soliloquy
my baritone heart
sings on a lonely stage
before empty seats
longing to be a duet
he dreams
of your soprano heart
here alongside of me
without you
a crowded auditorium
appears barren
as the insistent echo
of my baritone heart
rings in hollow halls
he croons a ballad
a song meant for two
a song unrequited
a soliloquy
he composed
just for you
Wow
So wonderful
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Humbled that you think so. Thank you for taking the time out to read and share your thoughts. Grateful.
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You are welcome bro
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😥 Why? Why must you make me feel so lonely Drew? This poem just hurt so good, but damn it I hope don’t cry in my sleep because I’m about to go to bed.
Beautiful poem as always. You really should publish a book.
Goodnight.
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Oh, Jessica. Your comments made me smile, a little sad smile. There aere songs that I hear and I think it hurt so good.
I have never had that little compliment attribjuted to one of my poems.
Flattered and grateful you enjoyed this. Sorry, to make you feel lonely. Loneliness is bad enough without someone reminding
you how it feels.
Thank you for this treasure of a comment. I am truly grateful you took the time out to read and share your beautiful thoughts.
Thank you
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Nah, it’s a welcome loneliness. I love how your poems touch my heart. The poems I’ve written never reach me as deep as your words. I hate to become your rival to be honest. haha 😀
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I don’t want rivals, so don’t worry.
Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts with me.
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Keep dreaming my friend. Imagine your muse next to you and sing.
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Smiling so hard. You are a prophet. This poem evolved from those very thoughts of her sitting besides me.
You stunned me with your comment. Thank you so much. Very appreciated.
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Happy that I can make someone smile.
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And you did it so successfully. Thanks.
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Well said #poetry
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Thanks my friend. Appreciate you sharing your thoughts.
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You are welcome
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This is lovely and romantic..☺
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Very happy you think so. And very grateful that you took the time out to share you thoughts. Thank you so much for your kindness.
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A melody with no crescendo when it comes to the musical beat of the heart. Lovely words indeed on a table for one but a tune for two. Well sung Drew.🌹
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That is so true Roy. Tabkle for one, tune for two. Perfect summary.
Than you my friend for your always perfect comments. You have an ability to brwak things down so short and perfewctly.
Truly appreciate you sharing your thoughts.
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My pleasure indeed Drew, I due what I can. Your writing is something else in its own and a treat to read. It’s music to the eyes.😉🎼
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Laughing. You have to recioeve some kind of award as best commentor in WordPress.
You should be a food or movie critic.
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Hahaha!!! Sumtimes we pickup things from the pebbles we hang out with.😉
Me, a critic!! Hahaha, not me but I know an amazing person for the job.😉. But I won’t say any names….hahaha!
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Hahaha . Too funny. Have a good one.
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😂😂. You too my friend!!
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But the singer sometimes sings just for the joy of the melody, even if no one else hears the song. Though it’s certainly much sweeter to be appreciated by a special someone.
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That is very true. some songs only need be heard by the singer. Smiling
Thank you for your lovely words. Always grateful.
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Beautiful, Drew. 😊
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Thank you so much Dorinda. Appreciate your kind words and read.
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A pleasure, my friend 🙂
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Hey Drew, extremely beautiful and at the same time haunting.
The heart of the poem rests on “without you
a crowded auditorium
appears barren”
the juxtaposition of crowded/barren is superbly done.
Hollow halls, unrequited song, singing on a lonely stage, empty seats, all those imagines create loneliness and longing. Yet… what is it about this poem that also creates the feeling that the loneliness is not fully lived?
The answers is in the title: soliloquy . Indeed you are speaking your own thought regardless of any hearers. But regardless of any hearers, does not mean no hearers. It is a poem written for her to be read and heard by her. It’s almost like it’s written in her presence.
Great composition, great flow, beautiful imagery, and a bit tricky 🙂
I can write an entire essay about this poem.
Splendid job!
And good morning to you when you get up 🙂
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Good morning G. Sitting here, rereadig this comment that completely floored me as if I was punched
by a prize fighter.
.
Smiling at your comment over the heart of the poem. I agree that it is the core of this little write.
To be in a crowded auditorium or most festive party and not be with the one you love, well, it can be
barren. Thank you for your compliments.
Smiling at your second paragraph. Yes, loneliness and longing….and loneliness not fully lived.
This poet can be lonely at times, but when he is accompanied by her in his thoughts….well, he is
lonely no more. Quite enchanting of you to see that. I was stunned.
Soliloquy was the answer. Yes, they are my thoughts, truly meant to be read and heard by her.
I have goose bumps reading your thoughts, This is haunting. Have you been rummaging through
my mind? LOL . Don’t answer that. LOL
You have made my day. Your ability to break things down, read between the lines, submerge
yourself in the words (and my mind)…. truly spellbinding, haunting, and humbling.
Grateful for your thoughts. Have a glorious, inspiring day.
Can’t find the words to thank you enough. So, I will leave you with one word.
Always…..
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Good morning, Drew,
It’s early here. I am going to say it again: Your poem is gorgeous and you deserve a lot of praise.
I am glad I made you smile!
“This poet can be lonely at times, but when he is accompanied by her in his thoughts….well, he is
lonely no more. Quite enchanting of you to see that. I was stunned.” Stunned? Your beautiful words were written to be read by her. That is lovely. I hope she read and understood.
“Have you been rummaging through
my mind? LOL . Don’t answer that.” I would not if you do not want me to 🙂
I can’t find the words to tell you how beautiful your poems are.
May you have an inspiring day and may you write another gorgeous piece for her!
G
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Smiling so hard.
Thank you. Wishing you the best.
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🙂
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☀️😊
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I can’t find the cup of coffee 🙂
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Lol
Hey, I am trying to keep my replies short so you can slay dragons and cast your spells.
I am about to go out in the cold without my morning coffee. Ugh.
Let’ share. ☕ 😊
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You are so generous. I’ll take the coffee. You take the sun 🙂 Is this sharing? 🙂
Take care, Drew!
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LOL
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🙂
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Just got home after a long day slaying my own dragons.
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Hey, same here 🙂
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I am going to crash and write (my therapy). Enjoy your evening G.
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Have a wonderful evening, Drew. I am going to do the same 🙂
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Beautiful sadness.
Reminds me of Jane Olivor’s song of the same name also with exquisite lyrics.
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I had forgotten all about that song. Yes, I can see the definite connection.
Thank you so much for reading. And I am very grateful for your kind words. Thanks
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It’s so rhythmic and heartfelt ……. also soliloquy is a new word for me ……… Beyond beautiful ❤️
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Happy you liked it my dear friend. I like to think this poem could be enjoyed by the young and even 80 year old poets, LOL
Seriously, thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts. I truly appreciate that.
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Both nodding in agreement 😜. My pleasure Andrew…as always. …..may be you should stop thanking
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LOL
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This is quite lovely :O) x
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Happy that you think so. Grateful that you took the time to read and comment. Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome 😊 x
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You are so sweet and generous; like angels of WordPress providing support and kindness.
Very grateful for your kind gesture. Thank you so much.
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More than welcome, you know…
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Unrequited love. Hurts bad. Nice💜💜
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Smiling. Yes, it does. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I am grateful.
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Good god the imagery in this one! Take a bow, musical poet, take a bow!
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Haha . You are so sweet Isha. Happy you liked it. Thank tyou very much
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Most beautiful.really i like to talk myself in my loneliness.your words seem my soliloquy,dear dew!!
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That is a beautiful comparison Aruna. Happy you enjoyed this.
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Dear dew!!comparison from which to which,
Because your wording’s meaning so much rich.🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐤🐤🐤🐤🐤🕊🕊🕊🕊🕊🕊🕊🕊🕊
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Very flattered Aruna,. Don’t know what to say
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Dear dew!! I know all things.😊
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okay
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Wise reply dear dew!!
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LOL . Have a great night of sleep
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😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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🙏🙏🙏
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🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Hey dew !!say somthing-i want to sleep by hearing your words like lullaby.
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have a god night of sleep
happy dreams
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Oh.a little bit words.i have to sleep.don’t worry.i will sleep without your lullby.good night,dear!!
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Good night
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Hey dew!!there is afternoon,
Here night says me to sleep soon.
Thanks dear.good night.
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Yes, it is a rainy afternoon here.
Good night, sleep well
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Here is too rainy n foggy day n night.enjoy dear before night come to you for sleeping with sweet dreams,dew!!
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Thanks,dear!!
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Wonderful word-your soprano heart.last six lines is amazing”he croons….just for you.most lovely lines,dear dew!!
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Aruna so happy that you liked this, And I am happy you enjoyed those last six lines. Thank you for your lovely words. They are appreciated always.
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So much thanks,dear dew!! For poem on my most favourite🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹and most welcome because it indeed for appreciation always,my dear.!!
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Thank you thank you Aruna
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You are most welcome,my dear friend!!
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Very nicely done
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Thank you so much Derrick. Appreciate that.
Hope you are feeling better
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you so much Ian for your supportive and generous gesture of the reblog. Always appreciated.
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Truly welcome Andrew my friend another great post so eloquent as always …. ⭐️👍😊
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Thank you Ian. You are kind.
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Great metaphors for love … Sopranos aren’t may favorite voice for singers, but it was the right word for this.
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I wavered over the different female voices, and in the end I felt that was the only one that truly fit.
Thank you for your lovely read and commenrt. Mucho appreciated.
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Yep
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Happy Thursday Andrew! Beautiful words as always
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Happy Thursday LauraJ. Thank you for your very kind read and words. They are greatly appreciated.
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For the first time with you, I’m speechless ❤️
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Smiling. So don’t say anything.
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But you know I will
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I had no doubt. LOL
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I can almost hear the beautiful music playing. Lovely, Drew!
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Smiling Winnie. Thank you for your beautiful comment. Appreciate every kind word that flows from you. Thanks.
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I’m glad I made you smile. Have a great day!
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Thanks Winnie. You too.
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You’re welcome and thanks
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Perfection 🖤
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Falttered that you think so. Thank you so much for the read and generous words. I appreciate your kindness.
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Or course. Any time 😊
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A lovely metaphor. So romantic and wistful!
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Thank you Meg. Happy you think so. Grateful for your read and lovely words. Thanks.
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My pleasure!
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Okay…I’ve composed myself (pun not intended) Ready to get all “Fiery won’t shut up about the Lonely Author’s poetry” on you.
The first time I stepped on a stage many many moons ago, it was the most incredible feeling ever. EVER.
Years after, every time I would get on stage to perform I would get that same feeling. I won’t describe it here and hijack your comments section with Tales of Fiery Past but my point is…I never thought one day I’d read a poem that reminded me of that but also broke my little heart with the feeling of what it would be like if it was compared to being in love and not having that love returned to you. Blew me away.
The personification of your heart singing on a lonely stage…my god. Just gorgeous. And you carried it all the way through so beautifully. The longing to have her beside you singing along with your song. I couldn’t pull off such a beautiful extended metaphor (can’t think of anyone that could) but it never wavered for a second. The baritone and soprano…seriously these musical analogies grab my delicate heartstrings and…sigh. Losing my train of thought. .
The crowded auditorium feeling empty is exactly the feeling of being around a thousand people but without that one person who you crave to be YOURS , you still feel alone. Singing a song without the harmonies it is desperately crying for.
And…and and and…’Soliloquy’ for me…just whispered literature and theatre and that….well you’ve spoken to a deep love of mine with that title and with this whole touching poem.
Last stanza…please don’t make me comment on that.
That’s when the tears fell like a silly little girl.
Heart breaking and mending itself all at once with this one. Apart from ONE other poem which is hands down my favrourite of yours …this one touched me beyond belief.
Your,
Fiery
❤
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LMFAO
You will have to tell me your experiences on a stage. We can share tales. (Child actor here).
Flattered that this little thing could bring back the feelings of those experiences. When I wrote this I was drawing
on my own experiences on stage and of course the loneliness the had accompanied through life. Sorry, to break your little
heart, you know that was not my intention. Blew you away. Perhaps a name change is in order…The Lonely Blower.
Naw, I guess not.
Personification. So happy you said that word. You and I have discussed my old poetry and the new. Personification has been
a game changer for me. Thrilled you liked the personification in this poem, and thanks for saying I carried it through. I
can’t tell you how many edits it took me. (Here goes the Lonely Nerd – WordPress shows 22 edits. That doesn’t include the
edits before I dared enter it in WordPress. Nerd mode over).
Yeah, this popem was all about her heart beating with mine, most endearing duet. You couldn’t pull ths off. LOL . Not only could
you pull it off, you would do it so beautifully. Funny you mention . the baritone and sprano hearts. This piece originally
started with another line, but I found starting it with “my baritone heart” perfectly set the stage. Oooops. Terrible, I was trying
to be punny.
You grasped my core meaning so perfectly. To be around a crowd and not be with the one you love is still lonely. Perhaps, the
summit of loneliness. Without her, the world is barren. Your little paragraph touched me with its tenderness and beauty.
Soliloquy had to be the title. That is how my heart beats (until hers beats with mine).
The last stanza…..flattered by the words you conveyed with your tears. Humbled and grateful.
Thriulled you enjoyed this little poem. I know which is your favorite. To have this one compared to and even referred to
in the same sentence with that ONE, well, I am touched.
Save those tears, silly little girl. (now, you are reminding me of my last post).
Thank you for your beautiful words, breakdown and appreciation. Your words are treasures that bring joy to my quiet
days. Eternally grateful.
XOXOXO
Lonely Author
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Good grief, don’t change your name to The Lonely Blower, please! It would change the whole mood of my comments to you, lol.
But I do have a little thing for the nerd in you, so definitely don’t be apologetic about that. I nerd out a lot. Glad to be in good company.
My stories of being on stage are many and we can share those little exchanges elsewhere. Such gripping tales I could tell you, lol.
I think I knew you were a child actor but totally forgot so expect many prying questions from me very soon.
So yes I know you didn’t mean to break my poor fragile little heart lol. That would have been a weird reason to write a poem.
But you’re such a romantic. I crazy agree with you about feeling alone until her (‘his’ in my case, in case anyone was curious lol) beats with yours. Hearts will go beating merrily along and sighing all alone until someone syncs with your heartbeat perfectly and then all they play with their pulses are harmonies.
It definitely is now my second favourite. No question. Everything about this, I heart very very much.
Don’t call me a silly girl. YOU’RE a silly girl! Oh I said that first didn’t I. Okay, fine. Say what you want lol
Feel like I should say something really deep and meaningful to convey how much I appreciate you and your touching, sweet words my Lonely Author, which make me giggle and smile from the inside out.
I’ll think of something.
Fiery
♥
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Yeah, Lonely Blower would c hange the blog feel. Probably lose readership.
Yeah, that nerd peeks out every so often. I have two little voices that accompany me.
The nerd on my right shoulder (my blurred side). The bad boy on the left shoulder,
Explains a lot doesn’t it?
Beautifully said. I want to sync with a heart. I could sync all day and night…..yeah.
Smiling. In a world of imitation, Fiery you are one of a kind.
Drew xoxo
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Who’s Drew?
Oh.. my Lonely Author.
Gotcha
Yep. That certainly explains a lot that I already actually knew but I like it when you explain yourself lol.
I hope you find that heart and sync til the sun comes up.
Aw.. you think?
I try
❤️
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LOL
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Very poignant tones you’re singing here Drew. It seems you have touched the chords of loneliness and sadness very deeply.
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Wow, I love your thoughtful comment. Thank you for your amazing read and words.
Very grateful. Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome Drew. I write better when I feel what I write about and wonder if you’ve lived the feelings in this poem? Hopefully not all the time!
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Well, I was an only child and both my parents were only children. So when they passed back in the 80s, I have spent many hours alone.
Writing this, I drew on my experiences. I believe that writers, like actors, need to alway draw on past feelings to bring out theemotions they wish to convey. Honestly, it has worked for me. I am still learning how to write poetry.
Thank you for your kindness. Have a wonderful day.
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Beautiful!
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Thrilled that you think so Alexa. Grateful you shared your thoughts. Thank you so much.
Have a beautiful day.
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Thanks, you too!
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Brilliantly beautiful!❤
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Grateful that you think so. Thank you for your lovely words. Appreciate it.
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Substitute baritone for soprano and those could be the thoughts in my head. This short poem was so eloquent and so smartly packaged. I really do love reading your poetry. You have a way of echoing the thoughts in my heart that I sometimes am too afraid to speak. Thank you for giving voice to all the lonely people out there who are too afraid to say it. ❤
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Humbled by your beautiful words Meslissa.
I am saddened that you copild relate to this little poem. I don’t wish that upon anyone. I know all to well, the emptiness of being alone.
We recently started following one another, so I haven’t read too many of your pieces, but the posts I read so far are beautiful. You express you emotions and thoughts beautifully.
Thank you for your kind read and generous words. I am flattered and grateful. Thank you so much. You are appreciated.
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Drew, you are quite a person. I hope your muse will someday come to realize what an amazing man you are. Yes, my heart has had enough loneliness to last a lifetime. I’m hoping someday I will see that end. Thank you for your compliments on my writing. Someday I will finish that elusive novel and hopefully see it published. x
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Loneliness? Unpublished novel?
Our lives mirror one another don’t they?
We have to continue to follow one another and provide the motivation and suppoort we both need. Such a pleasure knowing you.
Thank you
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I believe the pleasure is all mine. 🙂 x
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Aaaaw
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Wonderfully poignant, a song of loneliness!
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
They are always appreciated.
What day of the week you post your “Castle” tale?
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Sundays!
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Thanks. I am really adoring that story. You write so well.
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Thank you so much for the compliment!
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This was absolutely beautiful! You captured his loneliness and sadness perfectly.
My favorite lines are: he croons a ballad
a song meant for two
a song unrequited
a soliloquy
he composed
just for you
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That last stanza was also my favorite part. Thanks for pointing it out. Means a lot.
Humbled by your beautiful words. Sadly, LOL
loneliness and longing are themes in much of my writing. Gues I chose my blog name wisely.
Thank you for the kind red and great comments. You really made me happy. Appreciate your words and time.
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You’re welcome. Yes, I can see why you chose your blog name. It’s a fitting one. Loneliness and longing are two powerful forces but you turn them into beautiful expressions of art with your words. I’m thrilled that my comments made you happy. I will always set aside time to read your poetry.
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Oh my God. This reply was even more gorgeous than your original comment. Thank you so much for your very kind words.
They are so appreciated.
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You’re welcome 🙂 I look forward to reading your next poem.
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You have my cheeks glowing red.
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LOL
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LOL . Trust me that isn’t easy (making me blush).
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😀
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What a charming read. Loved it
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Thank you so much Shantanu. Really appreciate your kind words. Thanks my friend.
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My absolute pleasure
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Perfection from beginning to end. Such a beautiful poem
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Very grateful for yur words Ana. Thank you so much
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OFF TOPIC: Next post is password-protected. Can I get a password? … but I understand if it is a private message.
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You completely post me Frank.
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I don’t understand. FYI: “Black Holes” post showed up in my reader as password protected – hence my statement.
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Oh my God. Thanks for letting me know. I was playing around with an old draft trying to learn how to password protect. My friend Fiery was teaching me how to do it and it worked.
It is an unfinished poem you will be seeing soon. Trust me, you will always read everything I write.
Thank for letting me know
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Got it … glad to help! Hi to Fiery.
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Laughing, I’ll let her know.
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I love it when you put your poems to music. 🙂 Beautiful.
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Flattered. Don’t know why I continually go back to music. I guess I see love and music going hand in hand.
Thank you for your lovely words
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Such a lyrical poem, I can almost hear the music in the background 🙂
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Smiling. You are so kind. Thank you for this lovely comment. It brings joy and encourages,
Appreciate your kind words. Thanks
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Something about “baritone heart” got me right from the get go….keeping it low and powerful.
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Smiling. Grateful for your encouraging words. I imagine my heart is a baritone. LOL
Thank you
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I would read ‘you’ as baritone!
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Lol. Thanks
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A lonely stage may be the best place. Good vibes from Brasil.
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Smiling. Thank you so.much for your thoughtful words Mariel. Sending back good vibes from New York City.
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The lonely author sings a heart tugging melancholic song of loneliness… May a soprano sing a duet soon with your baritone. May your muse sit there amongst the crowded auditorium, being the only one to hear your melodic soliloquy!
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You made me smile again with this gorgeous comment and your wishes. Thank you for your kindness.
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Always a pleasure, Andrew. Stay blessed.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Please come and enjoy – A Lonely Melody!
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Chuck you are so sweet. Deli guy hted you found this poem worthy of sharing. Thank you.
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Ha! Your words always reach me, My Friend! I love to share your words/works with followers!!
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Humbled my friend. Thank you.
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thanks for this Blog.
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Flattered. Thank you for the visit and kind words. Appreciated.
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Wow so romantic. After reading this, i just fell in love with my books because i had no one to love so im all lovey with my book😐. Lovely💗💗💗💗 poem!
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You are so sweet. It is wonderful to be in love with books or the characters inside of them.
Happy you liked this poem. Flattered, Thanks for ythr beautiful words and for all the hearts,
Mucho appreciated. Stay warm.
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Lovely imagery. 😊
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Thank you so much. Appreciate it.
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You’re welcome
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You’re welcome!
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Beautifully designed
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Thank you my dear. Appreciated. Get well.
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You’re welcome. Thank you xo
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xoxo
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This makes me sad! Unrequited love is hard and lonely and heartbreaking, but you know, this also makes me think of when you miss someone you love, and they aren’t with you, and can’t be with you for a long time. These are my favourite lines: ‘without you
a crowded auditorium
appears barren
as the insistent echo
of my baritone heart
rings in hollow halls’.
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Touched by your beautiful comment. Unrequited love is sad. It can be so painful and can linger for a long time.
I am flattered by your reaction to my poem. You generous words bring me joy. Thank you for your lovely read,
kind words of support, and for sharing your thoughts. They made my evening.
I loved those lines as well. Thanks.
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I am glad for that 🙂
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SMOOTH AND SO—FILLED WITH LONGING! IF ONLY “YOU” WOULD RESPOND! IS SHE OUT THERE IN THE AUDIENCE? MAY IT BE SO! ❤
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John you are special. Thank you so much for your kind support and words. You are a national treasure.
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NOW—THAT IS APPROACHING FLATTERY!!!!! 🙂
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Smiling
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🙂
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We are in a lonely space right now, you and I, but I love that you turn your feelings into something beautiful. So nicely done, Drew!
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Smiling. I always try to find the positive even in the darkest places.
Thank you for your gorgeous comment. Appreciate your thoughts. xoxo
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You are a very positive person! I’m not, really, but I’m a firm believer in faking it till I make it (with smiles anyway 😉 love you, my friend
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Love you too. My heart goes out to you.
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Wonderful words💐 its heart touching 💞
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Very tender…. I wonder… why are we mainly inspired by loneliness and unrequited love?….
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Actually, that is a very good question.
If the “we” you are talking about is everyone, I am very curious as to why these negative feelings can make us so inspired.
If the “we” was meant as me, well, I am the only child of paretns who were only children. When they passed, I found myself truly alone. I know those themes often appear in my writing. Sadly, it seems to come so naturally for me.
Thank you for the read and sharing your kind words and thoughtful question. I so appreciate your support and words. Thank you.
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Well… I was thinking of “we” as everyone, but I do appreciate you are sharing these private details of your life. It needs a lot of confusion and trust. Thank you! 🤗🤗🤗
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Hope I didn’t bore you. People often ask me, so I assumed you may have meant that too. Sorry,
Grateful for your read and words. Thanks.
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I really appreciate you shared this! And I am truly touched you did 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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