Devil Girl Diaries
Every man has that one unforgettable female that will haunt him until the end of time; the chick that got away. Allie detested television, vanilla ice cream, and missionary. My muse had a nickname. Devil Girl I called her. My name is Andrew. This is our story.
Determined to explore the depths of sexuality
Devil Girl took me to heights I had never known
our exploits began on a sunny day at a mall
returning from the ladies room
she jammed her wet red thong in my hand
the act left me trembling like a frightened deer
her short skirt threatened to expose
the sweet treasure I refused to share
the image of her bare ass caught my breath
teasing, taunting, and provoking me
she strutted away in high heels
intoxicated by her swaying skirt
my heart pounded against my ribs
devoid of saliva thirst overwhelmed me
Devil girl slinked into the food court
sat across a ravenous construction crew
before I could beg my nymph to stop
her beautiful pale legs parted slightly
exposing the paradise that was only mine
my life would never be the same
More Devil Girl Diaries next Saturday
Sounds like the type of woman most men would be excited to bring home to the family during the holiday season! It also sounds like the type of woman most families would develop “lock jaw” from. From my professional perspective, “eye candy” is not a cause of diabetes, so you get a thumbs up from me! 😀
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Hahaha. No never could introduce her to Mom. Yeah, she locked quite a few jaws, including mine. Thank you so much.
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Great post! Thanks for sharing!! … I’m really looking forward to the next installment 😍
*first person to comment, yay!!!!*
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Yeah. Thanks for commenting. Next Saturday there will be more. Thank you so much for your support.
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I like your story…it’s fantastic!
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Thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed.
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She gets mega points for not watching TV. This is assuming she was well read. If not, those points get detracted. Interesting read. I look forward to more of the story.
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Thanks for the sweet comments. TV bored her. Books were her thing. She only stopped reading to eat, bathe, work, and well you can guess. Thanks for reading. More next week.
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My kind of girl. Wishing you and yours a lovely weekend.
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Thanks. Blessings for you and yours. Thanks fro stopping by.
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You’re welcome. My pleasure x
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WOW! I am SO glad that I found you at the beginning of this story. I can’t wait for more! Devil Girl sounds like she would be fun to hang out with. Maybe her and I could exchange stories. 🙂
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Thanks for the compliment. She was fun indeed. A truly amazing and uninhibited woman. Thanks for stopping by. Really appreciate it.
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NO, THANK YOU! What a WONDERFUL way to start my day. I am going to spend the day shopping with a girlfriend, and I am going to smile every time I pass by the food court, but she won’t know why. I think I have decided to leave my panties at home too. 😛
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OMG. Devil Girl always told me she felt more sexy that way. Pantyless was a way of life with her. Have fun. Please let me know how it goes. lol. Thanks for being supportive, I wasn’t sure how people were going to react.
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I am pantiless quite often. I like it that way too. 🙂
WHY would you question how people would react to your writing? You write beautifully and it’s HOT as HELL! What’s not to love? 🙂
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Oh, wow. I am flattered. I try to write sexy without being vulgar or offensive. You sound like an exciting woman.
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Exciting, maybe. Vulgar and Offensive, DEFINITELY! 🙂
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Ok. lol My kind of lady.
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🙂 Tell you about my “shopping” trip later.
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Please, I beg of you.
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LOL! I LOVE a man that begs. 🙂
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hahaha please let me know of your shopping trip
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Sly dawg you embedding your erotica in your main site after I designed the other site for you, And this is how you repay me. LOL
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Oh yes it is very good. If you want to give people you know what just a tad longer and action lol
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LOL The is a reason for this madness. Something else to offer any literary agents who wonder across my page. Did you enjoy it? Your opinion means a lot to me.
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Yes I did enjoy it. It was a teaser. lol
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She really was.
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So, are these women you are writing about real women who have been in your life? If so, you are a lucky (if not a bit devilish yourself) man.
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Hahaha. Very real woman.Very real episode. I always loved ad girls. Yeah, I can be a it of a daredevil myself. Thanks for stopping by.
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Wonderful prose. Would you write something about me? LOL
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When you have a chance, go to my contact me. That way no one will see it. Tell me about yourself. Describe yourself. Tell me about your life. Tell me as much as you can and I will try. How is that?
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That would be wonderful.
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Good. I will be waiting.
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Okay. Now, I’m embarrassed. I have no idea how to do that.
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Do it as if you are talking to me. Describe yourself. A little about your likes and dislikes. Your life. It will be easy.
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I meant I don’t know how to contact you privately 😦
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ON my page I have a contact me. Whatever you write there will come to me directly without anyone seeing it.
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GOT IT! Thanks.
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So, it would be in the “leave a reply” box?
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Exactly. For my eyes only.
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Oh My God!! I can imagine all of it…great post!! You knew what you were getting into.Can’t wait for saturday,to know what you did 😀
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Thanks for reading it. Happy you enjoyed.
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🙂 🙂
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Thanks. There will be more.
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Your welcome…I can’t wait 😀
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Thanks
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🙂
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You really have a knack for writing erotic work! You definitely succeed in not being offensive but still being very hot and sexy. I was completely lost in it, looking forward to reading more next weekend 🙂
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Thank you. I am so flattered. Thanks for stopping by. More next Saturday.
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Be still my beating heart… 😉
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Oh wow. Thanks so much for reading. More next week.
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You with your pen paints a colorful picture on the surface, each
Line is provocative, and intense. If someone never had the
Opportunity to feel such emotions, like me…I am lost.
Bella declou
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Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I hope that means you will be back for more. Thanks for stopping by.
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Yes I sure will…your writing is like a good cup of coffee
In the morning so tasty, more and more I want the second cup…Stay well
Bella declou
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Thanks for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day.
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This was a most pleasant surprise when I opened my laptop, having returned from an impromptu lunch and a rather splendid hour or more in the bookstore. Teasingly wonderful.
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Thank you so much. Aw, you went to the book store. I can spend hours in a book store. Thanks for the compliment. More next Saturday.
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If I had more hours, I’d still be there, but I’m here instead and there are some most interesting reads. I shall look forward to Saturday with baited breath and anticipation.
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Thanks for saying that.
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I can’t wait till next Saturday Lonely Author. This is an amazing read. Smiles.
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Thank you for reading . True story. Amazing woman.
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I’m sure she was and is. Smiles.
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Thanks
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You’re most welcome.
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Way to not cross the line, leaving a little to the imagination. Nicely done! Looking forward to next Saturday!
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Thanks. I don’t like to be vulgar. It isn’t necessary. Thanks for reading it. Really appreciate your input.
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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I wish to meet this devil girl
😍😍😉😉
My life would never be the same
👊👍✌👌
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hahaha Nice comment. Most amazing woman.
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Ha ha ha … Loved it … It’s driving into it … 👌😉😍
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lol Happy you enjoyed my friend.
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ooh. the lustful gaze…. I like how you picture the scene in your words; a very good beginning.
-HA
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Thanks so much. I really appreciate it.
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A little flustered here.. that was written very well my friend.
You have my attention.
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Thanks, grateful to have your attention. I try to to do it sexy but clean, no raunchy vulgar language needed. Thanks for your comment.
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Oh my! I can’t wait to read more!
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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My pleasure. Smiles.
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Intrigued… hooked… can’t wait to see what follows 😉
and you’re only updating on Saturdays??? Really???
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Yeah, today was my first. Every Saturday I will tell more. Thanks for reading.
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I’ll definitely be checking in.
And loving your blog posts too.
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Thanks so much
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Very Welcome.
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Sensuous and enticing. Maybe trips to the malls were never dull anymore after this. 🙂
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Not with her. They were never dull.
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😀 thought so.
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NEVER a dull moment
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😀 😀
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Thank you so much. You are so kind to me. I really appreciate it.
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As always l will return 👌
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Thanks
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Oh wow. (That’s all I can say 😀 )
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Is that good or bad? Be honest.
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Good! Made me speechless.
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Thanks so much. I am a novelist, but I wanted to challenge myself with something different. Thanks for stopping by.
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Different, indeed! I’m still looking around your blog and enjoying your posts. Looking forward to reading more 🙂
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Thank you so much. It will e a pleasure discussing writing with you.
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There’s the missing “b” again 😀
No, it’ll be my pleasure 🙂
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Yeah, I am having a big problem with my B. Getting a new keyboard for my laptop today/ Thanks. lol
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Lol. You’re welcome. I just noticed you were going around without your B 😀
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Fighting with my B for a week. New keyboard today. Happy me
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Wheee! 😀
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Devil girl or Devil girlS dairies? 😉 😀
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Hahaha. Girl. Only found one like her in all my life. Thanks for stopping by.
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Lucky you. ;D
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Yeah.
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But I let her slip away.
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May be it was destined that she was to become a series in your WP. :’)
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You found the one bright. Thanks
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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My, that was fantastic and a lot of fun to read! I’m looking forward to your next story.
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Ah, rummaging through my story were you. lol. Thank you so much for reading it. Happy you liked it.
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Such an erotic one…i liked the way you uncovered the paradise 🙂
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I often call the female form or private parts “paradise.” Thanks for reading.
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Devilish girl? Or Sweet Heaven Girl!? I’m hooked!! Can’t wait for next week!? Hot! Hot! Hot!! 🙂
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Thanks Carisa. She was heaven and hell all rolled up in one. Thanks so much for reading. Appreciate it.
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Gosh sex is a good thing. Best when writers give it to you (hah!) straight (or not). Excellent (warm, running to hot) piece. Bravo.
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Thank you so much. I try not to be raunchy or vulgar. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Really appreciate it. Have a wonderful day.
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Based on reality, huh? I will certainly be following … smiles.
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lol Yeah
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LOL Thanks for the kind words and gesture. I appreciate it. Does in Memoriam mean I’m dead??? Just asking.
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Lord’a’mercy, give me a fan . . . whew!! Hot stuff. Will have to catch up with this.:D
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LOL Thanks for reading
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
WOWIE!
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Smiling
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