Photo taken by moi.
Every man has that one unforgettable woman that will haunt him until his final day; the girl that got away. Allie detested television, vanilla ice cream, and missionary. She explored the depths of her sexuality; while I discovered the heights of my pain. My muse had a nickname. I called her Devil Girl. I write these words to ease my sorrows. My name is Andrew.
This is our story.
Naked in a sea of nakedness
My eyes searched for Allie
Why did I come to this sex club
lust and desire
to satisfy her curiosity
Or my own
Why did I take my eyes off of her
This was dangerous
Like taking an arsonist to a lumber yard
And this idiot
Gave her matches and lighter fluid
My heart beat like jungle drums
Where was she
I tried to sort through the images
Bodies writhing
Mouths kissing
She was nowhere to be found
Then I spotted a small crowd
My heart sank
Allie loved an audience
I slowly neared
Dreading what was coming
My eyes needed to see
What my heart would never accept
Looking over broad shoulders
I found the woman of my life
With three men
Hands explored the treasures
I thought were only mine
They did everything
But one thing bothered me
More than anything else
The look on her face
She was truly happy
With head bowed I walked away
It will never be the same Devil Girl
To be continued
Sad sigh.
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Smiling. Thanks for reading.
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Are you sure it was her? She’ll probably have an irresistible answer. 😉
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LOL Is everyone trying to defend her?
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She IS a little Devil, isn’t she? 😉
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Yes indeed
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You the horn dog didn’t jump in…………..ummmm! Shang, shang lol
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LOL Here we go with the first big laugh of the day.
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Same question…. Y dint u do jumping & pumping
Hahahahaha
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Not into the crowd thing. Honestly, unless I went for here nose, all other parts were busy. lol
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I have heard of such clubs at US… crowd battering each slut.. many male batch mates have already been there… am curious to see… though sounds yak!
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There are many of them here in New York City. For anyone who likes that stuff or likes to watch it can be fun.
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🙂
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I am with the spirit keepers -why didn’t you jump in???
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lol
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Ya! 2 to 1. You lost your status of being a horn dog now lol
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LOL Damn. Well, I still retain that title around the neighborhood. lol
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A neighborhood of 3 lol
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You made me cry. shit LOL
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Ha ha ha
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Sad for her. Do you ever wonder where she is now? The poor thing must have totally imploded energywise. It is not a good thing to share one’s energy (and the sexual act is a very powerful means of sharing energy) with anybody and everybody.
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Exactly. I agree 100%. I think of her often. Like you said, she imploded somewhere. The human body could only take so much. And she always wanted to raise the stakes.
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Wow, poor choice for date night, hmm? 😉
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hahaha I always had a weakness for bad girls. Thanks for reading.
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I do love Devil Girl!
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Laughing. Thank you for saying that.
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So….I’m thinking she’s a…..lady of the night…or maybe a porn star?
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Part exhibionist, part freak. Thanks for reading. lol
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Ha. It never ceases to amaze me at how appealing that kind of woman is to a man. What ever happened to wanting a good girl? Oh, wait….that’s a thing of the past. LOL
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Seriously, for many men that is a thing of the past. I am married, but I have to admit, I’m still attracted to bad girls. I can’t explain why. But that is the way I am. lol
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You ole’ lech you! I’ll be honest….sometimes (not very often) I wish I had been a bad girl….maybe Loser would have paid some attention to me instead of all those tramps. Then again, I have never met a man yet who could make me abandon my honor. Sigh.
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Never abandon your honor for anyone. And there are plenty of ways to be a bad girl, and be faithful at the same time.
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I tried it once….dressed up in a teddy complete with fishnet hose and garter…..he laughed at me and walked down the hall.
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You would have had my undivided attention. Sorry, to say this, but I have doubts about his commitment.
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It’s pretty obvious now. His commitments were to reach the top (with my babysitting help), drink as much beer at a bar as he possibly could (with my babysitting help) and have as many tramps in his life, offering praise and adulation (with my babysitting help.)
I guess (as we say in the South) “I done good.”
What I wouldn’t give to have that life back.
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Sad, but true. You done good. And it wasn’t appreciated. THAT SUCKS.
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Well, it’s good to know that some men appreciate their women dressing sexy (if that picture is of your lovely wife…if not….you’ve got some ‘splainin’ to do, Loocy!)
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That is my wife. LOL
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I don’t know who is luckier….you or her!
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LOL Thank you foir saying that. I am.
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PERFECT start to my crazy day. It may never be the same, but it better NOT be over either. 👠
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LOL You make me laugh so hard. Thanks. Hope you are well.
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Not all well, but all survivable. I hope you have wonderful plans for the day.
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Hosting a small dinner party. I do quite a bit of that. Wine??
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What time should I be there? Tell me what you are making and I’ll bring the wine. 🍷
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LOL Even while my friends do that hard stuff, I stick to the wine. Lady after my own heart.
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I Love watching a man cook for me while I sip my wine. I’ll expect small tastes along the way, gently placed in my mouth so I don’t soil my fingers. 😉
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LOL I am a pretty good cook, although I would never do it for a group. Yeah, I would give you little tastes along the way. lol YOU are bad.
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Yes Sir, I am. That’s why you like me, now isn’t it? 💋
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Exactly.
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💋 XO
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Uhm.. I think there are ways to be a “bad girl”, even if monogamous… 😁 But I will hold my tongue now! 😉
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You are perfectly right. There are pletny of ways for a monogamous girl to be a bad girl. Thanks for reading.
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Poor guy. Yet I’m sure he’ll go back for more…
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LOL Yeah, he was a sucker.
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It happens. To women, too. (Not that I’m speaking from experience… oh no… not me…)
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LOL I am sure not you.
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Aw. Sorry to hear you were heartbroken. But if someone you love is happy, doesn’t it make you happy? 🙂
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You know me well. Normally, I would say yes. But when my lady is being past around like the were finger food, I have a few reservations. I guess I am a little fickle. lol
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I know the feeling… It’s damned if you do….kinda thing. One part of you wants to trap your loved one so they don’t go out anywhere and they answer only to you, the other wants them to be happy to do what they want to do. I’m blabbering lol.
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No, you are right. I’ve never tried to tie a woman down. I am very secure about myself. I treat women like butterflies. Spread you wings and discover all the beauty in yourself and in life. But she shouldn’t be passed around like a bowl of party treats.
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You’re a good man, Andrew. 🙂
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Thanks for saying that.
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Oh my. Well that’s just sad. I think when we care we always want to think the best, find the best but sometimes it just isn’t there. And you obviously, smiles, found greener pastures.
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LOL Great observation. A lot about her I loved, but she started crossing lines, that were beyond me. I could give so much. And I honestly, I owed it to myself to find someone who made me happy as well. Thanks for reading.
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You certainly did owe it to yourself and I’m glad that you did find someone who made/makes you happy. Smiles. Have a lovely day.
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LOL Thanks. You have a wonderful day as well.
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Thank you. Smiles.
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haven’t followed the whole thread but dude, seriously? I believe you have got to be with some one on the the same level as you -sexually. Maybe she thought it u turn you on in some warped way. Or maybe this devil girl may have been messing with your head and trying to make you jealous which is even worse!
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Laughing. She is a thing of my past. It was love on a warped way. lol Just writing about the experiences every Saturday. Thanks so much for reading.
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Uh, isn’t that your girlfriend.
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Devil Girl was an old girlfirend. The pic is my wife on Halloween two years ago.
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Oh, right, wife. So, she doesn’t mind you writing poems about your ex and then using her photo to illustrate it?
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My wife insisted I use her pick. She doesn’t follow my blog, but she does keep up with Devil Girl every weekend.
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I see! Well, good for you then!
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She really dd. What can I say. It stunned me as well.
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We knew from the beginning this “relationship” had the “perfect storm” ahead. I doubt we’re there, but we are definitely moving further down its path!
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Exactly. Thanks for reading. I eventually switched from sweet potato to white potato. A lot less stressful.
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😀
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That’s a really heartbreaking experience. Even though it was long ago and you are now happily married, experiences like that never leave you. It’s a betrayal in your heart, regardless of what was already known or agreed upon.
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Exactly. I don’t even think about it anymore. Grateful that I moved on before something bad really happened.
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Oy, I can’t believe you got talked into going. That had to be the absolute low point. I agree about being “bad” and still being faithful/committed. I know I said this before but I think she must’ve had super low self esteem to give herself away so easily. It’s almost like she had to constantly prove to herself how desirable she was. It’s sad.
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Agree 100% with everything you said. That was the low point and the moment when I thought I have to move on. We did things that were fun, and a bit daring, but there she just went to far.
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Devil Girl you are going to regret this!! Looking forward to the continuation…. 😊 I see you are also a wine and dinner party lover like me, wine is on the same must have list as chocolate 😉
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LOL Yeah, I host quite a bit. Always wine for me. Tired of the harder stuff.
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LOL Same here 😁
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Well this would be fun if you had commanded it as part of her service to you. You could have commanded each thing she was forced to do. She is a devil girl though
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Haha. That would be pretty hot to command someone like that. I am sure you have experienced that pleasure.
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I am flattered that you think so, but a group is not my style nor my interest
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Mine niether. I was referring to you having a lady who obeys your commands. I imagine you are a master at that.
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Ah yes. That is certainly true
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Laughing. I thought so.
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Doesn’t seem like a healthy relationship. Actually, it doesn’t seem like a relationship at all. Seems like exploitation everywhere. But I’m a cautious person. My perspective is different.
As you’ve written, everyone has that one person in their past. I’m way beyond the one who tore me up emotionally. I hope you’re not still so devastated by her.
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Not at all. It was a learning experience. I was young and still learning. Way past that. I am in a happy place now. Thanks for readng.
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I always hate it when this happens.
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Hahaha Kind of ruins the night. Thanks for stopping by.
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Indeed.
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I would have walked away and never looked back. What ever happened to a lady having respect for herself?
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Very close to what I did. Certain lines are not meant to be crossed.
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I agree. And sharing isn’t one of them.
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I don’t like to share my Oreos. Why would I want to share my woman?
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Exactly!!!!
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lol
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“Like taking an arsonist to a lumber yard…”
Great line…beautifully written poem.
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Smiling. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading.
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Very cruel muse 😉
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She was terrible. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Thank you for the reblog. I appreciate all of the support you have provided. Have a great day.
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Sigh…what a great way to begin a new year…新年快乐!猴年大吉!
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Smiling. Thank you for reading it.
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Paul, I just removed you from my spam. I don’t know what is wrong with wordpress. Thanks for the reblog. You are so kind and generous.
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I’m sure she knows the way to bring him around! Love the direction this is taking!
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Laughing. Thank you for reading it.
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Love it
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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