips from my hungry fangs, I crave her even more.
You have inspired me. I seriously need to get back to writing on my book. Your story says so much in so few words with such imagery. Provocative, sad, unique. It reminds me of that movie Ladyhawke. Oh, and thank you for stopping by my blog. It always surprises me that people actually like what I write. Ha! 🙂
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Very happy that you bbn liked this. Touched that it inspired you in any way. Yeah, my story does have that feel of Ladyhawke, doesn’t it.
Funny thing is, the post inspired me to return to my unfinished manuscript. As for people liking what you write, that is one of the amazing things about blogging. Writers connecting with writers. Supporting and encouraging one another.
Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments. Stay inspired and write. We all have a purpose, perhaps yours is to entertain and inspire through your writing.
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Thank you! What lovely thoughts to begin the day! 😊
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Great. Enjoy it.
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such a great information for blogger i am a professional blogger thanks
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Thanks
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Brilliant.
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Flattered that you think so. Thank you for reading.
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Definitely one of your best. You should share the original 😊
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Thank you for saying that. Appreciate your kind words. I don’t like to post anything too long. So, I did my little 100 word thing. Thank you.
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Don’t hold back because of the length of a story. People will read it! I certainly do.
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Loved it.
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Very happy that you did. Thank you for reading and for your comment.
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Love it!
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Happy that you do. Thank you for reading
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Well….That escalated quickly! Lol!
But seriously, this was intense and I love the escalation of the drama. The beauty of it is I felt like I read a full-length story even though it’s just 100 words. Great structure, great emotion. Love it!
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That is very kind of you to say. Happy you think so. Thanks for taking the time out to read and leave your thoughts.
Sorry, for the delay in my response. Went on back to back vacations. Thank you.
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Wow! 🙂
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Appreciate that so much., Thanks.
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🙂
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Hey 😊 I like this !
Good for the hyena😉
I would much enjoy reading the story in its’ entirety😊
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Smiling. Happy you enjopyed it. I should have posted this on Halloween, huh.
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Yes😀
But really – we are happy any time you post 😉
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That is so sweet. Thank you.
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😊😊😊
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I’ve done a few 100 word writes and it is not easy to tell a whole story in so few words…. you did it magnificently! Loved this!
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It isn’t an easy format, but the challenge is wonderful. I used to do quite a few of them earlier on my blog.
Thank you for reading and for your words. And all of these comments from you that have been sitting here waiting
for me to return from my break, well, they are gems that have brightened my day. Thank you.
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You’re welcome. Glad I could brighten your day! ❤
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Such passion
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You are very sweet. Thank you for reading and for your words.
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💋
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That doggone spittle gets me every time,
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LOL . Thanks Walt. LOL
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My pleasure! (Wipes drool off chin)
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Lol
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Wow. Great job, it reminds me of Aphrodite and Ares. 🙂
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Is that a book or a movie? I am not familiar with it.
Thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts.
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Greek mythology, Aphrodite and Ares are famous lovers. 🙂
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Gotcha.
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Reading this felt so real.
You are a very talented writer 🙂
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Very humbled by your lovely words. Thank you so much
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It was a pleasure 🙂
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Very clever.
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happy that you think so. Thank you for reading.
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Hello sur, i am new here loved ur work. I am also in transition to become a romantic writer please succor me in my endeavor.
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Thank you for your comment.
Honestly, ask me anything you want, I would be glad to help, but honestly, I am no teacher.
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Thank you sir for ur candid reply, I will be quite elated to learn by ur sude
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Thank you sir for ur candid reply, I will be quite elated to learn by ur side
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Thank you
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I loved this!
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So, happy that you do. Thank you for tasking the time out to read.
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Thank you so much John
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