
origami
kiss my melancholy
kiss my regrets
silence them forever
like a never told vignette
kiss my yesterdays
bid them all adieu
the illusions I cherished
the dreams that never came true
kiss my pain
caress my history
come unfold my heart
like a tender origami
How are you so inspirational?
Brilliance in brevity, (like I always say) – a rare yet mastered skill of the lonely author!
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Very touched by your praise Isha. Feeling blessed.
Thank you for your beautiful words.
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Beautiful
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Glad that you think so. Thank you for reading and for your kindenss. It is appreciated.
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kiss my pain
caress my history
WOWOWOWOW!!
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Grateufl that you appreciated my poem. Thank you for sharing your reaction.
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Beautiful words
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Thank you so much for your lovely words. I appreciate your kindness. Thank you.
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You are Welcome, and likewise I do yours too. 🙂👍
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Oh wow wow!!
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Thank you so much MVS. Appreciate your kindness.
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This is very soft and gentle yet extremely profound. I love it.
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This was a little pouring it out for me.
Very happy that you liked it. Thank you for rerading and for your beautiful words.
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🙂
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I was just practising my origami skills on Mother’s day when I found my long-lost origami beginner’s book ha!
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That was a sweet thing to happen on Mother’s Day. I hope you had a beautiful one.
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That is a very sweet poem! It’s a like a swan, a swan I make out of paper. It’s the only origami I know, but like your words it’s wonderful when it’s finished for all to see.
When you pull the tail, the wings flap, and it flies! That’s the truth.
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Smiling so hard. Gowns, drawings, an eye for artwork. Now, origami.
Why am I not surporised?
Thank you Resa. Always appreciate your words.
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I have been reading this on a loop since yesterday and it leaves me mesmerized and bereft of words every time I read it . You poured out your tender heart so beautifully . This was so relatable.
Loads of love
😁😁
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Your comment leaves me speechless. I am touched that you like this so much.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem. It wasn’t easy to leave myself
so exposed, so I truly apprciate your kind and gerneous words.
Humbled and grateful.
Thank you.
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Beautiful!
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Gratreful that you think so. Thank you for reading and for your lovely comment. I appreciate yur kindness.
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So evocative, and beautiful cadence of the lines and rhymes, almost as though the poem itself is being folded (when you read it back having read the last line). You’re very talented! x
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Honestly, while I was writing it I found myself exposing (unfolding) myself to the world, so the ending
came naturally.
Appreciate your beautiful words. You always make me smile with your lovely comments. Very grateful.
Thanks.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
HOW SOOTHING THIS IS…!
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Smiling. Thank you John. You are a good friend and a kind soul.
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And a pesky poetry critic? 🙂
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Lol
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Thank you I really enjoyed that and the time that it took you to write it thank you so much for my tears
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Oh, my. Wouldn’t want anyone to cry.
Thank you for taking the timne out to read and share your beautiful reaction to my poem.
I am sincerely touched by your words. Thank you.
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awwwww
This wins me over into the most hidden parts of ones’ heart and soul..
Hoping for things not yet seen..
Absolutely beautiful my friend 💕
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Smiling so hard. Thrilled by your gorgeous words. I have been trying so hard to write from the heart,
so your words are heaven sent.
Grateful and flattered by your amazing words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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Well
I’m so happy to help you see your incredible talent 😊
Your words are always heartfelt – they tug at everyone’s and that makes your writings outstanding 😊
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You are so kind and generous with your words.
Truly grateful.
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😊
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Beautiful poems the both I read today
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Grateful that you took out to read and leave your beautiful comment.
Thank you so much for your kindness and support. It is greatly appreciated.
Have a great weekend.
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i can almost enjoy
the feeling of paper
cuts on my lips 🙂
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Laughing so hard. Thank you for this beautiful and creative comment. Grateful for your words and the laugh. Thank you.
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In an interesting turn of fate, I just wrote something about origami as well, but yours is much more lovely and romantic than mine:-)
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Thank you for this beautiful words of appreciation.
Looking forward to reading your post about origami.
Thank you for your kind message. Appreciate it.
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Very touching 💘 soft and warm
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Grateful that you thimnk so Jessica. Thank you for your kind words.
They are appreciated.
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Beautifully powerful. Kiss my whole scarred body and soul, scarred from the past, and give me renewed hope to love and live. Loved this poem!
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What a gorgeous and inspiring comment. Thank you so much for sharing your kind thoughts.
Very happy and gratefulmyou liked this little poem. Thank you for your wonderful words
and support. It is appreciated.
Apologies for my late response. My blurred vision has been a challenge. It is now, that
I am finally respoinding to these messages. Thank you.
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No worries. By the way, I think your lovely poem combines perfectly with this piece of music by a friend of mine, Mario Savioni, also a great poet like you, a photographer and musician. When I listen to this music I see your verses: https://soundcloud.com/mario-savioni/stealth-walk
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Thats is so kind and encouraging of you to say. I listened to his music and foudn myself transported to a serene and inspiring place.
Thank you for sharing it. And seriously, this comment, Humbling. Very grateful.
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You are welcome. So glad you enjoyed Mario’s beautiful music.
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wonderful, my friend
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Happy you enjoyed it Joseph.
Thank you my friend.
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Damn you unfolded me too I love this
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What a kind comment. It was a pleasure to unfold it here.
Thank you for your kind words. They are appreciated.
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