pockets full of solitude
.
Pockets full of solitude
accompany me
down desolate streets
as I think of you
wrapped in the silence
of your room
Red lights taunt
Like school yard bullies
Your words haunt
Every step I take
Rushed into a dead end
I should have read
the signs
Trapped in darkness
I find solace
when I imagine
your loneliness
walking hand in hand
with mine
Oh my. I’m self-taught on the guitar, and first played in a garage band back in the days of the Beatles/Stones invasion. What a lyricist you would’ve made. Great stuff! 🙂
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I am so thrilled by this comment. Whenever I write poetry I always think that I would much prefer to write song lyrics.
Thank you so much for this comment. I will cherish it.
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Beautifully written!
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You are very kind. Thank you for saying that. I really appreciate it. Thanks.
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This is kinda emotional Drew 😢😢
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Pia, I like to mix things up. It can’t be constant bubbles and poetry, we must keep things fresh as well. I tapped into a little darkness toi pen this. Thank you so much for your words. They are appreciated.
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Darkness is always welcome Drew 😉😊
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Not in me heart. I try to keep it bright and full of hope.
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Then, I think we are opposites 😊
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Perhaps. I am all about love.
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This one tugs at the heartstrings, my friend. I sense so much compassion and empathy in this poem…as if you have pulled yourself away from your own world just for a moment to imagine and try to understand what the other person may be going through. I love the picture you picked, because it shows a person in very deep thought. Those nights when you need to go out and get some air and just think. You have no clue where you’re going and sometimes that leads you to those dead ends. This poem makes me think that your loneliness and situation is a mirror image, or parallel, of the person’s situation you are thinking of in this poem. Two separate lives in two different places going through the same woes of life. I also see the red lights as warnings and dead ends as a double meaning – one being you literally got lost in your thoughts and didn’t realize (see the signs) where you were going, but also symbolic of the decisions we sometimes make in life that seem to lead to disappointing dead ends. When we think of that person out there who has gone through the same thing, we feel that peace in those dark times that we are not alone (that loneliness walking hand and hand). This was such a very beautiful poem and I literally feel full reading this. Emotional and full of heart.
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Miss B, when and how do you crawl into my warped mind to come up with these amazing comments.
Yes, he is feeling empathy for a lady’s loneliness while traveling with his own. Honestly, I have had plenty of nights like you see in that image that you described so perfectly. One wanders aimlessly with no destinations. Hitting dead ends. Perhaps, subconsciously hoping to find a less lonely place.
The depth of your words and intuition is remarkable. It truly is. Your words on mirror images brought tears to my eyes. Ms Da Vinci you nailed one code after another.
The red lights and dead ends, the parallel lives, mirrored loneliness. Finally, the finding of peace with the thoughts of hand in hand. You didn’t just read this little poem, you immersed yurself in them.
Emotional and full of heart. That is such a veautiful thing to say. I am very grateful for your amazing breakdown. These comments made me think of an old song, hopefully you know the lyrics (edited just for you)……
I heard she sang a good song. I heard she had a style.
And so I came to see her and listen for a while.
And there she was, this young girl, a stranger to me eyes
Strumming my pain with her fingers………
Never serenaded anyone on my blog before. LOL . Truly grateful for your words. And the amazing way you so get me and my writing.
Thank you for your wonderful support and words. Honestly, this comment left me full of heart. Thank you.
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Wow! Your comment is just as heartfelt and beautiful as the poem itself. I’m so touched and I don’t know how I could ever respond properly to this… so I think I’m going to have to steal your style for this response, because there were so many beautiful things you said that I don’t want any of them to go unacknowledged. I’ll just list my responses. Lol.
1. Your mind is NOT warped! If I managed to crawl inside your mind and get out without any problems, then I should know. Lol. No seriously, I completely understand what you mean. It is like trying to find a less lonely place and not really realizing that’s what we’re doing. I guess maybe we experience loneliness so much that our minds and hearts just propel us in directions that we don’t understand sometimes, hoping that we’ll find that thing, or person, that fills the void. So, you’re not alone on the lonely nights, my friend.
2. Did I just unintentionally acquire a nickname? Lol. Ms. DaVinci it is then. (gives a salute). I feel every poet has a message they are trying to share in their poems, no matter how big or small it is. It would be an injustice to the time and effort they went through to just simply read, but never try to understand where those words came from and the history behind them. So that’s why I love reading poetry, even song lyrics. I love to know the why’s and the how’s of how they came to be. Yes we can read and say “oh, this is nice.”, but to immerse ourselves in the poem and feel what the poet feels is a different thing and you make that very easy to do with your poems. You are a very talented poet and I see your poems only becoming greater and greater as time goes by. 🙂
3. I can’t believe you quoted the words to a song I used to sing ALL THE TIME when I was younger. I haven’t performed it in a while, but seeing the lyrics instantly brought me back. One of my FAVE songs “Killing Me Softly”. Both the Roberta Flack and Lauryn Hill versions are incredible. Haha! I am honored to have had the opportunity to see you serenade on your blog! I don’t think we shall ever see this again, so you should be thankful there were no cameras filming this moment! LOL! 😆
You are very welcome for my words and thoughts on your poem, Mr. Andrew. Truly it was my pleasure to read such a heartfelt piece. I loved it and felt it and I’m sure others will agree that this is a beautiful extension of the beautiful heart you possess. Keep staying inspired and sharing your amazing gift and spirit with the world. You’re a light. Now, if you excuse me… I need to go jam to that song! LOL!
Much love to you!! 😊
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Seriously, I was thinking in terms of The Fabulous Ms. B. Sound too Vegas-y.
Thank you for all of the sweet words. They are appreciated. It is always a delight to interact with you.
Jam on.
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Lol.. You are very welcome, my friend. Always a pleasure to chat with you. 🙂
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great poem! my favorite is the third part.
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That is my favorite part as well. Happy you told me so. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your kind thoughts. I am very grateful.
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Happy to share my feedback. 🙂
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Grateful
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Your words are unparalleled when they talk of love and the other side of it – loneliness.
These lines…
“Every step I take
Rushed into a dead end
I should have read
the signs”
…are beautiful!
Haunting imagery. Really liked this one, Drew.
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Isha, your comments always leave me happy and sighing. Happy you pointed out that part. It was a little statment of us failing to read the signs (thsat could very well help us out of our lonely state).
Thank you always for your beautiful comments. They truly make my day, Grateful.
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Ah, I see. Like I said to you once earlier, your poems always have a bigger picture; more to the lines than meet the eye.
😊
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Smiling. Yes, you have told me that. Thank you for your kind and encouraging words.
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My pleasure, Drew.
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so good!
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Apprciate the time you took to read and comment. Thak you so much
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my pleasure 🙂
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Beautiful lines mate ✔️💯
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Very grateful for your read and lovely words. Happy you appreciated this poem. Thanks so much my friend.
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Pleasure always for ur words mate 😊
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Melancholic emotions oozing out here Drew. I loved the title, “Pockets full of Solitude!”.
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Your words make me so happy. Thrilled that you think so.
I agonized over the title, it means a lot that you told me that.
I feel as if I succeeded.
Thank you so much for your encouraging words. It really made my day.
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The pleasure is absolutely mine to read your splendid work, Drew. The title really appealed to me, as it is so unique and conveyed the essence of the poem in just a few words. Just perfect!!
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You are very kind. Thank you so much for your warm and encouraging words.
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I really feel this. Beautiful writing.
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Touched by your words. This was something different for me, so your comment really makes me happy. Thank you so much.
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Thats so lovely to read..Im glad..I really loved it 😊
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Flattered and happy. Thank you
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Such a wistful sentiment. Sometimes love just doesn’t work out the way you’d like. I can feel your sorrow in this one, Andrew. Hope things get better soon.
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Always leaving the comment that makes me feel so warm inside. Thank you for your kind words and wishes. They are greatly appreciated and cherished.
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We often miss signs and are left with pockets full of loneliness. Your words hauntingly echo the melancholy heart’s lament. Beautifully done, Andrew.
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Your words are so beautiful and so captures the essence of this little poem.
So many times we miss the signs that could lead us out of the loneliness.
Very grateful for you sharing your thoughts. Thrilled by your words.
Thank you
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I am glad you think so. It is always a pleasure to read your words.
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You are so kind. Thank you
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🙏
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🙏
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Will you please review my blog site thewizardnikhil.wordpress.com
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My friend, I dropped by your site to take a peek. I see you are anew blogger. Here is the best advice I can give you.
When I first started blogging; I went two weeks of blogging with only one follower. A little over two years later you see how many followers I have today. That happens by building relationships. Making friends. Being a good blogger. Reading other people’s content and commenting on it when you like it.
You arrived at my blog and made no comment about my post or writing. All you did was try to promote your blog.
That was not very socialable and honestly, a terrible introduction. If you continue to do this to other bloggerd you will not see much improvement in ther growth of your blog.
Read, comment, and engage. Get to know people and let them get to know you.
Blogging is about interaction.
Best of luck with your blog.
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Thank you for your valuable suggestions.
It’s not a formal comment but really your suggestion is valuable.
Thank you .
Love…
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Hope I didn’t offend you. But I learned from trial and error. Better to introduce yourself to bloggers by sharing your thoughts on a post. Trust me, they will be more than grateful and willing to go to your blog and learn more about you.
Best of luck
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Thank you.
I am not feeling offended by your comment but really I am feeling motivated you just told me about a precious rule, not only of blogging but of life. I too felt it that I often do the same in my life.
Really what you told me was valuable for me.
I will keep it in my mind till it will come to my habit.
Thank you very much.
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You arer welcome. And I will be dropping by your blog. Hopefully, we can be good blogging friends.
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You really write heart touching poems.
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Flattered. Thank you.
Just commented on one of your posts. It was very good.
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Believe me it was not flattering. I really like you poems since I started reading them.
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Thanks for saying that. Appreciate it
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Actually I have read just three of them.
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Thanks
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My dearest Lonely Author,
My heart is racing and breaking at the same time. This was so beautiful, such pure poetry from you. I felt every lonely heartbeat in your words, every drop of longing that you poured into each stanza. I wish I could give you more of my thoughts and how this made me feel . I’ve never read anything like this from you, it feels like a piece of you in verse. There is an entirely different aura around this pure heartbeat of words. I promise I’ll be back with more thoughts.
Everything I just said is directly from my teary poetic heart.
The last stanza may have just torn me into tiny fiery pieces.
❤️
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Fiery, your words give me such joy. Honeslty, I was afraid to post this piece. I felt it had a different feel (perhaps flow is a better word) to it. Had my doubts over whether it was post worthy.
Humbled by your words and reaction. Happy you liked that last stanza. t truly is the exclamamtion point of this whole piece. This person finding solace in the loneseome image….well, sigh.
Thank you for your wonderful words as always. Each and every one of them is a treasure. Very grateful for your support. xoxo
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You always have my support.
You should never doubt what you truly feel you want to post, and if you truly had doubted it, I know you wouldn’t have posted it. You were just apprehensive because yes, the flow was different to your other poems and I also think because it was from a deeper place that you don’t usually allow to come through in your poetry. But I think you can see from the countless reactions before me that this has touched everyone, regardless of your doubts.
When I first saw the title I only thought of pockets of solitude as in little pockets of time where we feel solitude. I love that I had that in mind when reading it and realising you were talking of actual pockets coming up empty , yet filled with longing and solitude.
I felt like there was rise and fall between the stanzas. Your first one started low and quiet with the image of two people feeling equal loneliness, wrapped in the silence of a room…what an image.
Then the second verse was like a crescendo of emotion, the ranting red light, the haunting words , the dead end and regret at not reading signs of impending lonely pain. That part was painful, truly the way you placed your words. And then there is a little breath of relief somehow in the last stanza, everything slows down again because though some things are inevitably going to cause pain, he finds solace in her loneliness holding his own by the hand. God what an achingly romantic image. I told you, this one felt so real and true it hurt but made me see beauty even in the most painful heartbeats .
So don’t ever doubt posting something when you know it has come from a true place . Everyone loves and needs to read such poetry
Love,
Fiery
❤️
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Perhaps, you are right. Maybe it wasn;t the flow that made me skeptical. This was a deeper peek into me than my usual write.
Grateful for your and everyone else’s reaction. Humbled really.
Little pockets of time. I thought the same thing too. Yes, longing and solitude. You read me so well.
Glad, I am so flattered by your beautiful words and breakdown of my poem. Truly grateful that you read me.
Thank you for the encouragement. You are wonderful. xoxo
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superb line ‘ walking hand in hand
with mine.”
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Very happy that you think so. Honestly, I loved those lines as well.
Thanks for reading and thank you for sharing your kind thoughts.
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you for sharing my little poem Ian. Grateful.
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Great Post my friend and all the pockets need is hope and that springs eternal in you …….
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This truly is a beautiful comment Ian. Happy you liked this poem.
And yes, hope is inside all of us. The thing we need to do is embrace it.
Thank you so much my dear friend.
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Humble at you reply ….. and glad you like it … that’s what means more to me … you make words leap off any page and enter the ❤️ with love
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Wow, Ian not even sure how to respond to this.
You have made my day to say the least. Thank you so much
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Great!
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Flattered that you think so. Thank you so much for saying that
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I really liked it very much!
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Thanks
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You are welcome!
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thank you so much for sharing this little poem
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Should, could… didn’t…
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Smiling. I love this. It so sums it up. Thank you for reading and the kind gesture of sharing it.
Very grateful for your wonderful support. Thank you.
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Our pleasure, really…
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Dear dew,every one has the pockets full of solitude may be he is in with any company or without having none.it is the matter of feeling.your way of finding solace is amazing”your loneliness walking hand in hand mine”.but you are not just alone.i think that your muse will be with you.may be so much distance between both cities but you can go there.if you will live in this way then will go far from world and become a philosopher.plz find your ballerina soon if you want to enjoy your life.you know that really miracle happens.i am hoping for that.how many days have passed for you lonely life.will you not try to fulfil my heartily wish?if you mind plz sorry.
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Aruna, this is a very touching comment you have left here. Yes, we all have our own pockets full of solitude. It is what we do to fill these empty pockets that determines how our life will go.
Perhaps, someone will come and fill those pockets. I have that hope. Me a philosopher? You made me smile.
I will search for my ballerina and muse. I promise you that my friend.
Thank you for this gorgeous comment and heartfelt wishes. I so appreciate them.
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Coz of a touch of melancholy,i am fearing about you to be a philosopher. But it is true dear that your mostly poem has a philosophic touch for the world.perhaps they all seem as a romantic n based on love.can romance n love not idealistic in philosophic’s attitude.plz reply.
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That is sweet of you Aruna. I am honored by your beautiful words. Thank you
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You are welcome forever,dew!!🌹🌹🌹
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Grateful always . xoxo
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Thanks,dew.!!
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Hey dear dew !! I have written on the topic”Lonely Pockets”given by you.plz read it and reply soon.is it written as you wanted?i am waiting for your reply.
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I will read it soon Aruna. Thank you for letting me know
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Hey dew!!where are you?
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Just came into the blog
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This is haunting, and beautiful in it’s sadness. However, I would hope those two lonelieness hands let go of one another to set each other free. Seems holding hands would just keep you in loneliess longer…..like a weight holding you down.
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Smiling. Your onsewrvation regarding the two lonelty hands was deep. Thrilled you liked this little poem. Very grateful for your comments. Thank you so much
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Romantically sad … i really like this one although it’s quite the change from where you’ve been lately! This one is pulling me to ‘say something’ although i don’t know what to say, so here’s my lame comment left in it’s place. 🙂 I guess this one was moving ….
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Smiling. You made me very happy with your words. I was afraid to post this because it had a different feel to it. I did want to post something a little different in order to avoid the poetry/blog becoming stale.
Your comment is far from lame. I am very grateful for your words. Thrilled that this oved you. Thank you for saying that.
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Well different or not this one felt more …. natural? Not sure if that rings true or it’s just me, but i enjoyed it very much. I enjoyed the feel, the flow of the words and imagery. 😀
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Thrilled that you said that. Thank you so much. I will not be afraid to try something different again. Happy you connected with this little poem. So happy. Thanks
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Urban nightmare captured so eloquently x
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Very flattered that you think so. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Grateful
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A world of bright lights and busyness, yet the solitude of the heart remains…the sign post stands guard…one way. You’ve captured everything just so. Your words feel quiet and a little bit lost right to the finish when even solace easing though it may be hints at something more. Very beautiful Andrew.
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The world of bright lines can exacerbate the solitude.
I love your comment. You are so generous with your words. The poet was lost. Very observant of you.
Thank you for your lovely words.
I appreciate each and every one of them. ⚘
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Yes, they so often do.
You are so very welcome. 🌷
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⚘
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For me, it was really sad. It tugged my heart strings.
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Grateful for your thoughts. Yes, this piece was sad. Thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it so much
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Most welcome😊
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You’re a true artist Andrew! This poem is brilliant. It’s hard to explain how I interpret, but I guess the lonely thoughts have become so routine that they are comforting.
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LauraJ you are so kind. Humbled by your beautiful words. And I hope you don’t mean “lonely thoughts” that you have. That would be terrible.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Very grateful for your words.
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Funnily enough, I’m planning to write a post later on lonliness in young people and how it’s growing across the world.
You’re most welcome by the way 🙂
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I agree with you. In a strange way, social media has disconnected people. More young people are engaged in social media connections instead of making closer connections at home. It is a growing problem. I look forward to reading it.
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I’ve published the piece, but I’ve wrote that technology is not the main cause of loneliness. Apparently it’s our over-working society (according to Psychology Today).
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Just read it and commented. Well if it is the overworking society, that explains why so many Americans are feeling lonely. Sadly, so many of us live to work.
Thanks
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The minute I replied, I saw that you had already read it. Will reply to your comment now 🙂
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LOL
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Its the wrong time of the year to feel down..Im’ feeling the same way Andrew..and trust me it f/in sucks
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Sorry to hear this. It is the wrong time of year for these kind of thoughts. The holidays have a way of compounding loneliness.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Grateful for your words.
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Such a powerful piece, my friend.
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Grateful that you think so. Thank you so much for your beautifully supportive words.
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Of course, my friend.
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One of my favorites. Beautifully melancholy.
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Grateful for your lovely and kind words. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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There are writers who fall in love just by slipping our eyes by their words, by breathing their phrases, by tasting the metaphors that are among their lyrics … And you are one of them … 🌹😘😊
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So humbled by your wonderful words. They are so inspiring. You are very generous with your compliments, Very grateful for this beautiful footprint you left on my blog.
Thank you so much. You made this a special day
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Sorry if my English is not very correct 🤔😊
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I understood everything. It was beautiful. Very grateful for your words.
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Wonderfully expressed and painful sentiment. It is unfortunate that only after feeling the fiery splendor of romantic love do we feel a new level of solitude when than flame burns out.
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Very grateful for your read and kind words. The splendor of love and the sadness of solitude, sometimes they go hand in hand my friend.
The flame is still burning bright, Distance and time are the culprit of thesefeelings of loneliness.
Very appreciate of your thoughts. Thank you so much
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Drew, your poetry never fails to give me all the feels.
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Humbled by your touching words. Thank you so much. I don’t know how to respond to you. Thank you. Grateful.
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“Red lights taunt
Like school yard bullies”. – just temporary stops my friend. Journey continues.
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Yes, the journey continues. Thank you for your words of encouragement, So appreciated.
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Drew,
This piece was beautifully written. Truly enjoy reading your posts. You are extremely talented.
Harmony
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Humbled by your wonderful words. Very happy that you liked this poem. You are generous with your comments. Grateful.
Thank you for your kindness.
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Aw… Drew, the beauty of this poem hurts. but what beauty does not hurt? Your words are splendid solitude and magic. Two melting into one (hand in hand)
Superb!
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Very grateful G. Thank you for your lovely words. Beauty does hurt. Love does too.
Thank you so much. Have an inspiring day
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I know.
May your muse be with you. Check you pockets!
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LOL . Good one.
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🙂
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😁
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You’re so good
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You are so kind. Thank you so much for your kind words. Very grateful.
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Most lovely lines”wrapped in darkness i find solace when i imagine your loneliness walkinkig hand to hand with mine.”🌹most beautiful imagination.you are lucky number one.dear dew!! I think that in this world,everyone has pocket full of solitude,may be he is in company of others or none.it is depended only one’s feelings.you are amazing poet to inspire others.most lovely your poem.i am feeling that is expression of my heart feelings.🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you for your wonderful words. SO happy you liked my poetry. Happy too that I inspired you. Write about lonely pockets my friend.
Thank you
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Okay.dear!! I will try to write on lonely pockets.plz give me some times.dew!!
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No problem Aruna. Let me know when you do it
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Thanks ñ most welcome,dew!!
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Hey dew!! I have written the poem on your topic”lonely pockets”.
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I will read your poem soon. Thank you for letting me know
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Plz reply soon-how is this poem?.i am waiting.
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I will
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What will you do?do you remember about your topic?dear!!
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i commented on your beautiful poem lonely pockets
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But where had you commented on my lonely pockets.?here is not your any comment.
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Dear dew!!where is your comment?
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Dear dew!! Here is your only liking.a lot of thanks for writing a poem on your topic like a puppets.😉
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A turnaround from your “bubbly” piece.
These should be my words when I get stuck in traffic, though, “Red lights taunt Like school yard bullies”
If I see a red light up ahead, it causes panic in me.
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Trying to keep things fresh. It can’t be pink fluffy clouds and bubbles all of the time.
Well, if you see a red light, gently hit the brakes.
Thank you for your lovely words. Mucho appreciated.
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Sometimes I don’t want to stop and just keep going 😉
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LOL . Be careful
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Splendid!!
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Very grateful Lity. Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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😮wow
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Thank you for taking the time out to read and share your thoughts. Appreciate it.
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Beautiful.
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Very grateful Alexa. Thank you
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Remembering when caught up in our darkest moments, that there is always someone sharing your pain. The discomfort is diminished because you aren’t living it alone. This brings a sense of peace. These words go very deep, right into your soul. At a time of year when loneliness is the unfortunate reality of so many, I see so much love in this! It speaks of the power, of human connection.
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Your comments ae very deep. A most empathetic and beautiful commentary. Yes, sometimes we can find solace in knowing we are not alone in our pain.
This time of year can exacerbate the feeling of loneliness.
I am flattered by the beauty of your words. A most poetic comment. There is so much power in the human connection. Not surprised that your heart
could see and feel that. Let me shower you with bubbles of gratitude. Thank you for your amazing words.
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You’re welcome. As you can see I was very touched by this beautiful poem. So full of intense meaning. Now you have made me smile again with this lovely comment. Thank you! Stay inspired Andrew, can’t wait to read more ❤
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Thanks for saying that. Humbled and grateful
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These are such strong images…I can “see” them; those bullies, the desolate streets, the dead end. Wonderful stuff.
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Humbled by your beautiful words. Your words thrill me. Grateful for each and every one of them. Thank you
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
HE JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER—MORE CONCISE , ZEROING IN ON HIS TARGET! WONDERFUL ANALOGIES HERE!
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Smiling. Humbled by your amazing words John. You are so supportive. Thank you for all that you do for me and so many others. Always appreciate your visits. Thank you
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Have made mention of you to a certain poetess. Be watching!
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Smiling. Thank you. A very inspiring poetess. I have learned so much reading her work.
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HEY MAN—I happened to mention your work to Holly Hunter, at House off heart. She may…stop by to see what you are doing! I said you and she aren’t exact, but have similar styles.I have, over the years, pointed a number of poets in her direction…or her attention to them! 🙂
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Very grateful for that John. Holly truly is one of the best. A very inspiring poet. She is always welcome here.
Your kind words, support, and generosity have been a wonderful light above my blog.
Thank you
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Just call me…Barnabas!
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Far yet near….. although in imagination but when togetherness can not connect …. loneliness does ……. Such profound words .. ..love the depth of this
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Exactly, Many comments have suggested some kind of loss here. Not at all. Distance and separation can be just as painful. Thank you for your insightful words. Oh Wise One, you get me. Thank you for that.
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So happy to get the essence right 😊…….loved reading it …… smiling
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Smiling as well
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I appreciate this excursion to the shadow-side of life. Especially like the analogy between the red lights and the schoolyard bullies…and that you mention how connecting to another person´s (imagined or real) loneliness can make one feel part of the human species again, and whole (maybe?) for a while.
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I love your analysis. Connection to someone real or imaginary can help us feel a part of the world again. Thank you for sharing your amazing thoughts. Grateful for your time and words.
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Yes, very much so…words have such healing power, when used with the intent of doing so…such as it is mirrored in your work. Thanks for that! You use your words with the love and respect that words deserve:)
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You continue to humble me. Thank you. I love love and words. I try to respect both as much as i can. Thanks
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De corazon. Same here. Great to find a kindred word-and-love-lover- spirit.
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De corazón???
Smiling. Gracias por tus hermosas palabras
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Si claro, soy mitad españolita jeje. De nada. O de na, como decimos en Andalucía. Gracias a tí, poeta.
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Españolita encantadora. Espero que tengas una noche lleno de inspiracion y amor.
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Oh que bonito!! Muchísimas gracias. Ahora claro que la voy a tener! Te deseo lo mismo, y que no te sientas perdido por alguna calle si no conectado con las almas de los amantes del amor que viven en castillos de palabras de poesia. Jaja, disculpa si no logro captivar suficiente magia en español, no es el idioma en que habitualmente escribo. Hasta prontito:)
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Lo captaste hermosamente con tus palabras.
El inglés es mi verdadero idioma nativo.
Soy de padres Cubanos, pero yo nací aqui en Nueva York.
Ha sido un placer charlar contigo.
Hasta la proxima.
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Muchas gracias. Ah vale, que interesante! Has ido a Cuba alguna vez? Te sientes conectado con tus raizes? El placer es todo mio. Hasta la proxima, y tomate tu tiempo en contestar, si quieres, aqui ya es de noche de todas maneras:)
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I am thinking of traveling to Cuba in 2019 or 2020. I waqnt to see the island my parents came from.
Have a beautiful day. And the pleasure was all mine.
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Sounds like a really good plan! In my opinion, it can provide many unexpected insights and beautiful (inner) connections to explore one´s roots. It will surely be very inspirational! Que disfrutes tu día tambien. Ya falta menos para que los días se llenen mas de luz!
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Thank you. exploring one’s roots can lead to so many enlightening things. Very grateful for your words.
Be well.
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Thanks Drew, you too:)
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Love it! I feel like I was reading the lyrics of a song! I really love it!
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Flattered by your comments. Thanks for saying that. Grateful that you took out the time to read and share your thoughts.
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