Love hung in her closet
like a lonely dress
no longer in style
If I told her
that dress was made for her
would she wear it
one more time
She looks beautiful in love
She wears it well
One day I may tell her
Perhaps, I never will
If I don’t
it will always hurt
to know
Love hung in her closet
it was never worn
for me
Delighted that you like them. And very happy you enjoyed my little poem. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your thoughts. I am touched by your kindness.
That is a wonderful coompliment. I am touched to have John Lennon mentioned on my post.
Thank you for your generoous words and indness.
It is greatly appreciated.
I’m working on a new post to publish in a couple of weeks…
Do you mind if I use “love hung in her closet”? I have included your blog address…
But can also mention your name, I just don’t know what it is…
My name is Andrew, but everyone calls me Drew. My poem has something tro do with your post? Sure why not. Can you let me know, so I can read your post?
It was an amazing metaphor. Poems thrive on unrequited love, don’t they…very well-written.
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Grateful for your kind words. Your appreciation makes me so happy.
Thak you for stopping by and for sharing your thoughts.
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beautiful poem! you are super inspiring for young aspiring authors !
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I am touched by your beautiful words.
That is so kind of you to say.
Honored and flattered.
Thank you.
Have a beautiful week.
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Metaphors have always been my favourite. Beautifully penned.
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Delighted that you like them. And very happy you enjoyed my little poem. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your thoughts. I am touched by your kindness.
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Beautiful as always, Drew 😊
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Appreciate your sweet words. Thank you so much. 🌹
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Emotive and wonderfully written! ❤
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Grateful for your kind words. Appreciate yopu stopping by to read and share your thoughts. Thank you so much
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Thank you for the lovely read!
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You are very sweet. Thanks.🌹
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Beautiful, haunting words. Nicely done.
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Touched by your beautiful words and appreciation.
Thank you for your generous comment.
Flattered.
Have a beautiful week.
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Beautiful poem. I bet if John Lennon read this poem he would turn it into a song. 🙂
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That is a wonderful coompliment. I am touched to have John Lennon mentioned on my post.
Thank you for your generoous words and indness.
It is greatly appreciated.
Have a beautiful week.
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Grateful for the kind gesture of your support.
Thank you for sharing my poem.
Your generosity is appreciated.
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Love it
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Grateful and flatered that you do. Thank you for reading and for sharing oyur thoughts.
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Your welcome
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Beautiful !❤️
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Grateful for your appreciation and words. Thank you from the bottom of my ❤.
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Aww thank you so much. And that means so much to me.❤️
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❤️
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I felt that one in my heart. “…it was never worn for me.” That is a pain you never forget. Beautifully done Drew!
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Your words have touched me like you could never imagine. Grateful and flattered by this beautiful comment.
Thank you my friend.
Grateful.💜
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Beautifully using the metaphor.now i bring that her now.most innocent girl❤
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Thank you for your beautiful wordas my dear friend. They are appreciated.
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A lot of thanks , I have kept in your closet of love😚😚😚
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Smling
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Happy to make you a heartily smiling.🌹
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Did you see my new video
it is very short
a nice poem
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I’m working on a new post to publish in a couple of weeks…
Do you mind if I use “love hung in her closet”? I have included your blog address…
But can also mention your name, I just don’t know what it is…
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My name is Andrew, but everyone calls me Drew. My poem has something tro do with your post? Sure why not. Can you let me know, so I can read your post?
Have a good one.
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Thank you Drew!
It will be called The Weaver…
I will send you a notification when I publish it! I just think that sentence is so enchanting…
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Smiling. dleighted you liked it.
Looking forward to your post.
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I hope you enjoy it 😊
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I am sure I will.
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