
light
the illumination of your affection
always surrounds me
as a formless, invisible spectrum
taking shape in my lungs
as I breathe in your atmosphere
it blinds me with the hope
that the light of your love
will be the final glimpse
my eyes admire
before darkness shrouds my life
Oh my❤️
This is so so beautiful ❣️
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Humbled by your beautiful reaction. Thank you for sahring this with meI am flattered and feeling very lucky.
Thank you.
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My pleasure 😊
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To hold such love within you that it engulfs you to where you can find the power to hold on to the light of life to see someone for the last time before turning the lights out. The greatest gift of strength, love, and unimaginable willpower. Your last verse was such an impact poetic statement reminding me of Dylan’s “Fight against the dying light”, yours having such beauty to it my friend.
Beautiful work for any eye to clearly see my friend.🌹
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Blushing, humbled, and nearly on the verge of tears. Your words have touched me.
Flattered and so happy you liked this and took the time out to interpret this
as you did. Your words demonstrated how well you understood this.
Always amazed by you and the wonders of you.
Thank you always.
My best to Lady Sparkling.
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Your words are so touching my friend Drew and like your poetry they are so moving. I appreciate you take my comments at such value as I do your work, you’re such a great friend to us.🌹
I will definitely give her your regards, she’ll be happy to hear. Be well.😊
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Chuck, thank you so much for the reblog. You beautiful support has helped thiis blog immensly, Thank you for all of your kindness.
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Always happy sharing your work! Happy to hear that the exposure has helped your blog. Happy to see your writings/posts!!
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Thank you. Humbled my friend,
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The image, the poem..are light… gorgeous… luscious and more.
You are more light.
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Smiling. Beautiful words of appreciation and praise. I am so happy you liked this Resa.
You are always a bright light of inspiration and support.
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For you my friend:
He wrote of love,
The fire, the coals, the shores
Of redemption.
He wrote of love,
The hair, lips and eyes
Of temptation.
He wrote of love.
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Honored. This was beautiful. My own personal serenade. You need to write some of these on your blogs. I am certain posts with your artistic gowns and yourpoetry will go over big time.
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Okay… will try that.
Although, I love collaborating.
I’m glad you liked my poem.
I meant every word.
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Well, I am cdrtain you and Holly can come up with something truly amazing.
Seriously honored. Thank you.
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Beautiful imagery!
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Grateful for your kind thoughts. Thank you for reading and for your words.
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Always a pleasure!
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Oh, just love this. ❤
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Grateful and flattered that you do. You are always so sweet.
Thank you for stopping by.
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An all consuming love, right there to the end. What a thought and how poetically pieced together.
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Grateful and flatterd by your beautiful appreciation.
Thank you so much for sharing your gorgeous thoughts.
Always appreciated.
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It’s way beautifully written. I’m gonna read every poem of yours that I missed.
It is wonderful.
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You are so sweet. Thank you for your kind words and wonderful support.
It inspires me to write on.
Thank you.
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You deserve it.
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Aaaw/ . Smiling and half blushing
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Beautiful. I especially like these lines,
“as I breathe in your atmosphere
it blinds me with the hope””
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Grateful you liked my little poem. I adore those lines as well.
Thank you for your kind read and for sharing your thoughts.
I appreciate ythe kindness and support.
Apologies for the late response. Be well.
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You use words in such a special way… awesome poem
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Grateful for your kind read and words.
Thank you for taking the time out to stop by.
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Ultimately romantic.
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Grateful for your kind words. So happy that you like my little poem.
Thank you for taking the time out to read. I appreciate the kind gesture of support.
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Absolutely breathtaking. The “image” you painted with your words depicts such a glowing all-consuming love from one who is totally besotted. Glorious art you have made with your pen, Andrew!
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Amy your words light up my morning. Thank you for saying these beautiful things baout my little poem.
It means a lot. Thanks so much. Hopefully, one day I will experience it. Smiles.
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I’m not even sure that kind of “love” exists. Perhaps fleetingly, when two people first meet with powerful electricity between them. But, to have that connection for years on end, that’s debatable. Hmmmm …
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Sadly, you are probably right. But I will keep trying to find it.
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Such a beautiful poem. Thanks for inspiring me through your writing.
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Thank you so much for your lovely words. Delighted you liked this.
Appreciate your kindness.
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This is so beautiful – you always write
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Very happy you liked this poem. Thank you for your lovely words my friend.
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My absolute pleasure
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That’s a sweet thought of final moments. 😊
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I really thought so. A final moment of love as we go.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Mucho appreciated.
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You’re welcome!
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Love this! ♥.
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Very happy that you do my sweet friend.
Hope you are doing well.
May the light of love always bless your beautiful heart.
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{{{{{Drew}}}}} I wish the same for you. Love, always, especially for you from you. Never forget how amazing you are. ♥.
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Smiling and glowing.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
GROW OLD WITH HIM…ILLUMINATING THE REST OF YOUR LIFETIMES TOGETHER!
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Thank you thank you John. Always flattered by yur generosity
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You’re not my only one!
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I know this John. You have the heart of an angel.
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Except when… 😦
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🙌🏽👏🏽
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Appreciate that. Thank you for taking the time out to read and leave your lovely emojis.
I appreciate your kind support.
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Yes of course! Such a beautifully written poem.
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Smiling Thanks
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This is incandescent 🙂
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Smiling. Grateful that you think so. Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment, I appreciate your kind support.
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I like the poignant tone – so unexpected – at the end. This is a wonderfully beautiful poem. So relatable in its account of soulful love!
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Smiling. Thank you for this gorgeous comment. Your words made me so happy.
Your words are gems here. Thank you.
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😊
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I love the last four lines, the image of someone seeing nothing but the light of the one they love before they die (that was my interpretation anyway) seems like a sad, but peaceful way to die.
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That is the exact interpretation I intended. You nailed it.
Thank you for reading and for sharing yur thoughts. It makes me
happy to know someone agrees. That would be the way to die.
Thank you for your beautiful comment. Much appreciated.
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Breathtakingly beautiful…
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Very happy you liked this little thing. Thank you for rwading and for your sweet supportive words.
Grateful for your kindness.
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You’re very welcome ☺️
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How sweeeeetttt! I’m thinking of love that lasted through a ripe old age, growing old together and all that (sigh)
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Smiling. What could be better than closing our eyes one last time and seeing love just before we shut them.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts on this poem. Means a lot.
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Ah yes, what a way to go ❤️
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I was all in from the start of the read and then the last line left me choked! Ack, darkness comes… Nooooo!
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Smiling. So, happy you shared your sweet reacton. Thank you so much for your kind words.
Much appreciated.
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A touching and moving poem
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Thank you MS Sparkles. Appreciate the light of your kind words.
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Beautiful beyond words!❤️
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You are so kind my beautiful friend. Thank you for yur sweet words.
I appreciate your thoughts and visits.
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Truly beautiful poem and picture♥️
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G=rateful you like this. And flattered by your lovely words.
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
I truly appreciate it.
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I hope the light of your daughter’s presence this week shines in your heart and lasts until her next visit!
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It has. It truly has. Thank you for your beautiful wishes. It warms my heart.
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A love until the bitter end. Beautiful.
You better look after that swish car of yours to make sure she never needs upgrading! 😂
Enjoy the precious time with your daughter, Drew.x
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You are so sweet. My daughter had a great time in the car. She decided to go back to New York with the intention of
getting her driving permit. Thank you for your precious words Caz. They always mean so much
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Absolutely beautiful, Drew! Loved it!!
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Grateful and flkatteresd by your beautiful comment.
Thank you for this wonderful appreciation.
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My absolute pleasure! 😊
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Love it Drew.
You outshine as always.
Ps, may darkness never darken your door.
You are too precious.🤗
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You are a precious treasure. Your comment truly warms my heart.
Thank you for your beautiful words and support.
You make me feel blessed.
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As good as it gets! Masterful!
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Grateful and humbled by your comment. Thank you so much for your kindness.
I truly appreciate it.
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Ah… this is very deep and intense Drew…
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Grateful and flattered you think so. Thank you for tqaking the time out to read and shared
your beautiful thoughts. I truly appreciate it.
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I want that light who could remove my all depression and illuminate the heart until the ending time when all darkness of feeling the emptinest syndromey shrouds my all feelings,dear dew!!😢😕😔
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I love the open and closing lines. And that car…wow – nice. That’ll attract a chic, better than an empty shoe closet! 😉 Hope you’re having fun with your daughter. :-)!
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LOL . The car. That was another post. You make me laugh Shelley.
Thank you for everything
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LOL – I was wondering if you’d catch that I did pay attention and that I wasn’t able to comment on the car post, so yeah…you passed the test 🙂
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I immediately noticed. Your comment was a potpourri. Lol potpourri. That gives me an idea.
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Yay, love it when I can add to your writing to-do list 😉
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LOL
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You have too much confidence in me.
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It’s just that you have so many friends for being lonely…it’s a gift, I’ve got to nurture it somehow! 😉
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LOL . I get those comments all the time. How can you call yurself lonely . LOL
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Sigh…next time I’ll be more original – LOL!!
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LOL
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PS – I just got the suggestion to put my ugly shoes out by the road to see if someone might take them for free. Just saying…but, it might be out of the way, it’s pretty far from the DR direction… 😉
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Lol. What an awful suggestion. Hope that wasn’t hubby’s Idea.
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LOL – nope, it was someone else, BTW Mr. said that I should give them away the day they arrived!
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Lol. Very supportive.
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Simply beautiful 🙌🙌🙌
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https://krishnac003.wordpress.com/2019/07/20/climate-change-the-biggest-threat-to-humanity/
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Thank you for your beautiful words.
I will visit your blog. Thanks.
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Sure 👍👍👍
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To be able to feast one’s eyes on true love one last time.That is my one wish, because indeed we will be looking toward the light of the unknown. Simply beautiful Drew.
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That is exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this. Thank you for your beautiful words and understanding Linda.
Always treasure your input. Thank you.
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Oh, and you may want to read my ‘When Night Sky and Fiery Comets Collide’. Smiling- I think you may enjoy it!
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Thank you for sharing this. It was beautiful. A great piece of writing.
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Thank you!
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This is sweet and inspiring. I’m just back from my recreational outing. It was so unsafe out there that I had to be extra careful. Actually, I couldn’t find any safe place to run or to hide. Those beautiful ladies, I can’t say how many times I fell in love. Every corner was unsafe. But then, tragedy struck when I was leaving the beautiful citiy flooded with international beauties, I will never see them again. And then I thought of you my friend, thelovelyauthor. 🙂
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Oh, the tragedy. Wish I was there suffering with you. A flood of international beauties. Oh, the rough life. LOL
Great to hear from you Ankit. Hope you are well my dear friend.
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Hahaha. I’m good, I hope you are having a good time. 🙂
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Yes, I am thanks.
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Light guides …
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Light guides and inspires.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
I so appreciate your thoughts.
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Such a beautiful post ❤
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Grateful and flattered that you think so.
Thank you for your beautiful comment.
I so appreciate your kindness.
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“it blinds me with the hope
that the light of your love
will be the final glimpse
my eyes admire
before darkness shrouds my life”……….damn! that is so very romantic! bravo!
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You have me glowing woith happiness. Very happy that you liked this,
Than you for your wonderful words.
I am touched.
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always a pleasure to visit!
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So kind
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I’m not even sure how I stumbled on this blog but I am glad I did. What a beautiful piece of writing.
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I am very glad you did as well. Welcome to my blog. Love is the theme here.
Thank you for your beautiful words. I apprdeciate your kindness and support.
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Awwww
My friend – this is beautiful..
I do hope you are doing better and or ok with the vision and all..
Prayers and hugs to you 💕
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Doing better. Finally, getting around to older comment as you can see.
Thank you for your beautiful words and prayers.
It means a lot. Thank you.
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I’m so glad you’re better 😊
Happy August (can’t believe it is here already!) to you 😉
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I know. Time goes so fast. happy August
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W0W2
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Smiling. Thank you Sheldon. I appreciate your kind reaction.
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Darkness may be looming and foreboding, but LIGHT WILL ALWAYS PREVAIL! No matter its intensity, it will valiantly walk through any path of darkness ….. and win the battle in the heads and hearts of man! Oh Light, shine your brilliance all over our souls! ❤️
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Light will always win out. It is the source of power that sould always guide us.
Thanks you for gracing your beautiful words on my post. I am touched by your
kindness.
May the light always shine brightly over you and yours.
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Your imagery is intoxicating, it makes your poetry addicting. Thank you, Andrew. I truly enjoyed your beautiful poem.
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