tonight
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Come follow the tides of my beating heart
And everything will be within our reach
Tonight, we can make the moon blush
By making sandy love on a lonely beach
The ebb and flow of our writhing bodies
Will compose such an aquatic harmony
Tonight, we should abandon dry land
Let our delicious sighs be our symphony
Grains of sand will become smoking ashes
With our delicious loving making intensity
Tonight, we can slowly journey to forever
If we are submerged in love until eternity
What a wonderful poem… I love the idea of the moon blushing!
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Thrilled that you think so. Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for your very kind words.
And sorry for the delay in my response. Breathe Drew.
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You’re welcome. No need to apologize… I hope everything is ok.
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Yeah, everything is fine. Just super super busy since my legal matters have been settled.
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beautiful…
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Flattered by your words. Thank you so much.
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most welcome…
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Was amazing!!
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Very flattered that you think so. Thank you so much.
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Tonight, we can slowly journey to forever, love this. Your writing is surely a gateway to another world.
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Very happy with your words. Love how you interpreted my little poem. Thank you so much
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It’s my pleasure 😊🌸🌸
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Wonderful words. 👏👏
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Very happy that you think so Lity. Thank you.
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Welcome.
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Sounds like someone had a few too many Sex on the Beach! ;D
It’s so innocent though compared to the smut I write.. xD
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Lol. It w as written when I was drinking on the beach while on my recent vacation. Thank you for your kind words. Oh, I have a few rough sex posts in the past, but zi do try to keep it tame. Thanks for reading.
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No problem! It was a nice read! =]
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Laughing. Thanks
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You inspire me to write deeper descriptions. Your holiday was clearly in need, because you’ve come back with the most wonderful poems.
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You made me smile. My vacation was exactly what I needed. Had a great time and did a lot of writing. Thank you for your very kind words Laura. They motivate me to write on.
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A most tender invite to that special someone.
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Happy you think so. Now, if I find that special someone. LOL Thank you so much for the read and very sweet words.
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I am sure you will, my friend. Maybe on some beach on the next vacation 🙂 You are welcome!
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Steamy!
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Happy that you think so. Thank you so much.
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Mm, gorgeous, poetic, sensual, passionate. Everything I love 💙
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Everything we both love. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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You’re very welcome my friend.
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Sensual!
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Delighted that you think so. Thank you.
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Really nice!
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Appreciate that. Thank you.
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(comment with kindness) not if you’ve ever tried it. Believe me, those grains of sand may enhance a romantic concept, but they’re worse than a mediaeval torture in certain situations! I love the idea, though!
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LOL Thiose grains of sand can be so annoying. Amazing all the places they can inhabit. Thanks for the read, your words, and the laugh.
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Damn. Wow. That is all. 😳
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You made me smile. Thank you al much for your kind words.
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”Making the moon blush” me likey 🙂
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Smiling. Very happy you liked this. Thank you o much for all of your kind words and read. It means a lot.
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“You smile I smile” I think I just quoted the biebs lol
Your welcome 🙂
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LOL
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Finally trying to catch up! Wonderful writing Drew!
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Appreciate it. Thanks
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful
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Thanks so much
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You’re most welcome
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Thank you so much John. Hope you and yours are well.
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Thanks John
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Tonight awesome
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Happy that you think so. Thank you.
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“Tonight, we can slowly journey to forever” loved that line, it was so beautiful!
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Lol. Okay. It’ll be combo of both then
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I will shove that stubborn big fat Jupiter if I have to.
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Besitos
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Oh this was last night… Then a few hours later I was crying a bit like an idiot.
Bit lots of kisses back 💋
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Smiling. Have a gorgeous weekend Beautiful
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♥
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Miseed you too
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Grains of sand will become smoking ashes- I hope it comes true, one day.
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It can Pia, Hope you are well.
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I am well Drew, how are you recovering?
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Little by little. Thanks for asking.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
LOVE IS IN THE AIR…NEAR FEB. 14TH!
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I am gearing up for that day. Thanks for the reblog John. Appreciate it.
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