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breathe
she knits her verses
into my heart
with melancholy thread
forever words
entwined in every chamber
which no palpitation can unstring
inhaling her poems
I exhale the metaphors she weaves
she is the falsetto of my sigh
the muse who resuscitates
for she writes the poetry
that I breathe
If poetry is romance, and titles are the foreplay. Then you my friend Drew are Casanova, but in the modern day. Writing a poem that stops people from doing what the title indicates, magically written my friend. “She knits her verses into my heart”, sewing words of love and making it last and following it with “entwining in every chamber which no palpitation can unstring”. That sounds absolutely harmonious, romantically sounding. The inhaling and exhaling blends with your title alone and the line, “She is the falsetto of my sigh”….breathtaking moment ending it with the perfect crescendo…Poetry I breathe! I dare ask how you do it because a magician never reveals his magic but you make beautiful art.
I usually don’t dance unless I hear music but sometimes when I read your work, I smile because I just feel it’s so personalized. It just seems like the magic Sparkling Freeze has, but that what makes you incredibly special my friend, your ability to reach people which is why we love and respect you. Keep it up good friend Drew.
And don’t give too many people a sunburn with your shine.😎
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Roy, you often leave me speechless, but this comment may be your pinnacle. A truly gorgeous comment.
Your words captured the poem so beautifully. I am in awe of your talent to summarize a poem.
Thank you for yur kind words and praise. I am truly grateful my friend.
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As I and we are grateful for you my dear friend, this poem left many including myself empty lunged. Thank you.😊
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Smiling
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Keep it up dear friend.
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Long time drew!loved this so much
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I am so grateful and toucvhed that you do. You are always so sweet.
I am organizing myself after my relocation. I am finally getting to
my comments and starting my blog reading. Will you see more of me.
Thank you
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Still waiting drew😊
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Smiling
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Hi. Please check out and follow my blog 😊
https://themohmysblog.wordpress.com
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Ahh, those words, those metaphors. You have an incredible mind, my friend. And a new follower…
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Very flattered and grateful for your kind words. You are generous with your comments. Happy you enjoyed my poem.
Thank you for taking the time out to read and leave this wonderful comment. I truly appreciate it
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Amazing one!!
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Glad you think so. You are so kind. Thanks for readng and for your compliment.
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Ur welcome!
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Truly beautiful and breathtaking! Your poems are always so full of passion and are great to read!
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Oh, Alyssa. Thank you for your beautiful and gentle words. They are so appreciated.
I have been so busy with my relocation, I am buried in unpacxked boxes. I will be getting to other comments you posted on my blog. And I will be reading your posts as well.
I could use the pick me up with the chaos around me. Hope you are doing well.
Thank you for your beautiful words. They are appreciated.
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You are more than welcome! I know how crazy moving and unpacking is, but just take your time. Things will all unfold the way they are meant to. I think this will be a great move for you and filled with LOTS of inspiration for your amazing poems!
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Smiling.
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Such a romantic 😊
Inhaling her – absorbing her… beautiful
makes me smile..
Love this poem..
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Very flattered that you do. After completing it, I did so much editing to make sure it had the right feel.
So your words really made me happy.
Thank you sdo much for your kind words.
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My pleasure 😊
Always such a treat to read your posts
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Blushing
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😉😉😉
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Beautiful. Operatic. 🙂
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Thank you for saying that. You are always so kind.
I appreciate your support and words.
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Lovely.
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Happy that you think so. Thank you for reading.
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Wondrous words!
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Thank you so much Malcolm. I am so happy that you appreciate it.
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Your move to Florida has not had any negative effect on your writing – such a lovely poem! I especially love these two lines – I exhale the metaphors she weaves; she is the falsetto of my sigh!
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You are so sweet and kind. Thanks for saying that. I am touched by your words.
Happy you liked those lines. They were my favorites as well.
Thanks so much Shelley.
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You’re welcome, Drew! 🙂
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So beautiful as always–you really are Master of the Metaphor:-)
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You are so kind. Thank you for this wonderful message and your support. I am touched and grateful.
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Beautiful poem, Drew. I love the way you write about your muse. ❤
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Happy you liked it. I have so much fun and I find inspiration writing about all of these poets who inspire me.
It truly makes me happy. Can’t think of a better way to show my appreciation for their work.
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This is a wonderful dedication to all those beautiful writers out there who inspire us daily!
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Smiling. You are the first person to see it this way. There are so many wonderful writers and poets out there. We all take
in the beauty of their words.
Thank you for this gorgeous and thoughtful comment. I apprciate your sharing this idea. It was so appropriate for the poem
and the feeling I was trying to convey. Thank you.
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Now I’m smiling. 🙂 You’re welcome! I’m glad to have understood you through your words.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
GOOD STUFF—CAN YOU HEAR THE BREATH IN AND OUT>
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John. thank you for the reblog. I am happy you think this was worthy of reblogging. Thanks for your wonderful support.
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…And perhaps she breathes the poetry that you write?
A beautiful poem is like a silk gown, rustling across the floor, its tail an epic of mermaids swimming behind.
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Thats would be wonderful if anyone felt like that about my poetry.
Yes, I have collected images of gown because of that very thought. They should both be delicate and inspiring.
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You have some lovely poems! This one was very enchanting, romantic. I look forward to seeing more 🙏
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Very kind. Thank you fopr taking the time out to read my posts and leave your lovely comments.
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You are most welcome, I found your content very interesting 😊
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smiling
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well woven…
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Smiling. Grateful for your kind read and words.
Thank you for taking the time to stop by.
I appreciate your kind gesture of support.
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Perfect words, Drew!
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Grateful that you think so Winnie. Thank you for your kind message.
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You’re welcome, Drew!
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Your love of words and women so beautifully woven together.
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Grateful that you enjoyed my poem. Also liked your use of the words woven. Smiling over here. Thank you so much for your kindness.
It is appreciated
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no idea how you get around to read us all with such a huge harem 🙂
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This is hysterical. I go on blog reading binges.
For some strange reasons it works for me.
Don’t know how lomng I can keep it up.
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hey with the quiet you might appreciate the interaction … you can still control it to do your writing. I never picked you for American …
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This made me laugh. Why didn’t you think I am American? I am so curious (but laughing too).
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your sensual passion I had thought you might be South American 🙂
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Smiling. Thanks for the compliment. I am of Cuban descent, so I guess it must be that hot latin blood. LOL
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ah then I was right, not usually too far out in my guesses … Latinos can teach the rest of us cold blooded creatures a thing or too 🙂
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Laughing so hard. I won’t say all of us are hot blooded, but I think I am. I am very expressive with the women in my past, my daughter. And my friends.
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yes I’d imagine that’s what you’re more comfortable with 🙂
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Smiling
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she is so creative, I can see how much you love her
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Smiling. I wish there was someone in my life.
Thank you for reading and for your words.
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so you are the creative one…. wow
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Laughing. Yeah, me and my imagination.
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Simply beautiful!
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Flattered by your lovely comment. Thank you for taking the time out to read. I appreciate your kindness.
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you are lucky to have such a muse
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Laughing. Thanks my friend. Appreciate it.
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It’s because of you I write one of these days I’ll be able to stir people like you do big hugs
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You are so kind with your words. I am truly grateful and humbled.
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Wow… can’t describe with words….👌👏💎
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Grateful for your very kind words. Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment. I appreciate your kindness.
Thank you.
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It’s always my pleasure Dear…read your words….ugh! Superb 👌🔥
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Flattered
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😘🤗🤗👌
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