
the dreams i had
you are the twilight in my eyes
that never blossomed into dawn
the empty nights sans moonlight
imagining the phases of your soul
renouncing the affections of women
to appease this unrequited heart
and all the love it has to give
for you my beloved
I cling to illusions
embracing all the dreams i had
yet never lived
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A song that very much inspires mi. Sabor A Mi (Taste of Me).
I don’t know if eternity has love
But there, just like here
In your mouth you will carry
A taste of me ๐ต๐ถ
Dear Andrew, I did not want to comment before I listened to the song you shared. I love Latino music in general so it was definitely a treat! Your opening two lines owned my eyes… Even though i read your poem it was those lines that were enjoyed the most… Just makes you want to sigh marvel at the power of love returned or not.
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Querida, so grateful for your beautiful words.
I have been working so hard on the opening lines of my poems. So to hear you say this, I am grateful and touched.
Love is powerful, returned or not.
Thank you so much. Hope you are doing well.
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Is that Edie Gorme in that picture? I donโt know why I know that, but I do! Lovely words, sweet man โค๏ธ
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Yes, that is Eydie Gorme. I have seen made old videos of her. My grandfather
used to play her records all the time. I believe she was married to a very handsome guy.
Steve Lawrence.
Thank you for your appreciation.
Always blessed to see your words.
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Yes, I remember my parents liking Steve and Eydie!
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Yeah, they were a good looking couple.
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Edie Gorme in the music clip, I mean, not the first picture, lol
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I understood Beautiful.
LOL
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Mwah ๐
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SMOOCH
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“embracing all the dreams i had
yet never lived”
These lines says a lot!
Amazing work!
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Blushing at your kind appreciation. It is truly lovely and inspiring.
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts.
I feel lucky.
Have an amazing day.
Be safe.
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Love the song, but not as much as your poem.
Unrequited love is yet, love.
Perhaps in some ways, at some particular moments, all love is unrequited.
Strong and passionate, just like you!
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Of course, unrequited love is still a beautiful for of love. You are probably right. The start of all love is most likely unrequited. Never thought of that, but it is true.
Haha. Thank you for the double compliment. That was beautiful. Grateful and blushing Resa.
Resa, I commented on a couple of your posts last week. I am certain you replied. I just wanted to let you know I haven’t answered because there are so many comments likes and follows coming it, it is knocking all the messages from different blogs out of my queue. Of course, my dashboard holds the messages for my blog, BUT the messages where bloggers are responding to my comments on their posts is being lost. Thus, I would have to go to ever blog where I commented on over the past seven days and see if my comments were returned. A daunting task. I tell you this because I don’t want you to think I am ignoring you in any way.
Thank you for your beautiful words. You always find a way to make me happy.
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Gorgeously nostalgic
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So happy anf grateful that you think so.
Thank you for your wonderful comment.
Appreciate it.
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Absolutely beautiful
So
Romantic – makes my heart smile
I swayed to your words ๐
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You are always so sweet.
โค๏ธ
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Just sharing my grateful heart ๐ for all your beautiful writings ๐
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So grateful
thank you
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nice, Andrew!
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Grateful you appreciateed my poem.
Thanks my friend.
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Great work. You never disappoint ๐
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Oh my God. I am so touched.
Your kind words touch me. Thank you for your kindness and support.
It is greatly appreciated.
xo
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So beautiful and so much of sad longings.
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Your kind words touch me. Thank you for your kindness and support.
It is greatly appreciated.
xo
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This is beautiful, as always, Drew. And this song is fantastic! Thank You for All. Hoping You are well…. ๐คโค๏ธ๐
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Grateful for your beautiful words Katy.
Please, take good care of yourself.
Stay inspired.
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My pleasure, Drew!!! And Thank You. You too! Perhaps this time next year things will be much, much different for the world in a wonderful way. Wouldn’t it be wonderful if the healing for all of this bled over into some of the tons of ways we as a world family could change/grow. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธI bet it is…..sending hugs Your way and hopes You are well! I will be over soon! ๐คโค๏ธ๐
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Hopefully, the world is much different, and better next year.
2020 has been rough for most of us.
Thank you
xoxo
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It truly has, hasn’t it? You had extra sprinkles and a cherry on top of Your personal Twilight Zone. Everyone I know is scratching their heads. So bizarre right now on every level. Hopefully we will have shifted a bit next year…healed. I hope You are healing wonderfully!!! And that next year is ions away from what You’ve experienced in this one!!! ๐คโค๏ธ๐
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Beautiful and lovely dreams ,you had…๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด
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Thank you Aruna. Appreciate your kind words.
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You are most welcome,dear dew!!๐น
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Ian, thank you so miuch my friend.
Hope you are doing well.
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I don’t know Spanish. Wish I did. It is a beautiful, beautiful song. Thanks for sharing. I don’t think one needs language to understand the beauty of music.
By the way, “renouncing the affections of women
to appease this unrequited heart” -. ๐
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Always appreciate your visits and lovely words๐น
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Take care Drew.
All the best.
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Appreciated my friend
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Lovely. Reminds me of a very recent wound. Thank you for your words
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Sorry you have recent wounds. That is unfortunate. I hope it can heel quickly.
Thank you for expressing your thoughts on my poem. I am grateful for your kindness and support. Thank you,
Be safe.
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You as well โฅ๏ธ
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Thanks
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Absolutely beautiful poetry. An honor to connect with your work. So inspiring!
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So grateful you enjoyed my little poem.
Thank you for saying that.
I am really touched by your message.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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It is my pleasure, Drew! ๐
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This is heartwarming.๐ Itโs seems like you were clinging to her desperately that you wanted not to wake up from a dream of yesterday. Keep loving!๐๐
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That is suich a beautiful comment. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your touching thoughts.
I am so grateful for your kind words.
Thank you.
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Alright. Iโm also your blog big fan.๐
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You are very kind.
You have me blushing
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Take care.โค๏ธ
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Howโs your heart procedure, if I may ask?๐ Sorry I just read it today. But Iโm hoping that everything went well. Keep going…โค๏ธ
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The procedure is tomorrow. Thank you for asking.
Not sure how long my recovery will take.
Please take good care of yourself and your loved ones.
Be safe.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. โค๏ธ
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Hi. Donโt know if you can still read this now but take care. Looking forward to your update. Praying here for your fast recovery. Godbless.โค๏ธ
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Reading this beautiful message ow. Thank you for your prayers.
That really mean a lot to me.
Thank you so much. Bless you for your kindness and support.
Hope you and yours are well.
Take good care of yourself.
This virus is still lurking.
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Yeah we continue taking safety measures here. No normal activity yet. But I think we will not go back to that point since we are practicing the new normal already. Life must go on.
Anyway, Iโm praying for your fast recovery there. Godbless. Take care.
โค๏ธRoxy
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Roxy, thank you for this beautiful message. I appreciate your kind words.
My recovery was going well, until last week.
I am going in for emergency open heart surgery tomorrow.
So, ypour kind words will stay with me.
Thank you so much for your beautiful message.
Very appreciated.
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Hi. Thanks for reading my message and thank you for your reply. I pray that your surgery will turn good. And I hope that after the surgery you will feel better than before. Praying here for your speedy recovery.
Til then.
With โค๏ธ
Roxy
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nice piece
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Appreciate it. Thank you very much.
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Do you find you are dreaming stranger “things” now – during this silly season of self incarceration?
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My poetry has changed. I am freeing my imagination more than I have ever before.
So, I guess my answer is yes I am.
Thank you for the beautiful question. I appreciate the kind read and your words.
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So romantic..
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Thank you so m uch for reading and for leaving your kind words.
It is very appreciated.
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What a beautiful poem. So romantic! Just wrote about lucid dreaming today, the keyword “dreams” brought me here. Do check mine out and tell me what you think as well!
http://rachelstruth.home.blog/2020/05/09/lucid-dreaming/
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Rachel, read and left a comment about lucid dreaming.
Thank you for letting me know that this poem came up under a search “dreams.”
Your kind words and vkisit made me happy.
So nice to meet you.
Stay safe. Keep dreaming.
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Great to meet you too! Do you lucid dream as well sometimes?
My next post will be about my recent dream about wooden doors in a basement corridor. Would love to hear what you think ๐
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I have lucid dreams every so often. They are such a pleasure.
I will check it out. Thanks.
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All moments of life are dreams,my dear dew!! In this worst world only dreams inspire us to be happy,to enjoy the life in enchanting way.so see every time only happy dreams and be happy.fortunately,our any dream may be true.mostly dreams are true if we believe,my dear dew๐น
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Well written ๐
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Happy you think so. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Appreciae your kindness
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