
my pillow waits for you
forlorn shadows
hang like colorless tapestries
against barren walls
that reverberate no sound
a frame with no photo
rests on a dresser
resembling a weary wanderer
desperate for a smile
beyond my world
entwined lovers
mutate into carnal wolves
howling at the moon
a baby weeps
tears of forget me nots
in a world eclipsed
my pillow waits for you
Wow. Again.
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Flattered. Thank you so much for the read and comment.
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I really love this poem. It is so poignant.
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Flattered and grateful for your words. Thank you so much for your kind and suppoortive comment.
It is appreciated.
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Thank You,
I absolutely love this and needed it all at the same time!
Sorry can’t explain why but
the best wishes to you!
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Thank you so much for saying that. No, need to explain. Thanks for your kind words and wishes.
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“a frame with no photo/rests on a dresser”– this instantly created a tragic emotion in my mind. Pangs of love, a forlorn lover, waiting for someone he loves. I simply love this poem! It’s a masterpiece.
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Humbled and flattered to inspire those thoughts and images in your mind. Your comments let me know I succeeded.
Thank you for your generous words. They made me so happy.
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“in a world eclipsed”–a story here, a whole new fantasy of possibility, of happiness, waiting.
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Smiling. Love your thoughts on this poem. Thank you so much for your inspiring comments. Truly appreciate them.
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Such a delicate and beautiful poem, the forget me nots, pillows, frame without photo!! Such a beauty!
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Sighing at your gorgeous comment and appreciation. You truly made me happy sharing your thoughts.
Thank you for the kind read and words. They are so appreciated.
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It’s my pleasure, you are a very good poet, I’m impressed 😊
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You are very kind. Thanks.
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So sad…
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I know. But on a happier a note I go on vacation so now I am so happy.
Thank you Diane
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And where are you off to now you lucky man??
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The beaches of the Domincan Repiblic. Will use it as a writing retreat to get more serious about my manuscript. Too many interruptions in NYC.
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Ah, sounds lovely! Enjoy your working vacation!
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Thank you. Try to stay warm dear.
xoxo
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“A frame with no photo…” that is a really nice line! Great poetic imagery about something outside the poem with no imagery. Great title too. 10/10!
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Your thoughtful comments made my day. Thank you for the gorgeous comment. Happy you appreciated this poem.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I truly appreciate it. Thanks.
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Exquisite…my pillow waits for you … the expression hits deep…
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Smiling. Thank you for saying that. Very touched by your lovely words.
Grateful for your visit and supportive words.
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Welcome…my pleasure…
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Everyone needs someone to complete the emptiness. Who knows someone will be in that frame and lay on that pillow soon.
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Smiling. Your words and inspiring thoughts were so sweet. I appreciate it.
Thank for the kind read and words.
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Glad that my thoughts inspired you because that means more lovely poems to read. Hehe ^^
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Smiling
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Your poems are always so deep and beautiful! I am always speechless about the amount of emotions in all your work! Great job!
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Alyssa you comments are a ray of sunshine here. Your words and reaction made me very happy. Thrilled in fact.
Thank you for your qwondefrful words and super kind support. Bless you always.
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You are very welcome! I am glad that I can be a ray of sunshine for you, but you writing does the same for me and ALL your readers!
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Oh how I love this..
Melancholy – the lonely heart – a sorrow felt deeply in your words..
makes me smile – it’s written so perfectly 😊
Crazy but dark pieces always draw me in..
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Not sure how to reply after reading your generous comment. Perfect? Definitely, not a word I hear often. Very happr that you liked
this poem. TYouc hed by your beautiful words. Thank you.
Surprised that dark pieces darw you in. Really happy you enjoyed. Thanks.
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I did totally enjoy it 😀
And yes – I am always fascinated by the dark, hard, sad moments in life.. I’ve been through them at different times I life and come out the other side – and I love life a little more each time..
Great post 😊
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The image of that frame really got me. What an incredible piece.
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Thank you for your wonderful comment. Your kind words made me happy. Grateful for yor words and visit.
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lovely lovely lovely. It’s been a while since I stopped by. I don’t see a like button on this page but just wanted to drop a line and say Hi and thanks for visiting me 🙂 – Sherline.
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How are you doing? Apporeciate your visit. Thanks so much
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I’m doing great thanks. I look forward for your next post 😁
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Thanks. Looking forward to yours.
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That was so good, you really cut deep. Thank you for this!
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This came from deep inside. Very happy that you appreciate this piece. Thank you so mich for your supportive words and support. Greatly appreciated.
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Hey dear dew!!in your poem”Adventures fill your heart”have you closed to write on blog.? What will the heart bears;after leaving by you here will be many tears.however you are going with good purpose;but plz read me,comment me and send me your blessed verses.i will wait for you till my last breath.May God bless you,dear dew!!happy journey,my dear Angel Friend!!plz do promise me that you will read my poems and e-mails.if you not will then my wandering soul will come there wherever you will live.like you,i will do the work for human walfare.
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Drew- This is one of your best. I feel you wrote this from a deep place in your soul. There is a strong sense of desolation and erosion here. Those dark intense emotions we try to keep from bringing out into the light but that haunt us nonetheless. Beautiful!
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I am so flattered that you think so. You are very kind Linda. I do like this one very much. And that is rare for me.
Your comment is so beautiful. I am touched and humbled by your words.
Apologies for my late response to this wonderfful comment. Life has been rough and my possible relocation has kept me busy.
I will be flying to Florida tomorrow for ten days. I will catch up with you when I get back.
Thank you.
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Safe travels and I hope you find your dream home!
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Thank you Linda. I so appreciate that. xoxo
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Sanguine melancholy exudes in every word. A touching poem of hopefulness for us to observe through your words.
Isadora 😎
ps – happy travels to the Dominican … hope those whales put on an unforgettable show for you.
Your generous kindness to this in need in outstanding. Happy writing …. Cheers 🍷🍷
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Very beautiful words Isadora. am humbled and flattered. Thank you so much.
The whales put on a great show. And I enjoyed every oment of the vacation.
Now my sights are on the Sunshine State.
Tomorrow I fly down there to see if I can relocate.
Apologies for my late response, life has been challenging and messages piled up on me.
Thank you for your tender words. They are appreciated.
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Best of Luck on your search for a little piece of paradise in the Sunshine state. I was astonished at how large a state it actually is.
I’m much more south than I would have liked but found that the east coast was a lot more peaceful and south was less inhabited. I guess I like isolation. LOL Being an art enthusiast took me to a wonderful place called Sarasota. Truly beautiful but unfordable. I chose 30 minutes south to a place of great tranquility. The search is always fun if there’s no time frame involved. No worries about responding right away. I know I fall in that category many, many times. Have a great time while searching Drew. Your welcome on the compliment on your writing. It’s always outstanding.
Isadora 😎
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Isadora, how are you?
I hope you are well.
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Hola Drew …
I’ve been on a roller coaster ride I never expected to take. I plan on posting about it. I’m fine just totally exhausted from the stress. But, such is life. Up’s and down’s on our journey is what teaches us to be more resislient. Hope you have a fabulous and peaceful week …. Isadora 😎
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Yes, I am. Be well.
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This poem touched my soul. Just beautiful. The imagery is perfect. ♥.
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So happy you liked this Niki. Your words made me smile.
Thank you for your support and wonderful inspiration.
apologies for my late response, life has been challenging for several weeks.
Thank you.
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Thank you Andrew. I hope things ease up. *hugs* ♥.
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very nice
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Happy you think so. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Appreciate it.
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of course
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Beautifully written! I;m sure you will find that person to wake up next to soon. Have fun when you’re away! Sounds like you have a great few days ahead of you 🙂
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Grateful for your read and words. I had a wonderful time on vacation. Can’t wait to go back.
sorry for my late response, I had limited wifi on my vacation and now have an enormous backload of comments,
Again, thank you so much
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No need to apologise. I think it’s good to go on vacation and leave the internet world behind a little. Glad you had a great time 🙂
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Your work often touches me like a soft air. It is genius and so profound.
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MVS, thank you for your beautiful message, I have had so many challenges in my life recently, I fell behind on my blog
reading and repolying to messages. I have a pile of your email notifications in my inbox. Yes, I saved them. I don’t like
to miss you. I will be harassing you with comments soon.
Apologies for my late rseponse. Will touch you and your blog soon.
Thank you
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Your words really do express emotion well! PS I hope you have a smooth flight and your vacation is beautiful.
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Thank you for your beautiful wishes. My vacation was amazing.
Thank you so much
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Really amazing work
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
HOW COULD I NOT COME HERE—FOR VALENTINE’S DAY, THIS YEAR?
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LOL
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Frames without photos, tears of forget me nots… all so hauntingly beautiful.
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Humbled by your beautiful comments. Grateful you read and liked my poem. Thank you so much for your kindness,
It is truly appreciated.
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You’ve made the emptiness breathe 🌷
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What a gorgeous thing to say. I am humbled by your words Suzanne. Thank you
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I want to tell you my favorite parts of this, but I would just be writing down the whole poem. LOVED this!
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Flattered and humbled by your wonderful comment. Thank you so much for the read and your words that make me so happy.
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You are most welcome Drew! ❤
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Bravo sir!!!
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Grateful Ash. Appreciate it my friend.
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Your words are treat for my eyes.
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You are generous with your words. Thank you so much for the compliment
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Oh I am delighted by your humility 🙏
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Smiling and half blushing. Thanks.
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Keep Smiling 😊😊
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😊
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Some lovely lines! ‘carnal wolves’ will stay with me a while…
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Flattered by your words. So very happy you liked it. Thank you for your lovely comment.
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I love this piece! It resonates so much with me and my situation just now. I’m glad I found your site. 🖤
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TYour words are so generous and sweet. It truly touched me.
Thank you for your beautiful words. I apprecisate each and ewvery one of them.
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OMG, wow!!! WOW!
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Touched and humbled by your reaction. Grateful you appreciated my poem.
Thanks for this fabulous message. It made me happy.
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Awww makes me want to cuddle love it
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That is so sweet of you to say that.
Thank you.
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