music in your voice
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There is music in your voice
like a summer breeze
so warm and tender
that rustles through my leaves
surrounding me in splendor
There is music in your voice
like a love song
my heart will forever remember
for you are the gentle wind chimes
to which I will always surrender
What a beautiful surrender, Drew! Soft like silk; wondrous like the murmur of a summer breeze which makes wind chimes sing. May you always love and surrender like this!
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Good morning. I see you were here early.
What a pleasant surprise.
A beautiful inspiring comment. Glad you liked this little thing.
May love always ring in your heart and soul.
Thank you. Have a glorious day.
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Good morning, Drew. Yes, I was here very early reading your wonderful verses.
May you have an inspiring day!
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May day will be inspiring. Just read your latest poetic painting
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words 🙂
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My pleasure
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🙂
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😊
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Wow! So well penned ❤️.. i love it 💞👏
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Flattered and grateful that you do. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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You’re welcome!
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An extract from a love letter, such an enchanting one..
It plays in my ears, like a melodious love song..
These are the words which spontaneously emerged in my mind, while collecting the pieces of your heart here.. amazed..!! 😇😇
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You are so generous with your words. Happy you liked it. Your reaction made my day.
Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your beautiful and encouraging thoughts.
They are appreciated.
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😇😇
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😊
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Poetry made music.
Saludos desde España, swingers-lifestyle.
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Saludos. Gracias. You are very kind with your comments. Much appreciated.
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“my heart will forever remember” – not going to forget your muse, will you?
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No, she is not easy to forget. Smiling. Thank you for yur read and words. Much appreciated.
#mymusecan’tbeforgotten
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And this shall bring back a little rhythm in my words …..your work is always inspiring
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You are very sweet and generous with your words. Thank you so much for saying that. I always appreciate your thoughts.
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Ah, the magic and music of enchanting voices, captured so beautifully in rhyme! I’m sure every reader can relate to this is some way!
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Yeah, I bet everyone has a voice that rings so beautifully to their ear. Flattered by your gorgeous words. Thank you so much Isha.
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wow – What I can say…“Music gives a soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination and life to everything.”
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Yes, muse can do all of that and so much more. Thank you for your enoucaring words. They are truly appreciated. Thanks.
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Beautiful! And the last two lines are just 🤗❤️❤️
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Flattered by your words. Delighted you liked this little poem. Thank you for reading and sharing your lovely thoughts. It means so much.
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The pleasure is all mine! Your words are such a treat to read. 😊
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You are too sweet. Thanks
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😊🤗
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Ah, I feel the ‘gentle wind’ and hear her sweet music here!! 🙂
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Grateful for your very lovely and encouraging comment. You made me smile. Thank you so much for your lovely words.
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My pleasure, Andrew!! 🙂
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Thank you so much for your generous and kind share Ian. It is greatly appreciated.
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If music be the food of love play on Andrew …….🎼❤️
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Smiling. Thank you Ian. One can feast on music music and love
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Truly welcome Andrew ….your a wordsmith ⭐️
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Thanks
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Splendid! I am never bored of reading your blogs.😋👍👍
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You are very kind and generous with your words. Flattered youm say that. Thank you so much
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You deserve it all.😊😊
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You are very kind. Thank you
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A beautifully poetic tune I can certainly relate to my friend. This is a musically marvelous piece of writing Drew.🌹🌹. Loved it!
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Very grateful and flattered by your words Roy. Love and music go hand in hand. And the right voice whispering in your ear…..sigh.
Why am I telling you this. You already know all about it. lol . Thank you so much for your words. They are always appreciated.
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The pleasure is all mines my friend Drew, your words are amazing and yes, love and music go hand and hand creating the perfect dance in life.
The music in my ear…..sigh, yes…the breath, the dance, the touch and the glance is all felt. We feel your beautiful words and I can relate.😊. All the more beauty in it. You are appreciated by us!🌹🌹
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Smiling. Have a good one my friend
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Keep doing that my friend😁. You have a good one too!
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Thanks
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Well done … and wow … she has quite the figure.
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Thank you so much.
She does have an alluring figure. Don’t think I hadn’t noticed. lol
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LOL … well … it immediately caught my attention and distracted me while reading.
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It took me quite a while to have this post set in WordPress because I kept stopping to admire her. LOL
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I know you’ve titled it music but I get the picture of a mighty Oak in fall, surrendering its leaves to the cool fall breeze!
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That is so cool. The wonderful thing about poetry one poem can mean a hundred things to a hundred people.
I see why you see that. Since you mentyioned it, I see it myself. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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You’re welcome! I’m glad you were open to the idea! *grin*
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Your blog is doing so gooooodddd!!! Amazing!
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Smiling. I am very lucky to have some great followers. Thank you for the compliment
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Most welcome ☘️
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What an enchanting and gorgeous poem you created once again! I find it perfectly captures the magic that lies in being touched by a person´s undeniable essence, by their unique radiance and their irreplaceable splendor… I really love this poem! Wonderful work…I can almost see two souls merging when I read these lines. Stunning!
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What a gorgeous comment. Very grateful you see and feel that in tis poem. So flattered Amiga.
Thank you so much for your generous words. You made my day.
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You are very welcome amigo, am just voicing what your lines inspire and what my heart dictates me to write 🙂 Abrazote
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Smiling. Thank you. Abrazos.
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Smiling back 🙂 Abrazos
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This lovely poem is a song in itself!
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That is very sweet of you to say that, Thank you for reading and for your lovely words. Mucho appreciated.
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A lovely poetic song to greet the day! Thanks for the smile I’m wearing after reading your words!
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Thank you for your very lovely words. They are appreciated.
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Very nice… the photo works really well with this!
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Thank you so much for your lovely words. Grateful for your read and words.
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You are welcome!
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Romantic and fountain of good vibes. 🙏
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Thank you so much. Appreciate your kind words Lity
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You are welcome Andrew
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What a beautiful poem.
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Very grateful you think so. Thank you so much my friend
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My absolute pleasure
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I love this, my Lonely Author.
So soft and intimate
There is something close to magic and music about a special voice in your ear. The effect it can have on the heart and body is indescribable. The touch that it leaves on you long after you’ve heard it…
So much can be known about a person and their feelings for you and yours for that person, through their voice.
And I’m pre-warning you now to take my compliments and not start with your usual nonsense…but this is one of your most tender and soft poems, in my humble little opinion anyway, and the love you placed in it was so careful and delicate, as though you didn’t want to break something precious and you just breathed a little poetry onto it.
And your choice of where to place and whisper the words Forever and Always to your reader in the last stanza, was perfect.
Something about that word ‘surrender’ that just… with a gentle little force shuts my mouth and only allows me to say mmm..
And sigh. Always.
Love,
Fiery
❤️
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Oh, Fiery. Very grateful for your words. I will have to agree with you here. This probably was one of my most tender writes.
For some reason the first stanza reminded me of “the wind is my voice.” Had that same kind of soft feel to it.
There is something magical about the whispers of the right voice in one’s ear. It may eventually fade, but it never goes away.
Pre-warning noted. LOL . Love how you said it was if I didn’t want to break something precious. Awesome freakin’ comment.
I had so much angst over forever and always. I flip flopped them several times. This post had over 25 edits because of their placement and decideing if they belonged there. So your comment is greatly appreciated.
As for surrender, I don’t think I ever used that word in anything that I have written. It just seemed so perfect there. A feeling os total melting, being lost in a feeling of blissfullness.
Grateful for your words. Thank you so much Fiery. Mucho appreciated.
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Ah….sigh. You do NOTHING to stop this little crush of mine. Shame on you.
What’s a Fiery to do..
Well… I also pour over words and where to put them. You may think it’s all fun and poetic games over here in Smouldering Land but sometimes I write a whole poem and stare at a particular line for AGES until I manage to turn and move and touch and softly massage it just the right way in my warm palm. I mean mind.
I usually get it to do exactly what I want in the end (my poem I meant, obviously…where DID your mind go, Mr Lonely Author)
Love LOVE your thoughts on surrender.
Love them.
Melting and being completely lost…nothing better. A few things maybe. But it’s in the top…3 surely.
I know right…what IS it about the right person’s whispers in your ear? Like the voice turns into something tangible, beyond itself, touching you in a perfect way in the right places.
You poured all of that in a beautiful, delicious way into this poem.
It’s my pleasure, giving you my warm little words.
Fiery
♥
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My mind went all over the place with that sizzling paragraph.
Yes, surrendering (melting and being completely lost) can happen with the right voice whispering
in your ear. One of the wonders of life.
Thank you for your steamy words. They are appreciated. Thankfully, I didn’t get burnt.
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You didn’t…?
Losing my touch, I must be.
Off to stoke my fiery flames…
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LOL
Have a good one my Sizzling friend
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Absolutely beautiful!❤
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Very grateful for your words. Thank you.
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Sing!
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Smiling. Thank you.
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One word: BEAUTIFUL!
I could go on to talk about how wonderfully this poem flowed and the great description, but I think my one word sums it all up 🙂
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LauraJ, you made me happy. Very grateful for that one word.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. They are gems here.
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I’m glad to hear that – or read that, because I’m going to continue sharing my thoughts. 🙂
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Smiling. Thanks
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Touches the heart so deeply.
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Humbled b y your words. You are very kind. Thank you for your comments.
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You’re very welcome. Your poetry is sincere. I do enjoy reading it.
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Thanks for saying that. Appreciated
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Most sweet n lovely poems.your muse is amazing to inspire for writing so much lovely songs which voice are echoing in every heart.you are right dear!!that love is music n love has musical feelings who are touching all heart n echoing into whole surroundings.last two lines are most beautiful.that Girl in your image-i think that i have seen on this blog.i wish that you may be a surrender for your windchime always.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹😊
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You are very kind my friend. Lover and music go well together. Actually they are perfect together.
Very sweet words Aruna. I so appreciate your words and support.
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Yeah, a loving heart always sing in th
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Thank you
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You are most welcome,dear!!
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You are right ,dear!!a loving heart always sings,may be with every beat of heart or like a humming bird openly.most welcome for you appreciation and write a sweet poem.i love that poem soooooo much ,dear!!
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Happy that you loved it so much. You are very kind.
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My all best wishes are with you.welcome you forever🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌲
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May you walk at some distance;voice of your foot step may echo in my heart-a translation of that song i have posted on blog and e-mail for sombody.i think you are understanding my words.
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Yes, I know what you mean. Lovely words my friend. Thank you.
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What can I say except that this is very beautiful and romantic.
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Happy you liked it. Grateful for your words. Thank you.
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Music, poetry and love are a most wonderful mix, a classic throughout history.
You probably know, Lonely, muse and music are related through The Nine Muses.
“The traditional names and specialties of the nine Muses, daughters of Zeus and Mnemosyne, are: Calliope (epic poetry), Clio (history), Erato (love poetry, lyric art), Euterpe (music, especially flute), Melpomene (tragedy), Polymnia (hymns), Terpsichore (dance), Thalia (comedy), Urania (astronomy).”
“The word music comes from the Greek word (mousike), which means “(art) of the Muses”.
I actually did an Art Gown “Mnemosyne”, which includes the Nine Muses.
Still, I am am growing many branches in this tree of thought.
What I really want to say is, “this is an elegant poem, simple, yet complex in the richness of sweet love.”
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Music, love and poetry do make for the most wonderful cocktail; goes down easy too.
Yes, I know about the Nine Muses. I connect with Erato for reasons they need no explanation.
Very grateful for your words. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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Brings a smile to my heart, so romantic!
❤️carmen
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Carmen, very happy you liked this. Thank you for your kind words. They are treasures here.
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Romantic ❤
And since it’s winter where I am this is a welcome warmth to my heart.
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Aaaw, that is so sweet of you to say that. Flattered by your lovely words. Grateful too. Thanks so much. Stay warm.
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Gently melodic, very beautifully written.x
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Flattered by your words. Thank you so much for your comments.
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Chuck you are so supportive and wonderful. Thank you so much for all of your kindness
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Thanks for being such a great writer! I love reading and sharing your work, Drew!! Friends should share Friends!!!
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You are very generous and kind. Thank you
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This is sweet! Your sweet words are music to my ears.
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Smiling. You are sweet Winnie. Thank you.
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It’s always a pleasure to read your lovely words, Drew!
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This is your best poem yet! 🙂 💘
My last job didn’t work out – yesterday I started a part time job at Kroger as an overnight stocker.
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Thank you for that wonderful compliment. Appreciate it.
Sorry about the job. A good one will come along. I am sure of it.
Best of luck my friend.
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Your welcome! 🙂
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This is beautiful Andrew, I can hear the chimes and my thoughts float away with them. 😊
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There are voices like that. They whisper to us and they linger in our soul.
Thank you for your gorgeous words. They are treasures.
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yes….such a sweet gift.
thank you…🌷
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Magic….
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Very grateful that you think so.
Thank you
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You have THE GIFT. Beautiful words.
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You are very kind. Thank you for saying that.
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The sussuration of this lovely ballad makes wonderful music!
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Flattered and grateful for your words. Very happy that you think so.
Thank you so much for the read and kind comments.
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My pleasure, Andrew.
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Oh, the lovely, sensual imagery of this one – right to my heart, Andrew. This is what a relationship can be, two people so deeply in love that they are instrument and melody.
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As always, your comment leav es me smiling. You always have wonderful input that makes me glow.
Sorry, for my late response, it has been a very crazy week for me.
I am leaving for Las Vegas tomorrow. So, I have been running aroung quite a but,
Thank you for your lovely read and words.
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Thank you o much for the kind gesture of sharing my poem. Appreciate your generosity.
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The beautiful melody of your gentle words resonate in my ears. A well crafted piece Drew 🙂
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Humbled by your beautiful comments. Grateful too. Thank you so much for your kindness. So happy you liked it.
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bello!! friend
saludos
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Gracias Amigo
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Beautiful indeed!
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Grateful you think so. Thank you for reading.
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You write very well. Keep it up 🙂
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Thanks for the encouragement. Appreciate it
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🙂
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Beautiful image expressed by all these words! I really like. 🙂
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Very happy that you do. Thank you for the very kind words. I so appreciate it.
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“rustles through my leaves” …. Interesting as I attempt to see you with leaves. Beautifully expressed, Andrew. The first part of this comment I said with “humor”. Happy Friday!
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Smiling. What a lovely comment. As beautiful as your posts.
Thank you for your kind words. They are treasures here.
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So sweet and light. Reminds me that spring will be here eventually…
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Smiling. Thank you for your lovely words Diane.
Can’t wait for Spring. Can’t take this cold anymore.
xoxo
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I know! Me either. It snowed yesterday, not too much, but enough to remind us it’s only January!
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I kmow, I know.
This spring I will be doing my best to get out of here.
Florida life for me
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