
alchemy
everywhere time inscribes his indelible marks
there remains one untainted corner
beneath a thousand wounds
of boiling sensitivities
our hearts are a lab
creating poetic alchemy
a lonely place where the unloved
transform melancholy into poetry
You have a gift with words, Drew!
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That is such a lovely thing to say.
Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Always a pleasure, Drew.
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Absolutely beautiful and the last 2 lines simply feel so deeply true.
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Grateful and flattered by your sweet words and wonderful appreciation.
Thank you so much for the read and encouraging message.
You haven’t posted in a while.
Hope you are well.
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You are very welcome.
I have been taking a lot of time offline, in solitude and nature, traveling some. I too am hoping that the inspiration to post returns to me soon. I wish to stay present in this space. Thank you so much for asking.
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Enjoy. Wishing love and happiness to you and yours.
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Blessed are the unloved! 🙂 But the loved ones too know some alchemy 🙂
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Such a beautiful comment. Thank you for blessing my post with your thoughts.
Appreciate your kindness and support.
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A lovely line: “a lonely place where the unloved transform melancholy into poetry”.
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Grateful you think so. Thank you so much for your lovely words.
They are appreciated.
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Poignant and perfectly penned…
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Flattered that you think so. Thank you for your kind words.
They are greatly appreciated.
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Reblogged this on Vijayagiri views.
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Thank you so much for the kind gesture of reblogging my poem.
I appreciate the kindness and support.
Flattered that you thought this was worthy of reblogging.
Thank you
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Our hearts are a lab… What a unique way of phrasing it, my friend! I mean that in a good way 🙂
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Smiling at your lovely comment. Happy you appreciate the originality.
Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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Oh this is beautiful
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Flattered that you think so. Thank you for your kind read and words.
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This is how poets hide their emotions in poetry or should I say let their emotions come out.
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You are so right. It is a delicate combination of the two. oets write about certain things in life
and in those words are hidden their own experiences, feelings, and thoughts\.
Thank you for sharing your insightful thoughts. Truly appreciate it.
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So true😊😊 we want to hide but we want to be seen too, quite a weird combination 😊😊
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😍😍😍😍😍emojis describe more than words hun😁
Seriously…
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Oh my god. You have my cheeks red.
Thank you so much.
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Drew…..sssshhh
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LOL
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This one just spoke go me! God, you are unbelievable.
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MVS, you made my day with this beautiful comment.
To hear this from someone as inspiring as you makes me so happy.
Grateful for your visit. Thank you.
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The last part about the alchemical transformation plays out so beautifully to my mind’s eye. Enchanted!
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Stunning. I might have a tear in my eyes..
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Flattered and grateful for your kind message.
Thank you fo reading and for gracing my post with your lovely comment.
Appreciate it. Thanks.
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It was an absolute pleasure to read, as many of your pieces are.
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Smiling. Grateful.
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