My poetry rarely contains much symbolism. However, my desire to improve as a poet urged me to pen this little write. (The symbolic meaning of every flower mentioned can be found at the end of the post). The inspiration for this piece comes from Nandita’s “The Root Of Life.”
Garden of Poetry
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Strolling through her stunning verses
the aroma of rhymes entices my lungs
as poetic sunflowers generate warmth
and her love blooms in flowery tongues
Her windblown kisses of Baby’s Breath
Are love florets providing a sweet motif
As we exchange our primrose affections
For I am her stem and she my adoring leaf
She will eternally be my sacred lotus
Planted inside the deepest part of me
As I’ve become the photosynthetic sun
‘ever nourishing her garden of poetry
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The image reminded me of you N. Eye liner, touch of lip gloss, and of course the flowers in the luxurious black hair.
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Sunflowers (adoration, longevity)
Baby’s Breath (purity of heart)
Primrose (eternal love)
Sacred Lotus (In Buddhist symbolism it represents purity of body, speech, & spirit)
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Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
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Thank you for sharing John.
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Photo and words. Perfect.
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Thanks so much John. Appreciate your words and the reblog. Have a good one.
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You are welcome. I always enjoy your work.
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That is very kind of you to say John. Thanks.
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You don’t need me to tell you how inspired and lovely this is …just wanted to let you know that I do read you and appreciate you as many others, sweet soul!
And with the quiet observance that has me feeling a little voyeuristic 🙂
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You made me smile with this comment. Thank you for your kind words. This little write meant so much to me, thus your words here, well, they make me so happy. Thank you.
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A pleasure it is! I can see how passionate you are about writing … it’s infectious 😊❤️
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That was very sweet. Thank you. That is the wonder of blogging, we should all try to inspire our fellow bloggers.
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Done! 💗
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Beautiful. Where were you when I needed help to interpret flower symbolism in English lit?
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LOL I am learning from Nandita. Trust me, before her, a flower was just a flower. But now a Nandita by any other name would still smell as sweet.
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“Before her a flower was just a flower.” Brb, I’m just going to go and cry. 😭
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Oh lol. Thank you for your kindness. It is appreciated.
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You have a garden of poems, and your words shall blossom. But watch over your plants, because there could be a possum.
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LOL. Yeah, I better watch out. Hey, thanks for your words Buddy.
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Thank you so much for sharing.
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So pretty, Andrew. I like the way you wove the flowers and their meanings into the verse. 🙂
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Very happy that you liked this. Your words bring me joy. Thank you so much. Be well.
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Absolutely beautiful words and picture to go with them! Your loving writing is beyond incredible and the proof of true love!!! I swear, nothing you write ever disappoints!
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Alyssa, I am so happy you liked this poem. It meant a lot to me. And your are extremely generous with your compliments. Thank you so much. It is appreciated.
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You are very welcome! I really appreciate and love all of your poems ♡
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Thank you.
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♡
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Beautiful words👍💕
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Thank you Nidhi. I appreciate that.
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🤗🙏
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I could read this over and over!
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You are very kind for saying that. Delighted that you liked this. Thank you so much.
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Beautiful💜
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Very happy that you think so. Thank you.
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Appreciate that. Thank you so much.
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Superb
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Thank you again.
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Perfect! ☺
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Delighted that you think so. Thank you.
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🙌
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Challenges to ones craft are bravery incarnate. It also came out well for a step out of the word constructions that you feel comfortable with! Inspiration to try a different form today. Thank you 🤪.
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Thank you for the encouraging words.
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Inspiration is always worth encouraging, a gift for a gift. Stay in the challenge, can see the potential. Can’t wait to see more.
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Thank you
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Very well done. An enjoyable love poem.
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Probably one of my better ones. Thank you for reading and for your words.
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My pleasure ☺
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Beautiful words, Andrew, even without knowing the symbolic meaning behind the flower names, but I enjoyed it even more during the second reading with this added dimension.
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Sarah, thank you so much for your lovely message. It means so much since you are such a wonderful writer who injects nature into your words. Thanks.
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That’s so sweet of you, Andrew 🙂 I’m in need of encouragement at the moment, so your kind words are just the medicine I need.
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You are a wonderful writer. You don’t need encouragement from me. Go through your lovely blog and read your posts and comments, and you shall come to realize I am correct. Be happy my friend. Have a wonderful week. And thanks for your kind words.
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Lovely, my favorite line is
“…Her windblown kisses of Baby’s Breath …”
A pleasure to read!
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I love that line as well. You made me very happy with your words. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment. Much appreciated.
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Reblogged this on quirkywritingcorner.
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Appreciate the reblog. Thank you.
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Beautiful my friend, well done.
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I didn’t know what each flower meant so thank you for the lovely poetry and the explanation.
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Oh my Drew….this one took my breath away….a sentiment so true and so pure..Nandita is present in every syllable..
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This was whimsical and fun. I’ve had a couple of takes on flowers to this one sort of humorous… https://wp.me/p3nieO-J3 if you wanna read.
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Such a glorious poem, your beautiful use of the flowers was superb, I’ll send you my flowers in return.
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/02/14/day-lily-and-love/
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Happy that you like it Ivor. Thanks so much.
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Always my pleasure ☺️
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Loved the poem! Just beautiful ❤
Do check out the latest post on Anupriya Indites -https://wp.me/p80BEX-9OI
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Thanks. I will check it out.
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Thank you
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Truly beautiful words and poem 🙂
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Very flattered that you think so. Thank you.
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Gorgeous–and thanks for the description at the end regarding what the flowers stand for–I’ll have to plant some in my garden:-)
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Smiling. Haopy you enjoyed it., Thanks for reading.
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Awww….this is such a heart warming poem…makes me wanna float in the sky😭
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Smiling. Thanks for reading and for your kind words.
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Happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.
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Beautiful.
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Happy that you think so. Thanks. I just followed you. I will be reading your work shortly.
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Breathtaking. I can smell the flowers’ perfume. Brilliant poem!
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Haha Thank you for your kind words. Be well.
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Really lovely poem. I think that the imagery is really successful, and I always love a good use of the senses – especially to present the abstract! The ‘aroma of rhymes’ is stunning. x
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What a wonderful comment. Thank you for appreciating my poem. You really made me happy. Thank you.
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Beauuutiful!❤
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So happy that you think so. Thank you.
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This is beautiful , I’m trying to improve as a writer and get to something like this. Please follow and like my stuffhttps://hoityaura.wordpress.com/2018/07/03/vessel-of-apologies/
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Happy you liked this. I just followed you. We can continue to read one another. It will be fun. Thanks
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will you give me tips on how to improve though ? Sorry I’m replying late , I have to divide my attention between a social life and writing😂 oh plus WiFi
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What kind of writing? Poetry?
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Yes , poetry. See , I’m not a poet that always makes everything rythmic. I want help bc I feel like there’s a big room for improvement
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Well, I am not a poet either. I actually started writing poetry three years ago. What I have always done is read really good poets. Breakdown their poems, study what they have done. Metaphors is the most powerful weapon you can use. All writers need to paint images. For a poet there is nothing as powerful as a metaphor.
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Metaphors !!! I just realized I lack talent when it comes to making them up. I need to get creative with those. Thank you so much😘 I just wrote this in my notepad , thanks
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No, it just takes a little creativity. Read good poets that you like and analyze how they described things. That is how I started.
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Thank you so much. It’s honestly great to know that there are people willing to help out here💞 thank you for your time , I’ll put in the work.
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I started writing poetry three years ago. I have learned by studying others. Be well.see you around blog world.
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Hello lonely author…
M also a fan of poetry and have written some… Hope u may like it…
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Hello, nice to meet you. I will read your work soon. Thank you.
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Thank u….
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This is truly beautiful.
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Appreciate that. Thanks so much
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Your welcome 🙂
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Wow! How did I miss this before??? I just love the way you weaved the words together and painted such a beautiful love poem!!!! It Touched me! Would love to reblog this but wanted to give you the say on whether it is ok with you??? It’s not an easy ask I know but words written long to be heard???
This is a stunning poem! Bellissimo, Drew, Bellissimo!!!
Let me know??
Chuck
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Chuck, you can reblog anything you want. I have no problems with that. Very flattered by your comments my friend. You are much too kind. Thank you so much for your words and support.
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Thanks Andrew! I so appreciate it! Love to share your words with my followers!!
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You are so kind. Thanks. I will be gong on tropical vacation for two weeks to drink and beach away my woes. See you in two weeks.
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Lucky you, My Friend! I shall be jealous for two weeks. Looking forward to great stories and poetry??? Enjoy!!!!
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Thanks
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Lovely piece.
Enjoy your vacation Andrew.
You deserve it. 🙂
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Sorry, for the late reply Forrest. Thank you so much for your lovely wishes.
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One thing I love as a poet is when readers find symbolism in my poem that I didn’t even notice lol.
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Yeah, that can feel so good. Thank you so much for reading and for your words.
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I love this. My favorite part about writing is what comes out of us as we manage around the different restrictions we place around our usual writing styles. I thought this was really beautiful, and I love that you went for it so courageously, and I think you did a really beautiful job. Daring.
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I agree with you. As writers we have to challenge ourselves. We need to push ourselves beyond our limits. Thank you so much for your encouraging words. They are as appreciated.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Do come and enjoy the beautiful and romantic poem – GARDEN OF POETRY
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Thanks so much Chuck
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Your poetry is very sensual, somewhere reminding me a bit of Keats. Loved it⚡
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Humblede by your generous words. Thank you for reading and your kindness.
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That was awesome!
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Glad you think so. Thank you so much. I left for vacation the day you commented on this post. Thanks for taking the time out to read.
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Good work.
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Appreciate that. Thanks for reading.
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Wow , a great dive into the abyss of poetry ! I’ll definitely remember this piece of compassion. It’s like I really could see you through this poem while reading , trying to find the better poet in you.
Lovely , especially the ‘primrose affections’. Write more !
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Thank you so much for your incredible words. I appreciate you taking the time out to read and leave your in depth comments. Thanks.
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that is a beautiful poem. You are very talented
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Thank you for taking the time out to read and leave your kind words. They are greatly appreciated.
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Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
Chuck, The Reluctant Poet’s pick for Pay It Forward Thursday.
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Thank you so much. Sorry for the delay in my reply.
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Exquisite piece. Brava!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Appreciate that.
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Feels perfect.
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Thank you
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🙂
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A genuine pleasure to read ❤
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Thank you for saying that. Appreciate your words.
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Ethereal words. Nice.
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Appreciate that. Thanks.
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