pockets full of solitude
.
Pockets full of solitude
accompany me
down desolate streets
as I think of you
wrapped in the silence
of your room
Red lights taunt
Like school yard bullies
Your words haunt
Every step I take
Rushed into a dead end
I should have read
the signs
Trapped in darkness
I find solace
when I imagine
your loneliness
walking hand in hand
with mine
Lovely Drew. Although, I think there is a huge difference between loneliness and solitude. To me, solitude denotes a peace within yourself, happy with your own company.
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Interesting thoughts Linda. Having no family, I have often found myself alone for the holidays.
In other years I have felt profound loneliness.
This year I am alone, but not depressed.
I like your definitions.
Thank you for sharing your treasured thoughts.
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My pleasure, always.
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A beautifully composed, lovely lyrical poem! Well done, Drew! You say so much in so few lines. I actually love and crave solitude, introvert that I am. I definitely need some time by myself each day to think, write and pray. Though being lonely is quite different from being alone by choice, of course. 😊
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Yes, loneliness and being alone are quite different. I too treasure alone moments where I can write and reflect.
Thank you for your lovely words. They delivered a smile to my face. Your words are always treasured here. Thank you
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I loved this! And it’s so true that there is a difference between loneliness and solitude. One is a choice you can live with while the other is sometimes forced upon you or beyond your control. Beautiful poetry as usual 🙂
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Flattered by your kind words. Yes, there is a difference. There are may hours in the dayt where I treasure my alone time. Then, there are other times…….
Thank you for your encouraging words. I appreciate each and every one of them.
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You’re more than welcome :). I’m thrilled that you found my words encouraging. And I know exactly what you mean about the treasured alone times and those other times…
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I guess most of us know them.
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This is so very beautiful!
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Made me tingle! 💕💕💕
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Smiling. Do I really have that affect on you? Oh, you mean the poem. Thank you.
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You and your words, DEFINITELY have that affect on me! ALWAYS and in ALL WAYS! 💋
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Smiling. You are amazing
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It’s easy to seem amazing when you are floating on another’s Brilliant words and spirit.
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Flattery…..it works. xoxo
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I SURE hope so! 🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼
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xoxo
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Same. ❤
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You are very kind. Thank you for saying that
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Drew, you never cease to amaze me with your power to relate with readers and make them feel your characters emotions, bringing them into your world. Mind blowing.
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Roy, I have two sets of replies to this.
First, very grateful for your words. They inspire and motivate. Always cherish your comments.
Second, LOVE how you said the character’s emotions. Not once assuming it was me I was writing about. You are a treasure.
Soprry, for the late anniversary message, it has been a challenging week, and I am beginning to catch up on blogging reading.
You and Ms Sparkling. Seriously, you guys give me hope. Thank you for that
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Drew, your comments are the best my friend and can light up the darkest of days. They too are also inspiring! And the way you write, I will always assume that you are bringing your readers into the world of the art and not you because that’s how poetry can be done, relating to the reader and you do that so well🌹.
Better late than never is my saying, your wishes are so appreciated and I hope your challenging week becomes easily manageable my friend. Catch up when you can, we know you are here for us.
She is amazing and thank you for your kind words, we are merely trying to give each other hope also🌹, you help us with that my friend by your support.😊
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Thyere is always hope. And the two of you give ther rest of us a dose of beautiful writing and hope as well.
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Thank you my friend as you do to the two of us🌹
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Lol, love this.
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Smiling. Thank you. Happy that you do.
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Yes, the ending was best, seriously.
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Very grateful. Thank you for saying that
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You are so very talented with your words. I enjoy how you are able to write what you want while painting the words on the page with such beauty. The flow/your style is always nice.
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You are so kind. Very flattered by your words. Thank you for saying that. Grateful.
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I learn from you so thank you for being great always.
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Aaaaw that is sweet
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😊 You’re welcome. My pleasure. Thank you.
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OMG! I so get this! Have you seen my header on Queen’s end?
https://queensend.wordpress.com/ It is your poem, in a different pic.
Love this!
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I will check it out
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The woman in the sidewalk with the hot stockings. I so get it.
Laughing, Although I really dig the stockings.
I get your pic. When lonely hiot the streets.
Do it all the time.
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😀 TY, Lonely! That is a pic of me… about 4 years ago. I really do hit the streets and the alleys. It’s where I feel at home, when I’m not at home.
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Sorry, for the delay in my response. I had to go back and look at the pic. Wow
I am the same. Sometimes I just walk around looking for inspiration.
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It’s a wonderful thing. One can be alone, with his or herself.
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Wonderfully poignant!
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Thank you so much. Appreciate it my friend.
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Very “Amsterdam-ish” piece! Red lights, lonely girl, full pockets of…how much exactly? :))
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LOL . Oh good one. Appreciate this comment.
You mean they don’t take ATM cards?
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They take EVERYTHING… now I feel something is wrong with this poem, because what kind of pockets if he left without trousers? (cards, cash, strength, mind)
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LOL . Maybe it was Speedos
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Speedos with pockets? 🙂 nope, guys in speedos full of something else* (instead of solitude). Something else* is easy to find on each corner in Amsterdam 🙂
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LOL . Don’t want to see the something else. I much rather stick to what I already know
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Yeah…let’s stick to speedos. Safer that way 🕺🕺👀😂
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LOL
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your loneliness
walking hand in hand
with mine
What a wonderful line and thought! I relate to your poem as those silent conversations that seem to continue with whom there is no more continued communication. Somehow those silent conversations are comforting. Beautiful poem as always.
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Your words are so beautiful. Those silent conversations do bring comfort, just as many memories and dreams do. Thank you for rading and for sharing your thoiughtful words.
Appreciate it my dear friend
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May I share with you a link to a poem of mine with the same title? Your poem reminded me of that.
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Of course. I would be glad to read it.
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Here it is 🙂
https://pragalbhadoshi.wordpress.com/2017/09/08/silent-communication/
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Thank you.
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Another amazing poem, Drew. I love the ending despite the solitude.
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Smiling. Thank you for ytour lovely words. Truly appreciate them
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Wonderful contrast dealing with an issue by ourselves and with someone beside us.
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Smiling. Love your breakdown. Thanks Frank.
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You’ve got a way with words that’s so captivating and mind blowing.
Late night strolls in the glow of the city lights always brings out the dreamer in me, it can be such a beautiful experience to be alone with oneself discovering and exploring the hidden paths in our soulful hearts.
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Such a beautiful comment. Ye, I do that often during lonely hours. Enjoying the lights, city vibes, and traffic. I often find inspiration there.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts,
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My pleasure
Yep we are definitely alike who knew.
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Smiling. Who knew
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Your loneliness walking hand in hand with mine. This poem brought tears into my eyes. What a beautiful emotional and moving post. Took my heart away🤗
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Sona, you are very sweet. Thank you for sharing your reaction to this little poem. Very grateful for your words.
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Lovely 😀
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Delighted that you think so. Thank you
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The last verse is particularly beautiful
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Thank hou Derrick. Appreciate it. It was my favorite.
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’Tis a bit sad, Sire. I can sense the loneliness. Great job on writing about it.
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Humbled by your words Winnie. Than you so much for your kindess. Your comments are gems you sprinkle over my blog.
Always appreciated.
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That’s a nice thought, Drew. Gems! My pleasure always, Drew.
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Thank you for sharing yur thoughts. Grateful for your read and words.
Sorry, for the late response. I took a blogging break for a few weeks,
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The last few lines make me ponder the question: can two people be together and still be lonely? And I’ve always found that answer to be yes. I think it’s one of Life’s most painful things, to be with someone you might care about a lot and still feel lonely, Anyway, I don’t think that’ the message you were trying to convey with your poem, but that’s the trail of thought your poem led me on 😅
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All poetry is up to interpretation. So there is no wrong answer or meaning. I have known many couples who are lonely together. That may be worse than being alone. Honestly, I am a clown and very big on communication, so I never really experienced that. Lucky me.
Happy rerad ans ashared your thoughts. Always enlightening to hear what a poem means to someone else. Thank you for your words. Grateful.
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So beautiful my brother! I am rarely truly alone except in my thoughts. This year I am an odd mixture of loneliness and solitude. I have a big family on my side and hubby ‘s and three sons who live close so lots of caring and comfort. I’m afraid none of it will truly reach the emptiness inside right now but that’s okay. Time will heal and I will regain my spirit and my independence and laughter. Wishing you a warm and wonderful Christmas, Drew. Hope Santa is good to you…
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I am sure you will have the company of family with you around the holidays, but it will not be enough. I am certain you will still feel alone.
My heart goes out to you. Nothing I can say will ease yourt pain. Please take good care of yourself. I pray you will be well.
Wishing you peace and comfort . BUG HUGS
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The personification in the last stanza is wonderful!
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Very happy you think so. Thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts. I appreciatge it my friend
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Thank You! I am speechless on how close to home this hits so I know it’s quite simple with a million emotions behind it, Thank You! For sharing this
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Very humbled by your words. Sorry, that this hits close to home. I wouldn’t wish this on anyone.
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Be well.
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Same to you ((hugs))
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Hugs
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Somehow two lonelies can make one whole 🙂
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That is so beautifully and poetically true. Thank you for these beautigul thoughts you have shared.
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Immensely beautiful. Loved each line from the beginning till end. So subtle.
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I am so grateful and flattered by your beautiful comment.
Thank you for taking the time out to read and share your thoughts.
It is so appreciated.
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The pleasure was totally mine.
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Wow! Your words captured the feel of a 2 a.m. Sunday morning so perfectly with the descriptions and the feelings too!
Bellissimo, Drew Bellissimo!!
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Chuck, you so flatter me with your gorgeous comments.
Funny, you should say that, this was written during one of my late night strolls
Thank you so much my friend.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Don’t Miss Drew’s great poem – POCKET FULL OF SOLITUDE!!
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Thanks Chuck
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I love the imagery of the street. Beautiful ode to loneliness. ♥.
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I can’t help but think of you when I wrote this. I asked myself, how many times has she walked alone wishing she could feel a connection that is no longer there.
It got me all treary eyed. Thank you for sharing yur thoughts. Be well.
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Dear Andrew thank you so much for your kind thoughts. You are so compassionate and intuitive. I’m really touched by what you wrote.. So grateful to know you. *warm hugs* and love, ♥. Niki
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Always very grateful for your words, support, and friendship.
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As I am for yours. 💕
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xoxoxo
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I seek Solitude, Drew, for it comforts me in ways that it enables me to Connect beyond this dimension. Loneliness on the other hand, I do not seek, yet at times it does seek me. The Holidays are at times tough for me yet above all else I still do have choices to bring happiness to myself despite the loneliness that knocks at my Inner Door. Love the imagery in your poem. Thank you. 💝
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Loneliness and solitude are two different things. I welcome solitude.
I find inspiration during those moments.
I hate to think a person as sweet as you could ever feel lonely.
Thank you for your kind words. They inspire me to write on. Thank you
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The way my life is structured today, Drew, tends to draw loneliness to me which I really must fight off. Little by little I’ve accepted my life as it is right now knowing this too shall pass. Life can be very complicated and uncomfortable at times. Most especially during these times, we have learning opportunities by the bundle, if we but choose to see them.
I’m humbled to know I inspire you to write on. Thank YOU! XOXO
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Sorry, life is drawing loneliness to you. Honestly, the same happens to me. And this time of year makes it worse.
Your words bring warmth and comfort. Thank you. XOXO
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I will pray for you. I am determined that this year I will not get blue! SO many I have lost and one baby just recently. God help me, that takes a toll. I must focus on the positive side of life. Shall we do so together? XOXO (Go see my latest post that you missed. That in of itself should get your inner child playing! It’s called Dazzle Diamonds). BIG SMILE! 😉
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Oh, I have had so many holidays alone, I am numb to the loneliness.
Thank you for your prayers. I will do the same for you as well. Sorry for your losses. It makes it so difficult this time of year.
We must always focus on the beauty of life as you always do with your camera.
Loved the post. It was amazing.
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💞💞💞
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xoxoxo
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I love how you portray the feeling of being in solitude but not lonely. Love and the yearning of the heart give us solace more than the room filled with people. Beautiful words, Andrew.
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What a beautiful and amazing comment. There is a big difference between loneliness and solitude.
Thank you so much for your hjumbling words. They are so appreciated.
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My pleasure Andrew.Your words were the inspiration
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Thanks for saying that
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Such poetic eloquence! Marvelous!
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You are so kind to me. Thank you for this gorgeous comment. It is so apprciated
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AOC is only part of all of the love that you receive. Therefore, you know you’re good! Thumb up!
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Thank you so much for reading and for saying that.
Appreciate your kind words.
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One may gravitate toward many perspectives with this one, as I’m sure is the intention, like that of all great pieces of poetry. Personally, I interpret this as one whom has found himself at the unexpected end of his relationship, and had he took the time to see beneath the surface of things, then perhaps, it could have been prevented. Though, now the realization has hit him, he has also discovered her pain and loss from this will be the burden he will carry also. Thank you for sharing your great poem, it was a terrific read.
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Humbled by your lovely words. Thnak you.
Love your interpretation. That is the wonderful thing about poetry. One poem can have a thousand interpretations.
Thank you fore your very lovely read and for sharing your thoughts. Your comments always encourage me to write on.
Thnak you
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You’re very welcome.
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“Your loneliness walking hand in hand with mine” was my undoing. Goodness, such emotive writing in so few words.
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Undoing….no one has ever said that to me. Grateful for your words.
Thank you so much. Very touched.
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This is beautiful drew..
I feel each word in all its’ heaviness filled with hope..
Much like love can be..
You are gifted with writing
Love it 😊
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Yes, like can be exactly like that. Happy you enjoyed this. The words actually camer to me during a late night lonely stroll.
Very grateful for your words.
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It’s so perfect 💕
Those lonely moments can be cleansing and somehow freeing😊
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That is so true. Those lonely moments can be rejuvenating.
Thank you
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Always my pleasure 😀
I enjoy your words
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Echos of stillness, reflection and bittersweet solitude. I love it, beautifully written! x
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Humbled by your beautiful words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this little poem
I so appreciate your words.
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Love the imagery and rhythm, Drew. These can be great lyrics for a musician!
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You thrilled me with these comments. Thank you so much for saying that, I often write my poems thinking of music and worried about how they flow.
Your words touched me. Thank you
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That is deep!! I loved it.
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Smiling. Very grateful for your read and words. Thank you so much
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I’m intrigued by that ending image of the two hands intertwined in loneliness–united by loneliness itself perhaps. Great poem!
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Yes, united by their loneliness. A sad, but heartwarming thought. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate th klind gesture of support.
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great work … you know how to touch us 🙂
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Very grateful for your kind words. Thank you so much.
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you’re most welcome
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As always, a good, and even great poem. But I could not understand:
‘I imagine
your loneliness
walking hand in hand
with mine’
How can he be lonely if and when he is/was walking with You, that too hand in hand?
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Smiling. I said two loneliness walking hand in hand.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts my friend,
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🙂
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yeah, loneliness never walks alone…
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Smiling. No it doesn’t. Thank you.
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Aha…the last few lines… it seems the loneliness is tangible…
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Grateful that you liked it.
Thank you for your kindness and read.
Hope your 2019 s full of happiness and love
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Welcome. Wish you a wonderful 2019 ahead… 🙂
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Thank you. All the best for you in 2019
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Reblogged this on Change The Code.
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Thank you for the kind gesture of reblogging my post. I appreciate it.
I was away from my blog for the holidays. Hope your holiday season went well.
May 2019 be a year of warmth and happiness for you and everyone you love.
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My pleasure and same to you.
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Thanks
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Merry Christmas Friend! Wish you and your family the best time this year and may you have a blessed New Year as well! – Sherline 🙂
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Thank you Sherline. Sorry for my late reply. I had too many messages pile up on me during my holiday blogging break.
Thank you for your very kind words and wishes.
Wishing you and yours a warm, inspiring, and wonderful 2019 full of love.
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No worries 😁
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Awesome
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Happy you liked it. Thank you for your comment.
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Goodness, goodness!! You have so many comments here! How do you keep up? Do you have a full time secretary? No way you can be lonely with soooo many admirers here!! And I can see why. Very beautiful, heart-felt post! I’ll be back. ❤
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Haha
It is difficult at times. A bit overwhelming answering the comments. I am lucky to have a wondefrful following of very loyal bloggers.
Thank you for your kind words. They are treasures here on my blog. Very grateful for you sharing your thoughts.
Sorry, for the late response, I took a bloggin break over the holidays.
Hope you had a warm and festive season.
Wishing you and youjrs all the best in 2019
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Power #Solidarity
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So true. Thanks for reading.
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Oh, that closing is such a bittersweet turn. More sweet than bitter, with just a touch of hope. x
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Yeah, I always try to leave a little hope, Thank you for reading and for your lovely words.
Happy you shared your thoughts. Thank you.
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Whew. Wow. The final verse is a comforting thought to have, isn’t it? Until you realise it’s not much of a comfort…
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Haha . Your comment made me laugh. It is and isn’t comforting.
Thank you so mcuh for reading.
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Hi thelonelyauthor, It’s been a while… I missed your “food for your soul-poems”. Love it, love it. Your are great! Every time I read them, I’m thirsty for more! Thank you 🙂
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So, grateful for this beautiful message.
Maria, I was on vacation in the Dominican Republic when the padnemic outbreak occurred. The island
went on lockdown and I couldn’t get out. All of this happened while my doctors wanted to give me
emergency heart surgery. Yes, the lockdown continued and flighht after flight were canceled.
I finally got back to the United States last week. And my heart procedure will be tomorrow.
Smiling. That was a lot.
I just wanted you to know I will be gone for a while to recover.
It is wonderful to reconnect with you. Hope you and everyone you love are well.
Please, be careful.
again, thank you for your beautiful message.
It is appreciated
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