blindfold

blindfold

let me see
the waltz of your sigh
the rainless rainbows in your smile
show me your darkest secrets
so I can discover
auroras revolving around your soul
take me to the other side of
poetry and beauty
come remove my veil
blind me with your love

164 thoughts on “blindfold

  1. Good morning, Drew

    “blind me with your love”: the waltz of a sigh; rainless rainbows transformed into a smile; the removal of your veil by poetry and beauty. A bouquet of metaphors that mesmerizes the reader.

    Your call for love to be discovered in the darkest secrets.
    Excellent, Drew.

    Wishing you a marvelous day!

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  2. Wonderful”come remove my viel,blind me in your love”,a requesting from a blind folded soul.gorgeous.like a gem you beginning line”let me see the waltz of your sigh….”.A unique piece of the world of poem,my dear dew!!a beautiful and amazing poem,dear!!

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      1. Yeah.nothing is better than to blinded by love,my special friend dew!! When i read it many times then can more then before i know the imagination of this poem.what a beautiful work for a beloved .Weldon ,dear.you write a unique and masterpiece that can be a Milestone in the way of poetry.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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      2. Hey dew!!good morning.🌹i am searching your new post on your blog but here is nothing.what are you doing and where are you.i think-there will be the time of before night.here is morning’s time 8.00 o’clock.plz reply.

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          1. Dear dew!!now i am happy to see your mandolin’s poem entitled”Mediterranean Nights”,most sweet and beautiful nights and your mandolin.still now i am reading it again and again.after that i will give you a comment on that.the you,my dear!!plz reply.

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            1. Oh, Aruna you are so sweet and kind. I am touched that you liked it. I always wanted to write a poem with the instrument but never did it until now. Happy you liked it my dear friend.
              Thank you for reading and for your beautiful words.

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              1. Dear dew!! Plz give reply my other comment on your post given on your blog.if you feel disturbed then left that.but not blame on my stars.they never wink you and like my lonely mandolin.most sweet and lovely voice.do you hear the song”mandolin wind……”?very much sweet,dear!!plz try to hear this song 🌹🌹🌹

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      1. No reply,dear dew!!may be you are thinking or writing the new poem.so wait for MONDAY😊.good night,dear!! Bless you.a sweet kiss on your forehead.πŸ’•πŸ’•bye.

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  3. I HATE YOU! You tell me I am the one who has a problem but you keep posting photos of these goddamn bitches? You don’t need a photo of me when you google fucking skanks. Go to hell motherfucker! Do not lie to me and act like you give a shit when you want goddamn whores. You want ugly ass bitches not me. I hate you! I hate you!

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      1. Vaah.abusing you.she is half mind.do she not go in fashion show,if she understand herself most beautiful.πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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    1. Hate does NOTHING to the person to whom you are aiming it, especially to someone as good and kind as Andrew.
      It only poisons YOU from the inside.
      Good luck searching for the antidote to that nasty poison of yours, I think you’ll find it on the top shelf of the padded cell you escaped from.

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  4. My dear friend dew!! Your soul has her own auroras ,so your heart want to be mad and blind in love and write the poem of verses only of inspiration of your own soul’s auroras.are you agree dear?

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              1. Good morning,dead dew!!plz don’t be angry.i know better about your friends.i have a few friends.my first only love has converted all universal things like my beloved.you are rooted on your land of world but i am not.you are wise but i am silly.you are so much lucky having so much friends.but i frighten in group of humans.i like live only alone and tell with imaginative things.Good morning,dear!!here is the time of dawn.there will be time of night,so for you good night.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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  5. Love this, Drew! I don’t see a β€œreblog” button but if I did, I’d love to reblog this. Amazing!!!

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  6. Hey my…term of endearment.

    I had a bit of a problem commenting on this one for a few reasons, some of which you can probably guess (silly girly crushes and such etc etc and so on and so forth) but also mainly because usually I love to break down your wordsΒ  and lines and stanzas and delve deep and dive in, in my nerdy affectionate way but actually this one, I literally (the proper use of the word, not the annoying millennial use of it) loved every single word so you tell me how am I supposed to comment on that!

    I think what I loved the most is that the persona is talking to his object of love so directly and so personally that nothing else seems to matter except these words here. So much love and passion. Where do you keep it? Feels like it will overflow if you don’t let it out in beautiful heartbeats every so often (like twice a week-ish)

    It’s a little weakness of mine when you write things like this. I get a bit confused and stuff. Your imagery was perfect. But effortless. And that’s not an easy task. But you do it so effing well it’s addictive, I tell you.

    Still re-reading this so I can pick out the bits I love the most.

    Asking someone for their darkest secrets did stand out for me … I have a few. They are pretty dark. Do you think the aurora of a soul like mine would still be visible…sigh. I wonder.

    I also loved rainless rainbows so much. No storms…only the peace and beauty after them, right.

    Musical sighs that waltz… I’m doing one right now if you can picture it.

    And of course. Your finale. A request or is it a command…I am hearing it as a command to blind you with love which, who could possibly disobey such a sensual instruction?

    The whole thing was all love and tender words of gentle, addictive and irresistible affection. Or something more than that.

    I may have inappropriate feelings for this poem.

    Your,

    Fiery

    πŸ’‹πŸ”₯❀️

    P.S
    That image…oh my god. Too many things I love about it to mention! Just about holding it together lol

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    1. Very touched by your message. For some reason (I imagine the length of your beautiful comment and my lengthy humourous reply). I have tried to reply unsuccessfully three times.
      I know you love these poems where I speak to someone (often my ficticious muse or some future lover). So I am not surprised by your words, but very humble and grateful.

      You inappropriate thoughts for this poem touches me. Thank you for your beautiful words.

      Lonely Author xoxo

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      1. Hmmm….all I heard was “beautiful”.πŸ’‹

        But seriously, even WP has something against me that it won’t let you respond to my wonderful thoughts for you???

        Holy smokes…this conspiracy goes deeper than we thought, Batman….

        So my VERY LONG and incomparable comment will forever sit next to your sweet, teeny tiny reply and look all important and special? I’m good with that πŸ’‹

        You make me giggle.

        Your,
        Fiery
        ❀️πŸ”₯

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  7. Really wonderful play between shielded eyes and the always present hidden secrets. Veils finally being removed by a loving soul. Beautiful and mysterious. Blindfolds are fun but you already know that Andrew πŸ™‚

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    1. This is a gorgeous comment. Actually more poetic than my poem. Grateful for your beautiful
      comment here. Flattered you liked this. Thank you.

      Blindfolds……..yes, I have seen and not seen a few. Wink.
      Thank you for your gorgeous words. Have a beautiful weekend.

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  8. Oh my goodness…I did so love this poem. So many images that just spoke to me. “The waltz of your sigh…” just a perfect line that says so much in so few words. It reminds me of that beautiful song sung by Josh Groban that I actually did a post on several years ago. It’s called “So She Dances.” Here is the link to that song…

    And this one… “Come remove my veil…blind me with your love” I’m not sure what it means to you, but to me it’s as if would be calling for my future lover to come and take the veil off my eyes so I know who they are. Sigh…
    Yes, this was definitely a sigh-worthy poem. xoxo

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    1. Smiling as I read this beautiful comment. You are generous with your beautiful words.

      We read that finale veil/blind the exact same way. A desire to be blinded by the love of a future lover. Sometimes, we have to hold onto that expectation. It may be all we have and it may appear to be empty, but it will help us carry on until that day finally arrive.

      The waltz of your sigh….I surprised myself withh that line. I find myself writing about sighs so much. Surprised no one has called me out on that.

      Thank you for your beautiful words and support Melissa. I am always touched by the eway you read me. Thank you for your friendship.

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