concerto
my love
we envy the beach
as we listen to an aria
of the sea against the shore
an ensemble of French kisses
are the gentle prelude
to the acoustics of our love
behind closed doors
we perform a delicate concerto
the world will never know
a moonlight sonata
we are violin and bow
The Lonely Author 
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Tgank you so much for your support Chuck. I am flattered by your kindness.
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Encore, encore … I don’t want the lovely night to end … ♥️
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A beautiful comment to find on my blog. Grateful for your beautiful words.
Thank you for taking the time out to read and leave your lovely comment.
I appreciate it.
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Music and passion combined perfectly!
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Smiling. You are kind and generous with yur words.
Happy you liked my little poem. Thank you for your beautiful comment.
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You are most welcome Drew!
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The final line really sang. 😊
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So very happy that it did. Thank you for saying that.
Appreciate your kind words. Thank you.
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You’re welcome. 😊
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“listen to an aria of the sea against the shore!”……so lovely Drew!
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Grateful you think so. Thank you for your lovely comment. It made me so happy.
Thank you.
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Pleasure! 🙂
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Lovely!
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Happy that you think so.
Thank you so much.
Hope you are well.
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You know that you’re a tough act to follow!
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You are too kind
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Only because you are very inspiring with your writings. Wishing you a great day.
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Blushing. Flattered.
Have a wonderful day yourself.
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Loved it and didn’t expect that ending which is what made it so good!!!
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Happy you liked the poem and my finale.
Thank you for your lovely words of encouragement.
It means so much
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Damn this is really good
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Flattered and grateful that you think so. Thank you for your kind words. Appreciate it.
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Wonderfully written poem and it flows like a timeless concerto. The best kind of love is the simple moments, the quiet moments where the world doesn’t see. As Manessah said, you build the poem very nicely – and I like how this mimics the course of a love that is grows for each other. I also like how you use the imagery of the beach and sea. Beaches and seas are so beautiful, so every part of nature. That is exactly how each of us are and our love for each other is: we’re all part of this world, we all have feelings for each other, we are all one 🙂
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I like to think that love is two people needing and loving ne another, and together they make sweet music.
Alone, the violin and bow are useless. But together….ah, sweet music.
Thank you for taking out the time to read and comment. Your words made me happy.
Thank you for your kindness.
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What a beautiful aria – like a ballad – well done
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Thank you my kind friend. happy you liked it. Thanks so much
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My absolute pleasure 🌸
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Beautifully passionate and musical.
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Very happy that you think so. Thank you for stopping by to read and leave your beautiful comment.
I appreciate your kindness.
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You are kindly welcome.
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Making beautiful music together. Well done!
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Happy you think so. Thank you for reading and for your beautiful words.
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Absolutely stunning. Thank you so much! 💝🤗🌺
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Thank you so much. Grateful for your lovely comment.
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The music harmonics to a perfect photo. The poem blends so well and beautifully done. 🙂
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Charlie, grateful for you beautiful comment. Glad you think the image and words go so well together.
Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts. They are appreciated.
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You are very welcome my friend. 🙂
Your words always brighten my day. 🙂
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Love this Drew! So sensual and the visual is wonderful.
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Smiling. So happy that you liked this my friend.
It means a lot. Thank you.
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I really love this one. Perfect ending line too. ♥.
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Ah, Niki. You are so sweet. Happy you liked this one.
Thank you so much,
xoxo
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A sweet harmony of the two things I love the most; women and the sea! Excellent poetry!
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Humbled and grateful for your beautiful words of encouragement and support.
So happy you liked this poem. Thank you for your beautiful words.
They mean a lot. Thanks.
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I love your concerto specially moonlight sonatas,dear dew!!🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you Aruna. I am flattered that you liked it.
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Most welcome,my dear friend!!hey dew!!have you seen my some post-“moon light sonata of my dear”and”the colour of love is transperent”written before almost 10 days.if you have time ,plz read them and reply.
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Hey dew!! Here is a wonderful young blogger”21stcenturygrio
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Thank you Aruna.
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21stcentugrygrio-a new blog on my site.blogger write by name of kosmos & infinity poem(s).dear dew !!plz see him and tell me -how is his blog.i think that he is a young man.
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I will take a look my dear
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One of my favourites Andrew!! You express matters of the heart in the most passionate way!❤️
❤️carmen
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What a beautiful comment Carmen. I am flattered by your lovely words.
Thank you so much for expressing your thoughts. Thank you.
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nice…love the last line!
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Appreciate that Joseph. It was my favorite as well. Thank you.
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Music to my ears. Balm for the soul. Love this Drew. You play us well with the highs in ‘Concerto’ and the lows in ‘Yesterday it rained’.
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Haha
Beautiful words. Thank you. Yeah, those two poems were the highs and the lows of love. Very perceptive.
Thank you for reading. And for your beautiful words. I so appeciate your visit and thoughtful words.
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Big hugs Drew.
🤗🤗🤗
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Thanks.
Hugs right back.
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Lovely, Drew.
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Grateful you think so. Thank you so much for your kind words. They are appreciated.
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Very clever, sexy and passionate. I expect nothing less, but am wanting of more!
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Grateful that you think so.
Thank you for your generous words Resa.
So appreciated.
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Hehehe I’m squealing like a girl… oh wait, I am. 😀 This poem got all the ingredients for a good “kilig” moment. Beautiful.
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LOL Thank you so much for your beautiful words. You always spread sunshine and sweetness in your comment. And it is so appreciated. Thank you.
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And your comment just made my day! ❤️
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xo
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Excellent! 🙂
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Thank you my friend. Appreciated your kind message.
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Wow…. so nicely written
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Grateful that you think so. Thank you for rerading and for your words.
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Loved this musical symphony Drew. Your words composed a brilliant Sonata 💖
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Ah, thank you so much. I am happy you liked it. Thank you for your kind read and words. It is appreciated.
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I loved this, this was really something new and have really touched on my heart and relaxation of my mind thanks for sharing.
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Very touched by your beautiful words and appreciation. Thank you for taking the time out to read and leave your lovelt comment.
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This has such a happy feel ……… loving hearts dancing behind the scenes
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So happy you liked it. Thank you for your beautiful words.
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Pleasure was mine 😊
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You took my breath away!
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You are generous with your humbling words. Thank you for your kindness.
I appreciate the time you took to read and leave your beautiful and supportive
comment. Thank you.
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Thank you – I needed this today… 🙂
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I hope you are having a better day today.
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Love this
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Flattered and happy. Thank you for reading and for your words.
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Exquisite
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Flattered and grateful that you think so. Thank you so much for reading and for yur words.
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My pleasure dear 👌🤗
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