My love, I know you have been hurt before. My heart would never do that to you. My only desire is to protect you. I will dedicate myself to mending every scar you possess. With my love, understanding, and tenderness I will erase every memory that haunts your soul.
Forget about the lovers that you had. If they truly loved you they would still be here. Let us live in the here and now. Let me show you how it feels to be the only woman in the world. Let me show you how love is supposed to feel.
Do I really love you
Darling
Cut yourself
Watch me bleed
This made bring Tears.
Every Lover should read this.
Love to YOU.
Shiva
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Thank you for saying that. Everyone should love that way. Thanks my friend. Love and light to you.
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I have done one Post on the Lovers.
“Distant Heart”
I am sure you shall like it.
Go right now, its on the top of my blog.
Shiva
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Shive, thank you for sharing. Is ther anything as good as love?
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Here are the two links on two Posts
https://theshivasponder.wordpress.com/2016/01/10/distant-heart/
https://theshivasponder.wordpress.com/2015/12/11/two-beloveds/
My answer is in both these posts.
Shiva
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Thank you. And sorry for misspelling your name in my reply. I will read and comment. Thanks for sharing.
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with a heart and mind like yours, why are you lonely? Haven’t you found that special person yet?
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Hahaha. Sorry for laughing. I am only lonely when I am writing. It is a lonely hobby/profession. And with the support of so many wonderful friends here in wordpress, I am lonely no more. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment. Have a wonderful day.
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so glad to hear it is a choice and not a condition, if you know what I mean.
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Haha Yeah, I understand. Thaks for stopping by to read.
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:-)…. Very true…. The same question i raised when i met your blog first time…
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Smiling
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Anita Dawes & Jaye Marie.
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Thank you so much for the reblog. I appreciate your support. You have made my day with your kind gesture. Wish more people loved the person in the mirror.
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A beautiful promise…when the one we love hurts, we feel the pain.
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Thank you. That is the way it shold be. Thanks for reading.
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You’re welcome, my friend, and yes, it is!
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Spoken like a true romantic…
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Smiling. I guess so. Just haven’t figured out if I am a helpess romantic or a hopeless one. Thanks for reading this. I hope you are well.
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Thank you. Seems to me that most are in the hopeless romantic category. I know I am.
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Well, it is that or we are both destined for an asylum. Then, again maybe it is both!
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Ha,ha! It might be both 😉
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Laughing.
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I’m glad you find my comments amusing. 😊
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We have fun together, don’t we? We have to laugh to not cry.
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Yes, exactly. 😊
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Hope you are well.
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I’m doing much better. Thank you for checking in with me.
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Good. We are here to help each other.
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I am a bit worried about this kind of obsessive love. Dangerous
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Yeah, obsessive love like can be very dangerous. But not when it comes to this chimp. I just go bananas. Oooh, sorry for that bad joke. Thanks for stopping by.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Simply beautiful.
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Just like you my friend. Simply beautiful. Thanks for stopping by to read. Have a great day.
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I didn’t realize Northerners were such sweet talkers. 😉
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Smiling. When special people enter my life, I do everything possible for them to stay there. Hopefully, I can earn your eternal friendship. And yeah, you won’t see that in many Northerners. Especially Northerners from da Bronx.
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Well, it isn’t easy to scare away Southern Belles. But lure us in with honeyed words, and you won’t be able to chase us away if you wanted to!!! 😉
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LOL Too sweet and funny. That wouldn’t be so bad. A lifetime gazing into wiskey eyes.
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Smiles.
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How beautiful. I’m definitely sending any candidate lover your way the chimp 😀 Be well 🙂
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Laughing. I don’t think there is any need. I am certain you can melt the polar caps with your wonderful heart. Perhaps you are the cause for global warming. lol Thanks for stopping by. And thanks for the kind wishes. Wishing you all the best as well.
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How funny you are 😀 Thank you for your wishes my friend 🙂
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Smiling.
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Beautiful……Passionate in so many ways. 🙂
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Thank you so much. I just let it flow with this piece. Thanks for the kind words.
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Aaww. Cut yourself and watch me bleed. This hurts.
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Did you have a knife in your hand when you read it? Only kidding. Thanks for your kind words. And thanks for reading.
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Ha ha ha. I almost thought of going to the kitchen lol.
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LOL Maybe I should have placed a warning on this post. Don’t try this trick at home.
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Next time. Please. Lol.
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hahaha
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Wow! Wish one day, someone out there will say these words to me…
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A woman as sweet and caring as you?? You deserve to have a dozen princes sleeping on your doorstep. Thanks for taking the time out to read. Your day shall arrive.
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Thank you 🙂
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You sound pretty convincing here, Andrew. If all your fans take you up on this, you’re going to need a massive blood transfusion 🙂
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LOL If they took me up on this I would be a dried up prune. Thank you for my first big laugh of the day. Much appreciated.
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You would be dead, Andrew. You’re welcome – hope you have a good day! 🙂
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Well, I was going for the prune visual. Lonely Author in a lonely casket, not exactly the visual I want. Smiling. Thanks. Have a great day.
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Yes, prune visuals are much better… ha! Have a good day too 🙂
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Two in one day! So lovely to be loved so thoroughly and deeply. Tres bien, mon ami!
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An inspiring night. Ah, French, the orginal language of romance. All I remember from high school French is “le chat est sur la table.” Never forgot that line. So, when I go to France and when a cat jumps on the table, I AM READY. Thanks for the compliment.
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Awww. So is this how it’s going to be until Valentine’s Day? It’s still almost a month away, but oh my, look at this beautiful piece. Working up to a climax, are we? 🙂 Love it, Andrew.
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Surgeon General Warning: Reading too much Lonely Author can lead to tooth decay, days of saying “aaaaw,” pain in the cheeks from smiling, and the desperate need for foot massages. Smiling. Thanks for stopping by to reading.
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Too late. You should have issued the warning much, much earlier. The “awwww” syndrome has started, and, on thinking about foot massage, guess what, I beat you to it. Lol.
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LOL You have me in tears.
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Blood, sweat, tears. All good for the soul. Oh no, wait, that’s sea water, sweat, and tears. Blood, not so much. But anyway, here’s a tissue. There there. 😀
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Laughing. You’re going to give me some vicious laugh lines. Then I will look in the mirror & hate myself. Then, some lady will tell me I might love myself if I could see my reflection through her eyes. Damn, I think I just got the inspiration for a poem. lol
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Glad to be giving you vicious laugh lines. Why would you hate yourself? The chimp should practice what he preaches. Oh yeah, keep the inspiration coming. We need lots leading up to Valentine’s Day. But then who knows – the chimp might have tons of trick up his sleeve. Lol.
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LOL Let’s see what the chimp can come up with. Wink
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Hey, the cat stepped on the keyboard and deleted your last comment about Bradley Cooper. Thanks for the laughs and your wonderful support.
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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This is so vulnerable and passionate. Truly beautiful words from a truly beautiful chimp. Smiling.
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Blushing like a damn fool. Thanks.
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You’re most welcome. Smiles.
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Have a good one. (Anxious awaiting your next post).
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Ahh.. yes, so am I.
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LOL May I give you writing a prompt?
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Certainly.
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Try to see if you get inspired by “His desire” or “her desire.” This is a good writing exercise. Send me a prompt & I shall write. Then, go back to work, I know you are busy.
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Oh I am truly inspired. So so much inspiration I have. It’s just finding the right time to write.
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Oh, okay. I am soooooo patient. All the best things in life are worth waiting for – like your words. Have a good one. Great hearing from you.
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Thank you for all of your support Andrew.
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Smiling.
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“Cut yourself
Watch me bleed”
Gave me chills. LOVE! 🙂
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Smiling. There go the laugh lines. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Oh, you tease. You know I think laugh lines are sexy. I’m going to have to return the favor with foot porn. 🙂
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LOL Ah, you know the way to a man’s heart.
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Every man has their weakness. Yours just requires a really good pedicure. 🙂
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Exactly. Smiling.
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Last two lines… crushed it!
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Amiling. Thank you for saying that. Ands thank you for reading.
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Cut yourself, watch me bleed. Dayum!
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Laughing, thanks for reading.
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My pleasure. 🙂
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The poem is evocative, exquisite. It doesn’t need any background.
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Thank you. I didn’t want to use a bleeding visual. No violence on this page. Thanks for stopping by.
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Of course not. Blood as metaphor, not a graphic. Anyone who doesn’t get that should stick to video games.
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LOL Love that reply.
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Kind of lover, every young girl dreams of meeting one day! 😉
Your woman is lucky (wait… you must have wooed her with such words…Hmmm)
How could she stop falling for you?
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Laughing so hard. She was difficult to woo. Thanks for your kind words.
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which means you didn’t use your charisma on her 😉
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Of course I did. That is all I have. lol
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Haha. I am thinking…She really has high standards!
would love to hear how you ultimately succeeded meeting them ;).
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Haha. Don’t knmow about the high standards. One day I will post the story of how we met. Thanks for the inspiration.
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🙂 well…it would be a pleasure to read that.
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Thanks. I will try.
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Sweet Jesus. Little is more and in this case, it has Universal proportions of such magnitude that you need to be aware that you are bloody awesome. LOVED it with a passion.
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Oh my God what a compliment. Thank you so much, No one has ever called me bloody awesome before. Thanks.
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They have now and be told.
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Thanks
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gorgeous, my friend xo
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Smiling. Thank you.
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Thank you for your kind gesture. I appreciate it.
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Awww
I love this
Only way to love❤️
Great post
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Thank you. It is the only way to love. Total commitment.
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Therein lies the passion to love😊
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Agreed
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So, you know how it feels to be the only woman in the world? Interesting…
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Well, my feminine side understands.
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Reblogged this on Sir's little darling and commented:
Yes; because i know how it feels to be the only woman in the world.
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Smiling. Thank you so much for the kind reblog. I appreciate your friendship, support, and understanding about the feet.
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Forget about the lovers you had .. very nice wordplay
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Smiling. Thank you for stopping by to read. I appreciate it.
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Always♡
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Strong love and stronger statement. Nice
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read.
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I adore this. I wrote a story a while back that has almost exactly the same meaning and emotions. It’s incredibly romantic and I loved writing it (and I make an unkind face at those who just call me sappy!).
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Well, I may be the sappiest of them all. Do you have a link for ther piece. I would love to read it.
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Damn! I knew you were going to ask that! I have a big mouth. (Or fast fingers since I was typing not talking? Hm… I think fast fingers might mean something else entirely… but that’s for different story…)
It’s not something I’ve posted (yet). I will find it and probably read it 50 times and do 30 revisions before I feel that it’s ‘ready’… and then I will post it. 🙂
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When you do finally post it, let me know. I would love to read it. No pressure. When you feel it is ready let me know. THanks
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I think a little pressure is good… I find it keeps me motivated and inspired. You know, if I don’t freak out. 🙂 I’ll let you know when I post it.
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LOL Okay, that is true. A little pressure can be good, I just didn’t want to stress you. Thanks fopr understanding. I love to read.
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Knowing someone wants to read is definitely motivating… especially for someone like me who has far too much self-doubt!
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All writers have self doubt. That is one of the best reasons to blog. To overcome these writing fears. You write, I will be happy to read.
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It is the main reason I started blogging. No one in my ‘real life’ has ever read any of my work. I needed to test the waters, so to speak… I needed feedback and support. And thanks for reading – I appreciate it more than I can ever say.
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Smiling. Everyone around me doesn’t even like to read. Blogging is the only
way for me to test the waters. I will be glad to read your work.
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Thank you! It means a lot!
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Smiling.
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… especially from someone whose work I so admire. (Sorry, my fingers apparently wanted to hit send before I could finish my thought… ha!)
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Haha Happens to me all the time. Thanks for your kind words.
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I write poems feel free to check them out if you please you could like and comment im new to this would like feedback 😀😊
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Thank you for the follow. I appreciate your support. I tried to go to your page, but I get an error message from wordpress. I would be happy to read and comment on your poetry. Lety me know the correct page. Thanks for your support.
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The page name is Jevi’s Poetry the website is http://www.jevispoetrycom.webpress.com
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wordpress no? you have webpress. I can;t get to your page and I would really like to read your work.
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http://www.jevispoetrycom.wordpress.com
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Jevu. I am there. I will read and comment tomorrow. Thanks for sharing and thanks for the follow.
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No problem and your welcome
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I really like your love series now. Bringing out its different aspects and showing how people love and their reactions to it. Ah, perfection!
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Thank you so much. Yeah, I have been flinging the mush all over the place. It has been fun seeing the reaction to different aspects of love and the hurdles we have to face.
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It’s not too often men write mushy stuff. Glad you do.
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Well, I am a hard shell, soft center kind of chimp. All mushy. I love love.
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Like truffles! 😀
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Yeah lol
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just need to watch the bleed…
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Smiling. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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stererotypical response
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Tell me. What is the correct response for a comment like “just need to watch the bleed…”
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i said,my response was a stereotypical one
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No, I don’t think your response was stereo typical. Mine was, because I didn’t know how to respond to you. Not sure what you were trying to say.
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how could you ask me a correction????
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I was asking you how did you want me to respond. I thought you were calling my response stereo typical
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how could you ask someone a question like this
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Are you bored.
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Go fuck yourself idiot
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idiot
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response…is highly subjective….
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Go find someone else’s chops to bust. Not interested in this conversation. I am a little too mature for this nonsense.
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fuck you retard
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true love real make more pain…thanks for your good post………
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thanks for reading
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welcome…….
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Your writing only get better with time. You can write about the same theme and make each character in the story feel unique and special. Passionate and heart warming.
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Thank you. It can be a challenge to stay fresh. Thanks
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Wowww ‘Cut yourself watch me bleed’ .. Word porn!! Loving it!! My goodness!!!
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Word porn!!! I love this. Thank you. You made my day
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nice lines has painful.realy dt beautiful girl has been hurted or d part of ur poem.
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Thank you for reading.
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welcome,o ! dear guy.
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Reblogged this on The Lonely Author and commented:
This will be the last of my reblogs.
Right now, I am backed up on comments, I will be getting to them throughout the day. Tomorrow, I should be back to my normal posting and following of your blogs. Thank you for your patience and support. Have a great day.
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if they truly love you they would still be here
Great line
Cut yourself watch me bleed
Another one
Great post Andrew
Sheldon
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your words Sheldon. And thanks for reading. Be well.
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Your welcome Andrew
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Morning Mr Lonely Author,
I was looking for an old post to write you a quick note and then got lost in a sea of posts and comments… 😂 What àn eye opener! The one about your list of “faults”…oh very, very clever …and hilarious too.
Okay, just a little apology that I was a bit abrupt yesterday (my) evening. You know I’m not usually that way.
Also (and delete this please if you want) I am sorry if I have said anything in the last few days that made you feel weird.
Okay, have a lovely day
x
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You have said a single bad thing to me my dear. Everything has been like music. My lists of faults??? What in particular grabbed you?
Do you realize your the only blogger I have exchanged comments with today?
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I did not realise that, no. But that’s kind of tingly.
That’s good, I thought that maybe you thought that I was…fuck knows, being an idiot or just a silly flighty girly or something. I don’t know..
The list. Nothing in particular. I just thought it was funny and clever because it got like a 100 girls going, “no! No! You’re perfect! Swoon swoon!”
I laughed.
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Lmfao.
Notice not too many dudes follow me?
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Yes 😂
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Your day good?
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Good, yes outwardly. Just a bit muddly on the inside of my head, like I said. ❤️
You? (Almost forgot to ask!)
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Busy but good.
Is there a restroom in your mind if I need to go?
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I should probably install one for you. You won’t leave me alone in there lately!
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Sweet Baby
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Thump thump 💓💓
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So should I be leaving you alone?
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Skipping all my comments to respond to this FIRST and say
NO.
Please. Don’t
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Cool Baby
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